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Raziel
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  RE: Wraiths and all new troopers
April 14, 2002 5:59:58 PM    View the profile of Raziel 
(This is a story for my squad and any new troopers who want to try writing stories before the next official story starts)     It had been a long two months for Raziel. Fury's resrtucturing of the army had left him with a relatively green squad. Not such a good thing for a special operations squad.         Stormie had assured him that the troops came with the highest reports and excellent training, but Raziel simply wasn't sure. ===========================================     He stood now at Fury's desk, expressing his worries about his squad.     Fury looked up from his desk and smiled at Raziel.     "I know where your worries come from, but you've seen the troops in simulation and you've spent the past two months training them to work in the dark and with those knives of yours."     "Yeah, but simulations aren't real. I know these men are already experienced, but we can't gel as a team unless we've been out together."     "Why don't you wait untill the next mission then?" Fury asked calmly, the edges of his mouth curling up in a half-smile.     "The last attack proved we're far from invincible. If we got attacked tomorrow, i'd like to know i could really trust my squad." Raziel replied, his voice beginning to edge with frustration.     That was enough for Fury, he'd been exceptionally busy of late and had no time for this. The smile soon dissapeared.     "Sergeant, you will trust in what we give you. do you now have any respect for the choices of your superiors?"     "No not that!" Raziel replied. He had learned to judge people and new fury's own frustrations had little to do with himself.     "Dismissed trooper"     Raziel abruptly turned and left. Fury knew he had snapped at the man for his own troubles, but had no time for misplaced worries. ===========================================     Almost a week later Raziel was with his squad at breakfast . He was going over some of the pros and conns about HALO and HAHO drops.     "Raziel to Fury's office promptly."     "Ok i'll see you all at the target range, you'd better move fast."     Raziel made his way rapidly to the office and found himself, as he had so many times before, stood infront of Fury's desk.     "Sergeant Major," Fury smiled     "Sir?" Raziel asked, more than a little apprihensive now.     "Well you aksed for something and i've actually found a mission for you all. Please observe the screen."     An image of a small yellow planet came into view. The screen showed it to be of a small planet in the mid-stages of being colonised. A few hundred square miles of land was green in the southern hemisphere.     "The local colonists, a few thousand or so are loyal VE supporters. Unfortunately attacks by several annoying desert tribes have increased over the last decade. The tribes seem to be aligning together and planning to take the altered southern regions. Their latest attack killed over a thousand locals and destroyed many of the climate machines the farmers have been using.     "The VE has decided to step in and show the Locals why they support us. The mission will be relatively simple, but will proivide an excellent oppertunity for the recruits."     "Erm thank you sir, who'll be going on this mission?" Raziel asked     "A full company of regulars are being sent. I'm sending you with your squad and any other troops in the platoon who feel they need the combat experience or are simply bored of drills.     "The mission will be a relatively simple one. You will be in charge of the elite contingent we are sending, but will be reporting to Lieutenant Colonel Carrol, who's leading the regulars. Get all the troops who are coming together and you'll be fully briefed in a week." ===========================================     A Week later Raziel was sat in one of the briefing rooms. Around him sat his squad, all geared to go and also many of the latest recruits in the Army were going along.     A tall ginger haired man sat next to Fury, infront of them all. He was dressed as a regular soldier, obviously the Lieutenant Colonel who Raziel would be serving under.     "Ok listen up. The mission is one that will require not just force of arms, but some diplomatic skills. That is why an orbital bombardment would not do and why a VE representative will be going along with you.     "First of all you will land in safe territory. We'll march around and make a show for the locals. The next part of the mission we will be travelling on foot down the steep ridged valley highlighted on the map. Our destination is the complex shown here. Scans from space have show this to be the centre of where the desert tribes have been massing. We belive there to be around 5 thousand of these people, but they are spread accross the planet which is why we march directly for their centre."     A tall weasely man stood up then, he held himself straight and tall and looked everyone directly in the eye. But Raziel could tell that this man was no warrior.     "I will be the VE representative. I will be the one doing all the talking with the locals and the tribesmen, should it come to that. When we reach their base we will crush them and show them that there is no point in the conflict. Be prepared to excecute the ringleaders and force the tribes to scatter. I will inform you on the way exactly of what i have planned."     The breifing went on for another hour as all the finer details were discuseed by the leaders. Raziel took little part in the conversation, but it was decided that Raziel's elite group of VE stormtroopers would follow along the main company a few clicks behind, as reargard. ===========================================     The trip to the planet was smooth, they made a show of force infront of the locals, but they were moving off soon.     The march down the valley was not particularly nice. The sides of the valley were steep and craggy, and stayed looming above the group on the long march.     Raziel soon realised that without his helmet the sand would be seriously annoying.     The Lieutenant Colonel  was very uneasy about everything. His company was marching a good 3 clicks ahead of Raziel's group. He couldn't help but keep stairing up. The Ve troops had no air cover and this valley was a deathtrap.     Meanwhile, a few miles back Raziel was having thoughts along the same lines. From above this had looked like a good plan, but now down here it seemed not such a good thing. ===========================================     The whole company stopped to a halt as someone called down to them from above. A deathly whooping cry, followed it. The call was carried on for what seemed like hours as the company braced itself.     "Get down, keep those rifles up!"     Then suddenly the cries stopped.     Further down the valley Raziel heard those cries keenly and knew what they meant.     "Everyone with me! Lets go!"     Raziel knew he had to get his squad and the other recruits there in time.     Carrol did his best to keep the troops calm, but most were still nervous. He couldnt decide which was worse, the battle cries or the silence.     Then once more the silence was broken.     "Dear god," he wispered.     A huge bolder, that must have weighed tonnes came crashing down from the right side. It seemed t take ages to fall, but the Lieutenant Colonel could only watch as it fell and rolled on his troops.     "Hold your ground, open fire!" but he knew that there was nothing to fire at, and that they were in the open.     Boulder after boulder dropped, untill hos force was severly weakened.     "Under what cover you can find, now!"     Soon the boulders stopped, but then came the blaster fire. the leaders realised they heavily outnumbered the tribesmen, but were in no position to fight back.     Raziel saw the dust coulds, and then the blaster fire. He felt so very helpless.     "Snipers hold here, everyone else with me."     Raziel, his squad and the recruits charged down the valley floor. Moving from cave to cave and using the boulders as shields they soon made their way into the carnage. Under cover from the snipers they soon began to return fire upon the tribesmen.     What remained of the regular company joined them and soon they had to outnumbered tribesmen ducking down as much as shooting.     The desert people gave one final whoop of victory before dissapearing from view. ===========================================     More than half of the company was dead, another quarter were seriously wounded and in no fighting condition.     Whats more Raziel found himself in-charge of the remaining force.     Most officers, Carrol and all three long range comms systems were gone now along with most chances of escape.     "Some 'combat experience' mission" Raziel grumbled.     The scouts sent out returned promptly. the news was not good. The valley behind them had been sealed by a massive rock fall, there was no way out.     "Sir what do we do?" the highest ranking regular asked.     "First we get out of this damned valley," Raziel calmly replied. (Ok anyone who wishes [and has been bothered to read this far] can post. I dont care where the story goes, its just something for all the recruits and my squad to post on.)
 
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  RE: Wraiths and all new troopers
April 15, 2002 12:47:28 AM    View the profile of Bear 
Grizzly walked along uneasily, his riot gun slung over his shoulder and his silenced pistol at his hip. He did not quite know why he was in this desolate, inhospitable land, but he did not care.. he was here to do a job, and not to ask questions. Besides him were a couple of regular soldiers. One was a tall, handsome First Sergeant, wearing an immaculately polished suit of armour. Grizzly doubted whether he had ever seen combat before. Indeed, Grizzlys experience was sketchy - he had been in a couple of skirmishes, but these had been little more than shooting a few blasts at some smoke where an officer had said the enemy was. Now, however, it was differant. He had learnt to be a gutter-fighter in the mean alleys of his home town. He could use a knife as well as anyone in the Army.. perhaps even Raziel. As a child, he had killed the brigands and thieves who haunted the streets, collecting the meagre 10 credits for every criminal head he could show to the police. He hed learnt how to fight in a deadly manner, and for this, he was nicknamed "The Castrator". The name had stuck. Now, however, was a differant story. He was stuck in this valley, on a pathetic planet with pathetic regulars who didn't know their butts from their elbows. He had become the unelected leader of the small band of men he was walking with. They were following him, and he was near the front of the small column of walking wounded and dieing men screaming for their mothers. There was the tall First Sergeant, a Corporal clutching his bloody arm, and two short, fat Privates. One was chuckling as he walked, and the other was sobbing. The chuckling privates head exploded in a splatter of blood and brains. The First Sergeant screamed, the other Private fell back in amazement and the Corporal let go of his arm, which held for a second, then fell to the ground. A second later, Grizzly heard the shot.. the sniper had obviously been some way off. He fell sideways behind a rock which was barely the size of himself, and fumbled with his rifle. As he tried to get it off his shoulder, he could see devestation in the valley. There was obviously only one enemy sniper, but he was damned good. The First Sergeants handsome head had been the next to turn into a mass of congealed brains, and the wounded Corporal was screaming in agony from a shot to the belly. The screams had set everyone off, and there were loads of men running around trying to find cover. Grizzly finally unsnagged his rifle strap from his Storm Commando amour, and pointed it to where he thought the shot had come from. He squinted down the sights, and saw dozens of ragged men, some carrying sticks, others carrying rifles, swarming down the valley slope. He looked up and saw it was a similar story elsewhere.. what was left of the Army Company was being surrounded and attacked. "Get into cover!" he shouted at a nearby soldier, looking around nervously for his weapon. He said something back, but his words were drowned out by a swarm of desert fighters going straight into him. "Damn, damn, damn!" Grizzly whispered, letting loose a few bullets into the sudden crowd of enemy soldiers. He stood, and started to run to where the main part of the disheartened company was. Grizzly knew that few men would get out alive.. perhaps they would all be slaughtered. But he did not have time to think further - for all hell was breaking loose.
 
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Raziel
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April 15, 2002 4:23:40 PM    View the profile of Raziel 
    Raziel had to admit he hadnt thought the Desert people brave enough to come down into the valley to fight on even terms with them. The tribes had launched a devastating suprise attack, using a massive advantage and he thaught they would wait for awhile before trying the same tactic.     But as Tribesmen used robes and climbing equipment to descend into the valley he simply had to disregard all thoughts of a respite.     The regulars formed their usual battle lines and prepared for the charge, but they wouldn't last too long he knew.     His squad and most of the other VE troops were making good use of cover and keep low to the ground, but still most were green troopers. Something would have to be done.     Raziel looked around him and knew retreat was not an option. There were many wounded around him, many would die here and now if they retreated. Besides there was no-where to run except back down the blocked off valley.     The first volley of VE shots began and the first lines of desert men went down, the rest were far from dettered. Another whooping cheer went up from them.     Whats more the desert men had some long range rifles too. Raziel had to think this through quickly.     "Ok any engineers amongst you lot? Good, come with me. The rest of you stand firm, dont give an inch. Wraiths deal with those snipers. Be brave!" he shouted above the cracks of blaster fire.     "Ok get what explosives, and anything you can lay down and set to exlode and start setting them up, we cant hold forever so hurry." raziel shouted at the few engineers amongst the regulars.     With that Raziel brought his compact version E-11 up and charged straight for the centre of the VE line, where most desert men were headed. He screamed words of encouragement to what men they had left and fire for all he was worth into the coming storm.     "Sir," Grizzly started     "What's the problem?" Raziel asked without looking away from his aim. He was a poor shot, but even he could hit the hundred or so charging men.     "They're coming down the sides to try and get around us!"     "Damnit," Raziel hated to weaken what little man power he had up-front, but if the engineers got caught or they couldn't retreat they were done for.     "Squads 3 and 4 hold the east and west sides, fall back!"     "Everyone else keep firing and hold your ground! You have to hold for 5 minutes. Someone deal with those snipers!" he shouted as another crack and wistle was followed by the sickening sound of a skull shattering.     Raziel tried to bring order to the fight, but as the tribesmen closed in on the remains one one company or regulars and the VE elite contingent chaos errupted around him. Only by holding on for another 2 minutes could they survive. (thanks bear, i really can't believe you used that nickname)
 
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April 16, 2002 11:13:53 AM    View the profile of Grizzly 
Grizzly just heard that they had to hold for five minutes. He did not know what had provoked this sudden attack from the tribesmen, but knew that their only hope was to hold tight. He ran past a few men who were firing rapidly into the ever growing mass of enemy men, who, despite falling, were still crawling over the corpses of their dead to inch ever closer to the weak line. The snipers were doing their business as well.. a few Army regulars were laid on the ground, blood pouring from their skulls and turning the dusty rocky land into a pool of blood. He changed his direction of movement suddenly, turning away from the few unhappy men and running towards a full squad which had apparently been unaffected by the fighting so far. They were holding their ground easily, shooting off small bursts of fire at the hills when they saw movement. "Who are you?" Grizzly asked loudly, skidding to a halt. "3rd Squad, Corporal. I'm Sergeant Buttilicious." Grizzly could not help grinning at the ridiculous name. He nodded towards the hills. "They doing much?" "Them? I don't even think they're in the same tribe as the ones over there.. they seem to be wearing some sort of uniform.. they're just protecting their snipers." Grizzly noticed the Sergeant was right. The men seemed to have a uniform of sorts - a black tunic with some sort of metallic chain mail over it. They also had tall, peaked hats, in contrast to the other tribe, who wore nothing but rags tied around their waists and foreheads. "SERGEANT!" a man from the squad screamed. Grizzly turned his head with the Sergeant, and looked to where the young man, a private, was pointing. There were a couple of large, hairy beasts, which he did not recognise. On top of them were about 4 or 5 of the uniformed men. "What the hell.." the Sergeant said, standing up straight to get a better view. A second later, the back of his skull exploded. Grizzly ducked and looked at the beasts. He was surprised at their appearence, but what was really intresting was where they were going. Instead of charging the weakened Company, they were going straight for the mass of ragged tribesmen, waving long metal sharpened poles and firing blasters rapidly. "My god.. We're in the middle of a tribal war!" the young private shouted, squinting at the beasts, "Who do we shoot at?" But Grizzly was already gone. He had turned and started running to where he had seen Raziel last, shouting at every man to hold their fire against the beasts. Young soldiers were staring in disbelief at the beasts, who had now met the mass of tribesmen and were engaging in a bloody battle. He knew this was the perfect time for them to escape.. but only if he could find Raziel in time. Grizzly fell to the ground as a sharp pain shot up his leg. He screamed in agony, and wiped his ankle with his hand. It was covered in blood.. -----------------------TRP/CPL Grizzly/4SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1REG/Lorn IV/VEA "Blimey! Leg it!" - A British soldier, 1939 "Damn und blast! Leg it!" - A German soldier, 1945
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April 16, 2002 11:14:04 AM    View the profile of Grizzly 
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April 16, 2002 3:25:29 PM    View the profile of Afyon 
===Further up the hill in the middle of the fighting=== Afyon was racing down the hill trying to find someplace to cover himself as he fought.  As he rounded a rock a group of three desertmen charged at him.  Diving to the ground, Afyon took out his ec-11 light blaster and managed to shoot all three before rolling out and picking off two more. A group of four privates rounded the boulder behind him and raced for the opening. "Privates Halt!" ordered Afyon "Fall in, we are going towards one of the desert people's strongholds." "You cant order us around, we are going to help the sarge." replied the privates in agitation as they motioned down the valley with their blasters. "Shut the hell up and do as I say!" yelled Afyon.  "You are defying the commands of a Corporal PRIVATE, now fall in and do as i friggin say.  You will be put on report when we get back.  NOW FALL IN!" Ordered an angry Afyon as he took his blaster and raced down the hill. Down a few feet, the hill split off in two directions, one went down to where Raziel and Grizzly were, and the otehr went to a desert people stronghold.  Afyon paused for a second then raced down towards the stronghold. "Follow me!" ordered Afyon as he ran.  As they made their way recklessly down the valley, a series of shots rained down hill towards them.  The hill was held by a group of four snipers. "Get down!" ordered Afyon as he took out his grenade launcher.  Another shot streaked by and hit on of the privates in the face.  A wet smack sound came out as the faceless burning body collapsed and rolled down the hill.  Afyon brought his grenade launcher to bear and fired off two rounds, nailing the sniper positions. "Go NOW!" Afyon yelled as he rolled out of his spot and raced up the hill firing at two desertpeople coming from the rear.  The group reached a ledge along near a cave entrance and they stopped. "Any of you lazy bastards bother to bring grenades?" asked Afyon as he pulled a concussion grenade and a pair of flash bangs. "Sir yes sir!" shouted one of the privates as he took out three concussion grenades. "Good, now onmy mark dive to the entrance and throw them as far as you can.  "NOW!" yelled Afyon as he dived towards the cave and tossed in the grenades.  The young private came after him and tossed his in.  Afyon rolled over and dashed away from the cave as wet sound of a head shot was heard behind him.  he didnt look back until he arrived at the last remaining man.  Sithspit he thought.  Two men dead already and the hard part is still ahead.  When he got back to the safe spot, he turned and saw that indeed the young privates head and been shot clean off by a powerful blaster.  He also saw the fire and smoke rising from the cave from the concussion grenades tossed in. "Alright, we charge in and shoot everything in site.  LETS GO!" yelled Afyon as he charged and dashed into the cave.  The young private followed but never made it.  As he ran he stumbled on a rock and fell off the ledge and down the ravine to his death. Afyon raced into the cave with his blaster in one hand and his automatic pistol in the other.  Three sand people were lying half-dead from the shock of the grenades just inside the cave.  Afyon shot all three in the head before dashing deeper into the cave.  Shots rain out as he ran low and fired is pistol.  His blaster had jammed and he tossed it aside as he hit three enemies square in the head. Afyon rounded a corner and tried to bring his pistol up to shoot but it was shot out of his hand by one of the sand people.  Afyon dived to the ground and took out as vibroblade from his blaster belt.  He rolled sideways then sprang up and jammed it into the throat of one of the enemies. Being out of options Afyon ran back around the corner, stabbing two sand people he surprised as he went... (i will continue later, someone else needs to speak and that was tiring :P.  And yes, I do have a grenade launcher)
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April 16, 2002 4:48:04 PM    View the profile of Raziel 
    Twenty of the desert men charged at the group Raziel was with. Raziel had taken up a position in the centre of the line, where there was most pressure.     The men of this squad, the best squad in the former company were good. He had to admit and as they were, crouched on the lip of a 2 foot high ridge facing the desert men  they were unbreakable.         Raziel didn't bother to use his rifle, instead he had his combat knives both drawn and was moving from side to side slashing and stabbing any tribesmen who got too close to the line. He had to admit they were doing not too badly, they could hold this position for another thirty minutes probably.     That said Raziel was wandering where most of the pressure had gone, the tribemen had attacked relentlessly and without showing any signs of retreat for the first few minute. But now they seemed less eager for the fight and fewer were coming at them. Although Raziel was still glad that only half of them had ranged weapons, and another half of those were armed with gunpowder weapons.     Suddenly there was that tell-tale crack and wistle. The snipers were back and firing again. That changed everything.     "Into cover!" he screamed.     "Anyone have anything reflective?" he asked. This planet's sun was incredibly intese and those snipers were using scopes.     After a few seconds someone handed raziel a foot square piece of shiny metal, he simply didnt ask where it was from.     "Hendl, use that rifle of yours." Raziel instructed.     He slung the rifle from his shoulder and un-hooked the safety.     "Ready, go!" Raziel realised suddenly that if this didnt work he was dead.     He jumped to his feet, letting the desert people see him. Then jumped back down as a shot wistled past him. In that fraction of a second he had spotted the snipers, two of them.     He raised the mirror and indicated to Hendl where they were.     The two snipers jumped back, possible blinded by the sudden seering glare that they had seen.     Hendl fired once, then again.     He smiled and Raziel understood, no more snipers.     Raziel and the rest of the troopers came out of cover, guns razed, but to their amazement the desert people were fighting amongst themeselves. That explained alot.     "Sir! Sir!" someone shouted. He recognized immediately the harsh, barely understandle accept.     "Grizzly?"     "Yeah, got a bad shot in the leg, it'll be fine."     Raz could hardly believe the man was standing.     "Some other tribes came crashing down the valley side, now might be a good time to retreat?" Grizzly went on.     "Well we've just set up a minefield i say we use it. After that we go straight for our original taregt!" Raziel said to everyone.     That brought gasps from everyone.     "But thats still 20 miles away" someone stammered.     "Yes, but we can still get there. out here forward is just as good as back."         Now Raziel needed a plan to get the tribesmen over the minfield.     "Anyone seen Afyon?"
 
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April 16, 2002 5:55:00 PM    View the profile of Afyon 
===Meanwhile=== Afyon was fighitng for his life inside the cave.  All around him, bodies of the desert people were lying.  Afyon still had no gun and was fighting with just his vibroblade.  Finally he found a gun lying in the dead arms of an enemy across the cavern room.  He raced across the room swinging his long vibroblade like a sword and beheading two desert people.  He grabbed the gun and stared puzzled for a second.  "How the hell do i use this", he wonder.  As he examined the weapon he saw out of the corner of his eye a group of desertment with blades charging at him.  Afyon turned and slammed the blaster into the stomache of the the first one, pulling him over and kicking him in the head as he did.  Afyon then turned and swung his blade clashing with that of his enemy before spinning and slicing his body in two. Afyon maneuvered around the room quickly kicking another man in the gut before stabbing his blade right through his heart.  Suddenly the fighting vigor of the desertmen seemed to have dissipated.  Afyon swung his blade like a madman killing everything in site. Suddenly, a large shadow loomed over him.  It was the clan leader.  Over a foot taller than Afyon armed with two very long blades he approached slowly.  His heavy blaster armor painted silver gleamed in the sun that filtered into the cave entrance.
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April 17, 2002 6:44:06 AM    View the profile of Grizzly 
Grizzly, having tied a handkerchief around the wound, limped off towards a large, hairy mound, about twice the height of himself. He had already seen what it was.. it was still moving, trying to get up. It was a beast, laid on the ground about a hundred metres away. It was almost on to its hind legs, and Grizzly knew if he could just get to it, they would all stand a chance. The tribespeople were running away from it in fright, as huge lumps of phlegm shot out of its mouth every few seconds to literally drown a tribesman. He limped up to it, the pain in his leg almost unbearable. Blood was leaving a trail behind him as he walked, but he was at least still walking. He reached his hand up to a rope hanging off the side of the beast, and heaved himself up, to where he found a small, primitive ladder. He slowly climbed up it, and as he did so, the beast stood in one massive movement. Quickly, he scrambled to the top, where there were four small seats in a wooden box. Grizzly collapsed into a seat, and grabbed what looked to be the reins. He looked puzzled, but pulled them back sharply. "Ya!" The beast ran off towards the tribespeople, stampeding through their ranks and crushing bones. His leg was bleeding more than ever, and he was about to pass out, but he somehow managed to steer the beast towards the Army lines, and, even more impressivly, managed to make it stop! A young corporal, who obviously had more bollocks than brains, had scrambled on top of the beast into the box. He stared at Grizzly and grinned.. just as Grizzly passed out. (There ya go people.. use that thing )
 
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April 18, 2002 3:35:38 PM    View the profile of Afyon 
===Back in the Cave=== Afyon backed slowly towards the entrance of the cave.  His little 20 inch vibroblade was useless against the two long blades of the opposing leader.  As he backed slowly, he sensed something moving behind him.  Afyon ducked and swung aroudn stabbing his blade into the throat of one of the two oncoming desertmen.  To his surprise, both were only armed with vibroaxes.  Where the hell are the guys with blasters Afyon thought as he lunged at the other one.  He swung with one hadn then kicked the enemy in the gut.  The desertman bent over in pain and Afyon stabbed him int he back of the enck while he grabbed the axe out of the enem'y hand. Afyon then spun around at the enemy leader and hurled his axe at him.  The axe beheaded the leader and clanged against the back wall.  Afyon then grabbed the axe out of the other dead enemy and glanced around at his handiwork.  Over thirty dead desertmen lay around in this room or the cave hideout.  Afyon made his way slowly towards the corner in the cave, glancing carefully for his two blasters he had lost in the fight. As he rounded the corner, a bright blast exploded above his heda throwing against the wall.  Afyon blinked the spots out of his eyes as he rolled back around the corner and out of sight of the two blaster armed desertmen waiting for him.  Afyon picked up his axe and raced around the corner hurling his axe at the two men.  The axe beheaded one of the two enemies as Afyon hit the dirt hoping not to be shot for his audacity.  The other desertman stopped, stunned by the beheading of the man besides him.  Afyon jumped up and lunged at the other desertman, stabbing his blade into its throat before the enemy could get a shot off.  As Afyon fell to the ground and rolled, his stand stumbled across his two blasters.  They were lying in the hand of a dead desertman.  On inspection, the pistol was damaged but still fired and the blaster began to fire after a new clip was inserted. At the end of the hallway, a little sunlight filtered in.  He could also hear a large firefight occuring.  Afyon raced to the end of the hall and turnede the corner finding himself in a large battle.  Afyon's eyes quickly scanned the situation and found a group of 5 stormtroopers pinned down on a ledge.  Afyon realized he was in another part of the valley.  Off in the distance, he could see the blasters firing and assumed that had to be where the main group was. Without thinking, Afyon brought up both of his blasters and raced down the ledge killing 7 desertmen on his way.  As he reached the trapped men, a blaster shot pierced his shoulder and another grazed his side sending Afyon flying.  He finally rolled down to the group of stormtroopers. "Privates!  Help me tie up these wounds then fall in.  We are going back to the main group." "But corporal, you are hit, you need attention." "Thats right meathead, if we dont get back im not going to get any attention am I?" Afyon asked rhetorically.  "So get off your lazy asses and lets get the hell out of here NOW!" Afyon shouted enraged. "Yes sir!" the privates shouted as they got up and started to fight their way up the ledge. (gl all.  we will be there soon)
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April 21, 2002 9:26:18 AM    View the profile of Yun 
The corporal who had jumped on Grizzly's hairy thing was Yun. Yun noticed that Grizzly had just passed out and needed attention ASAP.  He looked around nut all that he saw was hell raging lose. Yun noticed that all of the medics were being rushed by men with headshots or chest shots.  Knowing that no matter how important Grizzly was he would have to wait if brought over there and that would most likely kill him. Then suddenly the hairy beast reared up and sent Grizzly and Yun flying backwards and onto the ground.  Yun sat up and saw that the beast was being shot by the tribesman.  He knew if they sat there he could get trampled .  He picked up Grizzly and took off. With Grizzly over his shoulder and his blaster in his other hand Yun dashed off.  He was going slow, trying to balance carrying a man who was heavier than him and provide cover fire.  He was almost there when Grizzly was knocked out of his hands.  Yun spun around to see two tribes men staring at him.  They both had their blasters pointed for his head.  Yun dove to the ground and got a shot off.  It hit one of the tribemens legs and sent him to the ground.  The other one looked at his comrade for a moment which gave Yun enough time to give him a leg sweep and send him falling.  Yun stood up and shot them both in the head.  He quickly picked up Grizzly. He ran off again but was lucky to be with the main force which gave him cover fire.  Once behind friendly lines he looked for help.  He found the best man posssible, Raziel. "Sir!" Raziel spun around to see Bear looking ver pale and bleeding extremly fast.  He stood for a moment and then said "Damn it give him to me." Raziel grabbed Grizzly and led yun with him to a hidden encampment with all the medics.  Raziel grabbed a medic and lay Grizzly down. Yun turned around and ran off to go kill some more tribesmen knowing his commrade was safe... for know.
 
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April 21, 2002 9:26:28 AM    View the profile of Yun 
This is great!
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April 22, 2002 1:14:48 PM    View the profile of Raziel 
    Raziel grimaced as he looked at grizzly. The man had gone out to cause the disruption that Raziel needed, just after he had returned injured from battle.     Raziel smiled though as Grizzly pushed one of the medics away and walked accross the makeshift "Minefield"     The minefield was actually quite good, Raz had to compliment the engineers on thier initiative. They had rigged various high yield explaosives together with laser activated mines, plastic explosives and even a bunch of grenades tied up and rigged to explode.     The tribesmen wouldnt know what had hit them, after this move the desert people should realize that their supise attack hadnt completely demoralised the VE contingent and they were far from routed.     Raziel saw Yun eagerly rejoin the VE lines, just as Agent made sure that the wounded were accross the explosives.     "Ok everyone," Raziel called into the comms.     "We let them have one final charge, then we run. Make it look like you're scared ok? Once ver the explosives climb up the ridge and pick off any tribemen too close, then thing blow up."     A general cheer went up from the remaining troops and the desert people took a few seconds longer to rally this time. They seemed to have set aside their differences for now, but they were far more disorganised about their tactics now.     When they had dropped everything on the VE company and killed over half of the troops they had expected an easy victory, but now they were beginning to get worn down. The VE troops didnt seem to want to back down in the slightest and they weren't well equiped.     Good job they didnt know how close the VE troops were to running out of ammo or breaking, Raziel thought. ===========================================     The desert people gave one final whoop before charging down the valley at the VE troops.     "Conserve your ammo, hold tight!" a regular gunnery sergeant shouted out.     'Good man' Raziel thought to himself.     On the left hand side was the remnants of the leading platoon in the company, to the left were troops who'd seen little close fighting so far and still had alot of ammo.     In the centre were the wraiths and the elite squad of the regular company. Their weapons were bloodied and their ammo was low, but they weren't going to give an inch.     Few imperials fell to the volley of fire the tribesmen let off on the way. The desert people had few good ranged weapons, most being absorbed by the trooper armour. Anyway there were few good shots amongst them after the snipers had been taken down.     PFC Yun shifted nervously next to Raziel.     "Keep calm man, you'll be fine" Raziel assured him. And Raziel knew he would be, Yun had handled himself fine so far. However Raziel needed to talk to afyon after this.     The tribesmen lifted their spears and swords, but still the troops didn't fire. They gave out another spinechilling whoop, but still the inperials didn't fire.     When they were preparing their strikes and aiming they fired.     Three men deep of tribesmen died in the first shots. Then grenades streamed high over head into the rear of their attack force. Then repeaters and everyone else let rip and drowned out the screams of the dying.     Raziel knew it looked better than it was, less than half of the desert people had been killed and they would attack again in less than a minute.     "Go!" shouted almost every sergeant in the force. The VE troops broke and ran hell for leather accross the flat, hundred metre expanse to the ridge.     Raziel heard the cheers of the desert people behind him and knew they would be close behind when they reached the ridge.     Raz was one of the first men to get to the ridge and he could see how close they were cutting it. One brave squad even turned and spread themselves out, killing every tribesman that came at them.     The rest of the troops came on running and were soon up onto the ridge, only to see that squad overrun. If the squad hadnt sacrificed themselves probably half his force would be left dead now.     "Fire!" came the command, the desert people who thought they were in persuit were now pressed back.     "Do it!" Raz shouted.     The shockwave of the explosion sent all the force scurrying for cover, what it did to the tribesmen Raziel didn't know.     Then the mines were activated and any surviving desert men found themselves losing legs and feet.     When the VE force came out of cover blackened scarred bodies littered the valley floor. What was left of the desert force were running very fast, VERY fast.     "Snipers up the valley side, if they look like they're going to rally convince them otherwise." ===========================================     The wounded were all back on their feet now, those that had survived.     The water was now plentiful, the force was alot smaller than they had started out and most of the water bags had been found. Ammo was still however low, but moral was still quite good.     Although many were still mourning the loss of their friends and fellow troopers.     "Afyon, what you did was Very stupid. It was reckless and almost cost you your life. but erm, nice work."     Afyon managed a smile. He stood infront of Raz, head bandaged and knife bloodied.     Raziel then looked at the knife he was carrying and stopped smiling.     "Sir? you carry lots of knives?"     "Afyon the knife is for the silent and swift kill. We are a silent and swift squad. The vibroblade is crude and loud."     "but sir...i like this one.." Afyon began.     "I'll get you a good weapon when this is all over, trust me. As for now carry on using that thing, i dont think stealth is the order of the day."     "Ok troops listen up. As you know we're not going back. We go forward. The VE will probably send down a search party in the next few days, we dont want them suffering the same fate. We move forwards and carry out the plan as before." Raziel shouted.     "We can take that station, trust me. These tribesmen are violent, but they lack organisation. When we've taken out their leaders they'll crumble and we can call in reinforcements. And anyway we're going to get them back!!"     The remains of the company had reformed now into their original squads, though only a handful were at full strength. There was just a day march and they would be at the base. They planned to attack from a single direction and head straight for the centre of the base.     Raziel hoped the desert people would start fighting themselves again. (Good posts everyone keep it up!)
 
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April 23, 2002 3:50:52 PM    View the profile of Yun 
Yun woke up his head in the sand.  He thought to himself how could I have been so stupid.  During the assault by the tribesmen Yun had been shot in the chest.  He had been lucky though becasue it only made a scorch mark on his armor.  He had been momentarily stun but all teh havoc quickly brought him back to reality.  Yun had run up the hill only to be shot in the chest again, this time though Yun had been knocked out. Yun quickly got up and looked around. All of the troops were getting in a line and looked ready to march out for the enemies HQ.  Yun looked around to find his blaster and take off to catch up with his squad. Once with the squad Yun looked around to see if his squad had taken any losses suprisingly no one had been lost, but than again it was the Wraiths they were the elite of the elite.  Yun ran up to Raziel "Where are we headed, sir?" "Straight into the heart of the enemy private" "I see sir"  Yun fell back in line. About a quarter of the way through teh squad was told to halt.  Instantly the men all took their firing stance.  Yun started to be able to hear a slight rumbling.  The men all had confused looks on their faces than it came into sight a large Brown....Crawller.  Yun had heard about how the Jawa's used these to transport their droids from trading post to trading post.  This was not the normal size, a bit smaller but still none the less intimidating. The Crawller made its way to just a few feet in front of the men.  Having no idea if this transport was hostile or not the men could not fire.  Suddenly there was the sound of sharp squealing of gears.  The crawller had stopped.  The men all had worried looks on their faces, no one knew what to expect.  Than the door opened and....a small R2 droid rolled out.  You could hear the sigh of releif from the men.  Than it happend the first wave of fire. Yun jumped behind a dune to his left just avoiding a shot.  He looked at the shots not many..about 50 men but still a threat.  Than they all came rushing out with highly advanced weapons.  It was than that Yun realized they had vastly under-rated the determination and fire power of their enemy........
 
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April 25, 2002 9:56:43 AM    View the profile of Raziel 
    Raziel dived to the ground as a grenade came his way. Unfortunately the two men behind him weren't as fast.     "Covering fire now! lay them low!"     The Imperials still held the advantage of numbers over this group of desert men and they were soon scrambling for cover. The crawler then started roling forwards again, angling itself to give the tribesmen some cover.     "What the hell? They said the desert people didn't use transports!" Yun yelled.     Raziel thought for a moment, then he realised how obvious it was. The desert people had demolished several settlements in the last few months, they must have salvaged a load of equipment from the settlements, and that seemed to include a small sand crawler and a lot of weaponry.     The desert people were rallying around the crawler it seemed. Raziel's force had little that could do much damage to the thick armour on that thing.     Another rocket shot out from the desert people towards the troopers, but fortunately went low and sent sand everywhere.     "Wraaiths with me!" Raziel called     "Sir?" asked a few of the wraiths as they cautiously made their way accross the to him.     "We have to take out that crawler, so we're going inside. Arkanian, bring enough exploisves to take the door off!"     "Sir!" they said.     Raziel could see that they weren't too happy to try and run accross the middle of a fire fight, but they would go.     Arkanian gathered some plasic explosives as the rest of the squad redied their weapons.     As one they ran accross the dune towards the crawler, not much fire came their way but it was enough to keep them ducking and weaving as they went.     Raziel's keen ears heard a rush of air and dived to the ground, shouting "Down!" as he went. A moment later another rocket sliced the air above their heads.     Raziel stayed on his knees for a second as the rest of his squad ran off. Quickly spotting the rocket launcher he let off three shots before running on. Raziel was barely average and all three shots missed, but the shots guided the rest of the imperial force who quicky shot him down.     A second later they were all pressed up against the side of the crawler. Arkanian worked fast at getting the explosives wedged in firmly.     They were all fairly nervous as there were around thirty desert men the other side of the crawler and the only thing keeping them there was the regulars covering fire.     "Done!" Arkanian shouted. And they all moved away. A second later a small "pop" sound made them all cover their ears. Another second after came the sound of the door falling to the sand.     "Nicely done," Afyon remarked.     Raziel and Bane kept the squad covered as the ran through the now open door. Raziel heard three shots before the all clear came accross the comms.     Bane took one last look around, before he and Raziel got inside the now moving crawler.     Inside the wraiths were dotted around a small room, guns raised at a single entrance. The room was barely lit and was now covered in the blood of a single, very suprised, desertman.     Raziel holstered his rifle and drew two slender throwing knives. Better for the confined spaces.     "Now you've all been drilled enough on ant terrorist fighting so this should be a breeze," Raziel smiled.     "Lets find the control room," SGM Dez ordered.     The wraiths moved slowly, each covering every other man and keeping their ears and eyes open. Raziel smiled at how effective they were. (Ok just a small post to keep this going. Come on where is everyone? I said at the start this is for you all to try writing, you can post whatever you want! so c'mon!)
 
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April 25, 2002 11:01:32 AM    View the profile of Grizzly 
Grizzly, his leg cleaned and more or less repaired by the Imperials only medical droid, walked out from the shadow of the rock he had been under. All around him was chaos. The company was being bolder, making counter attacks against the tribesmen, but they were still in a tight spot. What was more worrying was that he couldn't see a single Wraith anywhere. Yun had disappeared, Raziel was gone, and the rest were out of sight. What had happened to them? Before he had time to think, he heard a stampede of feet behind him. He twisted round, and saw yet another of the huge beasts carrying three armoured tribespeople. Grizzly, unarmed and stunned, looked up, his mouth gaping. Before he could say a word, he felt a sharp pain in his shoulder, looked down, and saw it was a dart. He collapsed. ------ Some time later, he awoke in a large hut. It was dark, except for a few candles dotted around the hut. It was a huge and well decorated place, with skulls of various animals (including humans) on the walls, as well as weapons and skins. There was a huge furry skin on the wall, presumably of one of the beasts he had seen so often that day. At least, he thought it was that day.. "Hello, Colonel." a face said. He saw a chubby, cheerful and friendly face above him, holding out a cup of something hot. The man was definetly one of the tribespeople, as he was wearing the armour and distinctive uniform. "What? Where am I?" "You are in (an unpronouncable village name), Colonel." Colonel? He thought.. for some reason, these people thought he was a Colonel, and not a Corporal. Grizzly looked at the man, and decided it would probably be best to pretend to be a Colonel for a while. "You.. I.. who are you?" "I am.. hmm, Major, I think.. hmm.. my name can not be pronounced in this language. Call me.. Major!" "Right.. Major, where am I?" Grizzly said, sitting up in his bed and preparing to stand. "DO NOT GET UP, COLONEL!" the man shouted, pushing him back down. Grizzly did not think about how a Colonel would act in this situation, but, after being briefly taken aback by the cheerful mans outburst, punched him squarely in the jaw. There was a crunch, and the man fell to the ground, unconsious. "Oh, crap.." He looked around quickly for any guards. There were none, although the room was huge. He assumed there would be one at the door.. if he could find it. He went through the Majors pockets. He found a small knife, a key, a pebble and a bottle of a blue liquid. He pocketed it all. He was now dressed only in his tunic, as his armour had obviously been taken off by the tribespeople. He took a deep breath, and walked over to where he assumed the door would be. (OOC: Well, thats what I'm doing. That second section is a few hours ahead of the rest of it, so I'll shut up until we reach that bit. That should tell you why I've disappeared from the battle, and why the armoured tribespeople have to (which they have, so put that in ). Oh, and maybe I could talk to these guys, get some sort of alliance, and we could go on a massive campaign across the planet to kill the other tribespeople *HINT HINT*..? Just a thought )
 
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April 25, 2002 4:34:25 PM    View the profile of Raziel 
(Yeah thats fine, i was thinking something along the same lines myself. but we're still going to publically excecute their leaders )
 
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April 25, 2002 5:48:05 PM    View the profile of Afyon 
Afyon split off from the group and drew his blade.  He moved slowly down a corridor and approached a set of staircases, one leading up and one leading down.  Afyon thought for a second then decided that the majority would be downstairs for quick exit back into combat.  Afyon crept slowly and silently down the steps and rounded the corner.  At the end of the corridor, he could see desert people sititng around playing around with their weapons.  Afyon was surprised to see they all were armed with swords, axes, and clubs. Afyon moved slowly forward, blade in front of him.  He kept away from the light so it would not reflect on his armor.  His head was still throbbing and his arm killed from the blaster wound he had received.  Afyon got as close as he dared to the light and managed to get a view of almost the entire room.  It was very large and had at least twenty or thirty men in it.  Afyon crept to the door and before he charged in, thought to him self that perhaps one day he may learn something from his superiors about being such a reckless fool.  Afyon but the thought aside and rushed in. Afyon raced at the closet guy and stabbed him in the neck.  He twisted his blade around then kicked the dead body out of the way.  Two desert people turned drew their swords and charged.  Confusion entered the room and men started drawing their weapons looking for targets.  Afyon spun and kicked one of the men in the jaw sending him flying before cutting the arm off another one and stealing his long sword. Afyon but away his small weapon and took the large sword into his hand.  He spun around and swung his sword clanging it against one of the desertpeople's before lunging and kcking hm in the chest.  Afyon turned and brought his sword to bear on another foe.  He rattled swords a couple of tiems before jumping and spinning in mid-air beheading the enemy. Afyon landed turned and swung his sword back and forth beheading two other before racing to the doorway.  Three men turned to follow.  Afyon swung his sword at one while kicking another in the gut.  The third man lunged and stabbed his sword at Afyon.  Afyon jumped and turned, beheading one of the men as he did so.  The desertman tripped and fell and Afyon beheaded another attacking foe before stabbing the fallen one in the heart. After 5 minutes, the room was clear and Afyon had reopened he wounds and had be hit badly in the head by the end of a sword.  Afyon stumbled to the staircase before faling down disorientated and sick.
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April 25, 2002 5:48:16 PM    View the profile of Afyon 
Afyon split off from the group and drew his blade.  He moved slowly down a corridor and approached a set of staircases, one leading up and one leading down.  Afyon thought for a second then decided that the majority would be downstairs for quick exit back into combat.  Afyon crept slowly and silently down the steps and rounded the corner.  At the end of the corridor, he could see desert people sititng around playing around with their weapons.  Afyon was surprised to see they all were armed with swords, axes, and clubs. Afyon moved slowly forward, blade in front of him.  He kept away from the light so it would not reflect on his armor.  His head was still throbbing and his arm killed from the blaster wound he had received.  Afyon got as close as he dared to the light and managed to get a view of almost the entire room.  It was very large and had at least twenty or thirty men in it.  Afyon crept to the door and before he charged in, thought to him self that perhaps one day he may learn something from his superiors about being such a reckless fool.  Afyon but the thought aside and rushed in. Afyon raced at the closet guy and stabbed him in the neck.  He twisted his blade around then kicked the dead body out of the way.  Two desert people turned drew their swords and charged.  Confusion entered the room and men started drawing their weapons looking for targets.  Afyon spun and kicked one of the men in the jaw sending him flying before cutting the arm off another one and stealing his long sword. Afyon but away his small weapon and took the large sword into his hand.  He spun around and swung his sword clanging it against one of the desertpeople's before lunging and kcking hm in the chest.  Afyon turned and brought his sword to bear on another foe.  He rattled swords a couple of tiems before jumping and spinning in mid-air beheading the enemy. Afyon landed turned and swung his sword back and forth beheading two other before racing to the doorway.  Three men turned to follow.  Afyon swung his sword at one while kicking another in the gut.  The third man lunged and stabbed his sword at Afyon.  Afyon jumped and turned, beheading one of the men as he did so.  The desertman tripped and fell and Afyon beheaded another attacking foe before stabbing the fallen one in the heart. After 5 minutes, the room was clear and Afyon had reopened he wounds and had be hit badly in the head by the end of a sword.  Afyon stumbled to the staircase before faling down disorientated and sick.
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April 25, 2002 6:36:46 PM    View the profile of Yun 
Back in the crawler the Wraiths were putting their training into good use.  Yun was with raziel and the rest of the men were paired off appropriatly.  Grizzly was currently MIA but he had good reason to beleive that that soilder could withstand a lot of attacks and dish out a lot also. Yun had not seen Afyon in  awhile but did not worry becasue Afyon was one of the thoughest men he knew. Yun ran in front of Raziel to peer around the corner.  What he saw was three guards who were cheerfully talking in their language with only axes in their hand, obviously the tribesmen had also underestimated their opponent.  Yun backed up and let Raziel take a look.  Using the sign language they had learned in boot camp they devised a plan to get the men.  Being in the shadows Yun made a wuick and silent dive across the passage way to the other side .  Now Yun was on the left of the door and Raziel was on the left.  Yun put the plan into motion by taking a shot aimed towards the side where Raziel was.  The three men alerted by this noise ran over to where the 2 troopers were hiding.  Raziel leapt out of the darkness and stabbed one man in the back and Yun shot another in the head.  The third soilder dove off his feet and onto Raziel.  Yun could not shoot for fear of hitting his commanding officer.  Yun watched as the 2 men wrestled until they both stopped.  Yun feared the worst and waited until Raziel stod up and wiped the enemies blood off of his chest. Yun and Raziel stealthfully made their was through the crawller until they got to a big room full of men.  Raziel hid in the corner and lay some of the explosives that Arkaninan had given him and set it off killing the majority of the men nad let Yun finish off the rest.  they opened the door at the adjacent end of the room what they found in their was the cockpit of the crawller.  Yun grabbed the first mans neck and snapped it while Raziel stabbed the other pilot in the neck.  Raziel began to lay explosives on the controls when Yun said 'Are we gonna blow this crawller up sir?"  "Yes we are private why?" "well why dont we use it to our advantage?" Raziel thought than agreed with Yun's idea.  Yun sat in the co-pilots seat while his commanding officer took the reings of that machine.  Yun had a feeling this was going to be a bumpy ride.
 
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April 26, 2002 8:17:34 PM    View the profile of Afyon 
Afyon awoke twenty minutes later at the bottom of the stairs.  The blood still sticky on his head and arm from the wounds he had recieved.  He tried to get up but his legs tried to collapse on him.  With all his strength, Afyon pulled himself up using the railing then using the enemy sword for support.  Afyon weakly drew his blaster and began to lift himself up the stairs.  his head pounding from his injuries. Afyon made his way up the second staircase and found himself in front of a large but reinforced door.  It was the control room.  Thinking the enemy still hald it, Afyon took his pistol and raced into the room only to be surrounded completely by stormtroopers.  Afyon looked and saw Raziel at the controls of the transports. "Hey sarge." Afyon gasped out.  "Glad to see you captured it.  I managed to kill the rest of them downstairs.  The Wraiths have done it again."  And with that, Afyon collapsed and fell unconscious again from severe loss of blood.
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April 30, 2002 4:13:12 PM    View the profile of Raziel 
    Raziel looked down at the unconcious form lying on the floor.     "Bane see to that pls," he said calmly. Foolish kid, if he didnt stop running off like that Raziel would have him put back in drill squad before he got killed.     "Dez, Arkanian, pls watch that door while i try and drive this thing," Raziel smiled wickedly.         Outside the Regulars were fairing alright, but were wasting precious ammunition. The desert people were keeping behind the crawler and in cover behind sanddunes, the new the climate and area well and were using it to their full advantage.     To say that the desert people were suprise when the crawler turned slowly and started rolling at them, would be an understatement. Some of them looked strangely at each other, many opened fire to no effect on the crawler and the rest simply ran.     After scaring most of the tribesmen and getting them out of cover it was simply a job of mopping up the leftovers.     "Go ahead," Raziel said to his eager squad. They turned and ran for the exit of the crawler. Raziel doubted any would get injured in the fire fights that would follow.     Raziel turned to the now concious Afyon and smiled.     "Good to see you're awake trooper." Afyon could only manage a weak smile in reply.     "You're going to end up quite dead you know." Raziel blankly stated. Afyon stopped smiling.     "You're good, i'll admit that. I spent 10 years as the most feared assassin on Nar shaddaa and you're almost as skilled with that sword as me. The difference is i know my limits. For the rest of this mission you stay by my side and dont leave the main party on your own."     Afyon looked as if he'd been slapped for a second, before nodding.     "Who knows, you may even pick up some tricks," Raziel smiled and twisted a hidden blade out into his hands, spun it around in his finders and then made it seem to dissapear.     He then went back to the fun game of trying to run over wounded desert men, just as Afyon started getting himself together behind him.     "And now we have some transport" Raziel muttered.
 
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May 2, 2002 4:51:42 PM    View the profile of Afyon 
Afyon took a seat at one of the controls and dejectedly watched Raziel run over any desert people in his path.  Not very sporting of him Afyon thought.  Afyon bandaged up his wounds and drank as much fluids as he could hold then faced his sargeant. "Sir, we are exactly being sporting are we?" "Corporal you are not supposed to be sporting ot your enemy, you are just supposed to kill him." "None of them have blasters left.  Perhaps we can - " "NO CORPORAL.  We will not go out with swords and fight.  Sit down and enjoy the ride.  When we get back you go to the med bay for some real healing." "I dont need any of that.  I am ready to fight." "I do not ned you dead corporal.  i know you want to fight but you MUST learn your limits." "Yes sir." and Afyon grumbled and crossed his arms and  sat back in his seat.  He looked out and grapsed on as the crawler bumped over the bodies of the desert people. "I got an idea." "Dont count on it Corporal." "let me take some men and go to the exit doors on the side and back on the crawler to kill anyone who does not get hit by this." "Ok, I will allow it, but if you so much as attempt to leave this crawler i will have you court marshalled." "Yes sir." Afyon said but both knew that that would never last.  Afyon picked 6 men and marched them downstairs. "Ok men, 3 men on that side, the other 2 with me, each open one door and shoot everything in site. Afyon took the largest door in the middle and opened it up quickly as he brought his blaster to bare.  He quickly killed 2 sand people and they began to further disperse and panic.
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May 12, 2002 1:07:09 PM    View the profile of Raziel 
(Sorry this took so long) The battle ended shortly after Afyon and the wraiths went down the the ground again. Not many desert people were left even then and now there wasnt a single one. None that could be found anyway. Several had escaped Raziel knew, but he had no idea where, he hoped it wasnt the tribe's base. After the battle Raziel had got the whole contingent organised. There had infact been few casualties after the initial attack and most were treated quickly by the few medic's around. After Afyon's suggestion Raziel quickly decided it would be a lot easier to travell the rest of the way n the crawler. the troops loaded the thing up with all they're equipment and took a seat. Raziel looked down on the fort through the microbinoculars. He wasn't smiling. Roughly forty desert men lined the walls, with another hundred inside. The main worry was a group of three hundred troops camped outside the place. Although the walls were flimsily made, they would last a short time and give them enough view and range to hit the VE troops before they got too close. Raziel just hoped the crawler could take a fair pounding. "Ok men, we're going to wait here for a while and see what happens. If we do attack, we go by night. We're not used to the heat and the wraiths work best in dark anyway." What suprised Raziel most was that a shuttle left the fort that afternoon, it had been hidden around the other side of the main building. "now i wonder who was in that," Dez commented. Maybe the tribes getting together couldnt be credited to good leadership. At least not from within the tribes. Late that evening the force outside of the fort started getting active. The force of desert warriors from a range of tribes looked like they were getting ready to march. Several fights broke out within the group but in the end they headed out south, towards the valley. They seemed not to have known which way the VE troops had gone and were sending their "army" to finish them off. "Three, four days they'll be gone most," Bane said. Thinking about how far they had come and trying to work out how fast they were moving. "Just long enough for us," Raziel said. "At nightfall tomorrow we attack, we use to crawler to get close then attack the walls. Wraiths however will try and get in the back way and find the tribe leaders." (Sorry quick post, have to go. I'd like to see more than just afyon here)
 
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May 12, 2002 2:59:33 PM    View the profile of Bear 
(This should be as Grizzly, but sue me..) Grizzly sneaked out of the hut, clutching his pocket knife. He had his tunic, but nothing else. Not even a pair of boxer shorts. He was shivering in the cold of the evening, and every hair in his body was standing up. "Better get myself some clothes.." he whispered, eying a light in front of him. It was obviously a match lighting a ciggarette. He crept forward, gripping the knife. His eyes were not accustomed to the dark yet, but he could just make out the outline of a tribesman, his armour glinting. He grinned. Grizzlys hand reached out, and was about to grip the man by the neck and slice the knife into his throat, when he heard a sickening crunch. A moment later, he realised it had been a foot meeting his groin. His eyes crossed, and he fell to the ground, a soft moan coming from his mouth. --------- Grizzlys eyes opened slowly. He was in a small space, with lots of gadgets and flashing lights around. It was moving - he guessed it was a shuttle. There was a guard sitting next to him, and a tall, handsome man in front of him. Next to him was Major. The tall man stood up and smiled warmly. "Ahh, Colonel.. You are awake!" "You just keep doing this to me.." Grizzly growled. "Ahh! A sense of humour! Please, Colonel, allow me to introduce myself. I am Colonel.." He paused, and then said something sounding like a sausage being slurped up by an ill wookie, "You can call me Colonel!" "I'll call you what I want." Grizzly growled again. "Colonel, I do not advise you have that attitude!" The Colonel beamed, and nodded to the guard, who punched Grizzly in the stomach. Grizzly retaliated. His foot came up and stopped after it had gone 3 inches above the Colonels groin, leaving him suspended in mid air. His elbow came up and smacked the guard in the nose, instantly spraying blood everywhere. Major gasped and stood up, but Grizzlys foot met him, again in his groin. Grizzlys foot came down. His other foot unlodged itself from Colonels legs. His elbow also came down to his side. The guard was gasping for breath, clutching his bleeding face. The Colonel was on the ground, moaning. The Major was on his knees, doing the same. Grizzly stood up and grinned. He gave a good hard kick in the Colonels face, and bent down to seach him. He suddenly noticed that he, Grizzly, had new clothes on! He looked down, and, to his surprise, saw that he was wearing the uniform of a Colonel of the Vast Empire Army, and had been awarded a dozen or so medals - their ribbons were sitting impressivly on his tunic. To his even huger amazement, holstered at his belt, was.. a lightsaber! Grizzly gulped, and pulled it out. He looked at it. He had never held one before. A few moments of examintion revealed a small grove in it. He pressed down on it, and a bolt of light shot out. He grinned. "Sweet!" However, there was no time to lose. He had no idea how far away from the planet he was, so every second counted. He pressed the grove on the saber again, and clutched the handle. Now to get the pilots.. (You know what I love about storys? You can "find" anything you want.. I think I'll "find" a Super Star Destroyer next )
 
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May 16, 2002 5:09:55 PM    View the profile of Arturus 
(For Afyon: dont kill me cause im lazy to re-login :P) Afyon watched from one of the cock-pit windows as the crawler approached the desertman base.  There must have been over 500 enemies sitting out there but surprising, none seemed to be armed with blasters. "Look." said Afyon "They must be near the end, i dont see any blaster armed ones.  Only guys armed with swords and axes.  This will be very easy." "Dont under estimate your enemy corporal." stated Raziel as he continued to watch out the window. "Sir, I suggest we split into two teams, one arm with heavy weapons and attack the front, the other sneak around and attack the back." suggested Afyon. "That sounds logical." replied Raziel.  "You, me will sneak around back and attack.  The rest of you men arm up and get moving, you are attacking the front to create a diversion.  Good luck men." ordered Raziel. "Just the two of us?" asked Afyon kinda surprised. "Yes." said Raziel as he took off most of his stormtrooper armor and took out his sword for all to see.  "It is time we fight together in our natural style."  Raziel strapped on a pistol belt full of extra cartridges and sheathed his sword.  "Take that sword you took from here and come on.  you wont need all of that combat gear either.  Grab a pistol and meet me at the door." ordered Raziel as he elft the cock-pit.
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May 17, 2002 6:07:07 PM    View the profile of Raziel 
(My weapons of choice are actually two black combat knives, but dont worry about any editing )     The watchman walked alowly accross the hastily constructed battlements, staring out into the darkness. He quinted heavily as he tried to make out anything in the total blackness.     To his desert trained eyes, this was pitch black. To raziel the area was pleasantly illuminated.     The watchman looked back into, what had been an industrial complex. Within he could see a lot of his new "Allies" Wandering about in the light. Moving in an out of what used to be mine-shafts and drills.     His clan had always been fairly reclusive and calm, they kept to the northern regions where it was especially hot. They made a fair profit for trading the skins of the beast that lived in greater numbers in the north. But unfortunately his clan leader had been taken in by the claims of rich's and the promise of a fairer trading system. According to the alliance of tribes THEY would own the cool and damp southern hemisphere and would take power.     His tribe didnt even like the cool.     And so it was with a grudging feeling that he carried out his duties as watchman, and his lack of concentration and night vision let Raziel and Afyon slip by withing metres of him.     The watchman didnt feel safe tonight, something just wasnt right. The desert people were uncivilised and lived in a survival of the fittest culter, so tended to be good at sensing such things. He didnt fear the Imperial army said to be headed their way, the alliance of tribes had sent their force out to deal with them.     He feared attack from other tribes, especially without thei "army"     "Crawler sighted!" shouted a desertman further down the wall.     "Heading straight at us!" came another call.     The first watchman walked calmly up to the other panicking guards.     "What are the marking, what clan?" he asked.     "I see it! its the claw tribes! They come to stab us in the back!"     "Hmmm, they opposed the alliance, maybe they come to join us," the first, level-headed, tribesman retorted.     "send out the signal," a heavy set man shouted out. Obviously the leader of the watch he took immediate command.     "They don't reply," Came the call a few seconds later.     "Open fire, Rouse the men!! Attack!!"     To Raziel and Afyon it sounded like hell breaking loose around them. The clacks of the fire desert rifles was followed a few seconds later by the mass fire of imperial troops.     "Keep going," Raziel whispered.     "We need to get to the command centre, that tower i guess." he continued.     "But they could be down below, seeing the mines and drills there could be hundred more of this lot underground. Afyon replied.     'Quite attentive after all' Raziel thought then replied:     "We'd better hope there aren't any more."
 
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May 18, 2002 8:49:35 AM    View the profile of Bear 
(Ok, I'm lazy. Kill me, if you want ) Grizzly banged down the door of the small room he had been in. He crashed through, and stumbled to the floor. "Ow.." He heard a man move next to him. The guard. "Erm.. errm.. shtop!" The guard was hairy. Very very hairy. Disgustingly hairy. He was holding up a flint lock musket in his hairy hands, connected to his hairy arms, which were.. you get the picture. "Good god." Grizzly thought. He stood up, brushed himself down, and shook his head at the guard. "Shtop!" The guard shouted, tears in his eyes. He was obviously terrified. Grizzly reached out and took the musket. He examined it slowly. The guard was faffing around, almost crying. "A musket, eh?" The guard stopped moving, and stared at Grizzly. He was still scared. Suddenly, he dropped to his knees and started to beg.. presumably for his wife and three starving children. Grizzly grabbed him by the scruff of his neck, and thumped on the door a few feet away. He guessed it was the cockpit. The shuttle was tiny.. just a cockpit, a store room and what looked like a toilet - if you had four legs. "What?!" The door flew open, and Grizzly stared into the face of an angry looking tribesman. He grinned. "Put us down." Grizzly said slowly, raising the musket to the mans neck, "I've got a proposition for you!" The pilot gulped, and backed back into the cockpit. He sat down, his eyes never coming off the musket. ------ A few minutes later, they were down. Grizzly had left the Colonel and Major in the shuttle, and walked off with the pilot and the guard. The pilot had taken him to a tribal village. There were no men, for some strange reason. Just women. Beautiful, unhairy women. "We are here." The pilot said coldly. "So we are.." The pilot grinned. "You wanna spend some time with one of these women?" Grizzly looked at him. His hand shot up and punched the pilot in the jaw. The man moaned, and fell to the ground. "Who are you?" he shouted at one of the women. "I am Mia, and I am your slav.." "Which tribe?" "We are in no tribe. We belong to them." she nodded at the unconscious pilot, and spat. "Any guards here?" "No.." "Then why not leave?" "Where shall we go? We do not know this land.. At least there is food here." "Do you have weapons?" "Yes. They store them here. About 500 muskets." "How many of you are there?" "Two hundred and seventeen." Grizzly thought. 218 men. Well, soldiers. Well, people armed with muskets. It was enough, if they were willing.. "Lets go inside.." he said quietly. "I am your slave, master." "Not for that. I have an idea." ------ Half an hour later, he had convinced them. 217 women and a very hairy male guard, all armed with two muskets, marched off across the desert. "Colonel" Grizzly (they all called him Colonel now) was at their head, with a map he had found in the village. Apparently, the main tribal village was just a mile away.. just over this hill. He grinned. Who would have guessed it? Colonel Grizzly, in command of a Batallion of women. Raziel would be pleased.. he just hoped he wouldn't be too late. (Don't quite know what I'm doing.. Since this isn't an official story, I'm just gonna run around with this new army of mine. Maybe I'll run into those 300 tribesman and have an epic battle? Cooool.. )
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May 18, 2002 9:39:49 AM    View the profile of Afyon 
Afyon and Raziel continued to quietly move through the base.  The racket from the gunfight outside made it very easy for them to walk and not be heard. "Dammit." said Afyon.  "I didnt see a single one of the blaster armed ones, i thought they were all armed with axes swords and knives." "Dont worry bout it, the blaster armed ones are fighting our men out front.  We just need to kill the others in here and get to the control room."  replied Raziel as they rounded the corner near the stairs to the tower.  Up ahead, there was a wide room with a stair case at the far endd.  It looked like some sort of ceremonial room. "Something doesnt feel right." said Afyon.  "We have encountered no one yet and the stairs are too wide open." he continued as he drew the sword he had taken from the crawler. "Just move carefully and quietly." Raziel replied as he drew his two combat knives, holding them in what looked like a very awkward yet very deadly position. The two men stepped into the room, at the front of the door, there was a rather large rectangle, red in color on the floor.  Afyon and Raziel stepped in and suddenyl found them selves flying up.  The rectangle rose and went through a door that had opened in the ceiling.  It stopped in a room that looked like a dueling hall. The two men saw they that they were surrounded by at least 50 men with swords and in front of them, there were 5 very tall desertmen in black combat armor.  Their battlegear shone with an evil glimmer.  The one in the middle, the most fearsome looking of them all spoke. "Greetings Imperials." he hissed as smoke seemed to ocme out of his mouth.  "You are going to wish you never caused us so much trouble.  Your friends out there are in a trap, as now are you.  You may not live to see the firey death that awaits your men when they walk into the mined cavern at the base of this complex.  Alright guards, kill them."ordered the leader as he stepped back and sat in a throne like chair at the end of the room.  The other 4 went with him and stood on either side. Afyon and Raziel quickyl glanced around the room, the 50 guards moved forward, then suddenly charged right at them, swords swinging.  Afyon and Raziel stepped apart and prepared themselves for the long suicidal battle. (dont feel like writing anymore at this point, hopefully will add later unless u wanna continue this posting raz)
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May 19, 2002 12:19:49 AM    View the profile of _BaNe_ 
(this is my first story attempt, so no go easy on me if its bad) **while raz adn afyon are still moving thru the darkness** bane was tired, but he knew this is what he would get himself into, but he liked it...  as soon as raz adn afyon left, bane took his snipe rifle, and thought, i wonder what kind of shot i could get from the top of this thing, as he found out, a great view of the tribes soldiers and watchmen..  so without hesitating, took the cap off his scope, and used the force to see in the pitch black w/ ease, and started picking off watchmen.  bane knew that if he took out their watchmen, they would be lost on where to lauch any laser cannons which way in the darkness.  1 after 1 he downed until their were none remaining.  back on the ground, he decided to ditch the pointless firefight, adn use some knowledge, sneak around the opposite side, but goin alone...hmm, lets take 2 pfc's the 3 made their way around the firefight and camp.  once in back, they chose to go in the left gap in tents, (bad choice)  once in, bane led the way, when all of a sudden, he hit the floor by instinct, the 2 pfc's were'nt so lucky, as both were decaptated by a swinging axe, with a swift motion bane's imperial sniper rifle butt when smashing into the tribesman's chin, sending him off his feet onto his back w/ a loud thud.. bane's rifle was in his mouth, "where is the command center?  I wont ask twice...."    "Aeiakllcalkd, soijlwklkjaiojk", replied the tribesman. Thummm, as the laser blast deadened into the sand under the animals head.  I dont understand that jibberish crap, he said.  bane then found the room w/ the large red triangle, hmmmm looks suspicious, the same thing happened to him as did raz and afyon.. right up to the top room, but this time bane was in the middle of a death battle, out came his sword, slicing two in half, off w/ anothers head ,then a limb..it wasnt looking to good for raz, afyon, and bane....to many swordsman *in the back of bane's mind, he knew he shouldnt do this, but bane was, and had been a well trained jedi for many years, trained by his father, who was a great sith warrior/master, but when bane joined the ve, he was unable to join the dark order until he was a soldier for 5 months, even though his skills w/ the lightsaber were unbelievable* with defeat lookin down on the 3 vast empire soldiers, bane did something that even took himself by surprise, rage, hate, anger took over him, as if all the men there were the ones who killed his mohter as a child        [see my bio for that]  he used the force to create a destruction ball in his hand, w/ that he guided it into a group of 5 swordsmen, killing all them on impact, and stunning many around, raz looked at bane w/ a puzzled, angry yet, awestruck look, as did afyon, and the 5 leaders of the swordsman.. bane knew he shouldnt do this but the rage took over, he pulled out the lightsaber he had made many years before, and brought, against Cosmic's wishes when he was recruited, an began slicing down anything in his path, off went a few heads, adn a few arms, and even one torso...the 3 went on fighting until none of the beginning 50 swordsman were standing... **raz or afyon, give us a kewl way to end this final duel, also, maybe we should add a twist to this, have the remaining 5 be attuned w/ the force, like A'Sharad Hett, but dark, adn have a kewl 3 v. 5 sab duel, just some suggestions**
 
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