A nervous Iorek entered the Imperial outpost in Drano, a backwater settlement on Tatooine, and strode over to the Trooper sitting behind the desk.
"May I help you?" inquired the Trooper
"erm.. yes I.. I would like to enlist in the Army Please"
The Trooper lent forward and looked at Iorek for the first time
"ahh, right, Fill out this pad and come back alright?"
"ye.. yes, ok"
Iorek took the pad and sat in the corner and filled it out in silence. Half an hour later Iorek stepped up to the desk once again
"Here I've filled it in"
"Ok, thanks for your time you will be contacted within the week"
"Brilliant!" Iorek exclaimed and strode out with a newfound confidence and a new life ahead of him.
"Kids these days" chuckled the Trooper.
And so began the Career of Iorek Ordo!
Thanks for reading, this is the first story i have written EVER. please give me some contructive critisism
Thanks
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TRN/PVT Iorek/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadath/VEA/VE
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