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Rizzit
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  Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 10, 2007 10:06:04 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
For those that haven't noticed: Chapter 8.5 has begun! I'd like to thank Raiders for taking the initative and already getting a story post out. The rest of you it seems: need something to motivate you, so here is the Chapter 8.5 Competition to accompany the storylines!

Individual Competition: The individual that has the most posts will receive a large amount of Ics, and some personal equipment along with any other post-stoyline rewards handed out.

Squad Competition: The Squad that has the most combined posts will receive a complete equipment upgrade or a equipment revamp that involves switching their squad specialty.

Platoon Competition: The winning platoon will not only get bragging rights over the other, but will receive an equipment upgrade. Furthermore, each trooper in the platoon will be able to select a specialty story of their choice to not only get waived, but will get credit for it as if they passed it.

Graphics Competition: There will be three categories and two winners for the graphics competition. The work must be your own and submitted to Rizzit, Kairo, and Aphamos. You must state which category you are submitting your entry for and if selected you will either win best picture or runner-up. Each winner will get their work uploaded to the VE's official Image Gallery and receive a congradulatory prize based on which place you came in. The categories are as follows:

Story-based Graphics

Images must portray a scene of some sort from Chapter 8.5

General Star Wars Pictures

Images must be depicting Star Wars

Vast Empire Pictures

Images must represent some manner of the Vast Empire

Allright so that's the competition. It will run the entire duration of Chapter 8.5! You need to start a story on your own based on your orders that Fury posted. Have fun, and Good Luck!
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 11, 2007 2:34:38 PM    View the profile of Rogueboy 
no gaming award? Cmon Rizz I just ordered JO
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 11, 2007 4:54:21 PM    View the profile of Kairo 
On a side note, Ch8.5 is probably going to take longer than your normal competition or story, so don't go crazy in the first week and wear yourself out. You can if you want, but just remember that since this is a form of a chapter story that quality is way above quantity, even though this is a competition. So please, don't make a bunch of crappy short posts trying to "win". I'd prefer you don't at least.
 
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You may forget the past, but it will always haunt your future.
Men can die, but a symbol is eternal.
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 11, 2007 11:22:42 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
I agree. The purpose of this is to encourage overall good posting (and in good quantity helps too, but not the primary goal) Don't ruin it with a bunch of "filler"
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 12, 2007 4:27:17 PM    View the profile of Riqimo 
/me cringes at thought of Eclipse vs Wildcard again...
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 13, 2007 8:14:59 AM    View the profile of Rogueboy 
yeah Im starting to think someone should even the teams up a bit. It does seem kind of like....rape.
 
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Raiders
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He will give them death, and they will love him for it -Gladiator
Eat a hearty breakfast men, for tonight we dine in hell -King Leonidas, 300
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 13, 2007 8:26:32 AM    View the profile of Skar Darkanto 
I know some people aren't going to check my signature, and are just going to check my rank and wonder what the hell im doing posting here, so lets sort that out first. Kanderin Draken, Wraith Squad.

Out of interest, does it have to be the Squad leader that posts the start of the story? Im not quite sure where Arnaut is (Well actually im not quite sure where half of the squad is, but thats not the point), but im sure he wouldn't want us sitting around doing nothing until he returns.

Can another member of the squad start the story? In this case, i could do it. I understand the mission, so i dont see any major problem. But, its best to check here first.
 
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Rizzit
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 13, 2007 10:49:34 AM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Honestly, I'm okay with it. Fury, you got a problem with it? If he doesn't Kandy, I just assume tell you to go for it.
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 13, 2007 12:23:10 AM    View the profile of Rogueboy 
the way I look at it is this, if someone who is higher up does not like your post they can always edit it, You definately should not be sitting down playing the damsel in distress because no one will rescue you because your too damn ugly carpe diem and perhaps you will be rewarded for it.
 
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Faithful To The End
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He will give them death, and they will love him for it -Gladiator
Eat a hearty breakfast men, for tonight we dine in hell -King Leonidas, 300
Clearly Canadian!

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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 14, 2007 2:18:26 AM    View the profile of Riqimo 
Now I don't intend to make enemies with this, but I have ti be honest, there is no minumum word count... And not having it seems to hurt the quality and make it unfair for the squads that are actually doing the effort to have quality,

The Navy is doing a good job of quality with their 500 word min.  I suggest we adapt that, 

And ladies, gents, and other genders of misc species, the facts are here

The average words oer post are (as of this post time):

DD - 357 (11 posts)
Raiders - 473 (8 posts)
Wraith 1090 (1 post)
Paladin 304 (1 post)
Eclipse - 613 (9 posts)

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[This message has been edited by Riqimo (edited June 14, 2007 2:19:03 AM)]
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 14, 2007 5:06:33 AM    View the profile of Yillis 
word count minimums are ridiculous. I'd much rather have a short, but good post. If they write 300 great words, and then realize they need 200 more, it's gonna be just stupid filler text.
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 14, 2007 8:06:02 AM    View the profile of Sandwich Sam 
I'm with Yillis on this one. Minimum word count makes what is intended to be fun, work. At least that is the way I feel about it. This is supposed to be fun. If I wanted to work and write then I would be come a novelist. And what works for some may not work for others. So , let's not implement something that could potentially damage the activity we have in the army.

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[This message has been edited by Sandwich Sam (edited June 14, 2007 8:07:24 AM)]
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 14, 2007 8:43:49 AM    View the profile of Kanderin Draken 
Yeah, word counts are bad. I cant help but focus on the word count when im writing for the ESC, and my posts turn out rather, cardboardish. The post just now is roughly the same size if a little smaller, but arrogant or not i reckon better written.

And the day i make a point of bringing up Wraiths inactivity the story starts up. Got my moment to shine stolen from me there...
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 14, 2007 9:31:50 AM    View the profile of Aphamos 
I think a minimum word count should be put into place for the sole reason of making it fair for those squads who do write posts on the longer side.  If a squad wins a competition with posts that are mostly less that 300 words (quality is not a factor here), that makes it unfair for squads that put forth the time to write longer posts.

I'm not proposing a minimum that might be considered long, like 500 words (though I was under the impression that that was the norm), but something like a 300 or 350 minimum.

 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 14, 2007 3:26:55 PM    View the profile of Sandwich Sam 
Since I've been here it has been up to the Squad leaders if there is a word minimum and would be enforced by them. So really there hasn't been an army wide minimum, at least since I've been here.

If there was to be one implemented then I wouldn't disagree with a 300 minimum, but as I said earlier I'd rather not have one because it may end up becoming work and that would defeat the purpose of this being something fun.
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 14, 2007 5:14:34 PM    View the profile of D'har Leth 
I'm against the word count minimum on this one.

And don't worry Kanderin, we'll have plenty of shiny-time in the story.
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 14, 2007 9:06:32 PM    View the profile of Kairo 
No word count minimum. This is just for fun people. Rizzit's stupid competition (!!>>kidding<
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Men can die, but a symbol is eternal.
[This message has been edited by Kairo (edited June 14, 2007 10:38:36 PM)]
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 14, 2007 10:30:14 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Rizzit's Stupid Competition......hmm.....that earns big points with the boss Seriously though, here's how I tend to judge posts:

if it moves the story along, it counts. If it doesn't it's just filler and it doesn't count. Word limits I feel help make the story look nice with a lot of long posts, but in the end discourage activity. Personally, I was a fan of 250 words cause it wasn't a hell of a lot of words to write, but as long as it's more than a paragraph I really don't care.
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 15, 2007 4:03:10 PM    View the profile of Krius 
I don't think there should be a minimum if people are gonna go nuts over it. I do think though that people should use there own judgement on whether its long enough or not. I've seen a 233 word post in the competition, and the fact that its counting for points is somewhat disturbing.


 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 15, 2007 6:42:37 PM    View the profile of Alater Osted 
Actions speak louder than words though, so to speak. If a post hold key information ect. but requires say, for somebody else to do something and doesn't leave much room for you to do anything else, and you want said person to actually control their own character, the post can come up short. It's what's INSIDE that counts :P
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 15, 2007 7:45:25 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Okay, I've had just about enough of this. This competition was meant to inspire activity not bickering! Now, either stop your moaning and groaning or it'll be cancelled! We come up with these things to try and motivate you guys and let you have fun, but all I've seen produced out of this so far is a bunch of whining. This place is NOT a democracy, it's a dictatorship. Deal with it!
 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 Competition
June 22, 2007 9:13:57 PM    View the profile of Rizzit 
Congratulations everyone! Your lack of maturity has cost you guys a competition. Too much effort goes into these to have to deal with whining/bitching and whatever else you wanna call it. NO, I am still not instituing a post count. No, it is not considered cheating to make shorter posts. Yes, the story will continue as planned and you will still be rewarded as necessary. Yes, you are still expected to post like you have been (if not step it up a notch). I'm honestly quite dissappointed in all of you, we may not all be adults: but you're all at least 13! Lately, you've been acting like 9-year olds. It seems a competition isn't enough to motivate the Army anymore.....I remember when we couldn't wait for the next big story or competition just to show what we can do. I'd say grow up, but I don't think you guys would comprehend what that means. NOW, if you guys can straighten up before the next phase of the story comes out: I just might consider re-opening the competition for that phase.

I would like to point out that there are some of you who do know how to conduct themselves properly and I apologize for including you in this. I'm not going to mention who you are, but those who ARE properly composed will be recieving a stamp from one of us higher ups.
 
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High Colonel Rizzit BlackHeart
~ Wildcard Platoon ~
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