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Aristoc
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  New guy
March 22, 2007 11:51:02 AM    View the profile of Aristoc 
Well here is the navy parallel to my Riqqy for real this time, let's have a bio now, eh? 


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Name: Aristoc Pere
Callsign: Aristoc
Race: Ksei (looks human to the untrained eye)
Home World: Ksei I
Age: 129 standard years old (appears 25 to the untrained eye)
Family: Kriusa Pere (mother - deceased), Rtoleg Pere (father - deceased), Paliout Pere (brother - deceased)
Social Status: Single

Physical Description:
Hair: Mid-length straight jet-black with some streaks of blonde
Eyes: Silver-colored and constantly scanning his surroundings
Scars: One running from the right side of his head and down along his side to his waist
Cybernetics: His entire right arm was amputated and replaced with a cybernetic arm.

Biographical History:

Forced to leave his planet at a very early age due to the Clone Wars which nearly wiped out his people, including his family, Aristoc became a freighter captain and traveled the Galaxy in search of the survivors of his race.

On one fateful day he drifted off course and came into the middle of a pirate raid on a group of Republic vessels. During the heat of the battle, Pere destroyed many of the pirate ships, saving his own hide, and in effect saving the Republic ships. Feeling the adrenaline with him, he later joined the Republic Military Force, training to be a starfighter pilot. Upon graduating, he quickly stepped up in rank due to many encounters that provided him many opportunities.

Several decades past, and the Republic fell, paving the way to the Empire. Seeing a prominent future in the Empire, he quickly joined. He excelled in the ranks as before.

Aristoc Pere was eventually transferred to one of the elite squadrons stationed at the first Death Star. He performed several special operations during its construction

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The following comes from the Psychological Analysis Interview of Aristoc Pere, Vast Empire Navy Recruit
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I was trying to evade the enemy fire coming from above me, and I initiated a defensive maneuver that in turn knocked me into the walls of the trench, a stabbing pain went through my hand and up my right arm as sparks flew from all directions. I maneuvered the TIE in the opposite direction this time, I could only think of getting out of the trench. The TIE rose and I almost cleared it when a terrible explosion ripped the wing right off my TIE. I was lucky, very lucky that the hull didn't fracture and suck me out into open space. I was even luckier because the explosion rocketed the ship straight out of the trench. The explosion sent an enormous feeling of pain through my body, I could smell my burning flesh. I could feel tears forming in my eyes, the pain was so terrible. In its current condition the TIE was unable to fight and so was I, my mind was now only filled with the thought of survival.

I looked down at my controls, guidance barely operational, I had lost one of the Ion Engines and was being hurled away from the Death Star; the pride of the Empire, at top speed. I could see a few Patrol Crafts through the scarred visor of my helmet trying desperately to get away from the Death Star. And then IT happened, the one thing that never could have happened, the station I was sworn to protect exploded into a million pieces, the Emperor's toy, had been destroyed.

I woke up in the Med facility of what could have been a small craft, looking around at the colorful walls and paintings I knew immediately it was not an Imperial ship. A 2-1B droid was just finishing attaching something to my hand. I sat up still quite dizzy from the medication given to me and glanced at my hand. I felt no pain and the tissue was completely healed, as for my face however, it had a very large scar stretching right down underneath my medical clothes.

"What happened?" I asked.

The droid responded in a very monotonous voice, "You have sustained many injuries and your arm was amputated and replaced with a bionic substitute, it is quite operational and is responding quite well to the synthflesh."

"WHAT? You've replaced my arm with a machine?"

"Yes sir, without it you wouldn't have -" the droid was interrupted by a man walking through the door. He looked like a large frog, he didn't smell very nice either. He identified himself as Oniari Iseth.

"Hello, I'm glad you made it safe and sound, you're a very lucky man you know, the TIE was in very poor shape when we brought it in," he said with a very raspy and low pitched voice.

"How did I get on your ship?" I asked.

"Well, we heard about the Death Star and decided to come here on a salvage operation, that's when we found you drifting many kilometers away from Yavin. We almost hit you exiting from hyperspace. We pulled in the TIE and were surprised to find a living pilot inside it. Anyway, you should probably get some rest, then we can talk. I have a proposal for you."

"What kind of proposal?" I asked, the man was being a little too kind for my liking.

"Rest now, I'll talk to you about it later." I felt something cold across his neck and then fell asleep.

When I awoke again Oniari Iseth was standing to the side of the bed. "Ah, you're awake." He made a sign to one of the 2-1B droids and it came over and shot something into my neck again. "Now about my proposal," he started with a broad smile across his face, "I am building a small fleet of salvaged ships over Kessel and I'd like you to help train my pilots, I'm sure an experienced TIE pilot such as yourself would have many skills he'd be willing to share. I am a very rich man and can make it worth your while, just name a price and you've got it."

Thinking about it made sense, I failed the Empire and if ever I was found I was sure that I wouldn't be forgiven for not protecting the Death Star. I will need to start a new life and this man can give me the money I would need to do so. Training pilots isn't something I had in mind but if I could make enough money training pilots for this man's so called 'fleet' I would be able to pursue other things, like getting revenge upon the rebels who'd basically ruined my career as one of the most promising pilots in the Empire.

End of Psychological Analysis Test, due to subject not wishing to discuss this part of his past any furthe///
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The life of Aristoc Pere during his service to Oniari Iseth is shrouded in mystery; no one is sure where he was at anytime and what he was doing, and thus his past is the subject of many rumors amongst his fellow Imperials. The primary rumor, though unconfirmed by Aristoc, says that during one heated row with Oniari, he lost his temper and the energies which he knew nothing about and could not control were unleashed upon the man, killing him instantly.

Terrified by the consequences that would arise as a result of killing the wealthy general of a private army, Aristoc Pere fled Kessel in the Xesthen, a Corvette formerly belonging to Oniari. He joined a group of pirates, unaware of their criminal nature and was manipulated into fighting against the Empire. Within a year he had shown amazing combat skills, being both an ace pilot in the R-41 Starchaser craft and a much feared figure in hand-to-hand combat. He was forced to live almost as a recluse, afraid to stay in the presence of his pirate friends less his temper would kill them also.

During the battle between a TIE elite squadron and the pirates, Aristoc's craft was disabled and Pere was taken aboard the and Imperial Star Destroyer. An admiral recognized the man he presumed dead from the Battle of Yavin and put forth a recommendation for Pere to be reaccepted into the Imperial Navy. Aristoc swore to hunt down and kill all enemies of the Empire in order to put right the wrongs he had done during his time with the pirates.

Aristoc joined the Imperial Navy once again and passed through the Imperial training academy a second time with flying colors.  In the space of a few short years, Aristoc fought many more battles for the Empire - his first task was to lead the assault group which destroyed the entire pirate base on which he had formerly lived. Aristoc was rapidly promoted through the ranks within the Imperial Navy.  Pere was then assigned to serve under Admiral Thrawn in the Outer Rim as a minor pilot. It was during this time that the Empire was dealt a cowardly blow by the Rebel Alliance, and Palpatine was killed at the battle of Endor. As Thrawn and his fleet sped back to Coruscant they were harried by Rebels at every step, and Aristoc Pere became isolated from the rest of the fleet in his TIE Defender. He called for help when he spotted a small Rebel fleet, but Thrawn must have considered him expendable. Alone, he fought off a Rebel attack force of 12 A-Wings and 12 X-Wings launched from a Light Calamari cruiser by escaping into an asteroid field nearby, but his ship's hyperdrive was damaged and it took him nearly a week to get back to the nearest Imperial space marked on his nav computer.

And so it was that a battered TIE Defender limped into the control space of the Vast Empire's Tadath platform where it was drawn into dock. Aristoc was found unconscious but alive, and when he recovered he became a citizen to the Vast Empire, swearing that he had enough of war for a lifetime.  Several years later, he feels the urge to fly and is unable to find civilian life appealing, and applies for the Imperial Navy once again. He is currently undergoing his Vast Empire training and holds the rank of Flight Cadet. His hot temper has been cooled somewhat over the years but he is still possessed of an almost irrational hatred of traitors which at times clouds his judgment. His search for his lost race continues to this day as well...

[This message has been edited by Aristoc (edited March 23, 2007 9:33:15 AM)]
[This message has been edited by Aristoc (edited March 26, 2007 5:55:50 AM)]
[This message has been edited by Aristoc (edited May 17, 2007 9:08:51 AM)]
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  RE: New guy
March 22, 2007 4:17:36 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
The following is what is usually given to new recruits:

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Howdy there- I'm the training officer (TO) of the Vast Empire Naval Academy (VENA).  Our staff, the VENA-S, is composed of trainers and operators, all who can be seen at the following website:

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=VENA_Staff

Now that you've posted here on the ComNet, you've actually completed the Imperial Initiation (II) phase of Basic Training (BT).  BT's second phase is called Flight School (FS), which is made up of three chapters and an exam.  The first chapter, and probably the most important aspect of our system, is that of Character Creation- the bio.  In order for your character to exist in our club, our universe if you will, you need to create them in written form, detailing their stories, their personalities and the physical aspects that we may be aware of with a glance or perhaps things we can not see with the naked eye.  Either way, you're going to tell us how to describe you're character in a more detailed fashion than you're probably used to, but that's part of the fun

So, if you'll follow the link below, you'll be able to see the entirety of Flight School, the portion of BT I was referring to above.  BT is, essentially, training and thus, once you've passed through it, you're going to be placed in an Active Squadron, in 'Active Duty'.  So, depending on how well you do here against the recruits currently training here, you'll receive a rank at the end of your training and receive certain recommendations or promotions.  You'll want to go to Chapter 1- Character Development.  So, lets get off to a good start and get you goin- Rock On!

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Flight_School_%28FS%29

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Anywho: very well written bio, but if you take a look at that link above, there should be some mention of what can and cannot write about.  Primarily- involvement of well known Star Wars characters and 'the force.'  Why?  Such direct interference from a new recruit in the galaxy that everyone knows actually changes it- we intend to operate outside of that.  Only the Vast Empire as a whole can enter into the Galactic Scope- battling Thrawn, taking over known planets or the core...  Things like that.  As for the force- we have an elite group of writers who, after some serious time and evaluation, have been granted the gift of using the force for their characters. 

The reason we deny people that ability is because it's like starting out at the top- where are you going to go if we give that to you right away?  And this way you're forced to use other elements and concepts to write- not just 'the force did it...'  This way when, and really if, you are granted the ability to use the force in your writing, you'll do so responsibly and write far better than you would have if we just gave it to you right off the bat.

That's my shpeal   Though- I don't actually have a problem with you writing about being aboard the Death Star I or II.  Being a personal aide to Tarkin, Vader or Thrawn is overstepping it though.  I hope this makes sense to you and you'll be able to use previous ideas to edit your bio.  Lemme know when you're ready for me to review it once again.
 
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  RE: New guy
March 22, 2007 5:51:50 PM    View the profile of Trevor Evenson 
I hate you Doc :P

Defenders? T_T I want one.
 
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The VEN`s #1 writer as of ESC `06

Clearly Canadian!
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  RE: New guy
March 22, 2007 7:11:13 PM    View the profile of Riqimo 
Yeah I knew I was pushing the limits there

And Trevor, I already know that
 
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  RE: New guy
March 23, 2007 9:33:29 AM    View the profile of Aristoc 
Editted
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  RE: New guy
March 23, 2007 5:05:05 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
*Cough* No Force! *Cough*
 
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  RE: New guy
March 26, 2007 5:55:25 AM    View the profile of Aristoc 
Thought I editted that out
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  RE: New guy
March 27, 2007 8:22:11 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
I think that'll do for now- seems pretty intricate and perhaps more of what you actually want will become clear to you.  In the meantime- this means you can continue on to our final chapter- "Pilot Procedure."  You'll need to post your assignment for that chapter here so that one of us VENA-S folk can grade it.  After that- it'll probably be time for you to head to a squadron.  The best to ya.
 
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  RE: New guy
March 28, 2007 11:35:02 PM    View the profile of Trevor Evenson 
Heh, if he is the guy who fills up Nazgul, I promise I'll keep the beatings to only 6 times per week.

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The VEN`s #1 writer as of ESC `06

Clearly Canadian!
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  RE: New guy
March 29, 2007 9:58:44 AM    View the profile of Aristoc 
Only six that's less than I am used to

Anyways...


The Barrel Roll

Aristoc Pere has a preference for extremely fast and maneuverable starfighters, he considers the standard Twin-Ion Engine Fighter to be slightly dawdling in speed.  Due to his usually fast piloting style, he often finds himself overtaking an enemy too quickly.  In these cases, he generally engages a barrel roll.  This simple maneuver is performed through Pere rolling his craft while applying pitch to maintain the nose roughly around the axis of his flight path.

In many cases this does not decelerate him enough and thus Aristoc pulls back on the stick with more force and executes another roll in the opposite direction.  As he completes his roll, Pere is back on his initial course with the enemy's six, but at a reduced airspeed.  Rarely does Aristoc find himself engaging this maneuver defensively, tending to perform a dive of some sort, such as the Spiral Dive.

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The Spiral Dive

Perhaps his most favorite maneuver, Pere uses the Spiral Dive very liberally.  Traditionally this dive is used as a last resort, but Aristoc often uses it frequently.  By making a sudden dive, Pere leads his opponent downward (although his is known to try "upward" in some cases).  After a short period, he engages a sharp turn with his superior turn radius to prevent the enemy from achieving a direct line of fire.  As he exits the turn, Pere quickly adjusts his speed and performs a 180 degree roll before pulling up sharply once again.  A majority of the times Pere performs this maneuver, the enemy overshoots him and puts Aristoc on the offensive.

Aristoc's unorthodox use of the spiral dive as an offensive maneuver has several conservative pilots twisting in their graves (pun not intended).  He will fly high above his opponent, then overshoot the enemy craft as if he found a new target.  Once he has carefully calculated his path with respect to his target, he will spiral downwards and pull a sharp pitch back behind an unsuspecting starfighter to trail it on its six at close range.  He also has fired photon torpedoes while spiraling downwards to have them hit the top of the enemy starfighter, which is often a vulnerability.
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  RE: New guy
March 31, 2007 5:39:50 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Sounds about right to me, Aristoc- and I'm ganna pass, ya

SO!  It looks like two of our squadrons are starting to fill up.  Though Kaph has both flights full, though I can't count on some of those members to be there really- I'm going to talk to the commander Than Sion and see what he wants to do.  Either way: that's where you're going.  What you can do is start reading the story they have on the Naval Storyboard and report on their main thread in the Navy Main.  Ask Than Sion for instructions and who it is that will be receiving your reports.  Furthermore, we give new recruits about a week to complete their aviator's exam (AE) after they've been released from BT.  Based on your performance with the AE and BT, you'll be assigned a class rank: from there- cool things can happen   In the meantime, if nothing else, you can also start creating a VE Wiki profile.  Ask someone on IRC if at all possible or get in touch with me- I'll do my best to assist.

You have your orders, Mr. Aristoc- the best to you!  Welcome to the Vast Empire Navy.

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  RE: New guy
May 19, 2007 11:23:24 PM    View the profile of etan evnstar 
Hey, I found you. Sorry for my attitude in the Kaph, welcome aboard. Here, we have no beatings, just verbal tongue lashes that make you feel smaller than Yoda. I look forward to flying with you......
 
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  RE: New guy
June 8, 2007 10:10:09 AM    View the profile of Aristoc 
No prob at all Etan
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