Zeshaun
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RE: Paladin Squad
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May 31, 2009
8:21:20 PM
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posted as well, stole alan's cut to captain ruron thingy 
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
4:47:49 AM
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Good work so far on objective 3. Remember that the competition will be ending next monday and we have a total of four objectives in this story. I have added up another post which makes four for this objective. We need another six posts before concluding objective 3 and moving onto objective 4. Let's get all 4 objectives completed before this competition ends.
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Luckystar
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
7:31:13 AM
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Not sure how much posting I'll have done today...I know I'll write one toight, hopeefully my sister is feeling better. I had a sleepless night (have a vomiting phobia), not sure why ny sister got sick starting yesterday ad possibly not over yet. To give you an idea of my night, this morning I went downstairs to greet my mom at 6:20 AM, she told me to go back to sleep...pretty much forced me back to bed.
So now I'm debating whether to go to the coffee shop and buy breakfast plus a coffee (it's 8AM) or sty home all day, eat breakfast here and let my ears possibly suffer another 20 times...If my dad gives me the go ahead to go stack wood, I won't be on iRC much until another 7-8 hours.
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
12:09:01 AM
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Sorry to hear that, if you manage to get a post in as well as Zesh then that would help.
Njall, Leon & Greywolf, guys feel free to join in at any time!
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Luckystar
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
1:04:29 PM
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Guys, I hate to disappoint but...
I think my sister has the stomach flu, think I also got it because of the close proximity of our rooms and such. I haven't thrown up or anything yet but I feel a need to burp all the time and am not hungry, some instances I had intense cold in my stomach which shot up and almost made me vomite.
So...I will nurse a few glasses of ginger ale, not post tonight to get myself feeling better and see how I feel tomorrow morning when I wake.
Sorry again guys...
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
1:54:04 PM
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Hope you and your sister feel better soon. Zesh looks like its just you and me.
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Zeshaun
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
3:14:26 PM
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more posts for me the better, shouldn't be having too much home work since exams are coming up, so i should have ample time to pst
lucky, hope yo uget better soon
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
3:18:54 PM
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Glad to hear it Zesh. Drop me a PM when your post is up and I'll get a follow up post done either tonight or tomorrow.
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Zeshaun
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
5:51:30 PM
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just to clarify there isn't really any specific place we dissapeared to right?
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
6:15:31 PM
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Correct, I'll leave it up to you as to where we went.
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Zeshaun
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
6:22:02 PM
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alright, thanks about half done
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Zeshaun
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
6:39:22 PM
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so, my post is kind of short but it gets us to the bridge, and so i was thinking that we could encounter heavy resistance for two posts then chase and kill the captain in the third?
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
8:42:46 PM
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I have put up a post. That makes 6 now for this objective which leaves 4 left. Ruron has fled the bridge and we are encountering heavy resistance so I'm sure we can flesh out 4 more posts in order to kill this guy.
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Zeshaun
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 1, 2009
9:10:45 PM
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really good post alan, not sure what made it so good but i really enjoyed reading it
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 2, 2009
12:26:22 AM
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Thanks Zesh, glad you enjoyed reading it.
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 2, 2009
8:27:19 PM
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PLATOON COMP UPDATEHere are the latest scores: Jester - 163 (Objective 3 completed) Paladin - 130 (8 Posts on Objective 3 (2 posts still to do before completion)) Blackjack - 94 (2 Posts on Objective 3) Spoke to Angel with regards to the competition deadline. Please note that the competition thread will be locked on: 12:00 AM PST Monday the 8th
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 2, 2009
9:00:31 PM
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Alrighty then, let's keep on postin'! Seeing as there are only 2 posts remainin for Objective 3, Alan, zesh, it's all yours. let's try to have it finished as soon as possible so we can move on to Objective 4.
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 2, 2009
9:05:22 PM
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i got another post up tonight, so one left
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
1:40:02 PM
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I have put up the final post for objective 3 and Ruron is now dead. I have messaged Angel to advise that we are ready for objective 4. Again, please wait for Angel's opening post. I will let you all know what the objective will be as soon as he contacts me.
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
3:29:59 PM
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Post is up....and it's a curveball!
Read the briefing carefully. It has an important message.
I'm purposefully shoving you outside your comfort zone of writing from your our character's perspective. This section will be easy to rack up high scores if you develop the NPC characters during the mission.
As they are NPCs you can kill them off if you want. This squad is nowhere near as skilled as your Paladin character. Ensure you finish the objective, but injury and death are likely for some.
They are armed with
E-11/H Heavy Blaster Rifle
DH-17 Light Blaster Pistol
And wear your standard white Stormie armor.
Enjoy!
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
4:43:40 PM
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quick question
will lucky be portraying Sergeant Barandos? or are we all just randomn soldiers within the squad?
and i assume we must make up names for everyone?
and since you said we can die, once we die can we switch to the role of another member of the squad?
also can you throw up a points update
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
5:04:27 PM
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Zeshaun wrote:quick question will lucky be portraying Sergeant Barandos? or are we all just randomn soldiers within the squad?
Each trooper does not have to assume the role of any one trooper. You can write from an entire squad's perspective, or if you want to go as a single trooper mindset, make sure you develop it. Zeshaun wrote:and i assume we must make up names for everyone?
I would assume the squad was at least familiar with each other. So perhaps first names would be enough. You may want to go deeper than that to rake in some points, though. Zeshaun wrote:and since you said we can die, once we die can we switch to the role of another member of the squad?
Yes. Zeshaun wrote:also can you throw up a points update
I graded yesterday. I'll get to it by the weekend.
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
5:07:29 PM
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
5:24:05 PM
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Working on opening post for objective 4, it will be up soon (I hope!)
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
5:42:47 PM
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Alright, could you PM me when it's posted? I'm tired, sore and ned ashower...I'll post after you.
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
6:06:29 PM
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sorry for the inactivity guys, i'll try and post on the weekend.
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
6:23:55 PM
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PLATOON COMP UPDATEOK, so I have put up my first Alpha Squad post. I have so far introduced the following characters. I have not fleshed out the entire squad as I am sure you will all want to add in your own characters (maybe with better names than mine). Here are the current characters so far (in brief) Sergeant Barandos - Squad Leader Lieutenant Andra Bellium (aka Bender) - large muscular man, likes to bend rules (hence nickname) Private Malik Targus - inexperienced rookie just out of the academy Nice to see you still around Njall. Please keep tabs on how Alpha squad progress and hope to see a post from you over the weekend. Any queries then please feel free to contact either myself or Lucky.
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
6:51:57 PM
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nice post alan. just to throw this out there, when i post i plan to be this one trooper, i may kill him off in some obscure unfortunate way but he will be mine for now.
Corporal Nikolai Miloslov most people call him Niko
i will flesh him out in my post
i believe lucky wanted to post next?
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Luckystar
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
7:25:46 PM
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yes,
I'm working on a post as we speak, is taking longer han expected..This is harder than the previous objectives.
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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June 3, 2009
7:40:24 PM
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