AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 4, 2009
12:31:07 AM
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Well as Lucky said, story is up and ready for posting. I've put up my post so let's get cracking people as I know you have all been eager for the next mission to get underway. First Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] [CCA]   |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 4, 2009
1:48:30 PM
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I wouldn't be doing my job as Platoon Commander if I didn't mention this, but there's something I'd like you to pay attention to for future missions:
You mention going to the planet Nubia to restore order there and "get rid of the bad guys." Nubia is far from Vast Empire space, and the powers that be would not legitimately send a squad there to clean up criminal messes. That's the job and jurisdiction of the controlling government (NR or Remnant most likely).
I'll let you run with this mission, since you've already started it and put time into planning it. However, for missions where you are acting in a capacity other than sabotage, espionage, invasion, or otherwise representing the VE's interests there (stealing technology, etc), you should limit yourselves to VE controlled planets. Platoon Commander - StormPlatoon | Squad Leader - Jester SquadPC-SL/SFC Angel/Jester/Storm/Phoenix/Dragon/Osiris/Tadath/Stormtrooper Corps/Vast Empire [LoR][RoM][GRoM][IH][CDS][CoR][WM][BC][SC][GS][AS-5]{BoA}{CCA}{HWS}---------------------------------------- Darth Phoenix - Dark Lord of the Sith
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 4, 2009
5:23:53 PM
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alright, i got a post up on the story. It's not as long as Alan's or Zeshaun's but its what i could do Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Phoenix Company Dragon Battalion Osiris Regiment Army of the Vast Empire TRP/PVT Njall/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 4, 2009
5:47:01 PM
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Also, don't discourage people from writing over 1000 word posts. Just because you don't like to read them, doesn't mean they're bad  Platoon Commander - StormPlatoon | Squad Leader - Jester SquadPC-SL/SFC Angel/Jester/Storm/Phoenix/Dragon/Osiris/Tadath/Stormtrooper Corps/Vast Empire [LoR][RoM][GRoM][IH][CDS][CoR][WM][BC][SC][GS][AS-5]{BoA}{CCA}{HWS}---------------------------------------- Darth Phoenix - Dark Lord of the Sith
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 4, 2009
6:39:25 PM
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*gasp* lucky how could you discourage such a thing...
lol
i don't think I could write a 1000 post if i tried. I couldn't think of enough things to write about wihtout killing 10 guys but i usually try to keep my posts above 600 words Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH][CCA] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 4, 2009
8:37:53 PM
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You would be surprised how easy it is when you are fully into the story. In the last story when Lucky was taken I got really into it and had two posts over 1,000 but my usual posts are never that long. First Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] [CCA] |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 4, 2009
9:06:27 PM
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wow the closest i've ever gotten to 1000 words is the last post on the new story which was 883 words.
i normally tend to write more when i have very open ended stuff, good at character developement and descriptions about settings and stuff Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH][CCA] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 4, 2009
9:07:54 PM
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i know that you guy's post arnt 1000 words, but it sure seems like it  Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Phoenix Company Dragon Battalion Osiris Regiment Army of the Vast Empire TRP/PVT Njall/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 4, 2009
9:14:35 PM
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You ain't seen nothing yet.
That song was on the radio, by the way. Now it's stuck in my head. I blame god. Jegora Fal
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Kaka
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 5, 2009
6:42:32 AM
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Please note that because of the difference in time zones, my post might come abit earlier OR later.
GMT + 8.
Thanks for understanding people! TRP/PVT Kaka/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE|
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 5, 2009
7:34:45 AM
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As long as you manage to post Kaka it doesn't matter when it is as most of us are on different time zones. I would ask though that you read through other people's posts thoroughly as one thing you put in your post doesn't make any sense. Kaka wrote:Luckystar did not look much of a soldier -although the breakfast she whipped up was scrumptious
The breakfast she whipped up was not whipped up for the squad so you would not have been aware of what she whipped up or been involved in that. First Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] [CCA] |
Luckystar
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 5, 2009
8:27:03 AM
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Alan has a very good point i'm still thinking about my big blunder... |
Kaka
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 5, 2009
8:30:57 AM
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Sorry about that, i just skimmed through your posts. This time, i shall read everything, bit by bit. i should go now, its 10:30pm. Nites fellow squadmates. TRP/PVT Kaka/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE|
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Luckystar
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 5, 2009
10:04:42 AM
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When you wake don't forgte to send us your report.
As for eveyone else...today's Thursday people!!! |
Njall
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 5, 2009
5:21:43 PM
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Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Phoenix Company Dragon Battalion Osiris Regiment Army of the Vast Empire TRP/PVT Njall/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 6, 2009
7:34:00 AM
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I finally sent my report in. Sorry about the delay.  Private Zippy
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Luckystar
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 6, 2009
8:10:09 AM
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It's ok if they're "late" as in sent on Friday as long as it's not sent Friday afternoon it's all good. |
Zippy
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 6, 2009
6:07:30 PM
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Thank you. I'm glad i'm not in trouble. Private Zippy
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 8, 2009
8:43:10 AM
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If you need to know anything about the weapon we are facing within the story, here is a link that tells you more about it. http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/A280_blaster_rifleFirst Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] [CCA] |
Njall
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 8, 2009
9:47:50 PM
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lol i noticed that people tend to make me sarcastic in their post. don't stop, it's funny
anyway i'm sorry that i haven't made a post lately, i'll try and get one up tomorrow. Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Phoenix Company Dragon Battalion Osiris Regiment Army of the Vast Empire TRP/PVT Njall/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE |
AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 9, 2009
2:45:58 AM
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Sarcastic I honestly hadn't noticed. I am going to have to make sure then that when I post, your character always has that sarcastic wit about him if that is what you are wanting. Looking forward to seeing your post and hoping that others join in soon.
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Luckystar
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 9, 2009
7:58:57 AM
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I finally fixed my internet, will post either this morning or tomorrow afternoon at the latest. |
Kaka
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 9, 2009
8:06:18 AM
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Haha, just posted another part in the story, be sure to tell me if theres anything wrong with it! TRP/PVT Kaka/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE|
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 9, 2009
4:06:44 PM
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sorry to say this guys but i got a concussion this weekend and doctor says i shouldn't go on the look at a computer screen for at least 2 weeks when i have another check up.
i'll be back once in a while between then though so maybe i can get a post per week. i'll try my best.
don't die while i'm gone. Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH][CCA] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 9, 2009
4:26:07 PM
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I'm sorry i havn't been around to post on the story guys. . I havn't had much time on my hands lately cause of school and my internet keeps dying on me. I'll try to post in a couple of days when i can get it working again. Private Zippy
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Njall
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 10, 2009
6:52:17 PM
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Guys, just saw the prefects report, congratulations on all the things awarded to the Paladins. Quote:Gold Cross Recipients
Awarded to members who have posted over 250+ storynet posts. It is awarded by the Executive Officer.
1st Lieutenant Riqimo
Sergeant First Class Angel
First Sergeant AlanRJ
Sergeant First Class Aeos
Platoon Sergeant Dante
First Sergeant Sniping101
First Sergeant Luckystar
Silver Cross Recipients
Given to members who have posted over 175 storynet posts. It is awarded by the Executive Officer.
Senior Sergeant Saphira Striker
First Sergeant Kanderin
Platoon Sergeant Rogueboy
Sergeant Major Arnaut
Senior Sergeant RK
Sergeant Major Kairo
Platoon Sergeant Giovanni
Sergeant First Class Zafo
Platoon Sergeant Kurioishi
Major Raziel
Sergeant Major Argon Viper
Corporal Zeshaun
Gunnery Sergeant Garet Daimun
Bronze Cross Recipients
Presented to stormtroopers who have posted over 75 storynet posts. It is awarded by the Executive Officer.
Sergeant Major Ramon Stonefish
Cyanus (DJO-Only now)
Senior Sergeant TK-112
Sergeant First Class Sam
Senior Sergeant Leon
Lance Corporal Nick
Gunnery Sergeant Garryl Gates
Gunnery Sergeant Orobos
Quote:Commendations
Private Njall: Recruiting Commendation {RCRT}
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 10, 2009
7:00:11 PM
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Yes, congratulations to everyone. First Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] [CCA] [SC] [GC] |
Luckystar
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February 10, 2009
7:01:34 PM
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thing is i got my Gold Cross a few months ago, we were all tehre at the meeting Njall :P |
Njall
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 10, 2009
7:03:49 PM
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Rizzit didn't say that i got my commendation though, nor did he announce Zesh and Nick getting crosses (not that they were there, but still) Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Phoenix Company Dragon Battalion Osiris Regiment Army of the Vast Empire TRP/PVT Njall/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE {RCRT} |
AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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February 10, 2009
7:07:43 PM
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Well Rizz did say that he was only going to announce at the meeting those that were in attendance and the full list would be posted in Cos's Prefect Report. First Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] [CCA] [SC] [GC] |
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