Leon463
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 13, 2009
6:41:12 PM
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Sorry I couldn't get my post in but lately ive been trying to fix the internet at school so i could post more often but...YEAH TRP/PVT Leon463/Paladin/Storm/1Com/1Bat/Bespin/VEA
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 13, 2009
6:51:03 PM
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aherm, um njall incase you didn't see Alan said not to leave the bar for now so we're just going to ignore your post for now, just fix it up. Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light  |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 13, 2009
7:24:09 PM
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we didnt leave the bar, at most were on the road out side of it. Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 13, 2009
7:27:00 PM
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Outside is outside the bar, in my books that is leaving it.
Please follow orders to the letter in future. First Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1]  |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 13, 2009
7:41:12 PM
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yes sir
ill edit the post Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon
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Njall
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 13, 2009
7:53:51 PM
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Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon
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Luckystar
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 13, 2009
9:31:42 PM
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Alright you guys, post is up!
BUT you can only read it. No posting! Alan would like to add something to it first so posts will unfortunately have to wait for the morning. |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 14, 2009
7:53:40 AM
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Apologies to any of you heavy posters who wanted to add a post in after Lucky's. I have put up my post and the story is ready for your input, sorry for the length but I quite got into the storyline and wanted to make it as exciting as possible. First Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 14, 2009
9:17:27 AM
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Hope you guys like the way this story's going. don't be rescuing me too quickly unless you don't want my side of the kidnapping until my rescue and you guys would have to find the base on your own :P And yes i have a plan for my next post thanks to Alan's but I'll be nice and let you guys post. |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 14, 2009
9:23:31 AM
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ok ill try to think of somthing Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon
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Zeshaun
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 14, 2009
7:14:22 PM
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Just throwing this out there but I think this story would be better if we DO NOT conduct whole skirmishes in one post. It's okay to start a skirmish but let some other people write about how they killed who they were trying to kill, and don't make battle ridiculously large. And don't accomplish objectives too quickly!
yup that's the end of my rant  Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 14, 2009
8:14:57 PM
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Zeshaun i will keep that in mind but please drop the topic of my post, enough people have told me how to "improve" it
dont mean to insult anyone i just get a bit annoyed when my first couple posts are critisised   Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon
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AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 14, 2009
8:19:54 PM
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Njall, Zeshaun's post was for the squad as a whole and not singled out to you personally. A lot of our squad missions don't last long because objectives are met too quickly. First Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 14, 2009
8:20:55 PM
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oh no, It's not about your post. I was actually thinking back to the HSC that just ended. A lot of our posts completed whole objectives in one post and that just can't happen, it makes the story pretty crappy.
your post wasn't bad though, if you think it was bad your mistaken. It was decent, for someone new it was good just the problem was that you had us leave but no big deal, everyone misinterprets things at least once Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 14, 2009
8:45:33 PM
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whoops, man i feel stupid
sorry there zesh what i said was a bit harsh Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 14, 2009
8:59:08 PM
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no big deal we're all friends here Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 15, 2009
9:22:58 AM
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I'm glad to see misunderstandings are being resolved here. yes indeed we are all friends here.
And guys, guess what day it is...REPORTS!!!! |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 15, 2009
3:38:24 PM
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yay....
i think
not sure if reports are a reason to celebrate Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 15, 2009
4:58:27 PM
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don't forget to send them to both Alan and myself. the latest they will be accepted is tomorrow morning. |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 16, 2009
7:08:02 PM
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Private Zippy has been added. |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 16, 2009
7:30:15 PM
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Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Phoenix Company Dragon Battalion Osiris Regiment Army of the Vast Empire TRP/PVT Njall/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 16, 2009
8:06:48 PM
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Thanks. I'm verry glas to be in a squad at last. What is the first thing I should post on? Private Zippy9912
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 16, 2009
8:58:18 PM
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woo finally out of the academy and ready to roll! that's a good attitude to have.
well you can always post on the squad story but you may want to read up a bit before posting. Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 16, 2009
9:11:37 PM
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Lucky will be sending you a pm shortly but Zeshaun's suggestion is a good one. Be sure to hop on the Paladin IRC channel every once and awhile and reports are to be sent to Luckystar and AlanRJ every Thursday Private Roberticus "Njall" Archaeon Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Phoenix Company Dragon Battalion Osiris Regiment Army of the Vast Empire TRP/PVT Njall/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/Tadath/VEA/VE |
AlanRJ
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 16, 2009
10:09:33 PM
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Welcome to the squad Zippy, nice to see you out of the Academy and thank you for your report. First Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 17, 2009
7:35:00 AM
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A welcome a little late from me Zippy.
I have replied to your report, and please do read up on the story. You'll notice that we can be quite uick at those but this time we tried and possibly succeeded to slow things down a bit and make it last longer.
You'll be hearing from me in a couple days depending on how busy RL is here since it's twice as complicated figuring out a way to school. The latest you should hear a word from me is Tuesday at lunch, the earliest...Tomorrow or Monday...
Sorry for not being around but taht's life and you'll see more of me as the week progresses. |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 17, 2009
10:22:56 AM
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Thanks for the welcome everyone. I have posted on the story. I know it isn't the greatest, but i'll keep trying to make it better. Private Zippy9912
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 18, 2009
3:32:36 PM
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can someone clear up the whole slave trader thing for me? i'm kinda confused about it.
i'll change my post if i have too Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light |
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January 18, 2009
5:07:12 PM
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This is my take on things. Requiem has added to the story that there are slave traders within the Rebel base. My thoughts on the storyline is that the people that abducted Lucky in the first place were part of the slave traders and are on very friendly terms with the rebels.
Thats my thoughts on where we are at at the moment. First Sergeant AlanRJ Paladin Squad Storm Platoon Army of the Vast Empire ASL/1SG AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1RGT/1BAT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] |
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RE: Paladin Squad
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January 18, 2009
6:19:32 PM
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okay sounds good, i don't need to fix my post then Army of the Vast Empire ()VehicleCrewman ()TRP/CPL Zeshaun/1SQD/2PLT/COM/REG/BAT//VEA/VE[LoR][ES1][IH] Someone needs to go to the end of the tunnel and FIX IT! Embrace the Darkness, to Bring about the Light |
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