Thanks to the both of you, I'll read over the bios tomorrow and see if there's anything that needs fixing. And I'll also assign them ranks too. I shall also let you in on the NPC I'm creating. XD

After everything is in order, I was thinking of doing a story to introduce the NPCs to Eclipse. But the twist is, we have to write in the view of our NPCs. For all intents and purposes, your NPC is your second character, so if you don't like him, change it quick.

I figured if any of us get stuck writing as Skarr, Zippy, or Anival, there is always a different character viewpoint to explore. So while you two wait for me, go ahead and start thinking of the fire team's name. Something simplistic, preferably one word.

I'm looking forward to this. Getting to use my Old Republic character on here is very exciting Can't wait for the story

Umbra sounds pretty good. Zippy are you fine with this?

Oh Zip, just noticed something about your bio. Should have caught it earlier, but it's an easy fix. For instance, Aneshi would never find two High Imperial Moffs in a Coruscant cantina. Coruscant is currently under NR control. Perhaps asking the bartender if he knew anyone that could take him off planet real cheap would be more appropriate. And I'm sure Tadath being the military center of the VE would be all over the news. So it's just a matter of getting a flight there.

Anival had a really great idea with his last post. From now on, depending on the story, I want to see an OOC box saying who's point of view. I know it's a bit dumb, because we're going to find out anyway, but meh. It helps.

When you're creating a message above where you type the body of a message is a bunch of buttons labeled BBCode. There is a button that says 'Out of Context'. And put what you want inside there.

No problem. You can test it here if you want. Just edit your post if you make a mistake.

Welcome to HSC 11, Eclipse! Each squad will be posting individually, so please read the various rules and have fun!

Rules!


Graphics Submissions!


Gaming Submissions! Also, we don't currently have very many games, suggestions are welcome.

Modern warfare 2 was good till all the hackers took over. I go +30 every time I play usually

I usually get on between eight and ten PM Eastern Time. And it's a shame you traded in MW3, that's the only one I have.

Do either of you happen to have Halo: Reach? And oi! Zippy, I need your GT.

Awesome, i shall also be picking Battlefield 3 up here soon. Let's dominate this gaming category guys. But I also want story work. Good story work.

Why thank you, Zip. The post will come tomorrow though, as it is getting quite late. And also, be a good sport, dawg. We do actually have competition.

Now, we're going to wring our story telling skills to the max. We'll get some gaming together if we can. Even if it's Zippy and I on MW3 or BF3 with Anival in the party or something. But one of the things we should think about is proving it. We need screens if possible, but sadly console games don't really have screen capture stuff. I can always use my camera, but that picture would suck. XD

And now we move onto graphics, if you can do some that would be great. But for this squad, it is not required. While we miss out on some points, I'm fine with that if you don't quite have the graphical skills. lol

I'm not entirely sure. But we should also think about is what game modes we'll be playing and all that jazz. Should we stick to private matches or seek our fortune on the servers?

Alright, I also want a few things while you both write your posts.

For example, I want the word count to be at least 500 before you post. Take as much time as needed to check over your post. Since we have three people, there's no rush for post. Make full use of your NPC, I want to see the three of them fully integrated. If you find yourself running into a standstill, write from your NPC's viewpoint. They should be sufficiently different from your character to open up different avenues of writing.

I don't know what you mean. Haha. Essentially, we're still being graded as ourselves, we don't get extra points for the NPCs. But our writing using the NPCs will get us points. They are part of the squad now. They're still called Umbra, but they're considered part of Eclipse. Hope that answer helps.