Ok, welcome to the VEN.

First off, this really isn't a "game" it's a writing thing. YOu write about a charachter you create, and guide him through the missions by writing. I'm right, aren't I?
 
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NazgulSquadron

FM/LCRW Atrick25/Nazgul-10/Phoenix Wing/[mSSD Atrus]/1VENF]/VEN/VE (=A=)
~Leading Crewman Atrick25~

Nerds stick together! (Until Football Players storm us, because then we run like the girly men we are!)

Why does Darth Vader want cookies?

Welcome to the Vast Empire. as Atrick said, this isn't really a game, it's just Role Playing.
 
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-(William the Conquerer)-
Elite Squadron Commander
King of PPC
We are still here because we conquered our enemies, and we shall do it once more! and more, and more, and more!
ESC/ESN Willtconq/Kaph 1/Wing I/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [VC:S][SV][BWC][LSM]{VB}
Wm/Wm Willtconq/WM:1/Webmasters/VET/VE

i just realized that says im a female, when i created my account i picked mael, is there anyway to change that, and by the way im working on my character right now

I can't change it for you but I know a few people who can, so I'll get on that.  In the meantime, don't worry about that on your bio- just put that you're male.  Glad to hear you're working on it as well- we need to get that in if you want to join an active squadron.  So- keep it up man.  Rock On.
 
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*Flash Was Here...*

SC/CMD Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

NazgulSquadron

Commander of Nazgul Squadron, Phoenix Wing and Training

well im finished, im sorry about how long it took because my computer contracted a really bad virus and we had to reimage it, oh well

this is my bio and i hope its not too long, and suggestions would be appreciated


ShadowHawk is of average height, about 5'10 to six feet tall.  He has light brown hair and hazel colored eyes.  He has an athletic body and carries himself with an air of confidence but not arrogance or cockiness.  On the surface he appears to be the perfect image, like he stepped right of an imperial recreating poster, but those who know him all agree that looks can be deceiving.  He is know for causing mischief and pulling pranks.  He only has three rules when it comes to pranks, they cannot be damaging to person or property, they cannot take advantage of someone's special weakness, and they must be funny.  He is essentially two different people, in the eyes of his superiors and Imperial officers he is the perfect recruit, who follows orders and seems to be well trained and is a respectable man.  On the other side of things he is a wild party boy with few restrictions.  One thing that baffles his friends is how lucky he is, for starters, he has only ever been caught in the middle of a prank once, and even then he was able to talk himself out of it.  Also he can get almost what ever he wants from people, some of his closest friends say that there is something more that just his strong personality.  He also seems to have a weakness for girls that he finds very attractive, but makes sure that he treats them with respect., overall, most people think he is a decent guy. Not much is known about his past.  It has been found in imperial archives that he was born on Sevarcos, apparently his parents had made a large fortune many years ago and decided to spend the rest of their lives exploring the galaxy.  ShadowHawk's life before joining the empire is shrouded in mystery as he rarely open up, even to his closest friends.  He seems to have a problem trusting people and many believe that at one point in his life he experienced a very traumatizing event.  One other rumor says that he might have worked for the Corellain Engineering Corporation in their research and development branch.

i didn't get that far yet, it was a pic i copied off the internet and then made the backround to and some touchups, what would a crewmans look like?

That rank is equal to Commodore in the standard Imperial Navy, as shown here: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Rank_Insignia_of_the_Galactic_Empire
 
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Revenge is what holds this galaxy together. Without it, the universe would be a boring place.

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Warrant Officer 2nd Class Jack Nebulax, Nazgul Squadron, Imperial Navy, Vast Empire.
FM/WO2 Jack Nebulax/Nazgul 11 (3-3)/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/Defensive Fleet/VEN/VE (=A=) (=*SA*=) [SV] [VC:G] [GWC]
Rep|Int/Rep Jack Nebulax/Rep: 4/Reporters-Interviewers/VE/VET
Jack Nebulax: King of the Reply
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Admiral Jack Nebulax, third-in-command of the Auroran Defense Fleet (ADF) and leader of Nemesis Wing (Wing I)

I don't recall rules indicating whether or not your avatar can contain a higher rank then your own, so I'm pretty sure it doesn't matter. I can be proven wrong of course- don't take my word on the above then :>

Bio:  Good to see you decided to post and get rolling with us, man.  I can tell you that your bio needs to be 'formed' better- meaning it needs its template.  The usual template goes something like-

Name
Callsign
Rank
Age
Gender
Height
Weight
Eye Color
Hair Color
Skin Tone

Physical Description

Emotional Description

History.


If you can fit your bio into that which I've given you above- I think we might be about ready to pass you on. And- I am going to need you to at least provide us with a little look of your character's history for the benefit of understanding why you are the way you are.  I can understand keeping things a mystery for you to reveal, but at least this way you can also prove that you know why you're character is the way he is. Also- people will know better when mentioning things and they may be able to get a better reaction.

When I mention physical and emotional description- that's just as they state. Tell us about your character- how do they walk, talk and think? Then- are they happy, said, angry, jittery? What? That's just a question of what you'd want to include I suppose, but its basically telling people how to describe your character when you post in conjunction with them. Does that make sense?

And one last thing- these are judged on how they look and feel to the reader, so do your best to fix any grammatical or spelling areas or to clean up parts you think someone might trip over a litte.  And don't worry about lenght here- include as much as you can.

So- get those done and through and we can probably move you on to the next series. Any questions, comments or concerns can be forwarded to me or Jaden as always- good to see you workin; keep rockin.

 
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*Flash Was Here...*

SC/CMD Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

NazgulSquadron

Commander of Nazgul Squadron, Phoenix Wing and Training