head color: brown
eye color: black
scars: blaster burn
tats: isd on my chest
HT. :6'2
wt.:250
Blood Color: aqua blue
Pilot Type: high flier

he has vast knowledge of the outer rim and is feared by all he has a cal mon destoyer that he stole from smugglers,I was born on kathol I was raised by bounty hunters i know the way of the sword and blaster carbine.I'm well known on all of the outer-rim planets I was a notorious bounty hunter i have killed many men,Destroyed every known fighter ship 3 times over i love destroying b-wings and LP I joined the empire to get a career in killing for a person not more than one I'm tired of bounty hunting and want to make some friends not enemies.
I can fly any ship known to the galaxy. i always say hi to my friends and threaten my enemies.my personality changes from day to day one day i might be hapy the next day sad or angry
i fell no pain i have no regrets or sarrow i am angry almost all the time

Howdy- I'm the commander of Training and thus- you're trainer.  As of right now you are a part of our academy family, better known as Venom Squadron.  There is a thread on the Main ComNet for communication between Academy members you may use if you so choose.  Anywho, you are currently in Flight School, a latter part of Basic Training- from here we will prepare you for a squadron.  The process takes a little under a week if you stay consistant, but you need to be trying or it could take longer.

Right off we're going to create your character- follow the link below to be taken to Flight School.  From there read Chapter 1: Character Creation and then post your bio on this thread.  I see you already have somewhat of an idea, but we really need to fine tune this thing.  Read through and try again man- I'll critque it then.  Perhaps look at some other bios around here.  Rock on.

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Flight_School_%28FS%29

 
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*Flash Was Here...*

CMDR/LtC Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

NazgulSquadron

Commander of Nazgul Squadron, Phoenix Wing and Training

I think perhaps he should do the exact opposite of what you do, such as writing with capital letter and make use of punctuation
 
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- Raider Squad -

TRP/PFC Trix/3SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/Tadath/VEA/VE
'Life is like mail. You sometimes just don't get it'

Oh, another thing, if you're Mon Calamari, how can you have hair? Might need to read up on them...
 
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NazgulSquadron

FM/LCRW Atrick25/Nazgul-10/Phoenix Wing/[mSSD Atrus]/1VENF]/VEN/VE (=A=)
~Leading Crewman Atrick25~

Nerds stick together! (Until Football Players storm us, because then we run like the girly men we are!)

Why does Darth Vader want cookies?

In his profile, it says his species is Mon Calamari.
 
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NazgulSquadron

FM/LCRW Atrick25/Nazgul-10/Phoenix Wing/[mSSD Atrus]/1VENF]/VEN/VE (=A=)
~Leading Crewman Atrick25~

Nerds stick together! (Until Football Players storm us, because then we run like the girly men we are!)

Why does Darth Vader want cookies?

I'd like to help you hear Rendar, but you haven't included what we originally needed, so it's ganna be tough to be specific with you.  You need to include a basic history, a physical and mental description as well as some basic traits.  I mean, you haven't given me much to work with yet.  Go on ahead and click on some of the bios around here to get an idea of the layout, then try to adjust to that or create something that works with you.  Without information, I can't do much for you, so if we can get these little things out of the way- I'll help you mold it into a character you can write about and enjoy.  Any questions on that?
 
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*Flash Was Here...*

CMDR/LtC Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM]

NazgulSquadron

Commander of Nazgul Squadron, Phoenix Wing and Training