Sounds good; just make a new post Gemeni and I'll get to you. Make sure you notify your commander of your decision though; I'll have you returned to the same squadron unless we find it incorrect and unresourceful to do so.
Might as well take this opporutnity to go through some basics so you know what to expect out of all of this. Number one- you can not be considered a part of the class rank system because you have already been through training and have experience under your belt. You can not receive any additional promotions because of doing training courses, however- the guts to come back and admit you aren't quite confident in your VE career is admirable and coming back to full activity afterword might be more than enough to get you that promotion you've been waiting for. After all, the idea behind training is to make you a better writer and participant of the VEN. If you have any questions, comments or concerns about that- lemme know.
So, you've been through training once, but this is a little different. A two step procedure won't let you through
I realize you already have a bio written up, so we'll go from that
Full Name: Unknown; goes by Toki or Tokijin
Rank: Senior Crewman
Age: 19
Height: 5'10
Weight: 130 pounds
Skin Color: Pale
Hair Color: Light brown with bangs and the tips of her hair blue.
Eye Color: Green
Home Planet: Farhen Rina
Speaks and Understands: Basic, Farhian.
Family: Mother, no father and no other realitives
Other: Can understand many other languages, but can't speak them.
History: Tokijin was from the planet called Farhen Rina. It was once her home, but after she turned 19, change was becoming vital. Farhen Rina is a water planet, almost every piece of land is covered by water. But those few hundreds who live there have perfected their way of making life on the planet. Farhen Rina houses many rare species of fish and plants that can only be found on Farhen Rina. The people have learned how to make money from these without making the natural life extinct. Twice every year, a cargo ship will leave Farhen Rina and go to many different planets and sell and trade their goods.
Tokijin lived a strict life, unable to live as she wished. Her mother was a single, tall and scary looking woman who would not tolerate failure or disobedince. Tokijin would often wander from home to escape the cruel life she had been given when she wasn't locked up in her room. Tokijin would often go hungry from her mother sending her room, forcing her to skip meals.
She also was rebellious; when compared to other people on her planet. When the cargo ships would leave Farhen twice a year, she was usually going with illegally, hidden in with the cargo. She then would wander around the market places that the ship traveled to, trading and buying things she couldn't get at home, like books. Since she was very young she would sneak on to the ships, but only twice had she been caught doing it.
It was on her 19th birthday and the day before the cargo ship had gotten back and Tokijin had found a new book. She had been sentenced to her room, not minding since she had a new book she could read. But without warning her door whirled open, her mother standing in the doorway. Before she could hide her book, and her mother stomped in and ripped the book from her hands. She only had to glance at it to know where it came from; her house contained no other books. Her mother began searching around her room, tearing open drawers and doors, looking for where she concealed the other books, ignoring the cries of terror from her daughter. But instead of finding more books, she found receipts. When Toki went back to the market places, she would trade the books for a different one after she finished it and each of the receipts had been labeled with the date and year. She took the vital pieces of information and her book and left Tokijin's room, slamming the door as she left.
Tokijin layed on her bed, staring out her window. She needed to get out. She loved her home land but the people she had no care for. She grabbed her small bag and filled it with what little she had; another cargo ship would leave the next day because of an accident that had happened the day before.
The next day Tokijin sat still, waiting on her bed. Her mother would be letting her out soon for breakfast. She heard the click of the lock out side of her door. At the noise, she stood up readying herself. The door slowly pushed open and she dashed out the door, only glancing at her mother as she ran past and out the front door. She didn't stop running until she reached the cargo ship. She bribed one of the men loading the ship and he let her on board. The next thing she new, she was waiting for the ship to land, siting in the passenger part of the ship. Farhen Rina was a distant memory now. When the ship landed, she would find a way to the Vast Empire, and start a new life as Tokijin. Those who searched for her wouldn't find her at the Vast Empire, because the people of Farhen Rina never knew Tokijin, and they never would.
Other: Tokijin is a strong person and prefers hand to hand combat, considering her limbs are so powerful. (While she explored her planet, swimming was required) She is also a sort of perfectionist. She is afraid of failing because of the harsh punishment she had to endure while living under her mother's rules. She doesn't like huge crowds, but is outgoing. She has basicly erased her past, preferring not to remember all the hours spent in her room, isolated.
What has changed since I looked at this bio last- Why is it that Toki's mother is so cruel? What has caused her to be that way? And why is it that she decided to go to the VEN? I mean, she could have done a number of things to 'disappear' that were outside the miliatary and most would avoid that course of action because it would put them in harms way. What makes her so bent on being in the military then? Attention? People take her seriously? No one can mess with her? And after this decision to join the VEN, does she regret her choice? Does she miss her mother despite her cruetly?
Also- that bio looks pretty good; I've obviously ran through it once or twice with you so its going to be that way anyways. However, I'd like you to try and seperate it up a little bit so its easier for people to read through it and get the information they want. By that I mean split it up so you have 'Emotional Description', "physical description,' and then "history'. That's about all I'm going to say about that.
Once you are completed with those changes, go on ahead and proceed to the link below to find 'Chapter II' or "Pilot Procedure.'' There you will learn about basic equipment and strategy. If you have any problems with it, just let me know. Remember to put all of your work in here, or I might not see it.
http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Flight_School_%28FS%29
Thanks, and I hope this works for you- rock on.
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