Evanture Marana
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New Man on the Block
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December 10, 2005
10:27:10 PM
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Greetings, new recruit reporting in. |
Willtconq
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RE: New Man on the Block
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December 10, 2005
10:31:57 PM
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Welcome to the Imperial Navy pilot! -----------------------
-(William the Conquerer)-
King of PPC
We are still here because we conquered our enemies, and we shall do it again!
SC/MCPO Willtconq/Kaph 1/Wing I/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN /VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [VC:B][SV]
Wm/Wm Willtconq/WM:1/Webmasters/VET/VE |
Jack Nebulax
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RE: New Man on the Block
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December 11, 2005
8:44:06 AM
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JSRUSSELL
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RE: New Man on the Block
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December 11, 2005
6:25:53 PM
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Welcome to the VE, get involved. -----------------------
LCRW JSRussell/Kaph-7/Pheonix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE |
Shazam
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RE: New Man on the Block
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December 12, 2005
11:02:55 AM
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Howdy, I'm the Adjudent of training and thus- your trainer. I'm sending you an intro letter through message center about Basic Training (BT) and Flight School (FL).
As for you bio, since you already seem to have a leg-up, its short and to the point. Not so sweet though. Now, I suppose since your parents have no actual 'relation' to Leia or further 'relation' to her, its okay to say that they were actually around her. Now, as for the rest of your bio... As a writing club, we do feel the necessity to have appropriate information. In order for you to be written in with other people, they have to know you. Do we really know you? Are you a happy person? Sad? Negetive? Do you tie your laces with the bunny loops or criss-cross fashion? The idea of a bio is to let others in on your character so they can write you in with a sense of understanding. Also, that understanding its congruent with that of other people's understanding. One person won't be saying that your boring while another has you jokin with everyone in the room. The history you've provided is alright, but I would like you to dig deeper still. What about the imperial way made you give yourself up? I somehow doubt it was the shiny stormtrooper armor. Unless your in it for style... Let us know. Post your second rendition of the bio here. Do what my letter says first, then move to this though. Welcome to the VEN. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM] |
Evanture Marana
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RE: New Man on the Block
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December 14, 2005
12:38:24 AM
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Name: Evanture "Evan" Marana
Callsign: Tyreal
Age: 25
Height: 5'11
Weight: 190lbs
Hair Color: Blond
Eye Color: Blue
Place of Birth: Coruscant
Evanture was born a member of the republic. His parents were advisors toLeia Organa Solo, prior to her stepping down.. His parents, using their political power got Evan into the special operations portion of the milatary was sent to spy upon the Imperial methods.
Evan who enjoys order. For years his parents tried unsuccessfully to get him to go into politics after them, but the constant bickering and cheating of politcians did not appeal to him. At home, he was mostly found in the guards lounge speaking about anything and everything with the guards. With those people he felt truly at home, people who earned their pay and jobs. When his parents approached him before his assignment to the Special Ops, he was expecting another failing attempt to turn him to politics. He was shocked when they offered him the position in Ops. Gladly he took it seeing the position as an opprotunity to earn the respect he was given because of his family status. Even there he was dissappointed because they gave him special treatment. When approached with an off world assignment he gladly took it, seeing it as a chance to prove himself.
He was forged into a higher portion of the Imperial Govt. and after a month of relaying information he approached his supirior and confessed of spying. He requested that he be pardoned and placed in the academy for his weeks of seeing the Imperial way, he realized that the Imperials had a good idea. The organized methods of combat and the way that everyone, no matter birth, could acheive high positions as long as they proved themselves appealed to Evan. Now he is beginning his quest in the Imperial Navy.
Through the Navy he knows that his name won't matter to anyone. No one knows the name 'Marana' here in the Imperial life, and those who do, know it only because Evan left an impression on them. It is this fact that keeps Evan in the academy, and he has the hopes of one day becoming a captain.
Personality: Evan has a very warm personality for those who get to know him. At first glance he is a hard person, and will do almost anything to succeed. If people take the chance and try to get to know him though, they learn that he is a very humorous person. He looks at life with a strange sense of irony. While he takes his job very seriously, his off duty is another matter. He lives by the quote, "Don't Take life Too Seriously. You won't get out alive."
(I hope this is good. I think i double talked for some parts and if so i am sorry. Please let me know if i need to make any more revisions.) |
Shazam
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RE: New Man on the Block
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December 15, 2005
5:28:18 PM
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Well, that is actually a lot better, lol. In fact, I think I like your character. Joined for a legitimate reason that can make sense to just about anyone and it'll be easy to relate that to other characters. Now you need to go to the roster and click on the naval roster portion. Once your in you'll see 'edit profile' at the bottom of those options on the left.
Have you completed the VEBAT and done the Aviator's Exam? Once you have done all this, post that you have here and I'll have you in a squadron in no time. The best to you. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM] |
Evanture Marana
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RE: New Man on the Block
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December 15, 2005
5:31:23 PM
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I have completed the VEBAT, just need to run through the Aviators Exam
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Evanture Marana
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RE: New Man on the Block
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December 15, 2005
7:58:07 PM
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Just finished the Aviators Exam. |
Shazam
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RE: New Man on the Block
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December 16, 2005
4:42:10 PM
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Well alright, I suppose this concludes your training. You'll be placed in a squadron and notified as soon as it is done. Should be within the day or night. The best to you. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM] |
Shazam
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RE: New Man on the Block
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December 21, 2005
9:41:52 AM
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Congratulations, you've just been added to Kaph Squadron. Go on ahead and introduce yourself to your new flight members on the Kaph Squadron thread in the Navy Main. Rock on. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
CMDR/ESN Shazam/Nazgul 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=*MA*=) (=*FOCE*=) [LoM] [LSM] [VC:S] [DSM] |
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