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Platoon Comp Story 3 Notes
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December 5, 2005
12:40:49 AM
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I'm just reminding you all that the Platoon Competition 3 Story still needs to be completed. I have already made a post, and Kuroishi has been the only one to respond.
You guys have started other stories, but I'm reminding you that it may be best that you amend your priorities, and end this the competition story.
Yes, the competition is over, but that doesn't mean the story is. -----------------------
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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RE: Platoon Comp Story 3 Notes
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December 6, 2005
5:56:30 PM
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I'll repeat again: the story needs to be finished. I'll talk it over with Rizz, but seeing as this story is the primary activity for the squads involved, I will see to it that "inactivity in posting" will be noted for those not involved.
If you have real life situations (final exams, etc.) that do not allow you to post, let me know here. However, if you give me an excuse and I see you posting on a squad story, I will make a note of your inactivity.
This story is still very much alive. I am waiting for all you people (squad leaders mainly, and members if they have a chance) to convene at the designated location I have set in my post. -----------------------
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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RE: Platoon Comp Story 3 Notes
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December 7, 2005
8:37:30 AM
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hehehe -----------------------
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RE: Platoon Comp Story 3 Notes
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December 7, 2005
10:42:53 AM
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Rizz said we can write from a NPC's point of view, and I though, why not write from the enemie's point of view, how they experiance it,
I have a NPC i created but havent tested out yet, or I can create anther one, but its good practise for writing I think.
Name: Karn Makerre
Sex: male
Age: 27
Occupation: undetermined
Specialty: grappling hooks and hold out pistols
Planet: Phindar
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Phindar is a large planet with a high population, close to the planet of Gala. The capital of Phindar is the dense, yet simplistic city of Laressa. It is the home of the Phindian race, as well as advanced assassin droid technology. The world is a haven for criminal organizations like the Syndicat, which has tight control over the rich planet. At one time, Gala royalty had connections to Phindar and the Syndicat.
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Scars and physical hardships: He lost his left eye, and right arm, it is now replaced with a battle droid arm giving him incredible strength.
Height: tall- 1, 7 m
Weight: 70 KG
Eyes: Brown
Skin colour: brown
Skin shade: dark
Hair colour: Blonde
Hairstyle: Neatly tied back into a pony tail
Facial traits: Bushy eyebrows, square nose, small mouth with several teeth missing, a thin beard rounding his mouth and chin, beard reaches in a small braid to his chest
Ear: sharp and pointy
Clothes: A thick green jacket, grey woolly gloves that to big, thin pants that widens as it reaches down to the ground with white boots.
Personality: Karn is a somewhat introverted human driven by greed with an optimistic outlook on life, his narrow minded perspective sets him back, but with his unusually strong motivation for survival made him an angered man who would do anything reach his goals.
Personality: Karn is a somewhat introverted human driven by greed with an optimistic outlook on life, his narrow minded perspective sets him back, with his unusually strong motivation for survival made him an angered man who would do anything reach his goals.
History: Born on the planet of Phindar Karn grew up in harsh conditions in the shadow of the glorious convention centres and marble buildings. The city slums maddened him as well as it hardened him. His frail mind and unstable emotional balance were tipped with the constant scavenging for food and a living in dustbins which drove him to a point of madness which he gave in. With an unstable mind he murdered his best friend, and took out two social workers as well with a rusty grappling hook he found on a scrap heap. This is where his love for his choice of weapon started. At last restrained in a straight jacket, and getting electrocuted on several occasions, the social workers took the young teenager away to tame his feral like state.
It is unknown how he broke out of his small prison cell, but nearly a decade later he was seen with criminal organizations like the Syndicat. No matter his skills, he was regarded as a lunatic, and cast away after a few months of service. He fled away to the planet of Anaxen where he met up with a female rebel. Their first meeting nearly ended in blood, he was taken to the base with in an unconscious state. It is unknown why he joined the rebels after one of their own took his eye and arm from him.
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RE: Platoon Comp Story 3 Notes
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December 7, 2005
2:24:32 PM
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Do whatever you want, but I want the squads to complete the mission as well. Once everyone posts and the leaders/members (if available) are gathered, they will be given mission objectives. -----------------------
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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RE: Platoon Comp Story 3 Notes
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December 7, 2005
2:31:42 PM
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Ok, ive read whats going on in the stry, but it doesn't make sense,
Whats the current status of the enemy?
Who are they EXACTLY?
And what are they doing or planning?
Ill work from those answers on then, -----------------------
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RE: Platoon Comp Story 3 Notes
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December 7, 2005
5:10:14 PM
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what, you dont know about the vilcorpcorp? -----------------------
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"Computer games don't affect kids; I mean if Pac-Man affected us as kids, we'd all be running around in darkened rooms, munching magic pills and listening to repetitive electronic music." Kristian Wilson, Nintendo, Inc, 1989.
"God does not play dice with the universe" - Albert Einstein
"Who are you to tell God what to do with his dice?" - Bohr
"God does not play dice with the universe. He plays an ineffable game of His own devising, which might be compared, from the perspective of any of the other players [i.e. everybody], to being involved in an obscure and complex variant of poker in a pitch-dark room, with blank cards, for infinite stakes, with a Dealer who won't tell you the rules, and who smiles all the time." - Terry Pratchett
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RE: Platoon Comp Story 3 Notes
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December 7, 2005
6:46:41 PM
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Mm..I have no idea what's going on -----------------------
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RE: Platoon Comp Story 3 Notes
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December 7, 2005
7:14:53 PM
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Basic rundown:
An Imperial faction titled the VilCorp Corporation has threatened to completely destroy The Vast Empire. They are an Imperial faction much like ourselves - they have Armies of Stormies, walkers, etc. They have occupied the primary city of Devaron, Nep'tara, and several other outlining cities.
I have been placed in charge of leading three squads, Jester/Wraith/Nightstalkers, into destroying our opponent. However, the story slowed down and we obviously never finished. I have called upon the assistance of Rizzit, so Iron Horse and Dark Dragoons have joined us as well, and they have landed on the planet and entered the city. I, myself, have entered the city and found a reasonably quiet place to convene a meeting and inform the squads of what is going on and their current objectives. All the squads, excluding Wraith, are in the outlining city with me. Only Wraith has made their way to the capital city of Nep'tara and have conducted intel. Wraith has remained in Nep'tara as Kuroishi came back to convene for the meeting.
Now, all squads need to report in to convene to the meeting before I can announce my objectives in-character. However, these are the things I will be stating in the post once everyone replies and convenes:
The squads of the VE are anxious to put on their armor and fight against VilCorp; however, the Devaronians heavily outweight VilCorp in numbers, and will attack anyone in Imperial armor. My plan is to remain "hidden" by not slipping into our armor and making all-out attacks. Instead, we get to the key individuals in charge of the Devaronians (military officials mostly since there is a war errupting on the surface of their planet). If we are successful in rallying a good amount of Devaronians to fight against VilCorp, which they would willing do, we could defeat our opponent quicker and not have to deal with two fronts (Devaronians/VilCorp) if we had our armor on. -----------------------
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RE: Platoon Comp Story 3 Notes
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December 7, 2005
7:48:56 PM
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Kuroishi isn't going to convene with you, the capital is on lockdown after we stole a high ranking official and blew a bunch of buildings up. also we have a few targets in the capital that Kuroishi has sent us to deal with. -----------------------
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