Templar is the son of a slightly legandary pilot,who died in the battle of endor defending the death star. Templar as a young kid was a speeder pilot and a pod-racer on the outer rim planet Mycogen. realising that he was already a gifted flyer and that his reflexes were sharp(nothing to do with being strong in the force,he was an average person),he decided to join the empirial navy and avenge his father.Templar applied and was accepted into the navy as soon as he was old enough to apply.

Brown eyes
long brown hair(his fathers hair was blonde,but his mother,who was accidently killed by a certain mandalorian bounty hunter in a mob hit,had brown hair)
6'2
205 pounds
no facial hair,but a scar running down his neck from a speeder accident.

Hobbies are:battle simulations,racing,and martial arts.

has a reasonable temper,although he is known with in his home town for being slightly touchy.

Also has a good sense of humor

hm..in movie he SAIS he's the only human that can do it,but im not exactly sure... ah well

er... do i have to be in a known planet? or can i sort of make up one??? thers alot of secret planets in books,anyway, im from the planet mycogen,which i put in my bio.

It looks pretty good....two things though.  Go back through and fix your grammar, and especially your spelling.  I can understand a few mistakes and typos, but you should at least be able to spell Imperial...it's written all over the comnet.

Second thing, I'd recommend you change the pod racing to something else.  Not an order, it's a reccomendation.  Common Star Wars lore says that Anakin is the only human ever to podrace, because he was VERY Force sensitive.  Normal humans can't handle it.  There are plenty of other things that humans are known to race, like swoops, that are still plenty fast and kinda nuts.
 
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Lusthawk 8

The idea of an honorable fight is a joke. What is honorable about harming another human? To win a fight, you have to forget about honor, forget yourself, and lose yourself in a cold burning fire. You have to strike until your target stops moving, smile as they bleed, and kill what soon will be no more then a red pulp a thousand times in your heart before you commit to violence.

naybe? speled? Trust me it's not a good thing to appologize to one thing and make another mistake when you're at it. You might also wan to add a space  behind each comma, and another space or two behind every period. There is a link called "Check Spelling & Preview" right at the top of the text window, you might want to use that. We usually don't bother with capitalization and ', just because we use it so much that we go right past them without even noticing.

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King of PPC
We are still here because we conquered our enemies, and we shall do it again!
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Wm/Wm Willtconq/WM:1/Webmasters/VET/VE

Form and presentation are number one, of course...  However, Nazgul Squadron prides itself on backdrop and background story, so if you can make your bio as detailed as possible, that'll gain you some extra points. 

Note to anyone who sees this btw, you should post this kind of thing in the Academy, keeps the main a little less muddy.  Good bio though, and the best to you.  Rock on.
 
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