I was reading some other biographies and was amazed at a lot of the talent around here. I was also amazed at the constructive criticism given to the new members, especially from Angel, Cosmic and Hellra.
So, I wanted to post mine out here so that everyone could see and give me some feedback. To be honest, this is the first biography I have ever written. Actually, it's the first piece of writing of ever done out of school/college.
Appearance
Name: Kamadaki Lennox
Race: Human/Mandalorian
Hair Color: Platinum blonde
Eye Color: Bright Green
Skin tone: Bronze
Height: 6'8
Weight: 285 lbs
Age: 24
Physical Build: Large muscular
Homeworld: Ord Mantell
Language: Basic
Kamadaki usually adorn himself in leather clothing. He liked the bad boy look of black leather and the chains that hung from his clothing. He has two piercing in his left ear, and one in his right that resembles a plus sign that curves both ways at all four sides. He also fashions the same design of a tattoo on his upper right arm. On his left arm is a tattoo of a heart outlined in barbed wire, with a lightning bolt running through the middle at an angle, with one side being a crimson, blood red and the other a pitch black. His hair comes just above his waist, which is usually kept in a tight braid that can be covered up by a hat. His eyes are a bright green and glimmer from the spices he worked with as a child and teenager. He has a neatly trimmed goatee that he is quite fond of. He stands at a very tall height and has a very large body structure because of the Mandalorian blood running through him.
Skills
Great physical stamina and strength due to rigorous profession
Hand to hand combat and martial art skills
Personality
To best describe Kamadaki is difficult, if you would wish to label him differently than a ladies man. He has always been suave, charming and "knightly" as some would say. The shining image of a gentleman. Although he has his dashing heart throb side, he is also a comedian of sorts. He likes to keep the mood relaxed, even at ground zero of war.
His appearance is deceiving when compared to the assumption of others. Most would think he is a muscled brute, but in actuality he is rather cunning, always striving to be one step ahead of the enemy.
History of Kamadaki
Kamadaki's family were an interesting sort. His mother, Hannah BreAnne, was a human born on Coruscant to a wealthy family of politicians. She was average height for a human, with long flowing blonde hair. She was said to be incredibly beautiful. She had dark skin, most likely of her families heritage. She never had a thing to worry about as whatever she wanted could be easily bought. Though she had these luxuries, she preferred a much more simpler life. One of a wife and mother.
On a basic negotiation mission with her father to a back water planet that is unknown as of now, she was checking out the night life of a few cantinas near the embassy. Unknown to her, this was a high crime area, and she unfortunately ran into some very unwanted people. They were a band of thugs, most likely apart of the Black Sun syndicate. As they were harassing her even after the attempts to escape, she felt her life would end that night. As blasters were raised toward her because she would not do as they say, a tall and dark man stepped out from the shadows of an alley. He warned the thugs that they should leave the lady alone or they would not live to see another day. As the thugs laughed hysterically, the man rushed at them with a large vibrosword slicing one thugs throat wide open. As the other thug witnessed this, he jumped back and raised his blaster to fire on the man, but before he could even pull the trigger, he no longer had limbs. As the thug screamed out in pain, the man grinned with delight, he thrust his sword into the head of the thug. Once the battle was over, the lady looked in fear as the man approached her. He told her she did not need to be frightened, as he would not harm her. He put away his sword and extended his hand to help her up. She looked a bit hesitant but took his hand. He began to introduce himself. His name was Santiago Lennox. He was one of the few Mandalorian left, or that were known about. He was a bouncer at a nearby bar, and asked if she would have a drink with him. She agreed and they walked, talking about many stories of each other. After several drinks, she said she should get back to the embassy so that no one would worry. He asked if he would ever see her again. She winked at him and gave an interesting answer of "maybe". He raised an eyebrow and looked at her as she left.
Some time later
Hannah did meet back with Santiago days later, and now they were married. She showed him a peaceful loving side he hadn't been used to, but found very enjoyable. In turn, he gave her a feeling of security. Another year passed, and one night as Santiago was coming home from another day of work, Hannah was waiting for him at the door. No sooner than he walked in, she leaped on top of him, kissing and hugging. He was unsure if he missed some special day, but she was quite happy to see him. He asked why she was so happy. She smiled wide and whispered in his ear. His eyes grew wide and his jaw dropped. A tear ran down his face of the news. She was pregnant and he was soon to be the father of a son.
Seven years later
Kamadaki was the son that was born. He was now nearly seven in age and was already big and strong like his father. He'd taken after his father in physical stature, but shared many characteristics of his mother. He had her long blonde hair and near glowing, green eyes. He was working in a shop owned by a friend of his father. It was a weapons shop that held many sorts of things. Anything from melee to blasters and rifles could be found there. Since Kamadaki was so young, he would clean the shop every morning and night. The shop owner also had an obstacle course which Kamadaki would love to play in. Though it was highly dangerous in some areas, he could handle himself quite well. He had trained since he was four with his father in many martial arts.
Now at the age of eighteen, Kamadaki wanted to work at a casino, which were quite common on his home planet of Ord Mantell. With recommendations from his father, an accomplished bouncer known over most of the planet, he easily got the job after a brutal test consisting of field courses and basic combat training. As Kamadaki worked in the facility, he noticed Imperial personal coming on shore leave from a nearby space station. He watched the men and women, nearly drooling at the uniforms he admired so much. He had dreamed of one day joining the military. He loved the idea of traveling the galaxy and being incredibly sexy in the uniforms he had seen so many times. Though they were officers he saw most of the time, he knew that he would make it up that high one day.
Six years later, Kamadaki entered a recruitment office, and now was fulfilling his greatest dream.
