Shadow_Demon
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Bio:Shadow_Demon
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July 30, 2005
10:10:09 PM
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Name: Xaphan Samael
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Race:Selonian
Call Sign: Shadow_Demon
Planet: Ciutric
Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 70kg
Hair Color: Fire Red.
Eye Color: Fire Red.
Reason: Wanting to bring honor to my fellow Selonians, plus to take revenge on my father and to squash rebel scum.
Personality: Very Mysterous Selonian, keeps to himself most of the time, prepared to blend in with the crowd, very, very quick to anger,when full rage sets in, is a very hard person to slow down, and is a very cold blooded killer.
Short History:
Xaphan came into this world with scars, not physical but serious emotional ones. When Xaphan was brought into this world, his mother was being beaten to death.
Just as Xaphan was brought into this world his father, a very respectable man, came into the alley way, not to save his wife, but he puills out his blaster and shoots her.
So from that day forward Xapahan lived with his father, who would beat him senseless everyday.
At the age of 18, Xaphan ran away. His fathers last word were" I wil hunt you down with the Rebels whole entire army to bring you back," so with that on his mind he ran away from his life as much as he could, and decided to join the legendary Empire, to hopefully one day get back at his father and serve the Empire to his fullest potentional.
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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July 31, 2005
1:26:26 AM
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Ummm demons  -----------------------
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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July 31, 2005
1:52:57 AM
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Jinx, let Cosmic decide if it's good enough or not. I think demons are cool anyways. Cosmic the Almighty will decide  |
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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July 31, 2005
1:05:07 PM
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Umm... yeah... ok, not acceptable there. :P
That's may probably happen in the game Ragnarok Online (yeah, I caught the name of your town), but not in the StarWars universe.
You need to stay within the StarWars realm and not venture out and bring in elements from other genres.
There are no "demons" per say in StarWars. You have alien species, merchants, pirates, smugglers, and the like.
You have creativity, and I like that, but I'm going to make you rewrite the entire bio. Make it StarWars-related, and keep in mind of our timeline. We are currently in the Thrawn Era - you won't find any Jedi/Dark Jedi, and your character cannot be Force sensitive. -----------------------
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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August 2, 2005
4:01:21 PM
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Yeah, I dont exactly think that there are demons in Star Wars (There are Demon-Named characters, such as demonic, my navy character (who is named that for his pitch black hair and red eyes) but no demons. Also, half demon would be 50% demon, not 90%. Also, the whole Destroy the Empire from within thing wont gain you much points here. Still, good try though. -----------------------
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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August 3, 2005
3:00:45 AM
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ive modified my bio Cosmic, trhanx for the the advice. |
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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August 3, 2005
10:56:22 AM
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Where do you live, Shadow? Outside the U.S.? -----------------------
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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August 4, 2005
2:00:35 AM
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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August 4, 2005
11:18:38 AM
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Ok. Well, I'll accept the story, but I'm going to ask you to revise one last time. This one is a simple correction, so it'll be done in like 2 minutes.
Read over your bio out loud and fix anything that "sounds wrong". If it sounds wrong when saying it out loud, then it probably is. Also, it looks like my cat typed up your bio (smart cat), so I suggest that when reading your bio aloud, you correct the grammar and spelling too.  -----------------------
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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August 5, 2005
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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August 5, 2005
11:02:25 AM
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Good. Well done. -----------------------
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RE: Bio:Shadow_Demon
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August 6, 2005
7:33:43 PM
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quote:
yeah in Australia
Shadow_Demon, good day, mate! -----------------------
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