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Slick
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  Biography of PFC Slick.
February 20, 2005 9:23:02 PM    View the profile of Slick 
This is PFC Slick.  I have very short brown hair, and brownish-green eyes.  I was born on Corellia, and lived there until I was seventeen when I left for Kaut.  I lied about my age and got a job at Kaut Drive Yards, and then a year later I headed for Imperial space to become a stormtrooper like my father before me.  At twenty years old I am in my prime.  As a child I had always heard tales of the glorious Empire from my father, a veteran of the Galactic Civil War.  To continue my fathers legacy I joined the Empire to fight for what once was ours, and will be again.  I'm very calm, and quite slow to anger.  I like to joke around, but take military matters quite seriously.  I have a check shaped scar on my upper lip from a thug with a vibro-blade when I was sixteen.  I can be headstrong, and rush in before thinking things through.  I'm quite good at all things strategy, and have a keen tactical mind.  I work best under pressure, and tend to take charge when others faulter.  I hope to see myself as an officer in the Imperial Army, to lead and fight for the glory of the Empire!
Cosmic
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  RE: Biography of PFC Slick.
February 21, 2005 12:39:06 AM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Very good, Slick.

The sentences were choppy in the sense that there really were no commas, but the way you progressed through your story seemed to make everything flow nicely. I liked your creativity with your past and your knowledge of the Star Wars timeline (bringing in the Galactic Civil War).

Well done.
 
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  RE: Biography of PFC Slick.
February 21, 2005 6:18:59 PM    View the profile of Squall 
Thats a nice bio, now just switch it around so you are not talking in a 1st person view....
 
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