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Raziel
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Sketches

October 13, 2004 2:09:25 AM

I got bored and drew these concept sketches of Raz, bear in mind that i'm no artist, i drew these with a blunt HB pencil and that i SUCK at hands

Anyways, what do you think? I think i made him look a bit too tall and lanky, when he's suppose to be quite diminutive lol

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Hashi Shiyun
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RE: Sketches

October 13, 2004 3:15:41 AM

The last one is pretty decent if you ask me. First two don't really catch my fancy.

For the last one : Hell, I think if you could do a real drawing instead of just a sketch and properly outline it, then add in some dark shading of the robes, it would be freaking awesome.

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RE: Sketches

October 13, 2004 3:26:56 AM

im with hash
last one's good raz, just needs some touching up

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RE: Sketches

October 13, 2004 4:13:47 AM

i still say the second one is Raz in the spread-eagle position

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RE: Sketches

October 13, 2004 10:18:03 AM

Hey, they're way better than anything I could ever do.

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RE: Sketches

October 13, 2004 5:07:43 PM

You might try making some defining features as well... Like make them come out. The toning of the face. Get some real shadowing goin... Could be cool.

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