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  RE: A Rodent's Tale (Edited Version)
January 7, 2004 6:11:46 PM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
Hello ladies and gentlemen. Err, well, ladies anyway.   The following is an edited, added to, and (hopefully) improved edition of my personal story. It will not be released all at once, but rather in segments. Constructive critism would be most appreciated. The style is, admitidly, a little confusing, but I hope you enjoy.

Gaaaahhh! Format problems! Alright, I'll retype it later. Look for it in the next few days.



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"The difference between genius and stupidity is that genius has its limits." -Albert Einstien

"There is a certain kind of peace that can be found only on the other side of war." -Sean Connery as King Arthur


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  RE: A Rodent's Tale (Edited Version)
January 8, 2004 6:32:17 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
Chapter 1

      A cold, evil man. JMac had been exactly what Chipmunk had expected to see when he met the head of the Vast Empire's Naval Academy. Those piercing blue eyes boring into his mind, prying into his soul.
      "Congratulations on passing your Aviator's Exam. You'll be placed in Aegis Squadron, under Lonewolf," JMac said.
      Chippy nervously replied, "Yes, sir! Thank you, sir!" His thoughts drifted back to school on Corellia, where his classmates and he had formed a military club to train themselves. He had had a habit of being overly formal with the officers, even if they were close friends. That camp had also been how he had met a certain girl...
      JMac suddenly asked, "You're Corellian, correct?" Not waiting for a reply, he continued. "Have you ever heard of a woman named Tiana Fafdra?"
      "Of course, sir. Just about every Corellian has seen the news-holos. Some sicko really beat the crap out of her; mangled the body pretty bad. Then he stole some piece of jewelry. Weird thing is, he left a whole bunch of valuables. CorSec is still looking for him." Chippy paused. "May I ask why?"
      JMac grunted. "Still looking? Good. No, you may not ask."
      An odd feeling came over Chippy, brushing the subject aside.

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      Chippy walked through the halls of the Atrus, the super star destroyer he had been assigned to. He was looking for the Aegis section so that he could report to his commander and settle into his quarters. He found his door - CREWMAN ROBERT "CHIPMUNK MAN" HENDERSON engraved on the plaque next to it. Of course it was set up for someone a little taller. At 5'6" inches, Chip was short by Imperial standards. And he only weighed 140lbs, so he made darn sure to stay out of wrestling matches. But there was a little more to this little guy than met the eye.
      He ran his fingers through his brown hair. He'd probably wind up bald, his legacy from his dad's side of the family. He'd been told that his great-grandfather had actually gone bald at 18! Well, Chip was 20, and thankfully that hadn't happened to him. He got his face from his dad, but thankfully hadn't gotten the same personality.
His dad. Humph. A spineless little weasel, and a lawyer to boot. Chip hadn't even spoken to his dad for two or three years, not since their falling-out, and he intended to keep it that way. No, Chip tried to be as honest of a gentleman as he could. Granted, things didn't always go the way he wanted them to, but you couldn't control everything. Humph. He certainly wished he could've controlled what happened on that shuttle&

*    *    *    *    *    *

      "Rob..."
      Midnight, the full moon shining down on them, the night's cool breeze rustling through the tree leaves.
      "Please don't go..."
      He didn't want to leave, not ever. He squeezed her tight the smell of her perfume filling his senses.
      "I have to go, after what they did..."
      "Please?  Stay with me?"

*    *    *    *    *    *

      A kick jolted Chippy awake. Lonewolf, his CO, was standing over him with an amused look on his face. Chip wondered where he was, the sweet smell of her hair still sharp in his mind. Cold steel. The floor? Why was he there?
      "Yes, sir. Sorry sir." Chippy snapped to attention. Lonewolf returned the salute, the amusement still sparkling in his eyes. "Crewman Robert 'Chipmunk Man' Henderson, reporting for duty, sir."
      "I only need the callsign, son," Lonewolf replied. "Welcome to Aegis. I'm a little short on pilots right now, so if you can pass a simulator test, I'll put you straight into active duty. I know it's unorthodox, but we just received an assignment and I'm gonna need all the pilots I can get."
      "Yes, sir. When would you like me to take the test?"
      "Oh, whenever, but preferably before we deploy. Make sure you see Sk8guy, if you pass, he's your flight leader. I'll leave the testing and judging up to him for now," Lonewolf said casually. 
      An odd thought came to Chippy, something about his meeting with JMac had really unnerved him, but he just couldn't think of what it was. "Sir, do you know JMac, the head of the naval academy? There was something about my meeting with him that struck me as really creepy..."
      Lonewolf got a you-don't-want-to-know kind of look. "Son, don't ask. JMac has a thing about Corellians. And that's all you need to know."

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"The difference between genius and stupidity is that genius has its limits." -Albert Einstien

"There is a certain kind of peace that can be found only on the other side of war." -Sean Connery as King Arthur


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  RE: A Rodent's Tale (Edited Version)
January 10, 2004 3:35:47 PM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
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      Chippy had passed the simulator test and was now flying his first combat mission.  Aegis had been ordered into the core of the galaxy, behind enemy lines, to make a series of guerilla assaults on New Republic supply convoys. The first part of the mission called for the squadron, disguised as pirates, to ambush a couple of freighters and an old carrack serving as the command ship. And now Chippy felt like he was about to die.
      The lasers zipped past him as he tried to keep up with his flight leader, Sk8guy.  They throttled up to full power and made several passes against the carrack, launching torpedoes and firing laser cannons. Chippy watched with terror as Sk8 nearly flew into the huge ship, then skimmed along only 3 meters from its hull. What was he doing?! Surely the carrack would swerve, or roll, or a turret gunner ahead of Sk8 would see him as an easy target!
      The cockpit of Chippy's Star Viper exploded into noise as two shots slammed into his shields, bells and whistles screamed their warnings as he yanked on the controls and nearly rammed an X-wing.
      When he regained control again and looked for Sk8, Chip saw that he had pulled up and begun to circle around.
      "Ready for another run, Chipmunk?" 
      "Af-af-irmative, sir," came the shaky reply. They came around to starboard, trying to dislocate the bridge from the rest of the ship. Sk8 was on target, but Chip just couldn't hold his fire steady, and his lasers were hitting randomly along the hull. Some of the bolts contacted with a turbolaser, and Chip thought that the explosion was one of the greatest things he'd ever seen; one less turret gave him a better chance of surviving this mess.
      The carrack didn't have much life left. Explosions were destroying the hull. It shook, shuddered, and began wrenching apart. The vacuum of space was tearing out the insides, and Chip had to swerve to avoid hitting a body. Aegis was winning. There were still some fighters left, as well as escape pods and freighters. Lt. Rogue and the wookie, Rustichituk, had captured two freighters chock-full of missiles, rations, and other military supplies.
      Lonewolf came onto the comm. "Regroup! All ships head back to the fleet."
      What? There were still enemy fighters left, plus the freighters they had captured. Why leave now? "Sk8, how come we're not wiping them out?"
      "Because we're pirates. Pirates make a quick hit, then get out while the getting's good."
      They retreated into hyperspace. Good Lord, all Chip wanted to do was use the refresher booth. He waited his turn, got washed up, and dragged himself to the lounge. Feeling as if he might collapse at any moment, he sat at the bar and ordered a can of SunDrop. He was amazed at the battle: after the second run he had stopped thinking. It was the sort of clichéd feeling of watching a movie of yourself. In fact, all Chippy could remember was nearly being killed, the carrack wrenching apart, and the ever-present fear.  And yet, there had been a sort of thrill, an indescribable rush of adrenaline that came with combat. If not for the fear, he might have found it fun... But he quashed that thought before it got any farther.

*    *    *    *    *    *

      "Hey, Henderson! Grab some more firewood for the women, and then you can take a break."
      "Yes, sir. Thank you, sir."
      "And for pete's sake, just call me Brian. I'm only a sergeant."
      "Yes, si... sure Brian. Thanks."
      "No problem. You check out that gal in the red dress?  Pretty, ain't she?"
      Chippy wiped the sweat off his forehead, even though his handkerchief was already soaked. "To tell you the truth, I was looking at her friend, in the green.  Prettiest girl I've ever seen." He gazed around, marveling at the camp. His friends and he had managed to create a cross between the army and boy scouts, a sort of military club that was half for fun, half for actual training. They were supposed to follow military doctrine, but Chip was the only one who took it seriously. They actually had a lot of members, about two or three dozen. Several of the local girls had even been kind enough to volunteer to cook for the group, and had immediately become the center of attention.
      "Tell ya what, Henderson. You go talk to that purty gal, and I'll find someone else to carry that wood," Brian said.
      "Really? Can I?"
      "Yeah, why not? I'd talk to 'em myself, but I doubt them refined ladies would appreciate my company."

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      "Yes! Hah, blasted you again, Til'c!" The sim, a contest to see who could win a one-on-one dogfight, came to an end. Chippy stepped out, beaming at his new friend, Til'c Jafa. "That's three drinks you owe me, you'd better just be glad that SunDrop isn't very expensive."
      "Yeah, yeah, whatever. You just got lucky is all."
      "For the third time in a row? Maybe you oughta cash in the chips before you get yourself even more in debt."
      "Yeah, fine. Let's go. Le's see if da lounge's too crowded o' not. So, you ever, well, ya know, have a little fun with that gal friend a yours?"
      Enraged, Chip gave him a hard punch on the arm.
      "Ow! What da heck was dat fo'?"
      "Don't ever talk about her like that again, got it?"
      "Yeah, sho, I got it!" Til'c began rubbing his "dead-arm," desperately trying to relieve some of the pain. "Hey, I's gotta get ma money, I see ya there in twenty minutes."
      "Alright. See you later." Chippy walked into his quarters and sat on his bunk. He thought of her again, that beautiful hair blowing in the breeze, those big, pretty eyes.  A song was playing distantly, it was the last that they had danced to...

            "I wished I was smarter,
            I wished I was stronger,
            I wished I loved Jesus
            The way my wife does.
            I wish I could have stood
            Where you would've been proud
            But that won't happen now,
            That won't happen now."

      The words had so much meaning, almost exactly reflecting what was in his heart.

            "There's a whole lot of singing that's never gonna be heard
            Disappearing every day without so much as a word."

      No, no! Leave me, go away! Stop, please God, make it stop!

            "Think I broke the wings off that little song bird
            She's never gonna fly to the top of the world."

      Squeezing his head, Chippy slumped to the floor. Why? Why did I... have to... leave...?

            "I wished I'd a known you,
            Wished I'd a shown you
            All of the things I
            Was on the inside."

      And then it all faded into black.


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"The difference between genius and stupidity is that genius has its limits." -Albert Einstien

"There is a certain kind of peace that can be found only on the other side of war." -Sean Connery as King Arthur


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  RE: A Rodent's Tale (Edited Version)
January 13, 2004 6:47:14 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
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      Chippy awoke to loud, blaring sounds, and someone's foot kicking him repeatedly. As the fog in his head began to clear, it dawned on him that the foot belonged to a hysterical Til'c, and that the sound was the alarm claxon.
      "Chippy, you worthless piece o' crap, git yo' butt up o' we's gonna get blasted! Come on, Chippy! Hurry up or I's gonna leave you!'
      And then Chippy realized what was happening: Aegis squadron was under attack!  The pair bolted to the hangar and began powering up their TIE's. As they pulled out of the hangar with Sk8 leading, they formed up behind him and waited for orders.
      "Chipmunk, Til'c, on my wing. Let's rack up some kills."
      The small flight of Imperials took off after a pair of X-wings that had just launched from a New Republic star destroyer. The pair suddenly split, trying to divide Chippy's flight and get behind them. Chip broke to starboard and followed one. He twisted and turned, rocked and rolled, trying to get a lock on the rebel. Suddenly, the X-wing pulled straight up tried to double back, but flew directly into Chip's sights.
      "You're mine, sucker!"
      Green lasers streaked towards the X-wing, overloading its shields and frying an engine. It tried to swerve, but exposed its cockpit in the process. Two lasers shattered the canopy and blasted the pilot to smithereens.
      "Yaaaaaaahooo!! I got him! Hey Sk8, I got him!"
      "Get back on my wing, now!" came the angry reply.
      "Yes sir! Sorry, sir!" As Chipmunk moved back into formation, Til'c came onto the comlink.
      "Ha, ha! Thought you'd jest head off wherever you's wanted, eh? Now you's got yoself in a whole load a trouble, don't ya?" he laughed.
      "You better watch it, Til'c, or I'll send you wherever I want!" Chippy watched as Sk8 reduced the second X-wing's shields to zero and disabled most of its maneuvering capabilities. The thing was little more than a target now, and Chippy wanted to finish it off before Til'c could. "Bet you twenty credits I can nab that thing before you can."
      "Now you's gettin' cocky. If I's you, I'd let da boss man have it."
      "Ha, you're just chicken. Pacock!" Chippy made a quick dart to the side to get Sk8 out of his sights, then fired a burst of lasers that contacted the X-wing's R-2 unit and power plant. The entire rear erupted, and Sk8 nearly slammed into the wreckage.
      "Holy! Nice going Chippy, but next time don't steal my kills.  I really don't like that," called Sk8, sounding very annoyed.
      "Thanks sir, and sorry. I couldn't help it, I had an open shot, so I took it."
      "It's okay, at least the ship's gone, one less rebel to worry about in the galaxy. I can see your improvement, good job there," Sk8 replied.
      "Well, I have been hitting the simulators a lot lately, I guess they're helping," Chippy said, pressing a button so Til'c could hear the conversation. 
      "I think so too, but right now it's time to take down that VSD.  Switch to missiles and form up on my wing, we're going in.
      "Kiss ass!" Til'c snarled.
      The tiny flight throttled up and pulled a 180-degree reversal, then waited to move into missile range. A million thoughts were running through Chip's mind. A direct attack on a star destroyer?! Was Sk8guy insane?! They'd be vaporized! He thought about refusing the order, but decided he would rather die bravely than be executed. What would Sarah think if he were court-martialed for cowardice? All Chippy really wanted was to make her proud...
      He did his best to put that thought aside. Right now he had to concentrate on not getting fried. As Sk8, Til'c, and he gained missile lock, they fired their payloads and switched to lasers. Chippy noticed that each weapon affected his ship's flight differently: when missiles were fired the TIE Advanced vibrated slightly, compared to the heavy rumbling of a proton torpedo launch. And lasers were like holding onto a jackhammer, the entire cockpit rattling from the recoil.
      They split up in order to attract less attention from the turret gunners. They were among the first fighters to attack the VSD, so most of its fire was concentrated on them.  Chippy zigzagged, trying to knock out some of the turrets without getting plastered in the process. Lasers were everywhere, leaving bright, red streaks in his vision.  It was as if he had stared at a neon light for too long.
      His thoughts raced. What if he died? Would he become a ghost, free to wander and haunt whomever he wished? Or would he be bound to that spot, stuck there forever?  Maybe his spirit would go to some afterlife paradise, or perhaps just cease to exist. And then there was Sarah...
      Sarah?  Are you out there?  I still miss you, Sarah...
      "Don't worry, Chipmunk. If anything happens, I'll let her know," Sk8 said.
      Sk8? Chippy didn't think he had said anything out loud. Had he imagined it?  No, he had heard it too clearly for it to have been imagined. He had been told that Sk8 possessed some sort of power, what was it called? The Force? But Chippy didn't believe in that kind of nonsense.
      Sith spit, he had to concentrate or he'd get plastered! He was pulling away from the star destroyer, setting up for another run with his lasers, when his senses were filled with a red explosion. Alarms screamed at him, his TIE fell out of control, and so Chippy did what seemed the most logical thing: he panicked.
      "Sk8, I've lost flight control!  SKKK888!!!"

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"There is a certain kind of peace that can be found only on the other side of war." -Sean Connery as King Arthur


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  RE: A Rodent's Tale (Edited Version)
January 20, 2004 5:45:38 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
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      She was sobbing again, tears rolling down her cheeks and wetting his shoulder.
      "But what if something happens?! What if you get..."
      "Ssssh. Don't think on that now." He put a finger to her lips to quiet her. "Everything's going to be alright, and I'll get those men, you'll see." She pulled back to arm's length to look into his eyes, still gripping his hands.
      "But what if something happens?" She insisted. "What then?"
      "Hush."
      "But it doesn't matter to me! I don't care what they did! You don't have to do this..."

*    *    *    *    *    *

      Owwww. What in God's name? Where? Oh, the medical frigate. He was in a hospital bed, a medical droid hovering over him. A face. Sk8guy.
      "Morning. Or should I say, goodnight. You've been out for awhile, kid."
      "Huh? How'd I get here?"
      "Transport picked you up. You were unconscious when they brought you in. Your TIE took some nasty hits, too, thing's probably beyond repair."
      Chipmunk shook his head. Everything was befuddled, cloudy. He couldn't see or think straight, and his arms and legs felt tingly. "The battle? We win?"
      "Don't worry about that, kid. Listen, there's a letter here for you. It's from Naval Command. I think I already know what's in it, but I won't spoil it for you. I've got some packing to do, so I'll see you later."
      Naval Command? Packing? What was he talking about? With shaking hands, he opened the envelope.

            "LCRW Chipmunk Man.
      Aegis has hereby been disbanded and decommissioned. You are to report to Viper squadron, 1st flight. May the Force be with you."

      The medical droid rolled over to his bed. "You should be fine now. The anesthetics will wear off completely in a few hours. You are free to go."
      Chip stumbled out, dragged himself to the hangar, and told the deck officer that he needed to get back to the Atrus. A shuttle was arranged; apparently the deck officer was a very nice person. Chippy sat in his seat. This couldn't be happening. Why? There was some talk about the current state of the Navy among the other people on the shuttle. It seemed that Admiral Riel, commander of the Navy, had stepped down from his position. Someone else had taken over, but resigned after only a week. Now Admiral Threeof4 was in charge, and had decided that the squadrons were stretched too thin. Sk8 had been right: Chip had been out for a while.
      One young pilot was wearing a patch that Chip hadn't seen before. "You, kid, what squadron does that stand for?"
      "Polaris. New training squad. Our CO and XO are MegaDeth and LoneWolf. We even get to fly TIE Advanced's, left over from that old squad, Aegis. You ever hear of them? Just got canned. Sucks to be them, huh? Who you with?"
      "Aegis."
      "Oh..." The kid realized that he'd just made a fool of himself, and figured he had better shut up before he dug himself a deeper hole. So. Aegis was being split up to fluff up the other squadrons. The kid was right; it did suck to be an Aegis member.
      "You know where Lt. Sk8guy has been assigned?"
      An older guy spoke. "Kaph squadron. Same flight as me. Seems like a good officer. You know him?"
      "My flight leader."
      The shuttle docked. Everyone filed out, and a heartbroken Chippy headed for the lounge. Good Lord, he hadn't felt this bad since the Academy, when he had gotten the letter from home. The letter& No. Don't think about that. What's done is done.
      The lounge wasn't too crowded, but Chip wanted his privacy. There was a small table in a darkened corner, and it looked just perfect. Plopping down, he ordered a can of SunDrop from the serving droid. Then another. And another. He didn't care about the bill. All he wanted right now was to suck down SunDrop like a thirsty fish. The soda helped. Cool, sugary citrus soda. Sometimes Chip thought that they ought to just make him the official spokesman, what with the way he always talked about the stuff. Hah. That would be the day.
      He thought about shooting that Rebel X-wing Sk8 had been chasing, the runs on the carrack, and the assault on the star destroyer. He hadn't been in Aegis that long, but it was his squadron! It was where he belonged! Tears began forming in the corners of his eyes. This was where Chip had learned to fly. Sk8guy had been the one who had taught him how to kill Rebels. And while Chip still hadn't put all the details together, Sk8 had saved him from being killed, as well.
      More soda. The droid offered some food, too, but Chip wasn't hungry. Just thirsty and very depressed. It was going to be a long, long night.

 
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"The difference between genius and stupidity is that genius has its limits." -Albert Einstien

"There is a certain kind of peace that can be found only on the other side of war." -Sean Connery as King Arthur


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February 3, 2004 8:05:03 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
Chapter 2

      Time was passing by with amazing speed. Chip had been in Viper for a while now. What, nearly a year? Something like that. There hadn't been too much going on, just one major battle with pirates. The pesky pirates had raided so hard, they had even forced the Imperial Center Store to close due to lack of merchandise. Finally, the High Command had decided to really stick it to the pirates. The freighter Morpheus was converted to mobile hangar and given a full outfit of TIE Interceptors, fighter of choice for Viper squadron. Unfortunately, things didn't go as planned.
      Viper was going to fly around in the Morpheus disguised as a normal freighter. Boy, what a surprise the pirates would get when the TIE's appeared, right? Wrong. Two pirate-controlled star destroyers had shown up, along with all the trimmings. Viper bit off way more than it could chew, and had had to be rescued by a makeshift Imperial Center convoy. The supposedly elite Viper was still trying to live down the embarrassment.
      Yes, that had been a mess. Hopefully this next battle would be prettier. A decent portion of the Rebel's fleet was stationed at some obscure planet called Ugron, and the Vast Empire Navy had brought in both offensive and defensive fleets to deal with the problem. The Rebels had a few big capital ships, a handful of smaller cruisers, and three hyperspace interdictor craft. Not to mention the usual contingent of starfighters.
      Oh boy, this could get ugly. If anything big went wrong, those interdictors were going to hold them here. No retreat. In fact, that prospect had so disturbed the boys up in command that Admiral K3R had just ordered the offensive squadrons to take the interdictors out.
      Chip didn't really know the offensive pilots well. Viper and Aegis had both been part of the defensive fleet, so there hadn't been much time to meet them. He had bumped into a pair of Venom pilots in the lounge once. They tried to have drinks together, but it hadn't gone well. Of course Chip hadn't wanted any Corellian Ale; he preferred to stick to his precious SunDrop. That hadn't sat well with the Venom boys; they just wanted to get drunk. Piss drunk. And fast.
      While the Board of Inquiry had cleared him, Chip still felt a little guilty about pulling the trigger. Crude and cruel or not, they had been his comrades, and he had not wanted to shoot them. They just hadn't left him much of a choice. Well, that was why Chip carried a blaster.
      He snapped his head to the left. Dang, another X-wing off his port solar panel. Yanking on the stick, he brought the TIE Interceptor in behind the rebel craft. He liked Interceptors. Quick, maneuverable, great handling, and a nice rate of fire. The only problem with them was that they were easy enough to kill, if you could hit them. No shields, and a light hull. And sometimes those four points sweeping forward out of the solar panels screwed up his view. The points were like knives at the corner of the panels, each tipped with a laser cannon. He liked to leave them on single fire; it meant a higher rate of fire. They almost formed a stream, one firing immediately after another, as the cannon bolts came screaming towards their targets.
      Hmm, this rebel was good. He darted around well, made it hard to target his little butt. Chip flipped around some, made a show of trying to follow the guy. He knew he wasn't going to get him, but somebody else would.
      "Til'c, you ready?"
      "Man, I's been ready. Wha's kept ya so long?"
      "Never mind. Let's kill him in three... two..."
      They never had their chance. A TIE fighter that had taken one too many hits spiraled out of control and whirled straight into the X-wing's nose cone. There was a quick explosion, sending solar panels, S-foils, and other spare parts every which way. Chip pulled up, out of the debris, and paused a moment. There were lasers everywhere. TIE fighters, X-wings, and Y-wings were dog fighting. And there were certainly lots of them. The capitol ships were duking it out, the big turret guns firing what can only be described as massive broadsides. At the moment, the VEN was holding its own. Two Republic interdictors were out, along with a swath of smaller cruisers. Some Corellian corvettes had taken big hits, and the ones that could still move were trying to back off, out of danger. Kaph squadron, armed with sluggish TIE bombers, as trying to see that those damaged craft didn't make it back to safety.
      The bombers were weird little things to behold. Okay, so they weren't all that little, but they were still odd. Chip thought that the things looked like two star fighters strapped together, with one of the cockpits transformed into a missile bay. Slow, bulky, and unmaneuverable, Chippy thanked God that he didn't have to fly one of those deathtraps. But they were essential to any successful battle plan that dealt with enemy capitol ships, and so they were sent out into the fray, death traps or not.
      As he gazed at the scene before him, Chipmunk noticed a glowing near the planet's atmosphere. It almost looked like a ship heading for the planet. And one heck of an ugly ship, too. The comm system began chattering, several people talking at once. Through the confusion, Chip discerned a few key words.
      "Sithspawn, no time. My weapons are shot, engines are down. I'm coming in for a hard splashdown on planet. Send my coordinates to Japheth." Chip cursed. It sounded like Admiral Daishi, the High Command guy piloting some missile boat called the TIE Horror. Which, as one can easily figure out, was not a very good thing to lose.
      Not only was the Horror a very expensive piece of equipment, but Daishi was a member of the Naval High Command, making him a very valuable person. If Daishi were captured alive, well, bad things would happen.
      And so the defensive squadrons were dispatched very quickly indeed. Warmaker, not only Chip's flight and squadron leader but wing commander as well, gave his orders in the usual strained tone. "We've got a problem on our hands. Sensors are showing that Admiral Daishi went down in an area that has been showing a lot of enemy troop movement. We cannot let him be interrogated, he knows too much. We're going to land on site with Kaph, Viper and Polaris are going to give us close air support. The others will have to hold without us for a while. No time for a big plan, so we'll make it up as we go. May the Force be with you."

 
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  RE: A Rodent's Tale (Edited Version)
February 11, 2004 6:06:52 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
      Atmospheric flying. Chippy hated atmospheric flying. He didn't know why he hated it so much. It just didn't sit well with him, gave him the jitters. Lucky for him, some new cruiser had just showed up. No insignia or anything to designate its allegiance, so somebody called for a handful of TIE's to go keep an eye on it. Didn't sound like anyone with authority, probably just some Polaris greenhorn who thought he could boss people around. But it gave Chip an excuse for staying space-side, so he was grateful for it.
      Pulling back out of the planet's atmosphere, he just had enough time to see the cruiser self-destruct. Running full throttle for the Atrus, it had apparently been trying to kamikaze when it saw the motley handful of Imperial craft coming after it. So it detonated early. Everybody began talking at once.
      "Who hit that thing?"
      "We don't know, it just exploded."
      "Damn kamikaze!"
      "Report in guys."
      Chip had a few problems of his own. His TIE was listing badly to the right, and a look through the view port showed why. The starboard solar panel had been turned into mangled Swiss cheese, with pieces of the photovoltaic cells trailing by some raggedy wires. Jeez. If that panel hadn't been there, the shrapnel would have done the same thing to the cockpit. And that would've made a very messy cleanup job for the salvage crews&...
      Diagnostic check on the panel. Anything still work? "Damn, two cannons out!" He wasn't going to be able to stay out here. Chip keyed his comm. "Can anyone gimmee cover 'till I can get back to the hangar? This TIE's not gonna last long..."

*    *    *    *    *    *

      Chip sat at a table in the lounge across from some kid. A Polaris greenhorn, this kid Shazam was actually having fun! Of all the things in the world, he was having fun! Cracked.
      Chip's TIE had limped back to the nearest hangar, with Chip and Shazam pretending to give each other cover. Both had been too badly damaged to actually give any real protection, but two crippled fighters had a better chance of surviving than one.
      He could smell the food cooking, the shish-ka-bobs roasting, porterhouse steaks on the grill, and strong coffee brewing. Hmm, porterhouse steaks. For some reason, a lot of people seemed to think that a T-bone was the best kind of steak that you could get. But Chip had worked in the meat department of the local grocery store before enlisting, and he had learned better. "Certainly smells good, doesn't it?"
      Shazam nodded. "You saw it, didn't you? The cruiser, I mean."
      "Heh heh. Yup, nasty little explosion. Blew holes all through my TIE. That how you got damaged, too?"
      Shaz gave a "sort of" sign with his hand, and started bragging about a dogfight. Cocky, the kid was. They sat in silence a moment, pondering life. Finally, Shazam had had enough. Standing up, he began to gather his things. "Well, I'm gonna go to the bridge and find out when I take off. See if I can fix up a bit in the hangar, as well. Good luck."
      Chip waved. The bridge? The kid thought that they would actually let a lowly pilot, and green to boot, on the bridge of a super star destroyer?! Heh, fat chance. Shaz had a bit to learn. Oh well, you couldn't expect him to know everything just yet. Still, he needed a little sense, or else he wasn't going to last long.
      This sucked. Everyone else was out pulling their weight, and Chip was stuck in the hangar with a busted TIE. He knew it wasn't pretty out there, and many times he had wished to be back in the hangar. But he hated to be grounded while his squad mates were in danger; it made him feel like a guilty coward. He just couldn't take it any longer. Walking to the hangar, he found the deck officer and requested to be allowed to rejoin the battle in a different TIE. Any TIE. As long as the hunk of scrap had some cannons and could move, it would be good enough.
      "Just got this other Interceptor ready, I know you usually fly them, so you should be fine."
      "Thank you, sir." You have no idea how much I appreciate it." He spotted Shazam powering his up his own fighter, and commed him. "Shazam, I need a wingman. You up for the job? The rescue party is gonna need all the fire support they can get. I normally hate atmospheric flying, and with a passion, but today I'll make an exception for it."
      The green pilot still had that glow, the kind of joy held by raw recruits who didn't yet realize just how terrifying war was. "You got it. I'm going back into God knows what... Goody!"
      They pulled out of the hangar at the same time that a pair of Y-wing bombers began to set up for an attack run. Looking like wishbones, the Y-wings were slow and easy targets to hit, but they sported good shields and a heavy hull. Chip figured that the Atrus could hold its own, but the least he could do was to break up their formation. He lined up, leaving his HUD targeting reticule slightly in front of the lead Y-wing. "Shazam, take the second Y-wing. Don't worry about killing it, the Atrus can take care of that. Just force them to break off their attack. We don't have much time to waste here." Silently cursing himself, he didn't add "I still have to get back and prove to the rest of Viper squad that I'm still worth something..."

 
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February 19, 2004 6:03:17 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
      Chip let a burst of cannon fire arc just in front of the lead Rebel, the Y-wing flying directly into the path of two cannon bolts. The energy was dissipated by the Rebel's shields, but it had the desired effect. Both Y-wings broke off their flight path and retreated, causing Shazam to shout for joy.
      "Good job, Shaz. Alright, let's go help out the guys." What Chippy didn't realize was that the pair of Rebels had retreated, circled around, and fallen in behind Shazam and himself. Red bolts came at the two Imperials from the rear, taking them by surprise. Chip's fighter was rocked by an explosion, and warning lights went off all over the cockpit. Damn it, not two TIE's in one day! At this rate, he'd be demoted! "Mayday, mayday, I am so going down!"
      Shazam jerked to port to avoid the explosion surrounding the back of Chip's TIE. Cutting a hard left, he  tried to get behind the pair of Rebels. While he managed to tail one of them, the other began to take pot shots at him, effectively putting the kid between a rock and a hard place. But at least the fire had been drawn away from Chip's flying can of Swiss cheese.
      Chip's Interceptor had gone into a tailspin straight for the planet. Frantically trying to regain control, he ordered the computer to run a full diagnostic and damage report.

      ETA to Atmospheric Reentry: 3 minutes
      Flight Control: 63% functional
      Estimated Repair Time: 2 minutes 15 seconds
      Electrical Systems: 27% functional
      Estimated Repair Time: N/A
      Engines: 85% functional
      Estimated Repair Time: 3 minutes 45 seconds

      Stang it all! Why did Chip have to be the designated target of the day? Even if no other Rebels came after him, there was little chance of getting back to the Atrus. With his engines damaged, the planet's gravity was going to pull him in. Oh, he wasn't going to crash (thank God for the guy who invented the auto repair system), but he was definitely going to have to join the atmospheric fight.
      He could see the Atrus, which had just about finished off the Rebel's flagship. The two monsters had gone head-to-head, like a pair of boxers moving in close. But the super star destroyer simply had more firepower. The Rebels had lost their shields, and now the hull was being blasted to pieces. The explosions reminded Chip of solar flares. The hull would cave in for an instant, then blast outward with a brilliant flash and a plume of flame. Until the armory was hit, which was chock full of proton torpedoes, concussion missiles, and heavy rockets. The old capital ship was ripped apart: it split down the long sides and burst at the seems.
      Alright, systems were coming back online. Flight control was almost completely restored, engine power increasing. Maybe he would be able to survive atmospheric entry after all. He flipped a few toggle switches with no response. Dang it, some of the electrical systems were down. They weren't anything important, but it did piss Chip off, and called into question everything else that he relied upon. "This just isn't my day..." He commed his commander, Warmaker. "Sir, I've managed to get a new TIE, but now this one's near fried as well. I have CRW Shazam, of Polaris, on my wing. Where do you want me, sir?"
      Static. Chip repeated the message, to no avail. He wasn't sure what was wrong, but could see a place where he was probably needed. The rescue party must have met major resistance, because the big, honking space guns aboard the Atrus had decided to blast the living snot out of something on the planet. Well, might as well head that way.
      Chip and Shazam drifted their way down to the planet, and Chip could se that it was mostly forested. Shaz was getting a little close to the trees, and it was starting to worry Chip that his wingman was completely green.
      "Let's not drift too low, we might get caught by fire from the surface. And don't fly so straight, you're going to make yourself a juicy target."
      "I heard that a thousand times at the Academy."
      "Well, apparently it didn't sink in, so you're going to hear it from me, too."
      Shazam didn't realize that he'd left his comm. Switch on, and started humming a song. It would have been fine; that is, if it hadn't been the sort of low-class jazz played on the streets at the bottom of Coruscant.
      "Shazam, shut up. We're searching for the Admiral, not starting a band." There really wasn't much to do, other than fly around and try to find Admiral Daishi's TIE Horror. It actually was a little boring, so boring that Shazam was obviously daydreaming. Chip sighed. The planet's two suns were setting. It really was a pretty sight.
      Dang, now Chip was daydreaming, too. Had to concentrate on the trees. Something up ahead was glinting in the sunlight, but the glare had obscured Chip's vision. It almost looked like a base. And were those...
      Turbolaser turrets, well protected by the base's duracrete walls, shattered the peacefulness. Darting away, Chippy realized that he and Shazam had made the extremely stupid mistake of flying directly over a Rebel barracks.
      "Holy crap! Shazam, pull up! We gotta get oughta here, now!" The battered TIE Interceptor yanked skyward as Chip scrambled to escape. He managed to pull a U-turn back to the tree line, out of site of the Rebel gunners. Shazam, however, had not been so lucky. Flying straight over the base, he caught multiple shots on his solar panels and underside. Thank God Polaris squadron had been given the old TIE Advanced fighters from Aegis squadron, as the small shields were the only thing that saved the young pilot's life.
      "Damn it Shazam, don't fly straight! You're gonna get yourself killed! They don't teach you that stuff at the Academy just to hear themselves talk! Circle around the base wide, out of view, and meet me on our original course. I want to continue that heading, I saw some burned trees up that way. Might be Admiral Daishi. You still have scanners? Mine are acting a little funky; I don't quite trust my electrical systems right now."

 
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  RE: A Rodent's Tale (Edited Version)
February 23, 2004 6:58:13 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
OCC: Woo hoo! I just realized that I can use html in my posts! I'm can make things bold and italic now, just the way I wanted to!
 
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  RE: A Rodent's Tale (Edited Version)
February 26, 2004 6:49:25 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
      "Yeah, yeah. Sure." Shazam seemed rather annoyed by the mention of the Naval Academy, but was sufficiently shaken by his near-death experience to accept the advice. A few blaster bolts zipped around the burned trees Chip had mentioned, so Admiral Daishi was almost definitely nearby.

      "Alright, it would seem that we've found the admiral, so we better contact Warmaker. There's a grassy clearing up ahead that looks okay for a landing zone, let's set down there."

      "It's not gonna be a soft one. Especially with that piece of Swiss cheese you're flying..."

    "Yeah, I know. Can't help it much; Daishi looks like he could use some help." They set down in the clearing, which was little more than a gap in the trees about thirty yards wide. Chip popped the hatch and removed his helmet and life-support gear. Sometimes he envied the Rebels: their fighters came equipped with life support so that they didn't have to bother with bulky flight suits. But that meant that if the ship's systems went down, so did the parts that kept you alive, so it did make some sense to separate the two.

      After noticeably reducing the amount of wires and tubes attached to his flight suit, Chip strapped on his utility belt and blaster, and grabbed his commlink. Shazam walked over, making similar preparations with his own gear. "You know anything about ground fighting?" Chip asked as he started heading for the trees.

      "Ha. Probably more than you. I had seven brothers and sisters, and my sisters were real witches..."

      Chip grinned. "Shaz, I'm not talking about ball-taps, here. Heh heh. You ever even fire that blaster of yours?" And that hit a nerve. Shazam immediately turned defensive, making Chip only grin some more.

      "Of course! I mean, why wouldn't I have? So, uh, yeah! How 'bout you?"

      "You might say I've been in a few fights. The debacle aboard the Morpheus comes to mind..."

      "The what?"

      "Nothing. Nasty little scrap with pirates that we had before you joined up."

      "Ah."

      There wasn't much time left, so they started running through the forest. After a few miles, Chippy realized that he was wheezing badly. Which was shameful, because during basic training he had been able to make the mile run in five and a half minutes. Humph. Must have been spending too much time in the flight simulator and not enough on his gravmill. Oh well.

      "Chip! Get down, someone's coming!" Whoever it was, they didn't seem to care much about the noise they were making. But the thick plants must have been muffling the sounds some, as Chip thought that the source was still ten yards away when Admiral Dasihi tripped over poor Shazam's face.

      "Admiral, sir! LCRW Chipmunk Man and CRW Shazam. Here to rescue you, sir."

      "Holy crap. Who'd I trip over?"

      "That'd be me. Damn, that hurt..." Poor Shaz. Now his face was turning puffy red. The Admiral's combat boots had really put a hurting on the kid.

      "Crewman, are you two the only friendly forces here?" It seemed odd to Daishi that naval pilots were being used for search parties. Wasn't this what the Army was paid for?

      "Yes, sir. We have our TIE's parked in a clearing in that direction, as that was the closest we could get to the crash site. With your permission, sir, I'd like to contact Warmaker and see if we can get a troop transport in here."

      "Good idea."

      Chip silently cursed himself. He wasn't that much older than Shazam, but the kid made him feel like he was middle-aged. Come on, he had to kick it into high gear. They weren't going to have room in their TIE's for Daishi, so they would just have to wait for the rescue team. Come to think of it, they probably shouldn't have left their TIE's unguarded...

      Working their way back to the parked fighters, Chip marveled at the situation. Despite all the awful stress, he had actually met an Admiral! That was pretty cool. If only he could tell Sarah... Ah yes, another interesting train of thought. Unfortunately, if he thought about her too much he'd lose what little concentration he had left. Stop thinking about her? Hah! Was that even possible? Oh well, he needed to concentrate on getting back to his Interceptor alive. Of course, that was provided that the Rebel patrols hadn't found and captured the TIE's. Bah, darn mistake to leave them alone. Oh well, the milk was on the floor. No use worrying himself to death over it. My, how the mind chatters away in situations like this...

      Concentrate! The trio worked their way through several more yards of dense brush, and nearly broke into the clearing with the parked fighters. But only nearly broke through, as they immediately spotted the Rebel patrol waiting for them.

      "Damn," breathed Daishi. "Crewman, those your TIE's?"

      "Yes, sir. Looks like we aren't leaving with ease. How's your head, sir? Looks like a mild concussion?" asked Chippy. He was fairly concerned, because not only did he have to worry about Daishi's health, but everything he did would be under an admiral's scrutiny. Which, of course, made for a very worrisome day.

      "Can't think, can't shoot. You figure something out. Just don't let me sleep..." Daishi plopped down on the ground.

      Chip turned to Shazam. "Listen, you watch the Admiral. Stay low, and don't let him sleep. I don't know why, but that's what you're supposed to do when someone gets a concussion. They shouldn't sleep. I have no idea what to do about this yet. I'm probably going to try to sneak around and take 'em from the other side, lead them away from you two. Don't get in the TIE's yet, they're perfect targets. Just wait for the rescue team."

      Shazam nodded his assent, and Chip snuck off into the brush, wishing that he'd had more ground combat training.

 
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  RE: A Rodent's Tale (Edited Version)
March 1, 2004 6:08:56 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
*    *    *    *    *    *

      "My God, you must have spent a fortune!" The shock in her eyes had terrified him. He had been deathly afraid that something would go wrong, or she wouldn't accept it, or something like that.

      It was about two months since their first date. Oddly enough, they hadn't really talked about where the relationship was going or anything like that. It was fairly clear that both cared for the other, but Chip was still antsy and nervous every time he saw her. He was still frightened out of his mind that he would do something stupid, and that she would never speak to him again. It was probably an unfounded fear, but it was still there. At least he could control it to a reasonable degree. Most of his life Chip had been almost mortally paralyzed by this same fear, but she was the first girl with whom he could control the fear somewhat.

      He had led her to the side, out of the Christmas party's prying eyes, to the little hallway by the balcony steps. The floor of the nearly two hundred year old meeting house creaked under their steps. She had seemed amused that he had wanted a little privacy for them, but certainly hadn't expected what was to come.

      He brought the small package out of his coat pocket. A small box, wrapped in green with a red ribbon. He hadn't picked the colors for any particular reason, other than the fact that green was the only wrapping paper that he had, and red was the least bizarre of his ribbons. At least this way it looked Christmassy.

      Then she had been embarrassed, was sorry that she didn't have a gift for Chip with her, had planned to mail it, still didn't know what the box held. He had had to grab hold of the step railing next to him, his legs were just shaking too badly. He wasn't proposing or anything, it wasn't a ring in that box, but he was just as nervous as if he had been proposing.

      She opened the box. Her mouth dropped, pretty brown-and-green eyes went wide. And Chip almost fell over. It wasn't just his legs now, his whole body was shaking. For God's sake, he had to get a hold of himself! Sit down on the steps? No, better to stay standing. Why so nervous?

      She looked at him, wide-eyed, open-mouthed, couldn't speak. She fingered the gold chain, the heart-shaped pendant, supposed to be 24 karat, with a heart-shaped opal. There were two matching earrings, each with a heart-shaped opal. At the very top of the (were they called stud?) earrings was a diamond. Granted, the two diamonds were so small that you could barely see them, but at least they were there.

      "My God, you must have spent a fortune!"

      Chip shrugged. "Don't worry about it."

      "Where did you get the money?"

      "I have a job." He gave a nervous smile. Did she like it? Hate it? Would she say that she couldn't accept it because she didn't feel that way? He got his answer. She hugged him, suddenly and tightly, then kissed him.  She was already wearing her obsidian necklace and earrings, but took them off to try on Chip's gift. It was fairly fitting, as her last name was "Hart," and the opal was her birthstone.

      She looked beautiful. She always seemed to have a glow, but now it was amazing. Between the sparkling of the jewelry, the blue dress that seemed sort of shiny and iridescent, and her smile, it was like she actually lit up part of the room.

*    *    *    *    *    *

      Three Rebels. Very young, too. So young that they didn't even have enough sense to keep an eye out for the Imperial pilots who would undoubtedly be returning for their TIE's. In fact, two of the kids were even playing pick-up-sticks! Jeez, didn't the New Republic have a restriction on enlistment age?! Well, they wouldn't be around long enough to ask. The third was leaning against Shaz's Advanced, with his back to Chip as he watched the game. Heh, this one would be easy to sneak up on.

      Five yards away. Three yards away. Chip threw his arm over the kid's mouth, a vibroblade leaving a long gash across the kid's throat. A scream muffled to silence by Chip's arm, a twitch, and the Rebel was no more.

      Shaz yelled something, and started firing. Apparently, while Chip had been sneaking up on the one Rebel, another had been sneaking up on Chip. Shaz fixed that, along with the other two who had been playing. One of the kids was only hit in the foot, but the other two were fried right off the bat. Heh. Easy as pie, taking back the TIE's like that. And now they even had a prisoner to interrogate. This was going to be fun.

      Chip leaned over the injured kid. "So, I don't suppose you know where your base is, do you?" Shazam and Daishi were walking over now, but Chip barely even looked up at them. He was preoccupied with his new source of amusement. And if he figured out where the Rebel's secret base was, he could have even more fun. Okay, so they hadn't had any evidence of a secret base yet, nor had anyone even mentioned the possibility, but the Reb's almost always had one for the high level commanders, and that kind of information could get Chip some nice recognition.

      Poor Rebel. The kid was so scared, his pants had become a soaked, smelly mess. He was a little chubby, and his face reminded Chip of his own kid brother, Obelisk. "Ye-ye-yes. We have a big bu-bu-bunker over that way."

      "No, no. We already saw that one. The base. Your secret base, where all the officers hang out. Where is it?" Chip's vibroblade moved towards the kid's pants. "You wanna turn into a girl? I'm no doctor, mind you. But I know the first part of the procedure, and all it takes is a flick of this knife." Of course, Chip had no intention of doing anything of the sort; but the mere threat had exactly the right effect. Shazam, too, blinked several times.

      "Tha-tha-that way! THAT WAY!!" The little guy was frantic now, practically screaming, and waving his arm like a weathervane in a Kansas tornado.

      "Cha... Chip! Look, since he told us, why don't we just tie him to a tree or something with no food or water?" Hmm, Shaz was obviously not a fan of torture. All Chip really wanted was to exact a little revenge for all the friends that he had lost&

      The little Rebel seemed wildly enthusiastic about Shazam's idea, as opposed to Chip's. "YES! YES! Tie me to a tree!"

      "Tell ya what, Shaz. How about we tie him to the bottom of my Interceptor and fly back to the Atrus?"

      "NO! NO! A tree! Tie me to a tree!"

      "Admiral?"

      "Tree."

      "Yes! Thank you! Thank you!" If the kid had been able to move, he would have been kissing Daishi's feet.

      It was half an hour until the rescue transport arrived. A squad of stormtroopers and an arrogant lieutenant in his mid-twenties ran over. "Admiral Daishi?"

      "Yup."
      "Sir, come with me and we'll get a medical tent set up right away. You two pilots have orders to report to the Atrus, but first we need to take out whatever Rebel hostilities there may be in the area."

      "Goody. Can I kill the little wretch tied to the tree now?"

      "NOOOOOOO!!"

      "It seems that you've met some of the enemy already..." the lieutenant said, wrinkling and covering his nose. "No, he'll be taken for questioning."

      "Okay, so when do we get back to the Atrus?" Shazam asked.

      "As soon as we're done here."

      "And when's that?"

      "Whenever we're done... Crewman." The lieutenant scowled, showing his utter disdain for enlisted personnel. Then he spun on his heel and escorted a swaying Daishi to the medical tent.

 
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March 1, 2004 12:41:48 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
    Gotta love that little moment...  :>  I'll be sure to check up on this story from now on.  I couldn't read the last version of it because it was a bit long.  But.  So is this.  Oh well.  Looking good.
 
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  Wow, you guys have a lot of talent writing stories.  Great job Chip.  Your story is amazing.

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Much appreciated. More is coming, too, in increments. Wait till you see the end! Only then is the true secret of Chip's despair revealed!
 
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      "Well Shaz, that could be interpreted in two ways. One involves sitting here twiddling our thumbs until they've patched up the admiral. I kinda like the idea of flying around killing more Rebels, myself." Chippy grinned. He hadn't felt this bloody in a long time. Wait, had he ever felt this bloody? He didn't think so... Oh well. "Saddle up, we're gonna have a little fun with that Rebel base."

      They fired up the TIE's and headed in the direction that the prisoner had indicated. "They probably won't have much in the way of defenses, being a secret base. Help keep them from showing up on scanners. We'll blast what little they do have, then strafe the barracks and troops. Heh. See how many of the sons-a-crack-whores we can fry."

      Again he saw Sarah's face. God, how he missed her. She hadn't approved of him joining the military. But he wouldn't think of that...

      This time Chip flew nap-of-the-planet, hugging the surface and nearly skimming the trees. Dangerous, yes. And any little thing that startled him could send him screaming into the branches. But it would give the Rebels less time to shoot, as by the time that they had realized that he was heading their way, he would have already arrived.

      "Chip, you gonna be okay flying above the canopy like that?"

      "No one would shoot at me. It's a secret base, remember? Shooting would only give them away. Besides, I can see through the tree cover better from down here."

      Again, Chip found himself daydreaming. The two suns had almost completely set, leaving gold streaks of light on the forest canopy. It even made cool shadows among the trees. Wait a minute, the shadows were starting to form a pattern!

      "Chip... I think I found something..."

      "I think I see it, too. What does the pattern form? I can't tell from down here."

      "It's... It's a giant symbol of the New Republic!"

      There was a huge, camouflaged base, complete with hangars, turbolasers, and a barracks for the pilots. Chip had to yank on the control stick, otherwise he was going to run smack into the awakening turrets. It didn't take long for the turbolasers to open fire, the big AA cannons trying to give the Rebel pilots time to get in the air.

      Chip saw a group sprinting for the nearest hangar, and homed in; it was far easier to shoot a pilot in the open than to try and dogfight. He set his targeting reticule just ahead, so that the Rebels would sprint directly through his line of fire. He hit the trigger. While armored flight suits can protect against some flak and shrapnel, along with the occasional indirect blaster shot, there wasn't a snow ball's chance in Hell that the suits were going to protect against Chip's starfighter cannons. Most of the pilots went to their Maker all at once. The rest were so horribly burned and scarred that they would never withstand the rigors of combat flying again. But the turrets forced Chip to pull up, so the next group to run out made it safely to their fighters.

      Whatever person had laid out the base was an idiot. In their zealousness to protect the fighter hangers, turbolaser turrets had been placed directly in front of the hangar doors. It was suicidal to fly Z-95 "Headhunters" against TIE fighters anyway, as the slower "half an X-wing" fighters just didn't have the speed or maneuverability to compete. But the hapless Z-95's never even had a beginner's chance at shooting down the pair of Imperials, due to the idiot placement of the turrets.

      As the Z-95's barreled out of the hangar, they wound up flying directly into their own turbolasers' fire. The first few to be plastered took hits in the nose and wings, sending them careening off into the nearby buildings. The last one took several hits to its powerplant, causing an explosion that turned the entire area into one huge fireball. In all, four Headhunters were obliterated by friendly fire.

      "Screw this, Shaz. They're gonna have plenty of reinforcements in about half a second. I say we get out of here while the getting's still good."

      "Too late. Three Z-95's made it out, and a pair of A-wings just entered the atmosphere!"

      "They've got missile lock! We have to split up, we're too pretty of a target for those A's if we stay in formation."

      "I'm staying on your wing! Why can't we get a flight of TIE Advanced in here...

      The missile detonated just to Chip's rear. The port solar panel disintegrated, Chippy flipped upside down, and slammed straight into Shazam's ion engines. There wasn't even time for a mayday, as everything flashed into a white haze.

 
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    This is where the shotgun became so popular...  <
 
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Don't you worry Shaz. Our little run-arround is coming.
 
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Chapter 3

      A groan, a moan, and Chippy sat up. Oh man, did this battle ever suck! What was that, the second TIE that he had wrecked today? The fourth? He couldn't quite remember. His solar panel had been blasted off, and then? Something about ejecting... Yes, there was the ejection seat, five yards away. But that meant that Chip had already unstrapped himself and crawled out. How long had he been here? Damn befuddled brain. Concussion? No, just incredible trauma. Nothing broken? Wow, no major injuries, let alone actually being alive.

      Shazam. Where? Oh, sitting against a stump. He must have ejected, too. Lucky that they had landed together. Burned wreckage a ways off. Seats had done there jobs, carried Chip and Shazam far enough from the doomed TIE's that the Rebels hadn't found them yet. Rebels. Damn the Rebels. They'd stolen Sarah from him. Rob remembered the goodbye in the grove of trees, her pleading with him not to go. "Please? Stay with me?"

      I have to go, after what they did..." Chip grabbed his pounding head. "NOOO!"

      Shazam stirred. "Wha? Chip?"

      Then there had been the day that they had met...

      His friend Brain's voice. "You check out that gal in the red dress? Pretty, ain't she?"

      What? Brian wasn't here... How? "To tell you the truth, I was looking at her friend, in the  green."

      Shazam was shaking him. How had Shazam gotten here? Chip had been back at that camp, with Brian and Sarah. "Chipmunk? Chipmunk! Someone's coming..." Shazam was right someone was coming. Was it the rescue team? Rebels? No, it was Sarah, inviting him to the dance. The Victorian ball hosted by the camp. But Chip had been in a forest?

      He thanked God that he was in Viper squadron, as that extra elite-squad-member pay had gone towards a pilot pack and some dandy weapons. It was dark out, must have been early night by now. He had heard something on the comm. Systems earlier about a team on the ground. Who was in charge? That was right, it was JMac. JMac, the former training officer from the Naval Academy. Chip gripped his commlink. "Commander JMac, are you there, sir? Commander, this is LCRW Chipmunk Man. Sir, someone is sneaking up on my position, is it you? I don't want to shoot any friendlies... Sir?" No answer.

      Damn, he had to see! "Shazam, get down. Now. I'm gonna light things up a little." Chip didn't have much in the way of flares, but he did have a pair of white phosphorous grenades. He, nicknamed "willy-peter" bombs, these suckers made a bright flash, and threw a burning white powder all over the target area. He waited for another twig to snap, closer this time, and chucked the grenade.

      A crash, a flash of white light, and three Rebels were covered in burning willy-peter powder. Screams cut the night as Chippy and Shazam hightailed it for a new hiding spot. Chip gripped his weapons so tightly that his fingers hurt. Let's see, what was left? One more willy-peter, two fragmentation grenades, a DH-11 blaster pistol, and Chip's very special close combat weapon. He had never used his 8-gauge shotgun against a living target, but it turned paper and cardboard targets into mush. God help any Rebel stupid enough to attack.

      They were running, twirling away from the under brush that tried to snag them. Twirling, just like Chip and Sarah had done at the dance. How he loved the Virginia Reel! It involved smaller groups than other Victorian reels, six couples in two lines, gentlemen facing ladies. Yes, that was right, forward and back twice, then the head gentleman and bottom lady...

      "Chip! Chip, we should stay here, in this ditch. We can use it as a hiding spot and a trench. Chip? You okay?" Yes, yes. Good spot to hide. Chip gave Shazam a pat on the pack and sat down. He was glad that Shazam was here, he found himself starting like the kid. Sort of reminded Chip of his buddy, Gearhart. Making sure that the shotgun was fully loaded, he warned Shazam to stay away from the gun's muzzle.

      "This thing doesn't look like much, but it'll turn you into a misshapen burger patty." He tried to concentrate on watching the darkness, but couldn't, his head was swimming and spinning too much. Spinning, just like Chip's favorite part of the dance...

      The step that defined a dance as a "reel" was Chippy's favorite, called chaining-down-the-line." You gave your left hand to a person in the line, did a left-hand-turn, then gave your partner a right-hand-turn, and followed with another left turn to the next person in the line. You continued with left to the line, right to partner until you had spun your way from the top of the line all the way to the bottom. Sometimes it became very confusing, with the Snowball Reel even named for the fact that it resembled a blizzard. Sarah's dress was a shiny, shimmering blue, and in the soft light of the ballroom almost seemed to give off it's own light. The dress was a Victorian hoop skirt, and over her shoulders was some sort of lace that draped down. She was wearing very thin gloves, made of small, white yarn loosely knitted together.

      He remembered how the ballroom had looked that November night: the lighting, the people, the band. The room was pretty big, though Chip had always been horrible at estimating sizes and couldn't really say exactly how big. The dance floor itself was probably about the size of his old high school gym, with a large area around the walls devoted to dozens of tables. It was a big room, but hadn't been big enough, as the place was absolutely packed. There really wasn't enough room, and the ladies were having a heck of a time with their big hoop skirts. The lighting had left something to be desired. It was a dull yellow, sort of like when three of the four light bulbs in your bedroom were burnt out. But it didn't really matter much, as Chip wasn't exactly paying attention to the rest of the room. And why should he, when he was busy waltzing with such a pretty girl?

      The dance master could have been better, he took way too long to explain the steps of the various dances. He would spend what seemed like twenty minutes to describe the moves before the dance would start. Not that the people were paying attention to the poor guy, anyway. It was annoying, really, that the people would ignore the dance master, then complain when they didn't understand the dances. But again, Chip had something else holding his attention. He'd never seen this dress before. Before she had always worn a sort of foresty-green. When Chip thought about it, her dress was almost the same color as the uniform on the approaching Rebels...

      A blaster bolt, a scream, and Chippy fired. He fired twice more, found another target, and fired again. Buckshot shredded the underbrush, and a handful of short shrieks pierced the night. Shazam scrambled over the edge of the trench, paused to examine the bodies, and jumped back in.

      "Good Lord, Chip! That's a helluva gun! You blew one guys head clean off, and... Well, maybe not clean off, there's little tendrils and mushy stuff hanging off, but maybe I didn't need to tell you that, err, well, anyway, he's dead. And the other one is, well, he's..."

      "Disgusting?" sighed Chip.

      "Yeah! It's sicker than you could ever imagine. Good Lord, that gun's a nasty little thing. Really makes a roar, two. Where'd you get it?"

      "I dunno. Imperial Center? I dunno. I just wanna sleep..."
Bright lights filled his vision. More figures. Who? Stormtroopers. The rescue team! "You men, follow us! This planet is going to be bombarded! We have to leave, now!" Hands pulling him up into a transport. But all Chip could think about was rest. He closed his eyes, and was back among the blue wool uniforms and swishing hoop skirts.

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March 8, 2004 7:00:06 AM    View the profile of chipmunk man 
(OOC: At the urging of Tofuman, I have added a disclaimer.)

While using the name Til'c Jafa, the character I created has no connection with the one on Stargate: SG-1. I just like the show, so I used the name.
 
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March 8, 2004 4:15:51 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
    I'd have to say, this was one of the better parts of your writing.  The detail of the dances and such were pretty good.  Especially the way they managed to confuse themselves in with the story.  Nicely done, keep up the good work.
 
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Thanks man. Yeah, that part's my favorite. Okay, so there's no such thing as the American Civil War or Victorian customs in Star Wars, but hey, that stuff's my life.
 
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March 9, 2004 9:47:24 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
    Or hamburger patties...  Well...  maybe...
 
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Okay folks, that's it for the moment. As soon as I get a bit more written, it'll be posted here.
 
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*Does a dance to "Get out of Denver by Bob Segar*
 
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Alright, I'm finally working on this again. The biggest change to what has already been posted is an addition to my post of March 8. I've also removed the chapter titles as they were somewhat cheesy.
 
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******

      "My God," Chippy though to himself, "they're actually letting me fly again!" After being rescued by an assault transport, he had been huddled in the lounge of the Atrus, dejectedly sipping SunDrop, and waiting to be summoned for his inevitable demotion for wrecking so many TIE's. Instead, he had been stuffed in another TIE as quickly as the medical teams considered possible. The grease monkeys were outfitting every fighter available with concussion missiles, and Chip could guess why. Rebel fighters were probably everywhere, and the Admiral wanted to fix that.

      As Chip waited for his own armament to be finished, he watched a very impatient Polaris crewman waiting to be loaded. The kid's insolence was amazing. "Yo wrench head, hurry the Hell up down there!" It didn't take long for wrenches to actually start flying at the pilot. Ha. The moron. You had to respect the people who took care of your fighter, and then they would take care of you.

      In any case, these missiles would make it easier to kill the Rebels. His mind drifting, Chippy thought about the little scrap with Rebels that he and Shazam had had on the surface. Good Lord it felt good, just knowing that he had gotten one of those freaks! Chip hadn't mutilated just any Rebel. No, it had been one from the list. That damned list pinned to his flight gear locker. When he had joined Imperial Navy, he hadn't expected to actually find any of the five men. But he had! He had fired his shotgun for more than just self defense. And he hadn't stopped at just one shot. The man had been dead from the first, but he'd poured three rounds into the freak. It was the tattoo that Chip had recognized. The odd tattoo on the Rebel's left cheek, a design that Sarah had described.

      She hadn't even wanted Chip to go. Had said that she didn't even care about the Rebel's, that what had happened didn't matter. But it had mattered to him! It really had mattered to her, but Chip didn't understand what she was trying to tell him. She had needed him there with her, not out trying to get revenge. But God, he couldn't just sit there, not after what had happened to her! And despite the statistical problems with finding five men in the entire galaxy, he'd managed to cross the first man off his list. Heh. Four more to go.

      The mechanic gave Chip's top hatch a pat. "You're all set, pal. Good luck out there."

      "Thanks, man. If that Polaris kid gives you any more trouble, just chuck a few more wrenches at him."

      "Ha! Will do..."

******

      Most of the New Republic fighters were X-wings, with a smattering of suicidal Z-95's. The Z-95's were quickly smacked apart by the missiles, and sent scrambling back to the hangars. The X-wings preformed better, as they had more maneuverability and could evade the missiles somewhat. And the Y-wings, while providing themselves as slow, easy targets, had heavy hulls and shields that helped them survive a single a missile hit. But Chip found that if he linked his warhead launchers, a pair of missiles could deliver the desired effect. Granted, he occasionally still had to close with his target and finish it with cannons when one missile missed, but that was easy enough with Y-wings.

      Chip ducked under a flight of TIE bombers, probably from Kaph squadron. He could see a lone TIE Advanced trying to dodge away from a trio of Y-wings. The odd thing was that the Y-wings were trying to disable the Advanced with ion cannons. Jeez, if the rebs captured the pilot, there was no telling what kinds of horrible forms of torture they would use. "This is Viper 1-4 to Polaris pilot. I'm coming to give you a hand with those Y-wings, just hang on a minute."

      "Chip? That you? Holy crap man, help! These guys are all over me!" That was Shazam's voice! Chip moved in behind the lead rebel. If he could drive off the leader, the other two might follow suit. Worst case scenario was probably having the leader break off, and the two wingmen staying on course. Then the leader would be free to swing around and catch Chip in the rear, while the other two could keep pounding Shazam. Chip needed to get lucky and drive them all off at once.

      Chip switched to his torpedoes. A pair straight into the middle ought to do the trick. His targeting reticule glowed yellow. Stang, no time! Chip had to do it now! He brought the nose of his Interceptor up, leading the targeting reticule just in front of the lead rebel. That should be just about the right distance...

      He fired. Two blue torpedoes lanced out, gliding towards the lead Y-wing. They were about twenty yards behind, closing to ten, five... The rebel fired one last burst of ion fire, just at the moment when the torpedoes slammed into the Y-wing's left engine. Only one torpedo actually hit, and the explosion of the first torpedo detonated the second in the empty space between the two engines. The blast blew both engines off the fuselage, splitting the NR craft like a wishbone. Chip almost chuckled at the sight of the cockpit spiraling past the other rebels. Served the stupid rebel right.

      But only one of the wingmen broke off. Chip had to follow suit, or the guy would have cut in behind and shot Chip as well. The remaining Y-wing fired another volley of ION's at Shazam. Why ION's? The bolts hit Shazam's wings, frying the electrical system and leaving the craft helpless. Crap! Well, at least he was disabled, and not dead. The same couldn't be said for Chip. Now the Y-wing who had broken off was trying to get a missile lock on Chip, while the second was sending cannon fire his way. Chip was so caught up in dodging that at first he didn't realize what was happening to Shazam.
 
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