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Raziel
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RE: Need advice

August 27, 2003 5:53:18 AM

Sorry that i havent posted again on Raziel's story yet.
I have two ideas as to how to carry it on:
1) carry on chronologically through Raziel's life
2) Write each part on the subject of a certain character that dominates a part of Raziels life. e.g. a certain boss or enemy. This wouldnt necessarily go in order.

What do you think?

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RE: Need advice

August 27, 2003 4:41:11 PM

Hrm.

The second method will be a bit more confusing to those not familar with your character but could make for a more interesting aproach.

Then again I've written some of the most confusing yet entertaining peices of fics on this board.

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RE: Need advice

August 29, 2003 8:44:14 AM

Combine it. Go through it chronologically and for each seperate stage throw in a new person that dominates that part

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Raziel
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RE: Need advice

October 7, 2003 4:40:50 PM

As i am away from my squad right now and have some spare time im going to start writing something different.
Raziel returns to Nar Shaddaa to see to some unfinished business and the rest of Raziel's past will be revealed as it goes along

Plot is almost finished now

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RE: Need advice

October 7, 2003 5:56:39 PM

I'd go with the second option as long as you could frame it all.

That way you don't have to worry so much about tying stories together. Just make the stories fragments of a life.

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