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Eventide
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  New Here
December 16, 2012 11:59:10 PM    View the profile of Eventide 
Hello! I am new here. Hope I can get started soon.
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  RE: New Here
December 17, 2012 12:39:12 AM    View the profile of Dunny 
G'day Eventide, and welcome to the Vast Empire! A Training Officer will be with you shortly to get you started on your journey - please be patient.
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Maroy
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  RE: New Here
December 17, 2012 12:55:47 AM    View the profile of Maroy 
Welcome to the Vast Empire Naval Academy, Eventide! I'm Training Officer Maroy, and I'm in charge of guiding you while you are in our Orientation program.

As you've probably noticed, we here in the Vast Empire do play-by-post roleplaying. As a new Crewman, you'll start out in either Flight School or Fleet School. Graduates from Flight School become members of a squadron in the Starfighter Corps, while graduates from Fleet School become bridge officers on one of the Navy's warships. Higher positions, some of which require you to take leadership over other members, will open up as you advance through our ranks.

That concludes Imperial Initiation, the first part of your training. You are now free to begin working on the second part, located on the Vast Empire's wiki: Basic Training. Basic Training is designed to familiarize and prepare you for the privileges and duties of a typical member of the Vast Empire Navy.

Upon completion of Basic Training, you may proceed to either Flight School or Fleet School on the wiki and begin working on the first chapter, 'Character Development'. It will guide you through the process of creating a biography and ID line for your character. Please note that any and all references to the Force or related concepts such as lightsabers are strictly forbidden. All in-character posts, including your bio, should be written in third-person past-tense unless otherwise stated. Please post a reply to this thread with both your biography and ID line, so I can review them and offer corrections if necessary.

I am here to help, so if you have any questions please contact me in one of the following ways:
  •  Comnet Message
  •  Javachat IRC or your own IRC client
  •  Reply to this thread

If for any reason I do not reply to any of the above within two or three days, contact any other member of the Navy and they should be able to help.

Again, welcome to the Vast Empire! Good luck in whatever path you follow!

Regards,

Training Officer Maroy

Here are some useful links:
  •  A look at what we do here in the VEN
  •  The Vast Empire Naval Academy wiki page
  •  The wiki page for Basic Training
  •  Flight School: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3
  •  Fleet School: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3
  •  How-to-create-a-wiki-page Tutorial
  •  Java-based IRC chat
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  RE: New Here
December 17, 2012 2:06:06 AM    View the profile of Eventide 
Here's my character outline. I hope she's decent.


Makenna “Eventide” Aleshire

Physical Appearance
?    Homeworld: Bonadan
?    Age: 23
?    Species: human
?    Native Language: basic
?    Gender: female
?    Skin Color: white/tan
?    Height: 5’6”
?    Weight: 130 lbs.
?    Hair Color: auburn with blond streaks
?    Facial Hair: none
?    Eye Color: brown
?    Scars: left shoulder and right calf to knee
?    Tattoos: symbol of her former pirate band on her upper back between her shoulder blades


Physical Description:

    Makenna is above average in height. Her hair is a deep auburn with a couple of blonde streaks from a random hair dye experience. It is long, somewhat curly, and is almost always tied in a ponytail that is laid over her shoulder. Her eyes are deep brown. Her left shoulder contains many knife scars from a hand-to-hand fight she had with a guard once. There is also a long scar that crosses up from her right calf to her knee from an incident involving an escape and falling off a hover bike. Her physical build is more slender than muscular, allowing her to be quick on her feet, but her overall strength is small. This is why she prefers fighting from a distance rather than hand-to-hand. She is always walking with confidence, shoulders back and chest forward.


Personality:

    Makenna’s name means “born of fire”, and she rightly represents this idea. She is persistent, idealistic, feisty, and stubborn with a knack for the occasional flippant comment. She also loves a good competition and will give her all to win (though her attitude when she loses is not always pleasant). While she was a pirate and was required to follow the rules, Makenna was used to being on a similar level to her peers, making her seem rebellious in the eyes of authority figures. After all, respect was earned, not granted by position. She likes to speak sarcastically to her friends, though her sarcasm can come off as blunt and arrogant to many. Overall, Makenna is a generally happy person, though people that rub her the wrong way may remain on her personal black list. Her idealism makes her optimistic, but it can also lead her into pessimism/depression when reality finally hits her. She also has a tendency to rely on luck when luck shouldn’t be a factor. Somehow though she has managed to dodge the bullet more than once. Due to her past, she has a hard time leaving people she cares about to fend for themselves, and she will disobey orders if a friend is in danger and she can help them.


Character’s Background:

    Makenna was born on Bonadan to her parents Kale and Selene Aleshire. She has two brothers, one younger and one older. Her older brother is named Collin and her younger brother is named Ethan. Her parents worked for the corporate overlords on Bonadan, and they were known for following the rules, else they’d be killed. When Collin was old enough to leave, he left his family to find a life of his own and “explore the world”. As Makenna neared the age where she could work, she was thrust into the corporate world her parents worked in. But Makenna was stubborn, and she had a tendency to resist the authority there. Eventually she did wrong in the eyes of the overlords, and no amount of apology could right her wrong. The overlords sought out her family, and killed her mother as a lesson for her behavior. They also trapped her into servitude, keeping her from her father and brother.
    Makenna was 16 at this time, and she was sick of being a slave to the corporate overlords, but she had no choice because if she tried to defy them, they would kill her family and leave her alive. Of course, her fate changed when a band of pirates decided to raid Bonadan. They took several items, as well as some of the people as hostages, Makenna being one of them. After the pirates had made off with their loot, they gave the hostages a choice: to join them or be left on a planet to fend for themselves (since they would not kill them). Makenna jumped at the chance to join the pirates, after all, their life looked like more fun than her life had been on Bonadan.
    So Makenna lived out the next several years as a pirate. The band she had joined was not affiliated with any specific organization. They were a small rogue group that had joined together after their lives had been destroyed by wars on other planets. Though they were small, they had the gall to raid planets that had fairly decent security. They used their small size and general autonomy to get into places they weren’t allowed. It was during this time that Makenna learned how to fire a weapon and to fly simple craft, though she wasn’t often allowed to fly for any important missions. Her best friend in the group was a man named Tamran. He reminded her of her older brother, and she went to him for almost everything.
    Of course, the good situation wasn’t meant to last. One of their raids led into disaster because their leader had become too cocky. Their planned surprise attack met with ambush, and the pirates were either killed or scattered. Each of them lost contact, and Makenna was left to fend for herself with the ship she had gotten back to and used as an escape. She never received contact from any of the pirates, but she refuses to think that they are all dead. The reality of the situation made her both weary and angry, but she knew that she couldn’t just give everything up because she still had a life to live. It was on one of the planets that she had visited that she learned about the Vast Empire, and while she had never considered joining any sort of military anything, the idea of being able to fly into battle intrigued her, so she decided to sign up.
    And now we are brought to this instance, where Makenna attempts to make a name for herself in the VEN.
Eventide
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  RE: New Here
December 17, 2012 2:51:35 AM    View the profile of Eventide 
Wiki page: http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/Makenna_Aleshire

ID Line:

TRN/CRW Eventide/?/S:137 “Raptor”/W:46 “Shield”/PLF Cappadocious/TF:TH/3Flt/VEN/VE
TRN/CRW Eventide/?/S:137 “Raptor”/W:46 “Shield”/PLF Cappadocious/TF:TH/3Flt/VEN/VE
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December 17, 2012 6:03:22 AM    View the profile of Hades 
Welcome to the Vast Empire once again, Crewman Eventide. I'm Hades, Executive Officer of Naval Training and Squadron Commander in the Starfighter corps. Excellent bio! Tentatively, I'm giving it a pass even though Maroy is your current Training Officer as for your wiki, I'll leave that to Maroy - smart phones are not nearly as smart as they'd make out :P  anyway, well done on the bio and good luck with the rest of your training. I hope to see you flying with the Vast Empire SFC soon!              Sincerely,                                    Demetrius 'Hades' Aita, XNT

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  RE: New Here
December 17, 2012 10:32:37 AM    View the profile of Maroy 
Bio, wiki, and ID line all look great. Next step is a post on Raptor: Disaster! Read the first post, skim the rest, and then type up one of your own. Try to shoot for about 700 words (or more, of course ).
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  RE: New Here
December 17, 2012 8:00:22 PM    View the profile of Eventide 
Posted in Raptor. Should I post a copy here as well?
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December 17, 2012 8:49:12 PM    View the profile of Hades 
That won't be necessary Outstanding post, Crewman! While I'm not going to pass you just yet - I'll give Maroy that honour - i will say that, without a doubt, you'll be a full fledged pilot soon. Sit tight, and Maroy will be with you soon!

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  RE: New Here
December 17, 2012 10:28:26 PM    View the profile of Maroy 
Wow, very impressive post! The final thing is a report to Echelon, Hades and myself using this template and the Comnet Messaging system (there's a link to it at the very top of this page). Post a copy here for future reference, and then we'll see about getting you placed
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  RE: New Here
December 17, 2012 11:09:10 PM    View the profile of Eventide 
Eventide’s Report: 12/17/2012

Activity:

Created character template, ID line, and wiki page. Posted in Raptor.

Upcoming plans:

Become part of a squadron and get started with wherever I can fit in.

Questions/Suggestions:

None at this time.

Crewman Eventide

n/a

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