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Hannibal
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  I'm back
October 11, 2012 1:02:27 PM    View the profile of Hannibal 
Hence the topic.
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Maroy
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Maroy
 
[VE-NAVY] Master Chief Petty Officer
 
Post Number:  530
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  RE: I'm back
October 11, 2012 1:05:01 PM    View the profile of Maroy 
Welcome back, Hannibal! I'm one of the Academy's Training Officers, so I'll help get you reintegrated. It's been a while since you wrote with us, so I'd like you to do a quick run through the Academy course again.

Here's the link for the Basic Training wiki page. Basic Training is designed to familiarize and prepare you for the privileges and duties of a typical member of the Vast Empire Navy.

Upon completion of Basic Training, you may proceed to either Flight School or Fleet School  on the wiki and begin working on the first chapter, 'Character Development'. It will guide you through the process of creating a biography and ID line for your character. I would recommend creating a new one based on your old one, in order to re-familiarize yourself with your character. Please note that any and all references to the Force or related concepts such as lightsabers are strictly forbidden. All in-character posts, including your bio, should be written in third-person past-tense unless otherwise stated. Please post a reply to this thread with both your biography and ID line, so I can review them and offer corrections if necessary.

I am here to help, so if you have any questions please contact me in one of the following ways:
  •  Comnet Message
  •  Javachat IRC or your own IRC client
  •  Reply to this thread

If for any reason I do not reply to any of the above within two or three days, contact any other member of the Navy and they should be able to help.

Again, welcome back to the Vast Empire!

Regards,

Training Officer Maroy

Here are some useful links:
  •  A look at what we do here in the VEN
  •  The Vast Empire Naval Academy wiki page
  •  The wiki page for Basic Training
  •  Flight School: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3
  •  Fleet School: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3
  •  How-to-create-a-wiki-page Tutorial
  •  Java-based IRC chat
FL/MCPO Maroy/C-1/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/ISD-II Halcyon Warrior/TF:A/1FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=*A*=) [GCM] [CBV] [IG] [MC2] [MC1]
[This message has been edited by Maroy (edited October 11, 2012 1:05:30 PM)]
Hannibal
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  RE: I'm back
October 11, 2012 1:17:57 PM    View the profile of Hannibal 
Gender:Male
Skin color:    Light Brown
Height: 5'11
Weight:    187 lbs
Eyes:    Left: Grey, Right: Hazel
Species: Human
Hair color: Black
Homeworld: Yosefin
Occupation: Small aircraft maintenance.


Physical/Personality
Hannibal is mostly athletic build, and of average height, the only scars he has are from childhood games, and slight accidents, he does not have any piercings as he sees no reasons for it besides petty looks. Hannibal is curious and quick to fallow protocol, he finds hard times making friends as he is always nose deep into a manual.

Bio


Hannibal was born on Yosefin, adopted son of Ristad and Fin, His father was a business man, he owned a small freighting company, secretly his father worked for the NR. His mother, being a Imperial officer, raised him to think that the NR was evil and wanted to destroy the galaxy, while the empire wanted only peace, and to unite the galaxy.
Hannibal’s father left them when he was ten, his mother, seeing an opportunity, told him that the NR had lured him away with lies, when in fact, he was in Imperial jail. Over the years Hannibal worked hard to get his mother’s approval, however his mother was rarely with him, being an officer kept her away. At the age of fifteen Hannibal grew an uncanny obsession with ships, and flying through space, he would often visit cantina, and spaceports to listen to the pilots talk.

He took up a job maintain small crafts at the spaceports to earn some money, not that his family needed it.
At the age of nineteen he decided to join the Navy, and start his carrier as a pilot, and help to unite the galaxy under the imperial way’s.
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Maroy
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Maroy
 
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  RE: I'm back
October 11, 2012 1:44:24 PM    View the profile of Maroy 
Ideally your biography would be fleshed out a bit more than that, but I understand that it sometimes you just have to dive in and let the character reveal himself over time. Everything looks good for Chapter 2. Read through The Raptor Story and write a post of your own. There is plenty of reference material in the wiki pages for Chapter 2 if you need help with the flying portion. Try to allow the essence of your character to come through, and don't be afraid to show how he reacts both mentally and physically. 750 words is a good number to shoot for.
FL/MCPO Maroy/C-1/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/ISD-II Halcyon Warrior/TF:A/1FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=*A*=) [GCM] [CBV] [IG] [MC2] [MC1]
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