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  Echelon: Gunnery
January 30, 2012 8:45:26 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
“The simulation is now ready for you,” the officer said, coming up to PO1 Echelon.

Echelon had been chosen to perform in a gunnery simulation aboard the Atrus. He had been in simulations before but never gunnery. It would be a unique experience for Echelon had never done something of the sort before. He had researched a little before the simulation, but he was anxious to see how well he would do.

Echelon wanted to learn the gunnery skill because it appealed to him. Gunnery could be considered perhaps one of the most important parts of battling in space. You can have defense, and you can have communications, but without weapons, you wouldn't destroy anything.

He got out of his chair and proceeded toward the large box in the middle of the room. He passed another man who was exiting the simulator, and he walked up the ramp and inside. The room was small, compared to what it was on the outside. There was seat in the middle with a control panel in front, and there were several screens resembling viewports.

Echelon sat himself down and buckled up. One of the simulation techs wished Echelon luck and closed the door. A moment later the screens booted up, showing the depths of (simulated) space. He checked his control panel and noticed he was on the starboard side of a CR-90, and was controlling some quad-laser cannons. Then he noticed on the map, that there were 3 craft coming towards him! A quick look out the view port confirmed the fact, and they were X-Wings!

They were coming close now, and Echelon carefully aimed. When he believed he could hit one, he fired. Right as his finger clicked the trigger, the X-Wings broke off to the sides avoiding his shots. He held the trigger and followed one with a trail of bolts, but it was too fast.

He cursed but then regained his composure.

This is going to be harder than I thought...

They flew up, and out of his firing range, but the sensors confirmed that they were still there. One came around in his view, but it was travelling too fast, and his bolts flew behind it. Another one came around right in front of him, but he still couldn't seem to hit it.

Suddenly, one flew right in front of him, travelling along side the ship.

I’ll have to adjust my aim to his speed!

He followed the X-Wing with his barrels, making slight adjustments for speed. He pressed the trigger. Several bolts flew out in rapid succession, the first few missing but every other one slamming into the X-Wing, sending sparks and debris in every direction. The X-Wing began to spiral, but then exploded into a powerful fire ball.

Hey! I did it! One down, two to go!

The two seemed to regroup, and they travelled out beyond the ship before turning around for another attack run. This time, Echelon was sure he’d hit one. He aimed, but then realized they were too far out. It wouldn’t be likely that he would hit one. Suddenly, the ship, his ship, began to move slightly and the X-Wings were out of his vision, but it was only a moment later that they flew right above Echelon.

He pulled his turret toward the X-Wings and quickly fired a round of bolts, but the starfighters suddenly turned, and his bolts missed completely. The X-Wings came around to his side again, and this time, he wouldn't let one get away! Following them with his barrels, he held the trigger, and slowly his stream of plasma caught up with one. The ship exploded on impact, and Echelon silently cheered himself on.

He had read manuals on Gunnery, and he learned how the system worked, but even then, it was difficult for him. Though it was sort of like flying a TIE ship except that you were stationary. So far, the experience had been challenging, but fun. Echelon had picked up on things quickly in the past, but it was good to have to work for something.

Just one more...I can do this...

The lone X-Wing pulled around and moved toward the port side of the ship. Then without warning, the CR-90 turned 180 degrees so Echelon would have a better firing position.

I can’t lose this chance!

The X-Wing was travelling away now, realizing that Echelon could hit it. Echelon realized he would have to act fast before it got out of his range. He carefully aimed the turret. His hands were shaking slightly and his mouth was dry from excitement. The X-Wing was getting far away now! He needed to fire!

Click

He pressed and held the trigger. A stream of charged particles raced torward his enemy, and they were not to be stopped! Each of the bolts, in immediate succession, raced into the X-Wing’s backside. The ship’s engine ignited, and it exploded into a brilliant mass of technicolored light.

Echelon smiled as the system went off, and the simulation ended. He stepped out of the craft, and returned to his daily duties.

I wonder if I should consider a transfer into gunner?

OOC:
Word Count: 675. For the gunnery skill. I realized that maybe Echelon wouldn’t be the only gunner aboard the ship, but lets say they all got infected, turned into zombies, and died. I also hoped I didn’t godmod on this. I was afraid I did, but otherwise, I hope this works.
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[This message has been edited by Echelon (edited January 31, 2012 12:27:48 AM)]
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  RE: Echelon: Gunnery
January 31, 2012 7:20:44 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
I'm very impressed with all the activity hereabouts, Echelon!  But, yeah, I'm going to ask you to rework this one a little bit before I sign off on it. 

All of your previous skills posts were within the same sort of family: your character, in his role as a Damage Control Officer, engaged in tasks he'd do as a part of his job.  This is totally different.  And, yeah, any Navy member can earn any Ancillary Skill, but the whole point is to avoid god-moded super-characters, so if you're going to have such a diverse set of skills as a character I want to makes sure you as a writer can justify it all.  In other words, I'm going to need more indication of why the character wants to acquire gunnery skills, and it'd probably be more realistic if he wasn't instantly good at gunnery.  There's no reason Echelon shouldn't be a sharp-shootin' Damage Control Guy... you just have to give it a little more thought, rather than just checking off every Ancillary we have.    Take another crack at it!
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  RE: Echelon: Gunnery
January 31, 2012 12:28:34 AM    View the profile of Echelon 
Edited. Thought I didn't edit the word count. I just made it so Echelon had a bit of a harder time, and I explained a little bit more why Echelon wanted to learn Gunnery. I hope it works!
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  RE: Echelon: Gunnery
January 31, 2012 10:08:26 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Thanks for making some adjustments, Echelon.  With the edits, I'm going to call this a pass.  Congratulations.  Now go write something in an actual story for awhile, and leave the Certs/Skills alone for a spell. 
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  RE: Echelon: Gunnery
February 1, 2012 8:10:39 AM    View the profile of Echelon 
Sorry Trick, I just didn't really have anything to post in, but I've got an idea now...
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  RE: Echelon: Gunnery
February 1, 2012 8:38:55 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
No worries, I was only teasing. 
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  RE: Echelon: Gunnery
February 1, 2012 10:40:27 AM    View the profile of Echelon 
So I can write more? Or should I not?
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  RE: Echelon: Gunnery
February 1, 2012 12:35:19 AM    View the profile of Trykon 
Of course, if you've got more in you.    Keep in mind the comments I've made though: the more broad you make your skill set, the harder on you I'm probably going to get during grading.  The whole point of the system is to make sure you can justify having a powered up character by proving you can write believably.  Also, I'm still not quite done revising the actual requirements for the skills, so I might prefer if you wait just a bit until that standardization process is over, since the revamped requirements are often a little more intense than the nebulous instructions we had as placeholders before.  But that's by no means an order: by all means, if you feel like going for more skills now, go for 'em... I need to finish this wiki project asap, anyway, and this gives me even more incentive. 
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  RE: Echelon: Gunnery
February 1, 2012 12:40:54 AM    View the profile of Echelon 
Yea. I mean, I was working on something else, but after that I'll be done...
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  RE: Echelon: Gunnery
February 1, 2012 9:09:09 PM    View the profile of Hades 
/me clicks 'New Posts'


Unsurprisingly, there are at least 2 ancillary skills/Cets by Echelon each time.  And I thought I was going overboard :P

Teasing, teasing... congrats on the activity mate

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