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Mars_Vitell
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  hello
January 21, 2012 7:08:08 PM    View the profile of Mars_Vitell 
Just joined, this sounds like its going to be a whole lot of fun
Mars_Vitell
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  RE: hello
January 21, 2012 7:35:12 PM    View the profile of Mars_Vitell 
I viewed the other post by new recruits and i feel i might not be doing it correctly, so if any one wants to tell me wat should be my next step that would be so kind, and where is the chat thing, the IRC I think it's called. i would like to chat with the right people right away.
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  RE: hello
January 21, 2012 7:55:22 PM    View the profile of Fain 
IRC Chat. One of the Navy boys will fill you in, just give it some time. Welcome to the Vast Empire.
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Mars_Vitell
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  RE: hello
January 21, 2012 8:08:03 PM    View the profile of Mars_Vitell 
thank you! cant wait to get started
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Echelon
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  RE: hello
January 21, 2012 9:45:14 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
Nope, you're doing fine. You just have to wait for an instructor that's all, and since I'm one, I'll get you started.

Welcome, new recruit, to the Vast Empire Naval Academy! By posting here, you're one step closer to joining us in our ranks.

If you'll allow me to introduce myself, I am Petty Officer 2nd Class Echelon. As your training officer, I'll lead you through the courses here at VENA.

You'll begin by completing the Basic Training course. Please proceed here, and read the section. When you're done Basic Training, proceed to your first chapter of Flight School, here, and create a bio for your Vast Empire character. Remember, you should have it in 3rd person (he, she, it) and in past tense (ran, shot, exploded).

Once your bio is complete, post it here for reviewing, and then we can move on to Chapter 2 of Flight Schooll!

If you have any questions, comments, concerns, or rants, feel free to contact any of us here at VENA. The fastest way to get help would to get on the #VENA IRC channel and ask there (I'm usually on). Otherwise, you can Private Message us, or just simply post here. Remember, the wiki has all sorts of information, and you're welcome to look at other people's works (just don't plagiarize or copy).

Utterly,

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Mars_Vitell
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  re: hello
January 22, 2012 9:22:36 AM    View the profile of Mars_Vitell 
Vitellus sotaros

Physical Appearance Homeworld: Tekshar falls, Kuat
Age: 19
Species: Human
Native Language: Kuat and standard
Gender: Male
Skin Color: Tanned
Height: 6,0
Weight: 165lbs
Hair Color: Dark brown
Facial Hair: Unkempt goatee
Eye Color: Light brown
Scars: thin Crooked line on nose
Tattoos: None

Physical Description

Tall, low-muscle Frame fit for running long distances. Noticeably curly hair when not kept uniform short. makes very fluid movements when traverseing. he finds himself skinny and not very attractive, but others tell him otherwise. This is do to his soft eyes, soft voice and broad shoulders. Very dark hair that is either wild and curly or kept short for easy maitainance. People call his skin caramel sometimes for its tanned colour and smoothness. His clothes are often darker more earthy tones.

Personality


He is quite relaxed, often sitting and thinking. While interacting with others he is happy an willing to help others to the best of his abilities. Many times he will say thins that sound foreign or qoute old thinkers. This makes him seem like an old soul. He has a habit of being right so he often gets into arguements with strong willed people, but he sees it as an opportunity for them or himself to learn more. He doesnt associate with boys or girls more than the other, but can make coversation to children and experienced adults. His strongest character trait would be his sense of justice.

Character’s Background

Born in a medium-sized hub in tekshar falls, Vitellus lived with his mother Jaq leanna and sister Jade leanna. His father, fandar sotaros, did live with him more than year instead he would come visit Vitellus. From a young age Vitellus studied history of galaxy and theorized philosophy with his father. His father was a very able pilot who did not go into the military, instead had his son Vitellus. Vitellus lived happily untill the day his mother and younger sister left him.

He proceeded to live on his own doing odd jobs to make ends meet, he finished the rest of his education. He always maintained a cheery disposition towards others, even though fate had taken away his mother and sister, tanken away his financial security, and left him to discover the world on his own. Vitellus made a few accomplisments during this time. He was the lead of a few acting showings at the entertainment center. Also he made a little extra from training in the Planetary Imperial junior Guard. There he found a recruiter for the Imperial Navy. Joining would bring him that much closer to: seeing space like his father, making enough money to be an eligible bachelor, and realizing his childhood philosophies, of galactic peace.
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Echelon
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  RE: hello
January 22, 2012 10:04:27 AM    View the profile of Echelon 
Just a note, you might want to capitalize your letters and add commas to break your sentences up. We don't worry about grammar too much here, but at least use grammar to the best of your ability.

You might want to flesh out your personality and physical description more. Perhaps writing about your character's eyes, hair, face, etc. And for personality, you can write about what we does and doesn't like.

This page has a lot of information: here.

So make those changes: add more detail to the first two paragraphs and correct your grammar.

Once that is done, make your ID line and wikipage. You can the see instructions for those at the bottom of the link I aforementioned.
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Mars_Vitell
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  RE: hello
January 22, 2012 10:16:09 PM    View the profile of Mars_Vitell 
sorry about not being here often enough i have been busy and my first bio got deleleted when i tried to spell check. also i dont know wat is supposed to be my callsign, i know where it goes and have an idea wat it is but not fully, is it " Crw Vitellus Sotaros "?
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Trykon
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  RE: hello
January 23, 2012 2:43:25 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Your callsign is the nickname other pilots call you, IC.  OOC, many VE members' callsigns and their user names are the same, like "Serpent" or "Drac," but not always.  My username is "Trykon," which is my character's last name, whereas the character's in-story callsign is "Trick."

For you, it looks like so far your character's name is Vitellus Sotarus.  Your callsign can be almost anything you invent.  I see Mars in your username, so maybe your character could be "Vitellus 'Mars' Sotarus."  While I generally dislike using Greco-roman references in Star Wars (too referential of Earth for a galaxy far, far away, for my taste), that's a personal preference; Lucas himself has no such reservations, as evidenced by the "Lambda" class shuttle, etc, and so you can feel free to give your character any callsign you like (just keep it PG-13 or below).

Hope that helps.  I look forward to seeing you complete your training, recruit.  Carry on.

-Ensign Trykon, CNT
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  RE: hello
January 23, 2012 6:30:14 PM    View the profile of Mars_Vitell 
will it matter if I have by accident chosen a callsign that may already be in use?
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  RE: hello
January 23, 2012 7:29:37 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
Our site has people but not a lot of people and fewer active people.

I can guarantee that if you choose a callsign it won't already be in use.
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Ellesmere
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  RE: hello
January 23, 2012 10:33:27 PM    View the profile of Ellesmere 
If I may add to what Echelon just told you - you'll know if a callsign has been taken or not because when you put in your application, the system checks for availability and lets you know if it's been taken or not.

So say if someone was to try and register as "Trykon" they would be requested to use another as it is already in use, if you simply mean 'callsign' in terms of character name people tend to come up with unique ones for theirs as such chances of your having copied it are slim to none.
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  RE: hello
January 24, 2012 8:00:30 AM    View the profile of Mars_Vitell 
Thanks Everyone, Im grateful for the help. I willl keeep my questions and queries to this page. i have a few exams for school to write this week which mean i will be studying a little, but i promised to learn wiki coding and update my page.
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Drac
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  RE: hello
January 24, 2012 12:22:53 AM    View the profile of Drac 
Welcome to the VE, Mars. I'm Drac, the Chief of Naval Warfare.

I wanted to note that if you choose a given callsign and would prefer to have that be your username, you can contact Admiral Stormz to see about getting your username changed. It's a one-time thing, though. Callsigns and usernames aren't meant to be changed more than necessary.

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