Good to see you here! I am Petty Officer 2nd Class Ellesmere and will be your Training Officer during this period of your journey to become a Pilot in the Vast Empire Navy. Most call me 'Ellie' so feel free to do so, if you're on IRC you can find me under the nick 'Luckystar' whom is my Army character - I'm always up for a good chat.
Two things here: Any mention of the Jedi, the Force, lightsabers and anything of the kind are forbidden; as well to be noted our timeline currently has us in 11ABY.
I'd also like to see a little bit more in your overall bio, personality profile and the like. Give us a picture of what your character is
really like, give us intrigue; I like to say to get the reader sucked into your story and want more of it! Make it interesting but remember to remain realistic. Your biography is the first thing people will look at and so think of it like preparing for an interview; show us why you want to be here! Which is also why you should constantly pay close attention to your writing, watch for grammar, typos, punctuation, don't overuse italics, bold and what have you.
as well to be noted at this time Command School is closed until further notice due to the fact that we need more Flight Members and have plenty of command positions filled already.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask here, hit me up on IRC or ComNet PM me
I'm always happy to help however I can!
