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Ridgeback
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  New Recruit
May 23, 2011 3:47:09 AM    View the profile of Ridgeback 
Greetings,

  I've just activated my account as a new navy member and am posting this as instructed.

Thanks for your time,
          Rijj
Ridgeback
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  RE: New Recruit
May 23, 2011 7:57:34 AM    View the profile of Ridgeback 
Rijj Bacc


Homeworld: Kashyyk
Age: 39
Species: Wookiee
Native Language: Wookiee
Gender: Male
Skin Color: Black (somewhere under the fur)
Height: 2.25 Meters
Weight: 126 Kilograms
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Facial Hair: Much, often arranged in Wookiee style war braids at random around his face
Eye Color: Brown
Scars: A large burn on his back where hair will not grow, starting at the top of his right shoulder and ending at the left side of his lower back. He also has an old scar on the left side of his neck unseen under his fur, from a slaver’s control collar.
Tattoos: None

Physical Description
  Rijj is typical for his species in many respects, as he is tall, strong, and possessed of a physical presence which makes it impossible for him to hide in a crowd. His fur is very dark compared to most Wookiees. His singular identifying physical characteristic is a large burn that runs diagonally across the length of his back. Like others of his kind, he is uncomfortable wearing more equipment or clothing than is absolutely necessary for him to function at a given job. His facial hair is often braided around the perimeter of his face.

Emotional Description
  Rijj is untrusting of members of other species, even beyond the natural tendency of his race based on language barriers. Everyone is suspect to him until they prove their value and win his respect. Life has taught him hard lessons about trust. In Kashyyk there is a saying, ‘The wisdom of the wind is only spoken to the silent’. He holds this belief close to his heart, and tries to say as little as is necessary. As a counterpoint to his personal philosophy, he knows the value of teamwork in combat, works with his wingmates, and pursues battle as a cold hearted exercise in professionalism. He does, however, possess a long memory for the faithfulness of his squad mates, or their lack thereof. He will just as quickly leap to the defense of someone he respects as he will abandon the cause of someone he believes to be unworthy of it.

Character’s Background
A native of Kashyyk, the homeworld of his race, Rijj had a childhood typical of his kind. Growing up in Ghoryyl, the village of his tribe, he learned to love the beauty of the natural world around him, and respect the hard realities of it. When he reached that age all Wookiees do when the wonder of the stars calls to them, he began work as a deckhand on a light freighter which belonged to a merchant of his province. After years of service he managed to rise through the ranks and attain the Wookiee equivalent of Jr. Officer. He earned his identifying scar in a boarding action when the YT-510 he was serving on was attacked by unknown pirates near the planet Dressel in Bothan space. While trying to reinforce the blast doors, the ship was rocked by an explosion that left him unconscious. He woke up a captive aboard the pirate’s corvette, in agonizing pain from his injury, and chained to the floor in an animal cage by durasteel restraints. To this day he still does not know the fate of many of his crewmates, who were dear to him, and his last link to his people.
  The next two years were a cultural shock for him, as he was sold into slavery on an off world market station controlled by a local crime syndicate. He was largely treated as a beast, having no means of communicating with those around him. His captivity was enforced by means of a debilitating pain inducing collar he was made to wear around his neck. Often he was made to fight for entertainment, and was at times sold or lost as a gambling wager. It was at this time that he was given the name ‘Ridgeback’ by the crowds at the fighting pits, due to his scar. While Rijj has particularly hateful memories of some of his ‘owners’, often his indenture changed hands so many times, so quickly, that he had no idea to whom he belonged. His reputation began to grow as being unruly and unwilling to submit, relative to the rate at which his credit value as a slave dropped. It was during this time that he was able to learn enough Galactic to understand most humans at least, even if the guttural nature of his Wookiee vocal cords made it impossible for him to communicate in return.
  His luck took a turn for the better when he was used to pay part of a debt his current owner owed to a legitimate businessman from Hapan. His new owner, having little respect for the practice of owning living property, made sure he was treated fairly enough, and asked no more of him than his towering presence at negotiations where he wanted to make a bold impression. Rijj’s big break came when the shuttle craft they were aboard suffered an equipment malfunction, and found itself fighting a losing battle against the gravity well of the star they were attempting to slingshot around. Rijj understood enough of what was being said to understand that no one aboard had the skill to address the issue, and made an outlandish racket until his master sent for his protocol droid to see what the problem was with the Wookiee. Having no other option, his owner relented and allowed him to attempt to repair the sub-light drive on the ship. Rijj made short work of the problem, saving his master’s life and the lives of his crew, a fact that was not lost on him. When asked what his name was, the Wookiee grinned and replied ‘Rijj Bacc’. His own real name was unpronounceable to humans anyway, and the meaning of these words in Kashyyk held an ironic meaning for Rijj, even while they would serve to be a constant reminder of what the humans had named him in years to come. After some weeks of taking the time to get to know his savior, the merchant freed Rijj and offered him the job of personal pilot and bodyguard, a position he would hold for years until his former master became too old to have any interest in travel.
  Now, finding himself the master of his own destiny at last, Rijj has made a bid to join the Navy in the hopes that he can exact some repayment against the kinds of villains who killed his brethren and caused him so much pain. He would rather fly a TIE in Bothan space than be commander of a Victory class Star Destroyer somewhere else, simply in the hopes that he might be able to learn the fate of his old comrades, and bring about the demise of his old enemies. His ambition, though great, is not driven by his lust for power, glory, or honor. It is fueled only by his desire to put himself in a position to kill the most scum.
Personality
  Rijj is hard to get to know. Although polite, he won’t go out of his way to speak to non-Wookiees unless he respects them, or is required to, as is the case with superior officers and wingmates. He is loyal and trustworthy to his friends, and has little or no use for anyone else. He would rather have one or two close trusted friends than be liked by everyone, and is not interested in the opinions others have of him for the most part. Among Wookiees he is completely different, and is outgoing and friendly, perhaps even overly so, as his adventures have given him good reason to miss his home and his people.
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Trykon
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  RE: New Recruit
May 23, 2011 2:34:32 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Welcome to the Vast Empire Naval Academy, Crewman Ridgeback.

My name is Master Chief Petty Officer Wyl Trykon, and I'll be your Training Officer (TO) while you go through the Academy's Orientation program.  I'll be around to help get you acclimated to life in the Vast Empire (a process we call, "Basic Training"), the most important part of which is learning how to role-play as an Imperial starfighter pilot in an ongoing, collaboratively-written story (a set of skills which is taught in something we call, "Flight School").

With your first post here on the Naval Academy board, you've completed Imperial Initiation (well done) and I'm very pleased to see you've taken the initiative to begin Flight School as well.  Let's get you prepared for daily life as a pilot in a VE squadron.

Your biography is a great start, but I'd like you to offer a little more justification for your character's choice: why the Vast Empire?  Why join an Imperial faction (specifically this Imperial faction), after everything he's been through?  Once I understand his motivations a little better, you can go ahead and make your character's wiki page (and post a link to said page here), and then move on to Chapter 2 of Flight School.  Please note: here in the VE, we write stories in the third person, past tense; you should too, when you post to the Raptor story thread.

If you need further guidance, please send a Private Message with your questions to "Trykon" here on the ComNet, or go to the Naval Academy channel on IRC, which is #VENA, and make an inquiry of any staff member.  Good luck with your training, Crewman, and again, welcome to the Vast Empire.  I'm already impressed: keep it up!

Sincerely,

MCPO Wyl Trykon, your TO

Useful Links:
  •  The Vast Empire Naval Academy wiki page
  •  The wiki page for Basic Training
  •  Flight School: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3
  •  How-to-create-a-wiki-page Tutorial
  •  Java-based IRC chat
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  RE: New Recruit
May 23, 2011 8:32:28 PM    View the profile of Ridgeback 
http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/Ridgeback

*Auto translated from Wookiee to Galactic by ComNet protocol system*

Please peruse this when you get the opportunity. I seem to be unable to navigate to the correct option that allows me to format the script to a proper width for the viewable screen area. I suspect the computer systems used by you small furless ones differ in some fashion than what I am accustomed to.

Rijj
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  RE: New Recruit
May 23, 2011 8:38:10 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Good work on starting an ID Line and wiki page.  Let's see if we can troubleshoot the text-size issue...

The easiest way to create a character page, I find, is to click on the "Edit" tab on the page of a character you think looks good, and which you'd like to emulate.  Copy the code for that page, taking care NOT to change it in anyway.  Then paste that code into your character's page, and manually go through and edit the content.  That method will preserve the formatting/tables/etc., but allow you to plug in your own information.  See if that works for you, and feel free to use my wiki page (there's a link to it in my ComNet signature) as a template, if you like.

And, while I can't help but smile at the role-playing flourishes of your last post, I thought I'd mention that they aren't necessary during routine, OOC conversations.  Just fyi.
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  RE: New Recruit
May 23, 2011 9:48:15 PM    View the profile of Ridgeback 
http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/Ridgeback

Syntax is everything in wiki, editing will require some practice. Your wiki is impressive Trick, I found it a bit daunting, and was eager to get my flight suit on, so I opted for a much more basic design, more suited to the level of contribution required of a trainee. Thank you for the tip, I promise I didn't destroy anyone else's page in the process...I think.
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  RE: New Recruit
May 23, 2011 11:54:26 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
The page looks great, now.  Sorry to be daunting, but I was just trying to show you an example of a Character Info Box table along the side; looks like you found one that works for you, so, good!  The ID Line is fine for now, as well (you can drop the brackets for the individual acronyms, but it will all change once you finish Flight School, anyway, so for now I'm just glad to see you found the pages about ID Line creation).

You're clear to advance to Chapter 2 of Flight School.  Keep up the great work.

-Trick
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  RE: New Recruit
May 25, 2011 8:45:21 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
We've gone through and revised some of the Academy materials, for BT and FS, over the past couple of days.  You are clear to continue your training with Chapter 2 at your earliest convenience.  You've been placed as Gamma 2 in Raptor Squadron for your training cycle: flying my wing.
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