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February 18, 2011
3:39:19 PM
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Hello this is a Hello thread. |
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February 18, 2011
3:50:41 PM
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Greetings Recruit: I am Commodore Geordi Atrasin, Chief of Naval Operations for the Vast Empire Navy. On behalf of the Navy I welcome you aboard. You are about to embark on a journey of wonder and terror where few come out alive – Basic Training. JUST KIDDING! We’d like you to pop over to our Basic Training page on the VE Wiki and dive into the program. Later, you’ll report to Raptor Squadron where we’ll get a look at your writing skills and see if we can help you be even better. Once you finish up all that and your Trainer says you’re good to go, we’ll get you right into the heart of the action. Till then, buckle down, have fun, and don’t write angry. COMD Geordi Atrasin Chief of Naval Operations, Abrae http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Basic_TrainingCNO|COMD Atrasin|ISD Iron Duke|TF:A|1Flt|VEN|VE [=A=][=^SA^=][=^ME^=][=*MA*=][=FOCE=][=*TG*=][=*Eng*=][=*BO*=][MC1]{BWC}[NSR:1]{SAS}{SWC}(SOL)[LSM][VC:B][DSM]
Vacuus Ordo, Nex -Without Order, Death
All a man can betray is his conscience. - Joseph Conrad
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Athales
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February 19, 2011
3:19:20 PM
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Name: Athales Leviathan Gull Skull
Home world: Corell
Age: 18
Species: Corellian
Native Language: Corellian
Gender: Male
Skin Color: Dark tan
Height: 6 ft 0 in.
Weight: Average not thin but not heavy.
Hair Color: Dark brown to Black.
Facial Hair: none
Eye Color: Light Sea Blue.
Scars: none
Tattoos: none
Physical Description: Athales Leviathan Gull Skull is a litter taller than average, he is strong and muscular with long hair which he wears in a ponytail. He has the appearance of a young, strong, mischievous warrior.
Character Background: Athales was abandoned by his parents when he was young. He was raised by a group of orphans who roamed the streets. As he grew he became a good asset to his orphaned gangsters. He was the best thief and most skilled fighter of the ruffians he called family. Eventually the mob split up and each member went their own way. During his younger days Athales taught himself to read and write. He read has much as he could get his hands on. His lifelong dream has been to one day to be a pilot.
Personality: He tends to be a loner. Athales likes to be alone and does not like to interact with people much. He does not like to answer many questions and he does not like to talk about much. He does what is necessary when he needs to or when he wants to make progress.
ID Line: TRN/CRW/Athales/ISD Iron Duke or ICF-II Chrome Fox/TF/3Flt//SFC/VEN/VE |
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February 19, 2011
3:37:22 PM
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looks good, but a couple of questions...
-how was he an asset to the street kids?
-why does he want to be a pilot?
-why is he in the VE and not the NR? or some other organization?
-why is he a loner, why does he not talk much?
otherwise, great! flesh that out a bit then head over to Raptor Squadron and post on the running story. CNO|COMD Atrasin|ISD Iron Duke|TF:A|1Flt|VEN|VE [=A=][=^SA^=][=^ME^=][=*MA*=][=FOCE=][=*TG*=][=*Eng*=][=*BO*=][MC1]{BWC}[NSR:1]{SAS}{SWC}(SOL)[LSM][VC:B][DSM]
Vacuus Ordo, Nex -Without Order, Death
All a man can betray is his conscience. - Joseph Conrad
We few, we happy few. We band of brothers. - Henry V
May God have mercy upon my enemies, because I won't. - General George S. Patton Jr.
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February 19, 2011
9:15:48 PM
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He was an asset to the group because he was good at stealing so he could help provide food for the group. He was a good fighter so he could defend them against other gangsters and fight off the police.
Athales wants to be a pilot because he thinks it would be fun to fly through space or air and to be free from a hard life if only even for a little while at a time.
He was a loner because sometimes he felt like he was different then his comrades. He felt like he didn’t fit in with them. He was better then his fellow orphans. Even though his fellow gangsters liked him and were glad he was one of them he still did not feel like he belonged.
About the ID Line I was not sure about that. I tried to do what the Wiki said to do. I don't really know what he is in accordance to that. |
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February 19, 2011
10:18:01 PM
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close...
TRN/CRW/Athales/B-2/137:Raptor/Platform Cappadocious/VENA/VEN/VE
you are placed in Raptor B-2 CNO|COMD Atrasin|ISD Iron Duke|TF:A|1Flt|VEN|VE [=A=][=^SA^=][=^ME^=][=*MA*=][=FOCE=][=*TG*=][=*Eng*=][=*BO*=][MC1]{BWC}[NSR:1]{SAS}{SWC}(SOL)[LSM][VC:B][DSM]
Vacuus Ordo, Nex -Without Order, Death
All a man can betray is his conscience. - Joseph Conrad
We few, we happy few. We band of brothers. - Henry V
May God have mercy upon my enemies, because I won't. - General George S. Patton Jr.
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February 20, 2011
12:24:59 AM
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I am confused. Where do I go and what am I supposed to do. |
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February 20, 2011
4:16:19 PM
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go to the Raptor Squadron running story. read a post or two to familiarize yourself w/it and dive into writing. squadron topic discussion page http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/13175/page/11/story http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/14333/any questions, feel free to ask CNO|COMD Atrasin|ISD Iron Duke|TF:A|1Flt|VEN|VE [=A=][=^SA^=][=^ME^=][=*MA*=][=FOCE=][=*TG*=][=*Eng*=][=*BO*=][MC1]{BWC}[NSR:1]{SAS}{SWC}(SOL)[LSM][VC:B][DSM]
Vacuus Ordo, Nex -Without Order, Death
All a man can betray is his conscience. - Joseph Conrad
We few, we happy few. We band of brothers. - Henry V
May God have mercy upon my enemies, because I won't. - General George S. Patton Jr.
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February 21, 2011
1:28:46 PM
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I have to admit something. I have no idea how to start a story. I have never written one. At least not anything like the stories written here in the Comnet. I did not really understand what I was getting into when I signed up. Although I want to try to continue here and training but I need some help with writing a story. |
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February 21, 2011
4:48:39 PM
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Not a problem at all, I will have someone send you a comnet PM soon to help get you started, in The mean time, you may try searching the VE wiki. Specifically under flight school. We used to have an entire section to help you. Naval High Command
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March 2, 2011
12:56:32 AM
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I posted a story on the Overwhelming Odds post. I don't know what to do now. |
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March 2, 2011
8:33:53 AM
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You have passed for the post, your next order of business will be to create a wiki for your character. For an example of a wiki, you can use either mine or Rocketman's. http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/Slasherhttp://www.vastempire.com/wiki/Rocketmanif you need any help with creating a wiki for your character, you can go here: http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/Character_Page_Tutorial-CWO Slasher Executive Officer of the Academy XNT/CWO Rorran "Slasher" Gorma/PLT Cappadocious/VENA/VEN/VE
XO/CWO Rorran "Slasher" Gorma/S:137 "Raptor"/PLT Cappadocious/VENA/VEN/VE
SCAP/CWO Rorran "Slasher" Gorma/LCR Onyx/TF:R/2nd FLT/VEN/VE
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March 6, 2011
1:03:40 AM
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Athales' WikiI did not make this, I'm just putting it here for him.  Don't kill me, I'm just being a good wingman. -SCPO Amacuse EDIT: I did edit it a bit... just the table part and added his rank. Please don't kill me.
Senior Chief Petty Officer Cayden "Amacuse" Tavers
Squadron Commander of 153rd Vast Imp. Fighter Squadron Regents
SC/SCPO Amacuse/A-1/S:153 Regents/W:58 Javelin/ICF-II Chrome Fox/TF:R/2FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=AE=) (=*SAE*=) [MC:2] [LSM] [GCM]
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March 6, 2011
10:04:32 AM
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Nicely done, athales. You pass. Naval High Command
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March 6, 2011
11:02:44 AM
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you've been placed in Nightshrike as Alpha 2 and promoted to leading crewman. congratulations. Naval High Command
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March 8, 2011
6:03:51 AM
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I'll be wrapping up as a Nightshrike in-story soon, Athales. Good luck with the 'shrikes, and don't disgrace Alpha-2!  "Don't look for the difficulty in every opportunity; find the opportunity in every difficulty." -- Wyl Trykon FM/PO2 Wyl "Trick" Trykon/A-2/S:82 Nightshrike/W:245 Scimitar/ISD Iron Duke/TF:A/1FL/SFC/VEN/VE/ [SoA ]/ (=*AE* =)(=^TG^ =)FM/PO2 Wyl "Trick" Trykon/A-2/S:82 Nightshrike/W:245 Scimitar/ISD Iron Duke/TF:A/1FL/SFC/VEN/VE/[SoA]/(=*AE*=)(=^TG^=)TO/PO2 Wyl Trykon/PLT Cappadocious/VENA/VEN/VE/[SoA]/(=*AE*=)(=^TG^=)
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