Welcome to the Vast Empire Imperial Navy, Trykon. A trainer will be replying to this topic very soon.

While you're waiting, I'll direct you to the information you'll need.

You'll first be asked to create a biography for your character that you'll use during your career here in the Vast Empire Navy. That information can be found here. Look under "Chapter I" and you'll find some information on what's required for completion.

If you have any questions, please post them here and I, a trainer, or another member of the Naval High Command will answer as soon as possible.

It's a pleasure to be here, Lieutenant Rocket, and thank you (and Admiral StOrMz) for allowing me to begin training.

As ordered, I've prepared a bio for my character and an ID Line, both properly formatted (or so I hope).  Also as ordered, I'm posting them in their original draft form here in this thread, for your review (I will forgo adopting the ID Line formally until it has been cleared through proper command channels).

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Wyl Trykon

Physical Appearance
Homeworld: Kuat
Age: Born in 19 BBY (the year of the Empire’s founding), he is 27 years old in 8 ABY, and 28 years old in 9 ABY
Species: Human
Native Language: Galactic Basic
Gender: male
Skin Color: pale
Height: 1.8 meters (5 feet, 10 inches)
Weight: 57 kilograms (125 pounds)
Hair Color: black
Facial Hair: none
Eye Color: grey-green
Scars: none
Tattoos: none
   
Physical Description:
    Wyl Trykon is a slender, wiry young man with grey-green eyes and jet-black hair.  Perpetually clean-shaven and of middling height, Wyl is often mistaken for a teenager, until observers notice his deportment.  His demeanor is almost regal: he possesses an uncommon grace and agility, matched by an obvious pride and self-confidence.  Trykon’s inherent nobility is reinforced by his aloof, precise manner of speaking, and by his fastidious standards of neatness in dress and personal grooming.

Character’s Background:
    Wyl Trykon was born on Kuat, in the year 19 BBY, the only son of a working-class family.  With few real options available within the rigid Kuati class structure, Trykon’s parents dutifully trained their son for his eventual vocation as a telbun: one of the mannered gene-donor tutor-slaves so desired by the matriarchs of the great merchant families.
    Naturally handsome, intrinsically talented, and a voracious learner, Trykon was driven to fully exploit every opportunity afforded him.  His hard work – and his parents’ – was well-rewarded when he scored in the 99th percentile for his coming-of-age tests.  Hours after the scores were released, his mother was already negotiating pricing with one of the most powerful women on Kuat; everything was proceeding according to plan.
    But although he was purchased by a prestigious family for an exorbitant sum, Trykon was still not satisfied with his accomplishments, and found little joy in his new life as a telbun.  When his mistress eventually began dealing with the Rebel Alliance as part of her political maneuvering against the other great families of Kuat, Trykon sensed an unprecedented chance to transcend the class structure of his home planet entirely, and he took it: in exchange for betraying his mistress to the Imperial authorities, Trykon secured the Moff’s support for his own bid to take over the woman’s financial holdings in his own name.  By carefully exploiting Imperial prejudices, Trykon became not only the first talbun to join the wealthy merchant class, but also the first male head-of-family in Kuati history.
    Kuat was the scene of many significant events in the next years, and throughout them all, Trykon methodically secured his personal control over his “family” and built up its fortune, in direct partnership with the Imperial authorities.  Then, suddenly, the New Republic stole Kuat and its shipyards from the Empire, and destroyed Wyl Trykon’s whole world.  Now a refugee, Trykon is searching the Galaxy with the same quiet, grim determination which has served him throughout his life, looking for a way to rebuild what he has lost, to reclaim his world, and to be revenged against the rebels.  In short, he’s looking to join the Empire.

Personality:
    Wyl is a serious, reserved, contemplative sort, with mannerisms which often read as prim or haughty or even rude to those who don’t know him well.  But those who choose (or those who are forced) to spend significant periods of time with him discover that underneath his seemingly cold, humorless, priggish persona there is a fierce passion, a withering wit, and a faithful friend, generous in word and deed.

ID Line (couldn't find the reason for the lower-case "m" in front of SSD Atrus, but included it as per the wiki article's instructions):
TRN/CRW Trykon/W:1 Phoenix/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1 Flt/SFC/VEN/VE

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Thank you again for this opportunity, and I look forward to your review, Lieutenant.

-Crewman Trykon

Thank you for the ID Line help and assignment, sir.  One question: am I replying to the thread's topic (the simulation exercise) only, or also to the previous posts (others' runs in the simulation)?

just a quick note: we are currently in 11ABY

I posted in the training thread @ http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/14333/page/0/.  The training manual mentions creating a character page on the wiki; should I get that underway?

As ordered, I've entered my biographical information into the VENA records.  The entry may be found at http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Wyl_Trykon.  I await review and further instructions.

Corrections made, as ordered.  Thank you for the help, and the encouragement.  I await further instructions, and clearance to continue training.

This is a bit late in coming, however, your report is excellent.  You have passed basic training and have been assigned to the CR-90 Hammer for the time being.

Congratulations Senior Crewman Trykon.