Hunter-Morrell
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July 26, 2010
11:20:49 AM
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Drac wrote: If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask one of the squadron's vets.
/me walks out Oh wait. Were you talking about me?  NLO/CWO Hunter Morrell/W:1 "Javelin"/Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE(=A=)(=SA=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=) [CBV.][NS-1][SWC][BRC][VC:B][SoL][NSR]
 Everything is possible. But not everything is impossible.
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Drac
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July 26, 2010
11:27:23 AM
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Hunter-Morrell wrote:Drac wrote: If you ever have any questions, feel free to ask one of the squadron's vets.
/me walks out Oh wait. Were you talking about me?
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Atrasin
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RE: Tuk'ata Topic
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July 26, 2010
4:35:42 PM
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oooooo SNAP
hunter got pwned! CO|ADM Geordi "Driver" Atrasin/HFS Geordi I/[=A=][=^SA^=][=^ME^=][=*MA*=][=FOCE=][MC1]{BWC}[NSR:1]{SAS}{SWC}(SOL)
Vacuus Ordo, Nex -Without Order, Death
All a man can betray is his conscience. - Joseph Conrad
We few, we happy few. We band of brothers. - Henry V
May God have mercy upon my enemies, because I won't. - General George S. Patton Jr.
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Hunter-Morrell
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July 26, 2010
4:51:59 PM
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Good, because I hate answering questions
Also, Driver. Its only a pwn if I let it be. It didn't bother me, so therefore it isn't a pwn. NLO/CWO Hunter Morrell/W:1 "Javelin"/Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE(=A=)(=SA=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=) [CBV.][NS-1][SWC][BRC][VC:B][SoL][NSR]
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July 26, 2010
6:02:50 PM
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FM/SCW Lampyridae/A-4/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/ TF:R/2 Flt/SFC /VEN/VE[SoA]
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Avalar
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July 26, 2010
7:41:45 PM
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Band camp is going to make me less active. Such things make me sad.
And yes, Driver, I think I am being replaced. FM/LCRW Avalar/A-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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Amacuse
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July 26, 2010
7:47:36 PM
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No one is being replaced. Senior Chief Petty Officer Cayden "Amacuse" Tavers
FM/SCPO Amacuse/Γ-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=AE=) (=*SAE*=) [IG]
FL/SCPO Amacuse/B-1/S:137 Raptor/W:46 Defiance/ PLF Saratoga/TF:TH/3FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=AE=) (=*SAE*=) [IG]
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July 26, 2010
7:57:37 PM
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Suuuuuuuure. Not believing you.
And I am both excited and somewhat nervous to post for Asteroid 19 when my turn comes. My faith in my writing skills on this board has been steadily declining. FM/LCRW Avalar/A-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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Willtconq
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July 26, 2010
8:17:30 PM
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-(William the Conquerer)- Captain of the Overlord King of PPC 20,000 clicks and counting "Anyone who fights us is either stupid or on our enemy's payroll. Killing the latter is just business; killing the former is a favor to the universe." - Urdnot Wrex, Mass Effect "Have to trust someone to be betrayed. I never did." - Cpt John Price FM/1LT Willtconq/B-3/S:153 "Rhegent's Reign"/W:58 "Javelin"/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN /VE SCAP/1LT Xunic "Ash" Zathron/S-MC Tempest/TF:W3/5Flt/VEN/VE(=*A*=) (=*SA*=)(=^MA^=) [NC][LoM][SoV][VC:G][CBV][MC:1][AM][NSR:5][BWC][SWC][SoL][CO]  |
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July 26, 2010
8:31:04 PM
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I am easily intimidated by other writers. FM/LCRW Avalar/A-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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Hunter-Morrell
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July 26, 2010
8:36:32 PM
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Don't be. Everyone has their own personal writing ability. Just because you can't write long posts like other people can, doesn't mean you should feel intimidated. Just look at it this way. Any idiot can write words, but only a true writer can come up with a story. And that is exactly what you are, a true writer. So do what you do best.
Another little tip that ties into this is "Quality over quantity." NLO/CWO Hunter Morrell/W:1 "Javelin"/Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE(=A=)(=SA=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=) [CBV.][NS-1][SWC][BRC][VC:B][SoL][NSR]
Everything is possible. But not everything is impossible.
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Avalar
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July 26, 2010
8:40:15 PM
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Oh I can write a lot. It's not that. It's the fact that I have no prior knowledge on any topic.... that's why. FM/LCRW Avalar/A-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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July 26, 2010
8:47:09 PM
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Ask questions then. We'll be glad to help  NLO/CWO Hunter Morrell/W:1 "Javelin"/Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE(=A=)(=SA=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=) [CBV.][NS-1][SWC][BRC][VC:B][SoL][NSR]
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Avalar
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July 26, 2010
8:52:35 PM
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I feel loved. Thanks. XD
Honestly, if I were to show any of you guys my writing, you'd see it's all based on usually magic or science experiments. Writing anything in terms of military (Navy, army, etc.) and Star Wars is out of my norm. That's partially why I'm here. FM/LCRW Avalar/A-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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Lampyridae
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July 26, 2010
9:58:53 PM
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Hey, its not like any of us are pros at this. If we were, we'd have published scads of books and be swimming in moolah. This is clearly not the case...
Going outside your comfort zone is fun and challenging, which is what writing should always be. FUN AND AWESOME! D:<
The best way to hone a skill is in a group, feeding and learning off your comrades. Take any advice, be fearless, and ask questions! (Like me, the infernal endless-question-machine. XD )
Show us what you got! FM/SCW Lampyridae/A-4/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/ TF:R/2 Flt/SFC /VEN/VE[SoA]
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Avalar
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July 26, 2010
10:15:59 PM
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Heh, I'll try my best. ;D
And if anyone has been barraged by questions from me it's Amacuse. FM/LCRW Avalar/A-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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July 26, 2010
11:08:24 PM
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And just for your information my posts are usually around five hundred words which is the minimum though ever once and while I will right a monster post, the only reason I write that little is because it's hard for me to stay on topic and not go why out there for my post's. My point is if you post on the story and its above five hundred words no one is gonna hate you for that. Or something like that its early here and I just woke up so...
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Atrasin
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July 27, 2010
12:09:53 AM
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Ya'll need to chill.
i've read some of all of your samples, you're good. if you don't wanna believe me i can point you to a dozen former members posts that'd make your toenails curl...
also, do a search on some of the senior members...look at their older posts. we all learn, we all grow, we all evolve.
ok, that's my inspirational speach...now drink.
/me sets up shots of the Green Stuff for all (cept Avvy...she don't want none) CO|ADM Geordi "Driver" Atrasin/HFS Geordi I/[=A=][=^SA^=][=^ME^=][=*MA*=][=FOCE=][MC1]{BWC}[NSR:1]{SAS}{SWC}(SOL)
Vacuus Ordo, Nex -Without Order, Death
All a man can betray is his conscience. - Joseph Conrad
We few, we happy few. We band of brothers. - Henry V
May God have mercy upon my enemies, because I won't. - General George S. Patton Jr.
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Amacuse
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July 27, 2010
12:48:18 AM
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Neither does Ammy, thank you for the offer though. Senior Chief Petty Officer Cayden "Amacuse" Tavers
FM/SCPO Amacuse/Γ-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=AE=) (=*SAE*=) [IG]
FL/SCPO Amacuse/B-1/S:137 Raptor/W:46 Defiance/ PLF Saratoga/TF:TH/3FL/SFC/VEN/VE (=AE=) (=*SAE*=) [IG]
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Lampyridae
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July 27, 2010
2:56:43 AM
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Thanks, I'll take one. FM/SCW Lampyridae/A-4/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/ TF:R/2 Flt/SFC /VEN/VE[SoA]
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Willtconq
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July 27, 2010
4:04:30 AM
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drink up me hearties, yo ho. -(William the Conquerer)- Captain of the Overlord King of PPC 20,000 clicks and counting "Anyone who fights us is either stupid or on our enemy's payroll. Killing the latter is just business; killing the former is a favor to the universe." - Urdnot Wrex, Mass Effect "Have to trust someone to be betrayed. I never did." - Cpt John Price FM/1LT Willtconq/B-3/S:153 "Rhegent's Reign"/W:58 "Javelin"/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE SCAP/1LT Xunic "Ash" Zathron/S-MC Tempest/TF:W3/5Flt/VEN/VE(=*A*=) (=*SA*=)(=^MA^=) [NC][LoM][SoV][VC:G][CBV][MC:1][AM][NSR:5][BWC][SWC][SoL][CO] |
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July 27, 2010
7:19:43 AM
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Some words of wisdom from the old man... I like this. Keep your heads up and just write. Not all of us are here to critisize you, though, there are some that will lay down if they feel the need. Each and every one of you has it within yourselves to be great writers. It just takes practice.
So... go post!  Line Captain Jaden Khaar
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July 27, 2010
8:11:44 AM
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May I also mention that I am extremely competitive? FM/LCRW Avalar/A-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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Willtconq
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July 27, 2010
11:22:01 AM
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competition is good, it's great. we love competitiveness. -(William the Conquerer)- Captain of the Overlord King of PPC 20,000 clicks and counting "Anyone who fights us is either stupid or on our enemy's payroll. Killing the latter is just business; killing the former is a favor to the universe." - Urdnot Wrex, Mass Effect "Have to trust someone to be betrayed. I never did." - Cpt John Price FM/1LT Willtconq/B-3/S:153 "Rhegent's Reign"/W:58 "Javelin"/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE SCAP/1LT Xunic "Ash" Zathron/S-MC Tempest/TF:W3/5Flt/VEN/VE(=*A*=) (=*SA*=)(=^MA^=) [NC][LoM][SoV][VC:G][CBV][MC:1][AM][NSR:5][BWC][SWC][SoL][CO] |
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July 27, 2010
3:17:52 PM
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Line Captain Jaden Khaar
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Bacredi
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July 27, 2010
8:35:34 PM
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Atrasin wrote:i've read some of all of your samples, you're good. if you don't wanna believe me i can point you to a dozen former members posts that'd make your toenails curl...
http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/11315/page/3/ -- 15th post down
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Amacuse
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July 27, 2010
8:41:54 PM
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Bacredi, that may be the most interesting post I have ever had the pleasure to read... I couldn't even get past paragraph 1 before getting frustrated... Master Chief Petty Officer Cayden "Amacuse" Tavers
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July 27, 2010
9:39:19 PM
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you didn't just make my nails curl, you made my eyes bleed! T.T the rivers of blood. -(William the Conquerer)- Captain of the Overlord King of PPC 20,000 clicks and counting "Anyone who fights us is either stupid or on our enemy's payroll. Killing the latter is just business; killing the former is a favor to the universe." - Urdnot Wrex, Mass Effect "Have to trust someone to be betrayed. I never did." - Cpt John Price FM/1LT Willtconq/B-3/S:153 "Rhegent's Reign"/W:58 "Javelin"/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE SCAP/1LT Xunic "Ash" Zathron/S-MC Tempest/TF:W3/5Flt/VEN/VE(=*A*=) (=*SA*=)(=^MA^=) [NC][LoM][SoV][VC:G][CBV][MC:1][AM][NSR:5][BWC][SWC][SoL][CO] |
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July 27, 2010
11:37:59 PM
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You got further than I did. I only read the first... sentence? Is that even a sentence???? FM/LCRW Avalar/A-2/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:58 Javelin/VSD Dead Gun/TF:R/2Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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July 28, 2010
12:23:33 AM
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Isa Walks into the Tuk'ata common area, and Scans the room taking in his new Squad. Taking them all in as Bounty hunters often do their prey.
In a calm cold gritty Voice," Isa Reporting as ordered ".
Isa Has 3 Rather large Duffle bags with him. FM/CRW Isa/Raptor7/S:137 Raptor/W:46"Defiance"/PLF Saratoga/TF:TH/3 Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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