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  Workng hours (Vaas Lowrider CD)
April 12, 2009 12:11:51 AM    View the profile of TK_421 
Chapter one:

Vaas woke one illustrious day, the sun cast its beautiful blinding rays across Naboo, and Vaas’ birthday was three days earlier and today was something special within his humble Naboonian community. When a youth turns fourteen, they are expected to visit the youth job community centre.
Vaas’ biggest dream was to join the Empire, he had posters of the armors, and the emblems even models of the ships and vehicles. He stepped out of bed onto the carpeted flooring. He walked towards the door as it slid open for him, Vaas walked down the hallway, past his parents room and past is brother Baura’s room. He entered a small space, which had existing inside: Sink, Toilet and a Bathtub. He lent over the sink, and unleashed the water for a wash. After he finished he traveled back to his room.
Vaas opened up his drawers and pulled out some fine looking clothes, he enjoyed being in a rich family, but never gave it much thought. He looked out the window over the town, hypnotized by the sudden beauty no other place can give.

“Vaas breakfast is ready” exclaimed a feminine voice of a woman downstairs

Vaas hurried down the stairs into the dining room, where he met his parents and his brother around a metal table.

“Puke, I bet your going to get a lame job” teased Baura, he hated it when he called him puke, it was unnecessary.

His brother was a chubby, young lad, only three years older then Vaas, making him seventeen, he had bleak black hair, and was minuscule compared to other people his age. However, he made up for it with his extraordinary stocky build.

“Frack off” replied Vaas

“Now Now boys, and Vaas not that language near the whole family eh?” reprimanded His mother, Catherine. She was no bigger then Vaas. However, she was smart, and very good at the dishes. Mainly a reason why the family loved her so much.

“Sorry mother” said the brothers in unison

“Vaas have you got to visit the job centre today?” asked Jonnie, Vaas' father. Jonnie, was a stocky fellow like Baura, he also had brutal strength, and also something Baura didn't: cleverness and common sence.

“Indeed I do dad” replied Vaas excitedly

“I will walk with you” said Baura

“Fine” growled Vaas

“When have you got to be there for?” wondered Jonnie

“Fifteen minutes” replied Vaas

“Don’t be late, head out now” said Catherine

Vaas finished the rest of his breakfast and lead the way out of the house, and down the lush grass towards a large and sprawling building. A bunch of other fourteen year olds were loitering around the entrance. Vaas entered the building to wait.


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Quick note: Catherine = Mother. Baura = Brother. Jonnie = Father. and Vaas is me TK_421
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  RE: Workng hours (Vaas Lowrider CD)
April 21, 2009 1:12:24 PM    View the profile of TK_421 
Chapter Two  "First impressions"




Vaas lingered in the dank halls; from the outside it was incredibly.striking. However, the boys were miraculously deceived as they stood inside. Vaas and Baura peered around the halls, glancing at thee careless vandalism on this once exquisite building.

“Must be in there?” assumed Baura, pointing his white, chubby fingers towards a room

“I will check it out” mumbled Vaas

“Oh? Aren’t you the fastidious one?” laughed Baura

“I may be fastidious, but for one not careless” replied Vaas

Laughter erupted in the halls; the echoes could be heard throughout the building complex.

“I want out of this shabby building, see you back home little bro” expressed Baura

Vaas peeked around the corner as Baura left the tumbledown building, he walked through into the room, where a dark figure stood, emotionlessly staring towards him.

Vaas coughed, “I am Vaas Lowrider” 

“Great take a seat” coughed the man

Vaas was slightly nervous, and scared.
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