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  Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokerace
March 4, 2008 7:25:52 PM    View the profile of jokerace 
my boots clinked as i walked down the corridor my nametag shining JOE REGAN it read.i came down the corridor until i found an elevator and waited for it.finally it came down " bout flipping time" i mumbled to myself as a group of soldiers walked out.life on the flagship was boring it was just patrol, after patrol, after flipping patrol.i walked inside the elevato and punched the button for the 3rd floor. "probably another patrol" i said outloud.the 3rd floor was the briefing room. "like we need a briefing for patrol duty" i mumbled again.the elevator dinged and opened to allow a group of soldiers in and me out.i came to the door that read in big bold letters BRIEFING ROOM. i swipped my keycard in the slot and the door slid oppened and i found my partner already there.
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 4, 2008 7:45:12 PM    View the profile of DanteDevant 
Dante leaned back into his chair with a cig lit up in his mouth, he saw the man who was going on patrol with him and gave him a quick nod. He heard the Lt. clearing his throat, "Okay men you will be patrol a good distance off of the ship, that means if you encounter any opposition you will be on your own for quite a while so be on your toes. That is all so good luck men," he ended with a salute and gathered his thngs and propmtly left us to get on it.

"So whats your name?" Dante asked getting out of his seat and walking over to shake the hand of his wingman, "The names Dante, Dante Devant"
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 4, 2008 8:03:29 PM    View the profile of jokerace 
"Names Joe, Joe Regan" i said shaking Dante's hand.as we walked towards the elevator i decided to stay quiet i never got that attached to my wingmen.dante asked "so what did you do before the navy?" this took me completely by surprise, none of his wingmen asked him any questions like that. " I was
a farmer as a young man, then my father struck a mineral deposit and i became a miner" i said a little akwardly.the elevator arrived and i punched the button for the hanger.as they got there he saw dante go to the other side of the hanger. i walked to my ship, a standard tie fighter , i streaked my hands over the spray painted words on my fighter STAR BULLET they read.i opened up the cockpit and took out my suit and started putting it on
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 4, 2008 8:03:29 PM    View the profile of jokerace 
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 4, 2008 8:25:06 PM    View the profile of DanteDevant 
Dante walked out of the elevator and walked over to his own Tie Interceptor, Double Eagle, that was the name that resided on the port side of the ship. It was painted in gold bold letters, slightly crooked. Besdies that the ship was unpainted, for now atleast. Dante walked over to the cockpit and entered the craft, it took him a minute (being a little to tall for a standard pilot) to get in. Once inside the ship he sat down and put on his helmet, where his comlink was stored. He opened the Alpha Patrol Channel and said, "Joe you there? Are you ready for take off yet?"

Dante got the ok from Joe and he turned on his ship, starting the initial lift off procedures. He looked out of his view port and saw Joe doing the same. He pulled up on his controls and slowly proceeded out of the hanger bay. He checked his scanner and saw the blip of Joe's ship flying behind him at about the same altitude. "Ok Joe we have have to turn Starboard in a second and go run through the astroid belt so lets take it slow and easy ok? I don't feel like dieing my first time out"
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 4, 2008 8:52:39 PM    View the profile of jokerace 
As me and my partners TIEs entered the asteroid field i started to feel in closed, i didn't like it."come on we've got to get out of this thick part of the asteroid field".i received a yes from Dante and we continued until we found a clearing.i got a feeling in my gut something was going to happen.suddenly 4 blips appeared on radar "we're surrounded!" i shouted over the com."quick the immelman" Dante suggested.the TIEs jerked and flew upwards and then spread out in separate directions. there first battle had started.....
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 4, 2008 9:13:47 PM    View the profile of DanteDevant 
Dante pulled out of the Immelman and checked his back sensor, there was two on each of them. Dante dipped down and flew past on of the assailants that was trying to come from below. He quickly pulled back on the controls to pull up into a loop. He saw on coming right at him, about the same altitude, and Dante couldn't pass the chance up; so he released a couple of cannon blasts. Both missed but it did force the attack to turn off him, Dante smiled as he continued straight ahead to try and help Joe. After a couple seconds he heard a beeping sound and turned his head to the right, his lock-on alarm was sounding, meaning he was about to get hit by a missile. "Shit!" Dante screamed as he tried another Immelman. The fighter behind him anticipated it and turned up with him and released that missiles.

The missiles missed by an inch and sailed past him into the void of space. "Yes" Dante shouted to soon, the one he forced to turn earlier was now back and coming straight down on him. Dante saw it on his sensor to late, the pilot launched a burst of cannon shots at him. Dante couldn't pull out of it and took a hit in the wing, the shot only glanced and cause no vital damage to the wing. Dante felt relieved as he heard no alarms go off, "Joe how are you doing? Where are you I don't see you on radar." He knew he couldn't wait for a response so he dived down and turned left into one of the enemy fighters. The fighter didn't notice him so he was able to get into a tailing position. He shot a couple of rounds, but they all missed.

The fighter pulled up at an angle slightly, the fool was trying to out speed a Tie Interceptor. Dante laughed as he dipped his nose down and raised it back up after a second, using the yo-yo straight pursuit he learned at the academy. He used the speed and shaper angle he received to pull in closer to the fighter. He fired another shot off, this time nailing him in his right wing. The fighter pulled off and ran deeper into the asteroids trying to escape, Run fool Run! Dante was about to turn to chase him when he saw a blip on his back sensor, damn lucky bastard. Your lucky I have your friend to deal with. He dived straight down and went under an asteroid pulling up on the other side. The pursuer was crazy enough to go after him and broke off giving Dante a chance again. He felt odd though, he hadn't seen Joe in a long time so he decided to call him on his com again, "Joe you there? Joe where are you man?"
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 4, 2008 9:29:44 PM    View the profile of jokerace 
as i pulled out of the immelman i saw dante on the radar but also 2 bandits headind for me."sure hope he can handle it" i mumbled as the 2 bandits started to pursue me.one locked on with a missle, i changed my course to head towards an asteroid. "little further" the missle was 1500 meters away. "further" 1200 "further"
900 "further" 200, i jerked my TIE upward as i attempted the vertical reverse. the missles flew under me and hit the asteroid."haha whos awesome" i looked on my radar and saw them still pursuing me. i completely stopped my engines as the bandits flew infront of me "take this ya turd" i locked on and fired a missle at them,hit.the other one preformed a virtical reverse and headed straight back towards me. i  flipped my TIE over and he started a pursuit.i preformed a barrel roll and got behind the bandit. "take this!" i said as i shot both of his wings of and flew back to dante.
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 5, 2008 1:15:40 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
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Gentlemen: excellent.  I'll only note that your commanders may ask for things, eventually, in the way of longer posts, but getting you to post was the primary objective: thanks for picking up on the suggestions and remember to report at the end of the week, pilots.
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 5, 2008 4:25:59 AM    View the profile of Ibram Tyrol 
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Also Joker, i would like to note that we do not write our stories in the first person. It's always in Third Person, i.e. "Ibram did this" "Ibram Said" etc....

In personal stories such as this, you could probably get away with it since it is your own story, however in the squad topics, please keep it third person.

Well done guys, as you were.
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 5, 2008 6:08:02 AM    View the profile of Rutian 
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Um, I'm not quite sure if that is actually enforced here in the Navy either. In the Army we have started to allow for it, though I know the Army and the Navy keep separate, it kind seems a little wrong to discourage people from writing how they want to, especially if they can successfully write in first person which I personally find harder than third person.
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March 5, 2008 6:45:13 AM    View the profile of Ibram Tyrol 
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I appreciate your candour Rutian, but that is how i have interpreted the state of things.

As i said, if they want to write first-person in their personal stories, that is fine - however, since everyone else tends to write in the Third-person, it would detrimental no to follow that trend, as it breaks the flow of the story, in my opinion.

If a higher up wants to correct me on this, then i will gladly back down, but until then, I'm going to gently insist that, at least for squad stories, you stick the third person.
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 5, 2008 3:17:03 PM    View the profile of DanteDevant 
Shazam wrote:
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Gentlemen: excellent.  I'll only note that your commanders may ask for things, eventually, in the way of longer posts, but getting you to post was the primary objective: thanks for picking up on the suggestions and remember to report at the end of the week, pilots.
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I know they are short but we did that becuase we are doing chain posting and if you look at the time most of that was in one hour or so of posting
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March 5, 2008 4:21:11 PM    View the profile of Ibram Tyrol 
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That's all well and good Dante, but here in the Navy we still insist on a minimum of 250 words per post, chain or not. Preferably longer then that, but 250 is the absolute minimum.

Don't worry though, your both new recruits in the Navy, so we're not going to chew you out or anything.

keep up the good work
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 5, 2008 7:13:03 PM    View the profile of Jegora Fal 
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I don't know Ibram...I'm a hardass =P
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March 6, 2008 3:00:00 AM    View the profile of Ibram Tyrol 
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You're a lot of things jeg
"I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."

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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 6, 2008 7:22:47 PM    View the profile of DanteDevant 
Dante barrel rolled over to his left side as the bandit behind him fired off a quick burst of cannon rounds. "Damn you bastard!" Dante yelled as he dipped down and pushed down on his acceleration peddle. It was no good he couldn't get fast enough in the belt to escape him and he knew it too. He weaved in and out of the asteroids trying to shake him that way. Even though the Tie had better maneuverability Dante's skills weren't enough to shake the fighter. Damn he must be a vet. in this type of field cause I can't shake him no matter what I try. He flew straight threw two asteroids, and lucky for him the bandits ship was to big to get through the gap so Dante slowed down and turned around to fight him head on.

"Die bastard die," Dante shouted as he thumbed the cannon fire button and sent a round flying back at his attacker. The shot missed barely, Dante noticed his aim was improving quiet a bit. Dante quickly turned to the right and flew away before the bandit could aim for an attack. Dante was now speeding to the right as the bandit dived under the asteroids he couldn't fly through and turned to follow Dante. Dante knew he had to do something fast or he would be where he was just a minute ago. Thinking fast there was only one maneuver he could think of that would possibly get him behind his attack.

Dante slowed down and let the bandit gain a couple hundred yards before returning to normal speed. He broke into a turning roll, which was followed of course, and as he came out of it he pulled up and did another turning roll, causing him to lose a lot of speed. The bandit was expecting this type of maneuver so he didn't follow Dante into the roll. Laughing Dante straightened out as he saw the fighter right in front of him through his front port glass. He flipped the switch to the left of the firing button and turned his fire mode to linked and held down the button and shot off about ten shots. He guessed three of them hit home and the bandit went crashing into a asteroid. "Damn I was hoping to see exactly where I had hit. Oh well thats my first kill at least"

As Dante returned to where the bandits first attack he saw Joe coming his way from the opposite direction, he called into his comlink, "Where have you been Joe? I got me my first kill, the other one ran after I hit his wing. How did you fair?"
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March 6, 2008 8:16:13 PM    View the profile of jokerace 
i heard Dante over the comlink "blew them out of existence!" i responded "come on lets get back to the hanger" but Dante protested "but one got away" "hes probably alerted his comrades now lets go" i told him.as we flew back to the ship i said "finally a little excitement" no answer. as we landed i turned off my engines and put the safety on. i looked over to see Dante doing the same.as i got out of the cockpit i went ran to Dante who was already heading to the elevator."well looks like time for debriefing" i mumbled to myself "you say something Joe?" Dante asked. "no,nothing" i said. as the elevator opened i walked inside and pressed the button for the 3rd floor. music started playing "well woopty-flipping-doo they got music now?" as the elevator went up the music changed "ummm..... did it just get MORE annoying?"i said, then the elevator dinged and opened. "FINALLY!" i yelled startling the people outsid. "come on time for de-briefing" i told dante as we walked to the de-briefing/briefing room.
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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 9, 2008 2:38:30 PM    View the profile of DanteDevant 
Dante and Joe walked into the room where Captain Lorgrez was sitting at the head of the table on the opposite side of the room. "Greetings gentlemen, I see that you both made it back in one piece," he smiled and gestured for us to sit down, "So you two what was it like, have a taste of the real deal?"

"It was awesome! I blew two bandits out of existence, I shot one down with a missile then pulled up and rolled behind the second and blasted his wing to hell..." Joe said getting excited.

Oh brother, here he goes again.

"That is all nice and well Joe but calm down, though I do know myself what the euphoria of a fight is like," he replied with a vain smile, "What about you Devant what happened?"

"Well sir while preceding into the asteroid belt on patrol we were ambushed by four bandits, in unknown fighter craft. We both pulled up into immelmens to get out of their firing path. We both pulled out into different directions and two of the fighters followed both of us. I was able to hit one in the wing, but unfortunately it escaped, while the other I maneged to utilize a High G-Barrel Roll and switch positions with him..."

"Dante I'm sure the captain doesn't want to hear all this..."

"Oh no Joe this is a wonderful response in a debriefing, go on Mr. Devant"

"Yes sir, I manged to fire off a burst and decommission the fighter and the pilot sir" Dante finished

"Very good men, we will send a heavier patrol to go find where the bandits came from and destroy their base of operations thanks to you," we saluted the captain and got up to leave and he added, "Oh and men go have a round of drinks or something to celebrate, you both got your first kill today"


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  RE: Taste of the Real Deal (DanteDevant and Jokera
March 28, 2008 6:03:27 PM    View the profile of jokerace 
Dante and i waited patiently for our waiter in the small bar set up on the ship. there were sounds of merriment and joy all around us, the clinking of glasses and the unmistakable slur of drunken speech. our waiter, a pilot, Susan i think came over to us. she had this job to earn a little extra cash while on the ship. "so what'll you to have" she asked "i think ill have a pint of correllian ale" Dante replied "Same" i said. she walked away to get our drinks. Dante lit up a cigarette "you know, i swear your gonna die from those blasted things" i told him. he merely shrugged it of and took a long puff from his cigarette. when our drink arrived i held up my mug and said "i propose a toast to our first kills." Dante clinked his glass against mine as the celebration ensued.


A young, aspiring pilot, Johnson i think his name was, come over to our table and took took a seat next to me. "so are you guys celebrating anything, i saw you make a toast so I'm just wondering?" he asked. " actually, yes we're celebrating our first kills" Dante replied. "really, that is sooo cool." he said. "seriously stop sounding like a five year old and buck up." i replied. "sorry" he said. "so what brings you to the bar tonight" i asked him. his face turned from happy and cheerful to sad and brooding. " its my mom, i just got news that she's died ......." he said sadly. " i feel bad for you...." i said. " don't worry, it will be ok." he got up and walked away
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