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Raigen
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  New Character
March 6, 2007 3:29:48 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
I decided to remove Raigen from the Vast Empire, this you know. What you don't know is that I have decided to stay with the Navy as a pilot, just with a new character.

Casca Phennir a.k.a. "Black Curse"

I need some information on switching characters.
1. How do I?
2. Will I retain my rank, payscale, and medals?
3. Do I have to go through the VENA again?

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[-=Phoenix Wing=-]
[-=Nazgul Squadron=-]
FM/PO1 Raigen DarkBlayde Tei-Yehn/Nazgul Squadron 2-8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF DEF/VEN/VE(=*A*=)[VC:B][BWC]
[This message has been edited by Raigen (edited March 6, 2007 3:31:27 PM)]
Kadann
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  RE: New Character
March 6, 2007 3:36:23 PM    View the profile of Kadann 
You can easily change your callsign in the VE.  Let me know if that is what you want to do.

 
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Grand Moff Kadann, Dark Lord
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Raigen
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  RE: New Character
March 6, 2007 4:40:29 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
I want to change it to Casca once this squadron story is done.
 
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[-=Phoenix Wing=-]
[-=Nazgul Squadron=-]
FM/PO1 Raigen DarkBlayde Tei-Yehn/Nazgul Squadron 2-8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF DEF/VEN/VE(=*A*=)[VC:B][BWC]
Hunter
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  RE: New Character
March 6, 2007 4:51:41 PM    View the profile of Hunter 
Well there is a difference from changing call sign and changing character. If you are creating a completely different person with a new bio and everything, that would mean that person never did the stuff Raigen did and never got his rewards for it. That's how it would work logically. Dunno, it's up to the Navy people for this one.
 
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NazgulSquadron
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Know your enemy and know yourself, and you will be victorious in ten thousand battles.
You may forget the past, but it always has a way of haunting your future.
Men can die, but a symbol is eternal.
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  RE: New Character
March 6, 2007 5:22:01 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
What about writing it as a character who was already in the VEN and was transferred to replace Raigen.
 
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[-=Phoenix Wing=-]
[-=Nazgul Squadron=-]
FM/PO1 Raigen DarkBlayde Tei-Yehn/Nazgul Squadron 2-8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF DEF/VEN/VE(=*A*=)[VC:B][BWC]
Shazam
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  RE: New Character
March 6, 2007 6:01:50 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
As a new character- Hunter is correct- you would not have the same medals or rank.  However, you could keep your achieved medals and simply not announce their existence as a part of your new character's career.  You would still have them, but your character would have no experience with or any knowledge of them.  However, I'd almost like you to go through BT on the side 'just because.'  I think you missed out.  I suppose it's a question of what you want to do.  I'm willing to facilitate, but if you wanna start with a clean slate- we start from the beginning.  Lemme know.
 
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*Flash Was Here...*

WC|TO/CMD Shazam/Phoenix 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=MA=) (=*FOCE*=) [CBV*] [LoM] [LSM] [MC2] [VC:S] [SV*] [DSM] {Platinum Writing Medal}

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Raigen
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  RE: New Character
March 6, 2007 6:17:23 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
Well, I don't want to so much start with a clean slate as start with a new character. Raigen's character is too complex to stay with the VE for now. But I was thinking of the possibility of bringing in a character who still had the same rank, a bio that included his VE history up until now, and work with that.

I'm willing to give up medals, I guess. But the BWC I as a writer earned, not Raigen. would that be retainable?

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[-=Phoenix Wing=-]
[-=Nazgul Squadron=-]
FM/PO1 Raigen DarkBlayde Tei-Yehn/Nazgul Squadron 2-8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF DEF/VEN/VE(=*A*=)[VC:B][BWC]
[This message has been edited by Raigen (edited March 6, 2007 6:19:06 PM)]
Shazam
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  RE: New Character
March 6, 2007 7:16:48 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
You need to keep your Victory Cross as well- those can't just be traded off and on.  You earned them.  Furthermore, since you're still the same person, all of your history still works- you don't have to edit your history on the wiki or anything.

But, since we seem pretty decided about this, as soon as you'd like to start, you can go to the following link and take a look at "Chapter 1- Character Development."  Notice I've got a format goin there and I'd prefer yours looked fairly similar to it.  You'll need to post your new bio here and I'll critique it.  After that, while you're waiting for my review, you can take a look at the second chapter- "Pilot Procedure."  I really hope doing this won't just be a waste of your time- this should present some new information to you   The best to you.

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Flight_School_%28FS%29
 
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*Flash Was Here...*

WC|TO/CMD Shazam/Phoenix 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=MA=) (=*FOCE*=) [CBV*] [LoM] [LSM] [MC2] [VC:S] [SV*] [DSM] {Platinum Writing Medal}

Phoenix Wing Commander and Training Officer
Raigen
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  RE: New Character
March 6, 2007 7:56:53 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
ahh. So I'm pretty sure Ive done two maneuvers already. But Id like to add more advanced ones to my arsenal. Ill go through Basic again then.
 
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[-=Phoenix Wing=-]
[-=Nazgul Squadron=-]
FM/PO1 Raigen DarkBlayde Tei-Yehn/Nazgul Squadron 2-8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF DEF/VEN/VE(=*A*=)[VC:B][BWC]
Raigen
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  RE: New Character
March 7, 2007 11:47:46 AM    View the profile of Raigen 
Shall I start as Trainee? or what?
 
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[-=Phoenix Wing=-]
[-=Nazgul Squadron=-]
FM/PO1 Raigen DarkBlayde Tei-Yehn/Nazgul Squadron 2-8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF DEF/VEN/VE(=*A*=)[VC:B][BWC]
Kadann
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  RE: New Character
March 7, 2007 12:01:40 AM    View the profile of Kadann 
If you are going to start a new character, you might as well go through the whole application process to create a new one.  That way, you still have your current account and it doesn't get confused with the new account.

As far as promotions to a higher rank and such, that is up to your commander.  But you might want to just go through the whole process again.
 
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Grand Moff Kadann, Dark Lord
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  RE: New Character
March 7, 2007 12:24:01 AM    View the profile of Raigen 
Got it doing that now.
 
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[-=Phoenix Wing=-]
[-=Nazgul Squadron=-]
FM/PO1 Raigen DarkBlayde Tei-Yehn/Nazgul Squadron 2-8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF DEF/VEN/VE(=*A*=)[VC:B][BWC]
Shazam
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  RE: New Character
March 7, 2007 4:02:53 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Post when ready.
 
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*Flash Was Here...*

WC|TO/CMD Shazam/Phoenix 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=MA=) (=*FOCE*=) [CBV*] [LoM] [LSM] [MC2] [VC:S] [SV*] [DSM] {Platinum Writing Medal}

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  RE: New Character
March 11, 2007 12:41:30 AM    View the profile of Casca 
I'm going to start writing and go through Basic after the Nazgul story is over.
 
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[-=2nd Vast Imperial Starfighter Wing=-]
[-=Venom Squadron=-]
TRN/CRW Casca "Black Curse" Phennir/Venom Squadron 1-2/2nd Vast Imperial Starfighter Wing/ISD-II Devastator Platform Saratoga/2VENF OFF/VEN/VE[VC:B][BWC]
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  RE: New Character
March 13, 2007 11:02:59 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
As you wish- but I would suggest we try and get your character ready before the next Nazgul story is prepared, which I believe will be a short period of time.
 
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*Flash Was Here...*

WC|TO/CMD Shazam/Phoenix 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=MA=) (=*FOCE*=) [CBV*] [LoM] [LSM] [MC2] [VC:S] [SV*] [DSM] {Platinum Writing Medal}

Phoenix Wing Commander and Training Officer
Trevor Evenson
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  RE: New Character
March 13, 2007 11:13:02 PM    View the profile of Trevor Evenson 
/me prods Shazam. Doesn't Kaph have an opening for him? :P kidding kidding. I hope to have our new story Monday and I really don't think it'll hjave any opportunity for writing him in if he needs to join late. Perhaps if the need is there, he could work on BT while posting on the story?
 
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The VEN`s #1 writer as of ESC `06
Shazam
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  RE: New Character
March 13, 2007 11:29:00 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
*Shazam advises on such*

Perhaps he is most concerned with your competition though- when does it come to an end?  Or has it?

(Edit: Additional points for completing bio before Monday?  Give him the average amount of points he would have probably gained had he been participating in the competition rather than under-going an introduction to the latest BT Materials?)

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*Flash Was Here...*

WC|TO/CMD Shazam/Phoenix 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=MA=) (=*FOCE*=) [CBV*] [LoM] [LSM] [MC2] [VC:S] [SV*] [DSM] {Platinum Writing Medal}

Phoenix Wing Commander and Training Officer
[This message has been edited by Shazam (edited March 13, 2007 11:30:02 PM)]
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Trevor Evenson
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  RE: New Character
March 13, 2007 11:36:05 PM    View the profile of Trevor Evenson 
The competition ends Sunday after the meeting. So lets see. Maybe, 3 competition points if he's done the bio before then? I think that that will help cover the fact that he's missed a meeting or two, which is really all that he seems to be missing.
 
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The VEN`s #1 writer as of ESC `06
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  RE: New Character
March 14, 2007 10:40:19 AM    View the profile of Hunter 
Oh sure, give him extra points... You want me to lose to him don't you Trevor!

Well if you give him points for doing Academy stuff, I should get points for passing the EE Exam. That's technically extra Academy material.

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NazgulSquadron
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Know your enemy and know yourself, and you will be victorious in ten thousand battles.
You may forget the past, but it always has a way of haunting your future.
Men can die, but a symbol is eternal.
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  RE: New Character
March 14, 2007 4:18:02 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
*Shrugs* - That's up to your fearless leader.
 
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*Flash Was Here...*

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Trevor Evenson
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  RE: New Character
March 14, 2007 4:23:28 PM    View the profile of Trevor Evenson 
I s'pose I'll give Kairo a point for the EE. Why only a point? Aside from me wanting to see some seriously fierce competition for these last few days, the EE is only a 'minor' exam, and you're not trying to make a new character Kairo :P. I figure if you only get one point it'll motivate you to stay ahead of Raigen, while Raigen getting 3 points will catch him up from a missed meeting and it'll really be down to the wire
 
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  RE: New Character
March 14, 2007 4:31:34 PM    View the profile of Hunter 
Fine fine... It just has to coincide with my two day leave tomorrow and Friday. Oh well. Guess that's my fault for joining the competition like two weeks after it started writing wise.
 
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NazgulSquadron
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Know your enemy and know yourself, and you will be victorious in ten thousand battles.
You may forget the past, but it always has a way of haunting your future.
Men can die, but a symbol is eternal.
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  RE: New Character
March 14, 2007 4:53:49 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
I thought there was just one story wityh two missions that's why I got confused.
 
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[-=Phoenix Wing=-]
[-=Nazgul Squadron=-]
FM/PO1 Raigen DarkBlayde Tei-Yehn/Nazgul Squadron 2-8/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF DEF/VEN/VE(=*A*=)[VC:B][BWC]
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  RE: New Character
April 1, 2007 5:03:39 PM    View the profile of Casca 
Casca was born on Carida as the son of an Imperial pilot in training. His mother was the daughter of a local politician who raised Casca on her own after his father left to join the 181st. Casca's childhood was centered on the academy. With no real father figure in his life, Casca turned to the instructors at the academy for guidance. He eavesdropped on pilot lessons and learned every trick of the academy ten times over. After years of sneaking into and around the base, the officers at Carida became accustomed to his presence and began allowing him to wander where he wanted, like a child adopted by the academy. When Casca was finally inducted into Carida, he passed with flying colors and at the top of his class. He was immediately assigned as a flight leader in the 74th Starfighter Wing of the Galactic Imperial Navy.

During his career with the 74th, Casca showed his potential as a pilot, killing 20 enemy fighters in just nine sorties. He was bumped up to Boar Squadron commander where he continued his success. Popularity amongst senior officers granted him a placement into the newly revived 75th Starfighter Group. The 75th had been reopened as a development wing before being transferred into the 181st. Casca started out as Orion Squadron executive officer and eventually was promoted to SC. Casca's only goal was wing commander. It had been his ambition since he had learned what a wing was. He spent every free minute he had in simulators, and even had the ship's computer officer upgrade the difficulty of the programming for more challenging sims. He had almost secured the position when the commander of the ship his wing was assigned to was caught in a pirate skirmish.

The pirate group Red Dragon Alliance had been smuggling weapons to Rebel encampments in the outer rim. The 75th had been instructed to neutralize the group and any remains of them. Casca, now the wing adjutant, coordinated the entire attack, using a modified star destroyer that had been condemned and marked for dismantling. The destroyer was a decoy, holding 36 tie interceptors and 24 tie fighters within its hull. As soon as the destroyer emerged from hyperspace, the fighters began to file out and the ship's crew transferred onto assassin class corvettes.

The 75th, aided by the 74th, converged onto the pirate Ace Wing and the Korribian Battle class Cruiser Helsa. Casca's performance in the battle was phenomenal, but Ace Wing, flying modified Z-95's and A-wings, wiped through the unshielded crafts and began to target the corvettes. Failure to predict the number of enemy fighters doomed the battle and only two corvettes and twenty fighters escaped. The corvette holding many of the senior officers, and the ship captain, had been lost. Casca, insisting that the pirates predicted the attack and fed them bad information, was charged with treason and placed into the brig of a CR-90 diplomatic cruiser to be transported for execution.

Casca was able to trick the guards into bringing him to the med bay where he fought them off for his freedom. He released a lethal dose of nitrous oxide into the ship and took control of it for himself. He piloted the corvette to the outer rim where he sent a distress call to VE forces, remembering a rumor that they would take defectors. Although his effort and history with Thrawn meant nothing, he had his skills as a pilot and his determination to exact revenge on the RDA at all costs.

Casca has a seriousness about flying that makes him seem almost inhuman while in the flight seat. Casca doesn't like talking about his past, since he is still sore from his fall from greatness. In fact, that soreness has hindered his flying ability since he is always focusing on avoiding mistakes. Casca has ben known to run the distance of a star destroyer as self-chastizement for the most minimal of mistakes.

Casca is stubborn but congenial. He will defend his point adamantly but strays from insubordination. He wears his blond hair short, army style and his blue eyes are almost always cold, bitter, and serious. He doesn't like to deviate from what he is used to, and changes in routine agitate him. He is almost always in uniform, and when someone asks him his name, he gives them his rank. It was these inhuman characteristics that earned his squadron's respect during his time with the Galactic Empire.

Casca refers to others by ranks and sometimes the additional last name. Sir is the most commonly used word in his vocabulary and it is preceded by yes 99% of the time. Casca's favorite maneuver is the Roll-away, ironic because he is always direct when dealing with anything. If something goes wrong with a craft, he goes strait to the tech that prepped it for combat. While others are drinking and celebrating, Casca is running through sims and finding out how he could have done better. Casca can be found drinking only on formal occasions such as military balls and banquets.

Success is not enough; Casca strives for perfection in all he does. He carries the Imperial opinion that lives are indeed expendable for the Empire.  The success of the mission comes before all else, and he would willingly throw do anything if ordered.  Although ex-Thrawnist, his loyalty remains with the first Emperor. He does not fly incom ships, he is not a smuggler, he does not associate himself with rebels, and he does not believe in anything but uniformity.
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[-=Venom Squadron=-]
TRN/CRW Casca "Black Curse" Phennir/Venom Squadron 1-2/2nd Vast Imperial Starfighter Wing/ISD-II Devastator Platform Saratoga/2VENF OFF/VEN/VE[VC:B][BWC]
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  RE: New Character
April 4, 2007 3:11:33 PM    View the profile of Casca 
Feedback anyone?
 
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[-=Venom Squadron=-]
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  RE: New Character
April 5, 2007 2:57:28 PM    View the profile of Raigen 
any feedback at all...
 
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[Red Dragon Order]
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  RE: New Character
April 9, 2007 1:10:02 PM    View the profile of Casca 
Hate to flood my own board but...where are training officers?
 
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  RE: New Character
April 9, 2007 1:16:29 PM    View the profile of Sol 
I'm in the same boat...
 
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~ Sol Larith
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  RE: New Character
April 9, 2007 2:37:51 PM    View the profile of Japheth 
Shaz was on leave until tomorrow, maybe Wednesday. I sorta expected the other training officers to pick up the slack. Where are you kids?
 
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  RE: New Character
April 13, 2007 5:40:10 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Sorry- I meant to be back Wednesday but I got bombarded with homework that was never given to me.  Excuse my staff and I for the late reaction.

And it's nice that you finally have a bio up, Casca- there are some things to settle though.  Firstly- I'll be reassigning you to Nazgul Squadron, effective immediately.  Also, as always, I don't expect anyone to have their bios totally figured out from the beginning- it's always a work in progress.  However, we do need to make sure that we have the physical and emotional aspects of your character at least somewhat understood- little mention was made to them that could distinguish your character from another.  You'll need to make a seperate heading for each and re-format your bio so that it follows the block-paragraph style that I'm typing in.

As for the limits of a single individual- I believe we explored this with your last character, but remember that people aren't gods.  I think you've kept yourself restrained, but keep in mind that your character has to be realistic and setting his or her abilities above those of your squadron mates is a little unfair, especially if we start working in this new proficiencies system.  Considering the time you've been here, your character would be at a fairly decent proficiency for flight, but nothing insatiable.  However, since you emphasize your character's incredible capacities, we might as well lend them to the tactical side, which your character would certainly pick up in a lifetime of study for a Wing Commander position.  When we get the proficiencies form up, we'll allocate the resources and skills as was just discussed, but in a manner of greater clarity.  If you can fix up your bio accordingly, I'll pass you on to the next chapter.  You can be active in both Nazgul and BT, so make sure you're giving the proper amount of attention as the situation dicates.
 
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