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Mykill Doomslayer
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  Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 18, 2006 6:29:21 PM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
but I have good reason I'm generally the best gamer I know and well it's hard for me to say I'm just a little lost her and I'm tired so someone please help me ok so there I said it thank you Mykill
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 18, 2006 6:35:32 PM    View the profile of Leon 
All right first off don't worry no ones mad at you. Second, this is only partially gaming, writing is the most important thing. The VE in general is a group that writes about Star Wars and we have campeigns and stuff like that, so writing is the biggest thing here. Also you don't need to start a new thread, you can just post a reply. Shazam, your training officer will tell you what you need to do soon, and i don't want to be the one telling you what to do because that's not my job.
 
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 18, 2006 6:47:33 PM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
okay I'm gettin it now thank you corporal Leon my stories are even better than my gaming if I can ever learn to spell write haha and I have an excellent one not on this subject but it has to do with ringwraiths and such is that acceptable and the only icon i can find is submit new post what am i doing wrong
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 18, 2006 6:51:04 PM    View the profile of Krius 
lol don't woprry your not foing anything wrong. By the way this is my navy character. All right don't post any storys yet Shazam will tell you what to do. And no need to call me Corporal Leon, it makes me feel special lol, and thats bad. So just sit back and relax maybe Shazam will be on today or tommorow or the next day. If you want you can go on Java chat or mIRC and start talking to people.
 
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 18, 2006 6:59:48 PM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
thanks man I'll alway remember u love Mykill Doomslayer
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 18, 2006 7:04:22 PM    View the profile of Krius 
ummmmmmmmmm ok watch out on the love buddy thats pretty freakin scary. Anyways your gonna be seeing alot of me mate do I dont know what your talking about lol. So just like I said just wait for Shazam.
 
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 18, 2006 7:13:32 PM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
just a joke man liten up is it that hard in the acadamy and do I need to intro you to some entertainment i.k.a. girls
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June 18, 2006 7:18:11 PM    View the profile of Krius 
No buddy. I can pull my own thanks anyways. The Navy Academy I would have to say is alot harder then the armys training, but don't worry nobody is mean or anything. Shazam is a really cool guy and he'll help you out if you have any trouble. And the Academy training isn't that long unless your not on often. Other then that everything is cool, and when your done with the academy they'll put you in a Squadron. I'm in Kaph squadron. So just chill out for now untill Shazam tell's you what to do.
 
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June 18, 2006 7:26:56 PM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
that's it .wait for shazammie .Sorry I was in the Air Force Avionics Field and I was just the same way a little too smart for my own good even thru basic training.Almost got kicked out too many times but once again I was too smart for them to do that.Thanks again for your help Mykill
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 18, 2006 7:30:10 PM    View the profile of Krius 
lol allright dude. You've got it now just wait.
 
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June 18, 2006 8:22:12 PM    View the profile of Atrick25 
I think you need to make your sentences more readable.

And you called Shazam Shazamie? Uh oh.....

*Hides in bunker*

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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 18, 2006 8:27:41 PM    View the profile of Leon 
lol Shazam is gonna have a good laugh from that... i hope.
 
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June 19, 2006 11:28:58 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
And so I have arrived!?  Yea- it's great  you're enthusiastic and all- but you're going to need to show the proper respect for Officers.  Really- anyone above you.  And youreself

So, as of right now you are enrolled in Basic Training.  To be specific Flight School.  This is the Academy you'll be studying at:

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Naval_Academy

Right now you need to create a bio- go to Character Creation "Chapter  One".  Read through and put your best attempt up. 

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Flight_School_%28FS%29

Make sure you post it here or we'll never see it- welcome to the VEN.
 
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 19, 2006 7:47:56 PM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
sorry for the indisrections I was just having fun which is what I was told this site was all about.Anyway,do I actually have to type all of that stuff in or can you tell me in plain english where I'm suppossed to click.I'm kinda new to the Internet which might sound funny to a buch of you.Yeah go ahead and laugh.But I really don't know what I'm doing half the time.I click on stuff and then end up somewhere I don't wanna be.I'm a really good gamer and even better story teller.Mater of fact have my whole universe written down from beggining to end.So help please and if you knew me you would know that's a hard word for me to say.HELP?
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June 19, 2006 9:15:59 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Simply highlight the site and right click and select copy.  Or hit control + the 'C' key.  These will accomplish the same thing.  Go up to your URL bar, which is the bar you type your site into, and hit control + "V" .  Or you can right click once again and say paste this time.  Again- you will achieve the same thing.  Hit enter and it will take you to the site.  Now all that must be done is simply read the instructions and you can put in the websites the same way we've just done here.  Yes, you do need to read them and actually post them.  If you can not post you will have no real position in our squadrons since gaming is not very big around here.  Yet that is.  Maybe we'll get one playin again, or there'll be a new game.  Lemme know if this is still of further problem- I'm will to teach but if you are not willing to learn: you need to decide if you want to try this.  Thanks for your time.  Rock On.
 
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 19, 2006 9:26:59 PM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
I relly need someone in rel time with me cuz you lost me in several different areas.Sorry I'm so computer illiterat but I'm great with storis and games
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June 19, 2006 9:30:39 PM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
post what click on what i have a computer do i really need to hit control something sorry not trying to be dificult but just tell me what to click on I'm good at that
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June 19, 2006 9:54:07 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Do you have irc?  http://www.mirc.com/get.html

You can download it there- just click the city name that is closest to you and you can download it from there.  Once you're in, you need to set it up.  You can view how to set it up by going to - 

http://vastempire.com/main/ref/irctutorial/

I'm on IRC a lot of the time under the name FMJR or Shazam.  If this doesn't sound like an answer for you, if you have MSN my e-mail is [email protected]  I get on there regularly so you can expect to see me around.  If there is an alternative that you would like me to consider using with you, bring it up and I'll see what I can do.  Rock On.




Alright man- I've seen you around since then and it looks like you've been up to working on that bio- just not here :>  So:

Life on the worlds of the Outer Rim is known to be harsh.However,none are as harsh as the fridgid world of Osgolad.The people there are not indigenous to that world.Stranded there for more than a thousand years,they have no memory of thier ancestrial beginings.Perhaps a wrecked frieghter or even a lost colony,they do not know.

They are basically a nomadic people,movings to warmer climates in the colder months and following the thaws to better hunting in the warmer months.They are a rugged people,herding cattle and sheep and riding something similar to a horse with horns.

Mykill Doomslayer is thier cheiftan for he is the greatest warrior and hunter of thier tribe.Every once in a while a young strong warrior will arise to challenge his position as he did so many years ago to his chieftan,yet so far he has risen to all challenges to maintain his position.As thier leader he has all the perks that go with with that position.However,there a many drawbacks too.When accosted by the wandering hordes of Lardians,a hungry hunting wolf like creature,it is his decision to either stand and fight or perhaps take losses in thier herds and run.

While on a hunt on one clear night,Mykill looked to the skies and seeing all the glorious stars that shone there,he glimpse a star that was not the same as the usual stars.This star seemed to be heading toward him.It grew brighter and brighter.Soon it was almost upon him.He momentarily cowarded as it passed right over his head.It continue on for just a little ways before crashing to the ground within walking distance.As Mykill aproached the fallen star,two figures began to emerge from an apparent hole in it.He drew nearer.Suddenly,a voice said unto him" phcert.Can you help us with shelter in exchange for food till a rescue team arrive.phcert"Mykill nodded in agreement.Although,he could understand the strangers language,his people were a people of very few words.

Mykill lead the strangers to the caves his tribe were currently residing in for the colder months.There they warmed themselves by the fire,shared the strangers food and held quite a long conversation.It was over the next couple of days that Mykill learned about the empire and the fate of the galaxy as it now stood.During this time he had begun to think that maybe he could persue a better life than he had thus far lived."Do you think there might be a place for me Leon in this empire of yours?"he asked the what he came to know as a stormtrooper."I don't know.What do you think Atrius?Any room for a big strapping man like this in Our empire?"Leon snickered to his pilot companion."I suppose we might find some job for him to do.I tell you what when our rescue team arrives you can leave with us and when we get back I'll let you wash my new tie fighter."Atrius laughed.Within a few days the rescue shuttle that had homed in upon the fallen stars homing beacon had picked up Leon,Atrius and Mykil where Mykil was transported to a Naval recruitment office.The End for now or the Beginning?




Now then- I simply seperated the sentance away and took away the indentions.  That's the main format of the VE here.  Now, what I'd like you to do, because this is good practice in real life as well as in the VE, is double space.  Meaning click the space bar twice after each sentance- makes it easier to read and makes a finer point that you've just ended a sentance.  Also- just read through your bio and note someof the grammatical errors or where you may not have realized you had written a sentence in one tense and cut it off to start writing it in others.  Some examples-

Example 1
I tell you what when our rescue team arrives you can leave with us and when we get back I'll let you wash my new tie fighter."Atrius laughed

(No commas so the sentences just run together.)

Example 2
While on a hunt on one clear night,Mykill looked to the skies and seeing all the glorious stars that shone there,he glimpse a star that was not the same as the usual stars

(See where you say 'on' twice right off the bat- it disrupts the sentence.  Also, you should have said glimpsed instead of glimpse?  These are terribly technical things, even the two word in a consecutive order thing- you just pick up on how off it feels when you're reading through it.)

So then- I'd like you to read through this and maybe pick up on a few points for me and those who would be reading this-

So your character has basically no common knowledge of the galaxy correct?  Does his tribe speak normal basic without heavy accents and grammatical errors?  What do they wear?  I was starting to get the idea they looked like cave men- maybe you have a different intention.  Also, if your character knows nothing- there's no way he'd be accepted into the academy.  You have to take proficiency exams to even get in!  Lol- so you're going to have to explain that and are those two character you referred to real?  Leon and Atrius?  We had an Atrus and we currently have an Atrick if that's what you're looking for- no Atrius though.  If you're making him up, that's fine as well.  Lemme know- Rock ON.

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[This message has been edited by Shazam (edited June 21, 2006 9:19:37 AM)]
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June 27, 2006 5:18:53 PM    View the profile of Angel 
*shudders*

I was looking for this after the post on the main comnet.

Now I'm really really sorry I did.

Anyone know how I can remove the part of my brain that was forever scarred from reading this?
 
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June 27, 2006 8:44:56 PM    View the profile of Atrick25 
Beer.

Drink up
 
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 30, 2006 1:51:06 AM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
Okay, yes, a beer or  two  could help you with this reading. I didn't know anyone would actually read this until I  was finished.  Thank you Lord  Shazamm  for  you  input. And yes it was supposed to be soon to be pilot  Atrick instead of Atrius. They meaning Atrick and Leon were the first two people to admonish me here at this site and I still value thier advice so I used them in my story. It was a reallllly rough draft. Furthermore, I was looking at your profiles. and really didn't even know if I was even saving  anything right or  if you could even view it. After seeing it again here as you re-displayed it I'm not too disatified.Yes, I agree with  your editing and could you please make the appropriate changes.If so could you also add  that Mykill is a man that has never been measured but under the scrutiny of the naval acadamy that it was found that he is just 6 ft tall 185 lbs. hair multi colored brown.Eyes steel gray and generally well built.As for his lack of knowledge in the sciences.He naturally speaks Common language, and although he is from an alternative life than most in the empire, He has been conditioned by the Imperial Sciences Dept. to know more than he once knew.Today Mykill stands as great as any other cadet that has grown up by better means.Also I'm looking here and it say's I do not have an album.Create a New album.What does that mean.I had albums  when I grew up. Do we still have them?
 
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"my soul was cast into the vastness of space for my fear of loneliness" Chronicles of Mykill Doomslayer bk III>chpt 6
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June 30, 2006 2:04:07 AM    View the profile of Atrick25 
A little hint...

Don't call anyone Lord or really by their rank unless it's a very formal occasion. Shazam just likes to be called Shazam or Shaz.

Or Shazamie

*hides in bunker again*
 
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June 30, 2006 2:12:23 AM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
Not  only what I said before, but  the more  I  look at my very,very, rough draft,I like it and you all didn't give me a chance to expound on it .I added some very  small additions that I hope  my commander  Shazamm  will add, and edit  my veryy meager Bio which is really a work in process.And  as a forethought to  you Commander Shazam, it  would behoove you to have cadets that succeed rather than fail.It  reflects upon you as to  how many cadets succeed and or fail.Just going back to my old stand by goading you into helping me succeed.Thank you  all.
 
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"my soul was cast into the vastness of space for my fear of loneliness" Chronicles of Mykill Doomslayer bk III>chpt 6
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
June 30, 2006 2:59:23 AM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
Thanks for all your advice. Mail me  at [email protected]   
 
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July 2, 2006 1:24:13 AM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
Have you given up on me? Or are you simply waiting for someting else. I have much more to add  to my primitive profile.For instance, I wanted to say a little more about what Mykill was thinking as he looked into the clear night sky before the star crashed to the ground.And I wanted to expound a little more on his intelligence, despite his primitive surroundings. I wanted to make him a hardened yet intelligent creature,much as I am.He is an old D and D charachter of mine that I have adapted to Gamma World and now here if any of you know RPG games. Let me know what I should do next? You told me to stay here to report so here I am.
 
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"my soul was cast into the vastness of space for my fear of loneliness" Chronicles of Mykill Doomslayer bk III>chpt 6
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July 2, 2006 12:22:22 AM    View the profile of Atrick25 
Redit your profile and make the changes. Talking about it will NOT get you past the Naval Academy. Just do it.
 
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July 2, 2006 4:01:52 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
This is true- I will not add these things for you.  You must do them on your own- I won't be able to do these things once you're in a squadron, so why aid your foe?  Fix it and you will become better and more able, ask others to do so for you and you will have gained nothing.  Message me when you have updated the bio.  You can simply post the bio here and edit it- we need not work anywhere else.  That's all I've got for ya right now, man.  Keep rockin.
 
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
July 2, 2006 7:40:22 PM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
Okay?  I'm going to try. I guess I have to go back to that very confusing VEWIKI web site?  Wish me luck!! I'm not a computer geek.  I was just the kid who stuck up for them when other people tried to pick on them. Back then we were geeks and heads and JOCKS. Well, I always disliked jocks and they disliked geeks so it was fun for all of us.
 
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
July 2, 2006 9:05:30 PM    View the profile of Mykill Doomslayer 
Yeah, I think I finally did it.Please check out my edit on my wiki site.Please don't be too!! harsh.This has Really been a task. I think I did pretty good. Considering I have made this all up in about 10 minutes. Just took me two weeks to post it. Not wanting to hurt anyone elses feeling,but I didn't want to be from Tattoine or any of the known planets.I also wanted a character that had an entity of it's own,not just a thread or shread of star wars,but a new line.New blood infused so to speak.Lemme Know can't help it every time I write I sign off MYKILL
 
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  RE: Okay maybe I was a little arrogant
July 7, 2006 11:27:22 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
Right- I can't find what page you're talkin bout man. Also, did I not just say post it here?

July 2, 06: Shazam - You can simply post the bio here and edit it- we need not work anywhere else.

July 2, 06: Mykill - Okay? I'm going to try. I guess I have to go back to that very confusing VEWIKI web site?

Dude- you've gotta listen to what I'm tellin you or you will probably never get through this. It is sooooooo much easier to post it here for you and me- that means there's only one place that needs to be edited and we can all see it very clearly. There will be no doubt you're doing the work if you just post it here. I've attempted to facilitate you by pulling things off the wiki and presenting them here, but you insist on not following my orders here- what can I do man? Am I not being clear? When I say post, I mean on the Academy ComNet here- not the Wiki. You're obviously able to post here, you must be able to post a bio- or how am I incorrect? You've gotta help me understand exactly what is keeping you or I may not be able to help. Lemme know man- keep tryin.
 
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