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December 10, 2005
10:47:37 PM
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Name: Raigen Tei-Yehn
Callsign: Raigen
Age: 15
Height: 5'9
Weight: 135 lbs
Hair Color: dark blonde
Eye Color: gray/blue
Place of Birth: mos eisley, tatooine
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December 10, 2005
11:27:57 PM
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Welcome to the Vast Empire, Raigen! I'm new here as well, it'd be great to talk sometimes. Who knows? We could become great allies.. Perhaps. |
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December 11, 2005
1:42:53 AM
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Welcome to the Imperial Navy pilot! If that was supposed to be your bio, then you'll a much longer one. we're a story writing community after all.
Drayk, you mean friends, cause we're all on the same side.
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December 11, 2005
8:43:28 AM
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December 12, 2005
10:45:10 AM
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Howdy, I'm the Adjudent of Training, and thus- your trainer. Go on ahead and check the message center and you'll what you must do to get into a squadron around here. Welcome to the VEN. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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December 14, 2005
9:18:24 PM
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ok here the run down
Raigen Tei-Yehn(pronounced rye genn tay yen)
Born illigetimately in Mos Eisley, Tatooine and moved to Mos Espa with his mother shortly after birth. His mother died when he was 10 so he moved into a small shack near a junkyard/ship graveyard owned by a Rodian family! He built, repaired, and upgraded ships until he was 14 with his Rodian friend Snudo and then set out on his own ship, the gray hawk, which was a run down YT1300. He did not make it far and landed in Chewbaa's Livestock and Imports in Mos Eisley. He landed on a set of empty crates including the crate that a tauntaun was supossed to be delivered in that day. Trying not to lose the favor of old Chewbaa, he offered to deliver the tauntaun free of change. After borrowing a vast sum of credits from Junda the Hutt, he repaired his ship and set out for the Corporate sector. Snudo stayed behind and ended up becoming Chewbaa's apprentice. The long trip did a number on the gray-hawk and so Raigen was in a whole again. Upon delivering the tauntaun, the store would not accept it because of late delivery(10 minutes!) With no other options, Raigen made a gunrn t a bakwater planet for cash but at alarge price! The right forward mandible was shot off by an authority turbolaser. In a stroke of genious, he "borrowed" a curved missle section from an AAT in a weapons museum on Etti. When the Espos found out, the gray-hawk was confiscated by the corporate sector authority and put into an impound hanger where it remains today. He lost all hope after that and was able to sell his droids R5-E4 & R2-K9, his best side arm, his tauntaun, and his mandolorian armor to afford a trip to corscant. When the private freighter was intercepted by pirates half way through, he was striped of his remaining cash and then dropped of on Lur. There he was sold into slavery until the slave ship he was on was stopped by the Imperial Navy. Upon his freedom he swore himself to the Empire and went to Abrae to join the Imperial Navy. In his spare time he designs ships and studies various languages and star maps. When not in uniform, he sports a tracker utility vest, long black military style pants with red striping, a white pull over shirt, and a DT-57 "ANNIHILATOR" HEAVY BLASTER PISTOL as a side arm. He has sinced gained enough money to buy a pet reek which he uses for unnamed reasons. He plans on saving up enough money to return to Etti in a blaze of glory and redeem his ship...the gray-hawk. The next puchase on his list will be a R3 style droid and a pit droid. After redeeming his ship he plans to star his own ship yard and retire at a ripe, old age.
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December 15, 2005
6:08:22 PM
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Right off the bat- seperate things into paragraphs man. If you get to a new idea, paragraph that crap. Not only does it make it easier to read, but it makes it easier to understand.
Also, I'd like you to read through that bio and ask yourself "if I knew nothing about this, would I understand what i'm talking about?" Do the events taking place make sense?
As for the bio itself- your character seems like kind of a joker. I mean, kind of jumps around, doing what he needs to, enjoys life. You can use that. Other characters might find that annoying, lol. In the end, this is all about your explaining to people who are going to be posting with you, how to post about you.
You gave a 'history' of your character, but did you include any emotional description? Is he happy? sad? mean? We like to know whats up with your character. Make them recognizable and also memorable- unique if you will. Try to stay away from the mediocre details of other characters like- "YOU KILLED MY FATHER, NOW YOU WILL DIE>..." all the while your mouth is saying 'I want a hamburger... No, the chicken... Of course I want ketchup.' Really, go on ahead and be specific. What peeves your person off? Let us in. After you've finished, go on ahead and go to the roster and go to the 'Naval Roster'.
Once your in there, go to the bottom of those side options until you find 'Edit Profile' on the left. Simply put your edited bio in there and it'll show up when people click on your name. That way you don't have to have your signature filled up with your bio... Plus, its nice looking. 
Lemme know when you're satisfied. My ultimate goal is to get you to the point where you understand your character as well as everyone else. The best to you. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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December 16, 2005
4:34:24 PM
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ok got ya
plus i just bought a b1, a r3, and a new pistol so i had to add it to my profile which is now up inthe roster! -----------------------
"There is no real force, only the force you create with your mind. If you belive you can do something you can. You don't need magic tricks to do it. The Force comes from inside not from meditating and clearing the mind." -Raigen |
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December 16, 2005
6:46:40 PM
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did i do this right
TRN/CRW Tei-Yehn/none none/none/none/none/VEN/VE/ -----------------------
"There is no real force, only the force you create with your mind. If you belive you can do something you can. You don't need magic tricks to do it. The Force comes from inside not from meditating and clearing the mind."-Raigen |
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December 16, 2005
11:09:32 PM
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Welcome to the VE, keep asking questions it shows you want to get involved. You're training officer is you're friend. -----------------------
LCRW JSRussell/Kaph-7/Pheonix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE |
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December 18, 2005
5:46:48 PM
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thx but that doesnt answer my question! -----------------------
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December 18, 2005
5:53:23 PM
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you don't need one yet, but you should have a ship or something. -----------------------
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December 18, 2005
6:05:44 PM
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i spent all my ics on weapons and 4 droids..... and a reek... and a hold out blaster.... and a utility vast... and a holochess table... and a chance cube so i only have like 1700 left! -----------------------
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December 18, 2005
11:42:32 PM
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you don't need anything, you're assigned basic equipment when you get put onto active duty. everything that you buy in the ICS are optional. but after you buy them, you can use them in your stories. -----------------------
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December 19, 2005
12:15:02 AM
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He speaks the truth :> . And yes- I know you havn't been placed yet, lol. You need to keep in mind that it can only be done when the computer is available to those who control the roster. I noticed Japheth is online right now, so we'll see. He'll let you know when you've been placed. The best to you. -----------------------
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December 19, 2005
3:19:04 PM
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im in a squadren weeeee -----------------------
"There is no real force, only the force you create with your mind. If you belive you can do something you can. You don't need magic tricks to do it. The Force comes from inside not from meditating and clearing the mind."-Raigen |
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December 20, 2005
3:16:23 PM
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what do you get in basic equipment |
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December 21, 2005
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hello raigen, i believe you are in Aegis squadron now right? I'm pretty sure, anyway I just got accepted into Aegis a few days ago.
Hope we get along well.  -----------------------
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December 21, 2005
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December 21, 2005
9:30:28 AM
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for Aegis, you get Assult Gunboats, food rations, Imperial Flight Suit, and that's about it. -----------------------
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December 21, 2005
9:55:47 AM
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does each person has a gunboatand can we name the ship? |
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December 21, 2005
10:07:59 AM
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Each person get's their own Assault Gunboat and you can name your ship if you'd like although you'll still be called by whatever number in the squadron you are. Look on the roster to find out. -----------------------
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December 22, 2005
12:21:24 AM
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shouldn't the stuff we get show up on our Profile of pssestions? All i have on there is my Quick-Fix tire Iron. -----------------------
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December 22, 2005
1:36:54 PM
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No, because what is assigned to you is not yours, and it easily chages from mission to mission. -----------------------
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December 22, 2005
3:16:43 PM
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weee i got a yellow file with fir on it anyway 
can a flight in a squadren put in a request for better ships like all we have is gunboats we could have a flight with either larger or smaller fighters for offensive defensive purposes.... thats protecting he attackers! or maybe some bombers or recon
you could put less expierienced players as recon so they get more expieriece |
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January 27, 2006
3:07:38 PM
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im back....  |
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January 27, 2006
4:59:55 PM
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Report to your commanding officer then. -----------------------
*Flash Was Here...*
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January 28, 2006
1:48:10 PM
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.........................flight sergeant or squadren commander |
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January 28, 2006
6:11:32 PM
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squadron commander. Chipmunk, i believe. -----------------------
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February 2, 2006
3:34:11 PM
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my pc crashed i use the internet at school...can i go on leave for a while or something?i hate to but no pc at home = bad |
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