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Fallen Angel
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  RE: The Fall of an Angel
March 22, 2004 11:55:51 PM    View the profile of Fallen Angel 
Prologue: Next Stop, the Past
Leaning back in the pilot seat of his Cloakshape fighter, Angel stared off into the deep vastness of space, and let his mind wander.

It had only been a 2 weeks since Raiders return from Bilbringi, with Angel once again spending a fair amount of time in the bacta tank. Unconsiously tracing out the scar left on his cheek by the nogrhi, Angel fell into a deep sleep.

*beep**beep**beep*

The sound of the navcomp announcing his final countdown woke Angel from his slumber. Stretching as best he could in the cramped cockpit, Angel rubbed his eyes and prepared to drop out of hyperspace. His vision still blurry, Angel yawned and tried to shake the cobwebs from his mind. Squeezing his eyes tightly togther, then opening them again, the swirling stars came into focus.

Ther timer on the nav-comp reached zero, and Angel pulled this ship out of hyperspace. The stars leapt into view in front of him, a planet materializing in their center.

"Dantooine" Angel muttered to himself. "Where it all began."

Upon return from Bilbringi, and the completion of his training requirements, Otto had granted Angel a week's leave.

"Be sure you are back ON TIME." Otto had said, "Word has been passed down on a campaign the VE is about to embark on, so I'd like to have my ASL present for it."

Looking back on it, Angel couldn't help but smile at Otto's incessant worrying. Thinking of where to go on his leave, Angel decided to go back to his homeworld, to where one life ended, and another began...

OOC: This is my character devlopment story. SO if you want to read it, I hope you enjoy it.
 
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Senior Sergeant Jikkyo "Fallen Angel" Nimiichi
Assistant Squad Leader (ASL): RAIDERS SQUAD

ASL/SSGT Fallen Angel/3SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR] [RoM] [BoA]

"Never shall innocent blood be shed, yet the blood of the wicked shall flow like a river. The three shall spread their blackened wings and be the vengeful, striking hammer of GOD."
[This message has been edited by Angel (edited April 10, 2004 1:25:01 AM)]
Fallen Angel
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  RE: The Fall of an Angel
March 25, 2004 2:27:26 AM    View the profile of Fallen Angel 
Chapter 1: Homeward Bound

Rousing himself from his pondering, Angel locked in the coordinates for his destination, Mount Blanche. He kicked in the sublight engines, their rumbling rattling his body. Better get our mechanics back on Tadath to take a look at those, Angel noted.

Dantooine was a fairly unsettled world. It had a long history, having been home to a Jedi training academy, and was in fact where the Dark Lord Exar Kun had trained under Jedi Master Vodo Siosk-Baas. Jedi temple ruins still stood in the vast savannas of the planet. Angel remembered seeing them as a child from afar, but never being allowed to go near them.  The Dantari, the native race to Dantooine, passed down a legend that those who entered the temple never returned. His mother Kagero, always sensitive towards such legends, forbid Jikkyo and his brother Jubei from going near the temples.

A smile crossed Angel's face as the Ragnarok rocketed towards the planet. His brother, never being one to pay attention to authority made several trips to the ruins, but never dared to go in. Jubei, you always did live on the razor's edge... A single tear dropped from his cheek, as the fond memories of the childhood mischief Jubei and he used to get into flooded through his mind. Hours of playing, fighting and happy times faded back into memories. Blinking away the tears, Angel squeezed the controlstick, trying to get hold of his emotions, but his eyes were still blurry. Squeezing his eyes shut, and opening them again, his vision cleared. Such emotions were dangerous, as there were many republic supporters on Dantooine, and they would love to get their hands on an Imperial Shocktrooper.

Dressed in his old bounty hunters outfit, Angel looked every bit the man who left 2 years ago.  Angel wore his gray slacks, with black angel wings running up the outside of the legs. His shirt was a black tunic with a red ankh painted on the chest. His 2 gunbelts, slung across his waist contained his twin IR-5 Intimidator blasters. He wore a loose black jacket, a few rips in it from some nasty vibroblade fights.  After this much time in the VE, Angel felt out of place not in his uniform, but wearing his old clothes eased him a bit.

Suddenly the ship shook as it hit the outer atmosphere of Dantooine. His astromech droid beeped something at him, something angel took to be a warning by the droid's mournful tone. Looking at his computer, he saw that he was in for a rough ride. Making sure his flight harness was secured, Angel grabbed the flight yoke and started his landing procedure. Fighting with the stick for control as the turbulence threatened to rip the ship from him, Angel held his course. 

"Great, I have the best timing in the world. Lovely thunderstromto welcome me home" Angel hoped it wasn't an omen of things to come.

It was by sheer luck alone that the Ragnarok wasn't fried by the lightning, But there were close of enough calls to make Angel think about bailing. Then he cleared the clouds, and air turbulence was gone.

Sighing in relief, Angel pulled back on the throttle and cruised towards his old settlement. As it came into view, Angel set the ship down gracefully about a standard click away.  His fighter set down with relative ease, and Angel began unstrapping himself from the harness.

"Its going to be dark soon." Angel said to himself, "Guess I'll just set up camp here tonight, and make my entrance tomorrow." Pulling out the emergency supplies from the cargo bay of his fighter, Angel made a makeshift camp. Not wanting to risk a fire, he ate a few ration packs and settled into his sleeping bag.

Closing his eyes, he said "R-5, monitor life forms. If anything comes within 100 meters of this place, I want to know about it." The astromech beeped in acknowledgement, and Angel rolled over, trying to sleep.

Sleep however, was not an ally that night, and eluded him for hours. His mind raced: Will they remember me? How will they welcome me? Are my old friends still here? What if they know of my imperial ties? Thousands of scenarios filled his head, confusing him, causing him to toss and turn in a desperate attempt for rest.

Finally sleep took him, and he slipped into unconsciousness.

Sleep however, continued to toy with him, as his dreams were haunted by the first of two fateful nights, the night his parents died...

 
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Senior Sergeant Jikkyo "Fallen Angel" Nimiichi 
Assistant Squad Leader (ASL): RAIDERS SQUAD
THE ANGEL OF DEATH
AS-3/ASL/SSGT Fallen Angel/3SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR] [RoM] [BoA]

"Never shall innocent blood be shed, yet the blood of the wicked shall flow like a river. The three shall spread their blackened wings and be the vengeful, striking hammer of GOD."
[This message has been edited by Angel (edited March 25, 2004 12:13:54 AM)]
Fallen Angel
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  RE: The Fall of an Angel
April 10, 2004 1:16:17 AM    View the profile of Fallen Angel 
Chapter 2: Haunted Sleep, and Rude Awakenings

He tried to run, but his feet refused him. He tried to crawl, but he felt as though he was sinking in quicksand. He'd had this dream a million times in the past 10 years. It was always the same, but each time he had it, it felt as new and real as the day it happened.

It had been raining. Jubei and Jikkyo were huddled inside a cave a few kilometers away from their settlement.  They had been out being typical children, exploring and getting into general mischief. Jubei, five years older than Jikkyo, had taken it upon himself to train his younger brother to fight. That day they had spent hours sparring, trading blows, but pulling their punches. Jikkyo, only being 11 at the time, didn't quite have the control and muscle development to fully take on his older brother, but he still fought with a child's ungodly amount of energy.

Their parents, Kagero and Shintaro, were hardcore pacifists. They denounced all violence, and didn't even have a single blaster pistol in their house. A voice resounded inside Angel's dream If you had just stashed that blaster rifle you found, if you had been there, they would have survived

The two brothers had been huddling inside the cave for about an hour, when they heard a tremendous rumbling, shaking the cave they had taken shelter in. Peering outside the mouth of the cave, Jikkyo saw the bottom of a transport coming in low over the cave. The bottom of the craft had a strange red crescent symbol emblazoned on it. 

They watched the transport head off towards the east, in the direction of  their settlement. Jubei pulled out his microbinoculars, and watched as the transport circled above the makeshift city, then landed just outside of it.

"Jubei," Jikkyo asked carefully, "What's going on?"

"I don't know little bro," Jubei replied, a slight hint of fear in his voice, "but we better go find out, that wasn't our supply ship." Jubei ran back into the cave and grabbed his pack, "Come on, lets get a move on, we have to get back to the city."

Lighting flashed, illuminating the vast savannah that lay between the brothers and their destination. Jubei caught a glimpse of the look on his brother's face during the flash. The relentless rain lashed down at them, turning the dirt and clay to mud, hindering their speed. Their boots made a loud *schluk* *schluk* with each stride. Terror gripped Jikkyo's heart, amplified tenfold by the fear he had seen in Jubei's eyes, the fear he heard in Jubei's voice. Thousand of scenarios ran through his mind, frightening images, of death, destruction and emptiness. No matter how hard they ran, it seemed as though they would never reach the city.

Jikkyo's legs ached, his lungs burned. He could feel his stomach urping. This sprint was draining him of everything. Black spots began to crawl into the corner of his visage, and just when he thought he would collapse from exhaustion, they two burst into the city. Jikkyo, not paying attention to anything around him, tried to charge into the middle of the settlement, but Jubei grabbed the back of his collar and lifted Jikkyo form his feet.

Pressing a single finger to his mouth, Jubei then pointed the finger at the armed guards surrounding a single house in the center of the makeshift road. Jikkyo's eyes widened as he realized that was HIS house.

Jubei had to clamp a hand over his little brother's mouth to keep him from shouting.

"QUIET" Jubei whispered coarsely, "we need to get into the house. Let's go around back and climbup through our windows ok?"

Jubei then realized his hands were still clamped over Jikkyo's mouth. The look Jubei gave him had the desired effect You better not make a noise Jikkyo read in his brother's fierce eyes. Jikkyo nodded, and they began to weave their way behind the other buildings.

Pausing in the small alleyways, Jubei lead them on a winding, zigzagging path. Jikkyo kept a mental count of the number of troops they saw. He was up to 15 already.

Miraculously they managed to avoid the roaming patrols, and reached the back of their house. Clambering up the system of boxes and drainpipes they had rigged up to make late night escapes, Jikkyo entered his 2nd floor room. He heard escalated voices shouting down below. A strange man sounded very angry, and he could pick out his father's deep, compassionate voice, pleading with the strange man to stop.

Suddenly time began to slow down, as if going frame by frame, each frame in tune with his heartbeat. He opened the door *thump* *thump*. He went to the stairs *thump* *thump*. He moved down step by step *thump* *thump*. Just when he turned the corner and the sound and light of blasters went off like a supernova in his mind, the corner after which the bodies of his parents should have been lying, he woke up.

Drenched in a cold sweat, he realized R-5 was beeping crazily at him. Lunging for his IR-5s, Angel drew them from their holsters, and whirled around as a twig snapped in the darkness.

"R-5, activate glo-lamps NOW" Angel commanded. Bright fluorescent light spilled out over the savannah, illuminating the form of a woman walking towards him, broken twig in her hand. Jikkyo allowed a small gasp to escape his lungs when she came fully into the light.

"Christine?" Angel muttered aloud. He meant the question to be to himself, but she heard it.

"Jikkyo Nimiichi," She said, casually strolling closer to him. "You've got a lot of nerve coming back here. 2 years and NOT A WORD?" Her emerald eyes seemed to blaze as she fired the words at him.

"The last time I saw you," she continued, "you were taking off in THAT thing. I waited so long for you to return, but you never did&. until now." By the time she finished her sentence she was arms length away from him, where she stopped.  Looking down at the ground she waited for him to say something.

"Christie...I...I had to go. Jubei was dead, my parents were dead, there was nothing left for me here."

"OH SO NOW I'M NOTHING???!!" she shouted, head lifting, her sparkling green eyes blazing with the fires of her anger.

"You know that's not what I meant," Angel replied. He had hoped she had made it off this miserable rock, he had been dreading this since he made up his mind to come back on his leave. The anger faded from her eyes as he looked into them, and instead was replaced by sadness. Tears started to well up in her eyes, making them sparkle that much more. Her long flowing brown hair, mussed by the wind, smelled of berries and spices. The same intoxicating scent that he remembered.

It seemed like a lifetime ago, but seeing her cry chipped a piece of the stone away from Angel's heart. He reached out with his right hand, and brushed away the tear that was rolling down her cheek.

"Christie, I...I...I'm s-sorry." Angel stammered, flustered by the emotions welling up inside him, "I never meant to hurt you...I never would...but you know I had to go. Jubei was the only family I had left, and I had to pick up where he left off, searching for mom and dad's killers."

Christine sniffed, and looked into Jikkyo's eyes. "But you left without even saying goodbye..."

"I know, but I'm back, for the week anyway. I was...umm...hoping you'd be here.' Jikkyo stammered. It didn't take a Jedi to know that he was lying.

"You never were a good liar." Christine said, "You were an 'Angel' remember?" She laughed softly, a sound that chipped another piece of stone off of his heart. She took another step forward.

"Where are you going after the week?" she asked.

"I can't tell you that." Angel replied. Noticing that she took anther step closer.

Suddenly, she was in his arms, softly sobbing into his chest. She had her arms wrapped tightly around his waist, as if she were putting him in a Wookie death hug. Not quite remembering how to react, he slowly wrapped his arms around her.

They stood there for a few minutes, Angel not daring to speak until her sobs diminished and she looked back up at him.

Drawing away from him, she said, "I need to get back. Come to town tomorrow, everyone will want to see you. Heck, most of them still see you as that Angel. Especially me." With that she turned her back and faded into the night.

Determining that there was no way he would be able to sleep tonight, Angel started a small fire and brewed a fresh pot of caf. He was going to need it...

 
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Senior Sergeant Jikkyo "Fallen Angel" Nimiichi 
Assistant Squad Leader (ASL): RAIDERS SQUAD

AS-3/ASL/SSGT Fallen Angel/3SQD/1PLT/1COMP/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [LoR] [RoM] [BoA]

"Me? I always tell the truth...even when I lie. So SAY GOODNIGHT to the badguy. It's the last time you'll ever see him. Watch out there's a bad guy comin through." Tony Montana
[This message has been edited by Angel (edited April 10, 2004 1:22:44 AM)]
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