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Riel Fury
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 18, 2002 10:54:17 AM    View the profile of Riel Fury 
Riel stood on the bridge of the Atrus, the shipyards of Bluepoint 5 shining beneath him.  Flames still occassionally shot through some of the docking bays, and the nearly finished Imperial II Star Destroyer Callandor was now melted scrap metal.  "Communications Officer," Riel said in an icy voice.  "Get me the rest of the Fleet."  The man nodded and sent the message.  "Ready for the transmission, sir," he said after a short time. Riel nodded.  "Vast Empire Navy," he began in an icy voice.  "The shipyards at Bluepoint 5 were assaulted by a commando force of the pirate group Sha'arndak.  They are led by an ex-Imperial Captain who took his Star Destroyer into personal service after the debacle at Endor."  His mouth twisted with distaste.  He still didn't like talking about Endor.  "The small fleet is led by an Imperial II Star Destroyer with many smaller ships, consisting mainly of Corvettes and bulk cruisers.  We cannot risk the entire fleet spread across the galaxy in a vain effort to catch them, we're going to have to rely on a small force to do more commando style work, to destroy the pirates from within or at least give us a good idea of where to find them." Pilots:  The orders for each squadron will be posted on the Commanders Comnet on Sunday, and the competition will start in earnest on Monday.  Pass on what orders you think your pilots need to hear Rewards will consist of 150,000 ICs for the person with the most quality posts.  I want the posts at least 200 words long.  Also, to the most active squadron in the competition you'll get a big 50,000 for each member of the squadron.  Promotions will possibly come from this.  Get ready people.   ----------------------- Rear Admiral (U) Riel Fury Navy Commander In Chief Krath Priest Head Master's assistant in the VEDJ Academy Cult Member in Elite Griffen Sect
[This message has been edited by Riel Fury (edited May 18, 2002 1:34:13 PM)]
Darkhawk
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 18, 2002 8:09:34 PM    View the profile of Darkhawk 
So what happens when I lead Sting Squadron to a glorious victory over all the rest of these schmucks?
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 19, 2002 9:46:25 AM    View the profile of Bear 
I'll believe it when I see it.. Since Riel just told me I can enter this.. prepare to be taken to school! Mwahahaahaha! What a bad pun..
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 19, 2002 10:15:37 AM    View the profile of Japheth 
Bad... bad pun... Never do that again... Well... never is such a strong word... Nevermind... HA!...
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 19, 2002 12:40:07 AM    View the profile of Swomz 
I hope I speak for all of Venom when I say we are going to all be taking home 50k.  What happens to squadrons with less members or less active members?
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 19, 2002 7:19:08 PM    View the profile of Darkhawk 
Uh....they will feel my wrath as they die a slow, painful, terrible death as they gruesomely digest in my stomach for one thousand years. Oh, wait, that's ... nevermind.
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 20, 2002 6:52:22 AM    View the profile of Bear 
I wonder what I'll spend my 150k on? Viagra?
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 20, 2002 10:05:56 AM    View the profile of Arturus 
LOL bear i you need a lot of it too :P anyway ill laugh my arse off so bad when I post more than any of you squad :P (I hope that is possible) the worse thing that could happen is I will be taken to school by bear along with riel :P and yes japheth that is a worse pun than bears ok im finishing ranting blah blah blah lets get this going
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 20, 2002 6:12:04 PM    View the profile of LoneWolf 
I hope you havent forgotten about Aegis we're still able to bring some good activity when its needed.
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 20, 2002 6:20:06 PM    View the profile of Darkhawk 
That's good to hear. Hey, Riel - this might get pretty interesting. Maybe...
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 20, 2002 8:43:52 PM    View the profile of Liquid 
/me starts plotting what he's gonna do with his squad's 50K....
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 22, 2002 4:57:11 PM    View the profile of JMac 
I believe that what I have in the bottom of my profile says it all. AEGIS 4 EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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  RE: Opening Story : Navy Storywriting Competition
May 31, 2002 6:16:43 PM    View the profile of Swomz 
When does this competition end exactly?
 
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