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  Test.
July 10, 2010 11:50:51 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
OOC:

Mission Overview


Codename: Operation Elacron
Location: Xa Fel, Canchen Sector of the Core Worlds
Launch Time: 18:00 Hours

Mission Brief:

The planet of Xa Fel is the home to one of Kuat Drive Yard's major hyperdrive production facilities.  It produces some 20% of all KDY's known hyperdrive stock, and is a valuable resource to all Imperial Factions.  First taken by Thrawn, the planet is now is limbo regarding it's full status.  As it is no longer under the watchful eye of Thrawn, the Vast Empire has decided that it is key time to enter the system and purchase a new stock of hyperdrives. 

Mission Objectives:

Depart from Cepany Space aboard the Hooker at 1600 Hours

Launch from bay 4 to meet and cover the Nighthound, which will be waiting and just arrived outside of the planet Xa Fel.

Escort the Nighthound to Bay I33, where it will load hyperdrives; after the cargo has been succesfully loaded, escort the Nighthound out of atmosphere so that it may safely make it's jump back to Vast Empire Space.

Board the Hooker and jump from system.

Ship List:
Escort:
Roster:
    Nighthound
    Captain: CPT Sezar Nicon
    1st Officer: LCM Oquan Deeri [PC]
    Rear Gunner: SCRW Egis Filter [PC]
    Medic 1/Deck Crew: Zerus Coo
    Medic 2/Deck Crew: Illi Striker [PC]
    Engineer/Deck Crew: Jasper Courtison [PC]

    Iannus Squadron
    Α-1: LCM Lexi Conra (SC)
    Α-2: CWo Torr Kin [PC]
    Α-3: WO1 Rikini Rink
    Α-4: WO1 Yuz Killis [PC]

    Β-1: ESN Charon Tialon (XO) [PC]
    Β-2: 2Lt Wendel Murphs [PC]
    Β-3: Wo2 Karen Thomas
    Β-4: Wo2 Snake Valor

Total PCs: 8

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Revolving Weapons Platforms (RWP) will stand down during exchange.  Also, beware of heavy urban traffic; the area should be clear, but urban environments can be unpredictable.  Furthermore, in the event of live-fire, watch for civilian casualties and avoid at all cost. Loss of civilian life may result in court-marshall or possible demotion.

Mission Start
*Flash Was Here...*

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  RE: Test.
July 10, 2010 3:54:25 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
OOC:
From the PC Oquan's POV.

15:00 Hours

"Bllibbbbb...  Bliibbbb...  Blibbb."

The walls of the first mate's quarters flashed light blue, and then black, and back again as the Versafunction88's screen began to blink.  The soft rattle it made against the durasteel nightstand slowly captured the attention of the sleeping line captain next to it; his accompanying groan made the noise somewhat less annoying.  Rising slightly and resting on his knees for a moment, he stared into the silence.

"Bllibbbbb..!"  The pilot rolled his eyes and said-

"Alright! Alright-" he slapped the datapad so that it would stop whirring.  "Lights!" He stood from his bed as the room suddenly illuminated, crystal white walls adorned with pictures of family and artifacts from his academy days reminded him that he was, indeed, Oquan Deeri, first mate of the Nighthound.

Splashing water on his face at the sonic sink, Deeri said to no-one in particular: "Update."

A cool, electronically tempered male voice filled the cabin.  "All systems are nominal, Line Captain.  The Nighthound is currently docked in port 411B , Naval Central Station, Abrae- Vectra Sys-"

"Thank you," he said, cutting the computer off.  Washing the sleep from his eyes and running the cool water through his short hair, he tried to shake off the drowsiness.  As he straightened and stretched toward the ceiling, he couldn't help but think that he was getting old; stiff and hearing the crack of several bones, he thought it might be wise to get out of the ship for a while.  How long had it been..?

There was a knock and a "swish" as the hatch-way door suddenly whirred open; a man in his late forties with graying hair popped his head into the cabin.  "Oh, good-" he said, his forehead showing signs of perspiration; clearly he'd been "improving" the ship again.  "Just making sure you're up; we have to leave in the next hour or two..." 

The captain was gone just as quickly as he'd arrived, but Oquan shouted after him- "Better wait for me to say something next time..."  He added-"I could have been naked!"

The captain's voice returned- "Some sweet day, Deeri!"  The hatch swished shut before Oquan could counter again. Grumbling, the line captain observed himself in the mirror; the stubble that had grown was minimal at best.  Then again, if he didn't shave and the Wing Commander stopped in...  He picked up the electronic shaver from its station and began to work.

"Swish"

"Oh, good- you're up."  Recognizing the voice, Oquan rplied to the brunette girl-

"Rizeera...  For the force's sake...  I could have been naked." 

"Did...  you want me to knock?"  The line captain pulled the shaver down the side of his face before replying.

"I'd like you to put some caf on; this recycling air is starting to make this place feel like a tomb.  Need somethin to let me know I'm still alive."  The girl was a good ten years younger than him, and cute, but Deeri spoke to her more like one of his daughters.  "If you would?"  He turned to her, looking expectantly.

She took note of his tone and replied- "I'll get right on it, Sir."  She disappeared from the hatch for just a moment before returning and saying- "And...  I just wanted to stop by and thank you again."  Oquan was shaving underneath his jaw and had to peer down at her.  "I guess i would have been in a pretty rough situation if you hadn't bailed me out."  She was looking at the ground, holding her hands rather sheepishly.  As she peered up, waiting for him to say something comforting, he replied-

"Caf, Ms. Teqill...  Caf."  She let out a half-laugh as the pilot turned back to his reflection and began to hum the Naval Academy's Alma mater to himself...

***

"Mmph!"  Oquan whipped his head to one side, saying- "Now...  That's some good caf, Ms. Teqill."  The line captain was the only person in the galley, but it wasn't irregular for him to talk to empty rooms.  In fact, he half-expected the computer to fill in for the girl.

All around him the ship's system's hummed and the pilot began to wonder if he'd ever have full quiet again.  The soft thrum of the ship's core and the beeps of accessory systems all around him made it impossible for one to feel truly quieted...

"There he is."  The pilot glanced to his right to see the Nighthound's presiding medic, Zerus Coo, enter the galley with a young crewman at his sides.  "Good morning, Line Captain."

Oquan lifted his themoglass in a gesture of welcome.

"Before we took off, I thought I'd let you know that your gunner was re-assigned.  Apparently, Mr. Filter has been provided to us instead?"  He gestured toward the senior crewman, who was standing in the doorway, saluting.  The line captain resisted the urge to chuckle and said-

"At ease, Mr. Filter."  The young man's hand shot to his side, as if receiving orders of the strictest nature.  "Tell me, Senior Crewman...  What experience do you have?"  Oquan sipped his caf and glanced momentarily at Coo, who hid a slight grin.

"Over one-hundred hours of simulator time, sir."  Oquan about spit up his drink.

"Your a senior crewman and you have over a hundred hours?"  The senior crewman nodded modestly.  Oquan chuckled to himself and said- "Well...  I guess you'll do."

OOC:
WC: 893
*Flash Was Here...*

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  RE: Test.
July 10, 2010 4:49:58 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
OOC:
Written from Illi's perspective.


Outside the Nighthound, a slight, but athletic gentlemen of about twenty years waited.  He was several stories up and far above the other transport ships, so he was edgy at even the slightest movement.  The wind that gusted at his sides felt as if it was toying with him, whispering sweetly nightmarish incidents into his head. 

In one such thought, he imagined being startled and jumping, out of fright, from the deck, falling forever until meeting a sharp end somewhere near the planet's surface.  Illi shivered as one of the chillier winds whipped past him and he shrugged the images away.  He thought about the cold instead...  Abrae would be entering it's planetary winter soon, he recalled.  The cold was only beginning to bite.

He checked his chrono again.  What in Iceheart's name was taking these people so long?  How a person's capacity for timeliness could be absent, he didn't know, but he was becoming nervous again.  This was, after all, his first assignment to a ship this large.  The Nighthound would be taking him to the Intimidator, a VSD II patrolling the outer sectors of Vast Empire space.  A short stop aboard the Nighthound, he thought, and then he would be off to the big times...

Behind him, the door flew open suddenly and a light poured out onto the deck.  Illi, completely surprised, jumped from being so startled.

"Whoa, there!"  An older gentlemen exited the ship, catching his arm before he took any more steps toward the deck's edge.  "You need to be careful!  You could have fallen!"  Illi, in the midst of his deep breaths, failed to put into words what this man had just inspired in him...

"I'm guessing you're our cargo?"  Tempted, still, to strangle the man, he noted the man's warm attitude and tried to answer his question.

"Uhh..." he exhaled and calmed himself at last, "yes."

"Excellent!  You can take your things right inside; I'm sure someone will help you out."  The man, who Illi was now determine was in fact the captain of the ship, slapped him on the shoulder and then strode past him, waving genially to a zabrak who was passing by. 

Illi cocked an eyebrow.  "Hmph."

***

Aboard the Nighthound, Illi was instantly more comfortable; the temperature was more forgivable and the smell was less metallic and more...  Like caf?  Something told him that he might get along with the crew quite well.

"Hello?"  Illi turned and saw a girl for a moment before turning away.  Before he knew what happened he'd snapped his head back though.

"Uh-" He stumbled.  "Hello."  The female in front of him was slender, dark-haired and was higher ranking than him.  He... would be cool.

"I mean- hello!  I'm travelling with you guys for a little bit?"  He tried to fill the information in for her as she dropped her head to one side and narrowed her eyes. 

"Oh!  Right.  The medic?"  Illi nodded at her as the too laughed somewhat uncomfortably.  The medic tried to focus on something else for a brief moment so as to keep her from thinking that he was staring at her.  "I guess you'll be staying with the other new guy, then.  We just got another tail-gunner.  Follow me?" 

"Uh..  Yes."  He stared after her as she walked toward the front of the ship.  Walk, he told himself....

OOC:
WC: 559
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  RE: Test.
July 10, 2010 5:38:53 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
OOC:
From Jasper's perspective.


Shivering slightly, Courtison thought about running to grab his engineering corp jacket.  Trying not to lose count of the cargo drums, he'd begun to draw hatch marks on his datapad.  Fourteen, he etched another line...

"Geskichi Tekanawon!" A rodian was yelling toward him from a platform across the way.

"Is it flammable?" Courtison yelled back.  He saw the rodian turn to the others he was working with and ask the question for him.  A few moments passed...

"Shennua!"  Courtison sighed and drew a diagonal hatch-mark through the last grouping of lines. 

"Okay! Bring it down...  But be careful!"  The rodian ran off, and Courtison made a mental note to make sure that the canister was secured before lift-off.  All he knew, the engineer thought to himself, was that everything was going to have to be unloaded, and then re-loaded again; there was no way they'd be fitting twelve hyperdrives and their food-stuffs.  Not, of course, unless they stuffed them back onto the cargo entry decks...  He chuckled, thinking of who he would put in charge of that.

A crackle emitted from the exterior com-unit above him.

"Courtison?"  It was the first mate.

"Yes, Sir?"  He started a new line of hatches on the datapad as another drum arrived.

"We're sealing this ship up in about fifteen minutes.  Can you be ready?"

"I think so, sir.  But if you see Corellian ale and a chest full of illegal spices- you'll know you left too soon."  The pilot did not reply.  "I mean...  Yes, sir!  Ready in a snap!"  Courtison felt his gut twist a little bit.

"Very good, engineer." 

Courtison whistled to himself and made an expression as if to say "that was a close one..."  He looked at one of the deck hands who was exiting the ship.

"I..  guess you guys should probably pick it up..."  The crewman nodded curtly and seemed to be waiting for more information.  "Uhh..  Redouble your efforts.  Or something..."  He shooed the deck-hand away.

The evening that had come before that morning had been something of an interesting one as well, he recalled, taking his mind off of the loading for a moment.  He guessed that the first mate's attitude toward him was probably carry-over from the previous night's events.  Then again, he was partly responsible for the whole thing.

"Okay!" He tried to explain to the pilot.  "We might have gone a little too far."  The pilot looked at him quietly, and then looked at the young girl behind electric bars.

"It's her 2nd year in the military so you decided to start a bar fight?  Courtison..."  He could tell that the pilot was having a difficult time deciding whether to become angry or to just shrug it off.  Calling your superior officer in the middle of the night to bail one of his officers out of MP jail was not a good move...

"I would bail her out myself, Sir, but...  I may have had a bad night with the cards."  Oquan glanced back at him, slightly amazed.

"It's thirty-five credits, Courtison.  How much could you have lost?"

"..."

"Are you serious?  Didn't you just get paid?"

Courtison tried to smile, but it came off badly and he just decided that he should stare at the ground for a while. 

"I guess it's good you called me...  If the captain new about this she'd probably lose her assignment."  He was speaking half-way to the girl and half to Courtison.  Oquan glanced to the bailiff and said- "Alright, cut her loose."


"Hmph."  Courtison nodded to himself, definitely starting to feel the chill of the winds.  The whole thing, he thought, would definitely blow over.....

OOC:
WC: 638
*Flash Was Here...*

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  RE: Test.
July 10, 2010 9:39:16 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
OOC:
Written from Charon's perspective; Beta Flight.


The atmosphere in the flight hanger was electric.  The largest bay aboard the Hooker, Bay 4 had multiple landings and decks. With ceilings high enough to accommodate smaller freighters and gunships, and an expanse wide enough to comfortably port a corellian corvette, it was nothing short of titan.

The bay had not been chosen to adequately field a large vessel, however.  On the contrary, it had been chosen to suit a crowd of no less than a thousand; fighter and ship mechanics, command officers (as well as the Hooker's captain) and pilots alike adorned the walls and decks of the fourth craft bay.  Amid such a mob, one would assume that it would have been difficult to keep it to a dull roar, but no such order was needed; the room was silent save a few whispering voices.

On the third deck of Bay 4's protruded structures an entire crew of technicians and array operators stood around a single radar operation system.  The systems specialist sat quietly, but looked haughty as he gazed toward the blank radar holo.  And then...

"They're here!"  Four fighter craft blinked into existence, three-dimensional representations revealing them to be the very craft they had all been waiting for.  A flurry of "that's them" could be heard making it's way across the bay's populace in something akin to a wave.  What had been terse excitement before was now a gripping laconic and stillness.  No one dared breath.

Though they could not hear them, as soon as the first two fighters, A-9 Vigilance interceptors, appeared on the bay's horizon, the ship members knew that they were, indeed, experiencing a historical moment.  As they neared, the second pair of fighter craft, I-7 Howlrunners, which were newer yet and far dynamically superior, made their appearance.

Under the control and guidance of the Hooker's tractor beam system, the A-9s calmly reached and entered into the hanger bay, the whir of their engines resonating as they broke the air-shield.  Quieter than most any other craft, the A-9s first rotated, and then gently descended onto the reflective landing of the hanger bay.  Resting on their massive gun arms, they were unscathed; virgins to actual combat, they looked as if they could decimate anything that crossed their path.

The howlrunners were close behind and quieter still.  Quiet, that is, until the pilot in the lead I-7 revved the ships sublight engines into a furious roar.  At the sudden clamor, the entire hanger burst into a thunderous applause and laughter.  These were the first of the new generation of fighter craft, and the ship and it's crew were ignited...

Stepping out of the lead I-7 after it had come to rest, Charon Tialon looked around for the squadron's SC.  Withdrawing herself from the crowd, Lexi Conra exited toward the center of the hanger, applauding amusedly at her XO's antics.

She mouthed the word "impressive" to him as they both began to smile.  Drawing off his fighter helmet, he threw it toward her as she neared him.  "Now... That, my dear woman- is an entrance."

***

The men and women of the escort frigate's fourth bay slowly trickled out of the auditoreum style theater and gradually worked themselves back to their stations and duties.  Remaining in the hanger were the members of Iannus Squadron.

Zerus Coo, a nemoidian, said- "Congratulations, Charon- you've officially deafened an entire crew of otherwise healthy crewman."  Before Charon could retort, another accusation flew-

"And I thought you were going to level your sublights at us and burn us all out with full radiation.  You could have killed us all!" A slight uproar flickered to life at this comment.

"I guess I missed my chance!"  Charon finally yelled.  More laughter ensued as the XO tore off his flight gear.  Snake Valor slapped him on the back, his claws stinging slightly.  Snake hissed what might be recognized as a "oh boy" in his ear while someone gripped his hand.  He squeezed it before they released and went their seperate ways.

"So- what sad, destitude scum do we have the fortune of putting out of their misery with these things?" he bantered.

"Somone called the New Republic!" Rikini Rink blurted.

"Yes, well- we'll be leaving in exactly 37 minutes, so keep your courage and prepare your senses."  The blond with blue eyes steadied the fighter-group were her declaration.  "We'll be treading lightly where we're going- so pack heavy..."  A few cheers emitted from the group as they dispersed for their fighters, ready to take on Coruscant itself...

OOC:
WC: 753
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July 25, 2010 10:36:52 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
The captain strode into the cabin; his jacket was still unbuttoned as he dropped into the hot seat.  The sweat that had gathered on his forehead from working in the ship's lower quarters glimmered in the light of the central console.

"Lieutenant?" He asked as he found the straps aside his chair.  "Do we have everyone?"  To his right, the co-pilot double-checked his datapad for the boarding log before replying-

"Yes sir."  The captain nodded at this and said-

"Alright, then- let's get it started."  The co-pilot rotated slightly so that he could catch the eye of the communications officer; he spun his finger quickly in a medium circle, signaling to the com-officer that they were ready for departure.  The com-officer, in turn, put his attention on his console, clicking the glowing screen twice.

"Attention all personnel," he said. "The captain is preparing for departure; find a secure location and strap yourself in.  Remain seated until given the express command of the captain.  Thank you."

Pulling up a separate channel, the operator quickly dialed in the code for Abrae's Central Communications directory.  Locating the traffic controller, he said- "Comptroller- section j, bay 69 requesting clearance and route for departure."

"Request confirmed..." The comptroller paused, searching for the name of the ship. "-Nighthound.  Sending your request and receiving permission."

Inside the cabin, the captain said "Engine prep..."  The lieutenant to his right quickly ran his fingers across one, and then two rows of switches, their indicator lights flickering on as he did so.  Deep in the heart of the ship, the core suddenly turned from cool blue to a vibrant, hot red.  From there, a series of pops indicated the start of the main breakers in the fuel and engine systems.  The fuel, which wasn't a liquid but rather a foam, was turned to a vapor as the igniter flashed and excited the substance.  The highly efficient gas spread around the ship in a matter of seconds.  The slight hum of the energized gas could be heard from every corner of the craft, and made a soft, but noticeable companion to the ever-present hum of the electrical systems.

"Your request and exit have been acquired, Nighthound.  Transferring to you now...  Transfer complete.  You are released from this station.  Safe travels, Nighthound."

"Copy," the com officer came back.

"Engines start," said the captain as he pulled back the longer, light blue levers to his right.  As they clicked into place, the core, deep within the ship, once again changed color.  It seemed to swirl for a moment before it finally glowed a bright yellow.  A deep groan rumbled throughout the ship as the engines on either side of the craft began to receive energy; the ship shook as they gathered strength.

Outside the ship, the skies were mostly clear, save a few freightors and other passenger carriers.  Evening was setting in and the glow over the capital city of Abrae was fading quickly.  On the viewport of the Nighthound, the cool winter winds had chilled water vapor and frost had begun to form.  All along the bow of the ship the frost had crawled and crystallized surfaces, glinting, as it would, in the Nighthound's exterior lights.

With the route programmed in, the captain activated the repulsor lifts.  From inside the craft, it felt as if much of the pressure and tension of the ship, and even the hum and reverberations, gave-way as the craft gently separated from the surface of the platform.

Working carefully to avoid the other platforms, the captain steared the yoke toward an exit vector, throttling the sublight engines upward.

OOC:
I'll be back to finish this later
*Flash Was Here...*

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