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  Marcus [Combat Engineer]
January 5, 2010 11:18:38 PM    View the profile of Marcus 
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Marcus Riley
Combat Engineer
Level 1: Electrical Systems
Story 1: Basic Electronics/Wiring


Marcus lay on his back in his bunk, his starched black sheets pushed into a pile at his waist. Moving his left hand to scratch an itch on his chest, he turned his head to look at his clock. The black screen read 03:58 in red block numbers. Pushing himself up with his right arm Marcus reached over with his left and picked up the small blue alarm clock he had purchased the night before. Staring at the chrono as another minute slowly passed by he sighed and flipped the switch that turned the alarm off.

“Another night with no sleep… great.” Marcus whispered.

Looking to the other bunk in the spacious room, Marcus saw his roommate fast asleep, the familiar shape of a female curled up next to him. Grunting at the two Marcus slipped from his bunk and made his way quietly to his closet. Opening the door slowly he grabbed a fresh towel from a hook, closing the door he crept across the carpeted room and into the bathroom.

Closing the door Marcus flipped the light switch and closed his eyes as the bright white light from the florescent bulbs lit the small bathroom. With his eyes adjusted Marcus stripped and stepped into the shower stall, the white square tiles cold against the bare skin of his feet. Turning the chrome shower handles Marcus cringed as first cold and then gradually warmer water poured from the shower head and over his body. Steam quickly filled the room as he showered, rubbing his body to try and wash away the restless feeling in his limbs. Turning the wet knobs Marcus finished showering and stepped out onto the soft white shower rug. Toweling off he moved to the sink to finish the rest of his morning routine. Wiping the steam from the mirror he shaved and brushed his teeth, securing the towel around his waist Marcus flipped the light and left the bathroom.

Feeling clean and refreshed Marcus moved to his dresser and grabbed some socks, an under shirt and a pair of boxers from their respective piles. Back over at his closet Marcus grabbed his uniform from its hanger, walking to his bed he laid it next to his socks and shirt. Dropping his towel to the floor and kicking it to the side with a swipe of his foot, Marcus quickly dressed. Ready for the day’s events, Marcus stepped in front of the mirror and looked himself over. Running his hands over his chest Marcus smoothed the wrinkles of his jacket and sighed. Shaking the thoughts from his head Marcus moved to his desk, slid on his boots and looked at his clock. 05:00 blinked at him in red.

“I still have an hour and a half before training. Guess I’ll go get some breakfast then.” Marcus said to himself.

Standing up Marcus grabbed the few things he would need for the day, and with one last glance at his still sleeping roommate, left the room and headed for the mess hall.

~*~

Marcus watched as a wide range of others moved in and out of the mess hall for breakfast. Glancing at his chrono he sighed when he saw he had another fifteen minutes before class. He had recognized a few individuals in the large cafeteria, but made no move to talk to any of them. Grabbing his coffee and glancing at his data pad to see where he was going, Marcus stood from his seat and left before he was late to his training session.

Marcus walked through the barracks and soon enough came to the room he would be in for the next few weeks. Stepping inside he wasn’t surprised to see the room was occupied by only a few other troopers and that his instructor was not even present. Taking a sip of his coffee Marcus stepped into the room and took a seat somewhere in the middle. Looking around Marcus took in his surroundings. The lecture room itself was of medium size, probably for a small class of ten to twenty trainees. In a triple tier arrangement sat two columns of desks, each with enough seating room for three people. A large door in the back of the room led most likely to the lab area where they would be working with the tools used by Combat Engineers.

The hiss of a sliding door signaled the entrance of the rest of the class followed by the instructor. Everyone quickly took their seats as the instructor, who was a Major based upon the insignia on his jacket, walked down the center aisle to stand front and center to the class. Turning around the Major looked over his trainees, stopping to give each a good once over.

“I am Major Tanner. I will be your instructor for the next few weeks. This specialist course will take approximately twenty-one days or three weeks. I will teach you everything you need to know so that when your final exams come, you can pass with ease and finally receive your titles as Combat Engineers. Any questions?” The Major said, looking over the class. “No? Good. Let’s begin. Everyone come down here and grab your manuals.”

Marcus stood and walked down to grab his manual, a small hardcover textbook with the words ‘COMBAT ENGINEER’ written across the top in big red letters. Marcus went back to his seat and opened his manual to the page Major Tanner had written on the board.

“Our first topic is Basic Electronics and wiring. To begin we will be going over the concept of electricity and...”

For the next three hours Major Tanner went over all of chapter one and two. It was a long and boring session but it had to be done, and Marcus even learned a few things. They went over the basics of electricity, ohms, power, voltage, current and resistance. They talked about different wire gauges and the amount of electricity each could carry. It was a very in depth class. And at the end Major Tanner went into the back and came out wheeling a carriage full of what appeared to be data pads.

“Well that’s it for today’s class. Before you leave I want each of you to come down and grab of one these broken data pads. Using what we learned today, I want each of you to figure out what is wrong with your data pad and fix it. Bring it to my office for grading once you have finished. You are welcome to use your own tools or use the ones in the lab area. Be sure whatever you use you put back. Dismissed.”

Major Tanner picked up his things and left without another word. Marcus watched the older man leave, and once he had left walked to the front of the room and grabbed one of the broken data pads and headed into the back lab. There were several metal desks in the middle of the large room, each with its own set of plugs to plus in any number of electronic machines. The walls were lined with racks and shelves of wires, diodes, and hundreds of other parts and diagnostic equipment needed to repair any and all things electronic.

Picking one of the empty work tables Marcus placed his project down and went to grab a few of the essentials he would need to repair the data pad. Anything he didn’t use he could always put back. Grabbing a few wires, resistors, a circuit board, a diagnostics kit and a few other things and went back to his work station. Plugging the diagnostics kit in Marcus ran a systems check on the data pad. Evidently the power supply was shot and the main circuit was coming back negative.

Flipping the data pad over Marcus went to work. Unscrewing the back of the small hand held console, Marcus removed the guard plate that protected the inner workings of the data pad. Marcus went to work replacing the wires that were busted. Evidently they had taken too much current and overheated, melting the wires and a portion of the circuit board.

Marcus replaced the old wires with new ones, as well as the circuit board and the power supply. He also swapped out the old resistors for new ones that would keep the current down in the wires so that they wouldn’t overheat again. Marcus was happy with his work and surprised that it was a bit easy, though he had been paying attention during the lecture as well as reading ahead at points during the class.

Finished and feeling that tired sensation in his legs, Marcus wrote up a quick report on why his data pad was broken and made his way to Major Tanner’s office. It only took him a few moments to arrive at the Majors door since it was just down the hall. Knocking on the door Marcus waited for a response.

“Come in.” The Major said from his office.

Marcus tapped the controls and the door slid to the side. Stepping in Marcus clicked his heels and saluted.

“At ease soldier. What can I do for you?” Tanner asked.

Handing the Major the fixed data pad Marcus spoke “Private Marcus Riley, Sir. I finished fixing the data pad you gave us earlier. There were a few faulty wires that needed replacing as well as a circuit board and the power supply. Should be working like new now.”

“Very good private. A. I’ll see you at class tomorrow.” Major Tanner said.

“Thank you sir.” Saluting again Marcus turned on his heel and began to leave.

“Private… here.” Tanner said tossing him the data pad. “Keep it.” Smiling the Major sat back behind his desk and went back to work.

Catching the data pad in one hand Marcus smiled. “Thank you sir.” Pocketing the data pad Marcus left the Major to his work and went back to his room for a well deserved nap.
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  RE: Marcus [Combat Engineer]
January 7, 2010 5:53:55 AM    View the profile of Marcus 
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Marcus Riley
Combat Engineer
Level 1: Electrical Systems
Story 2: Electrical Systems


“De-caf… I hate de-caf…” Marcus sighed to himself.

This morning found him well rested and in his usual spot in the mess hall. Taking another forced sip of his coffee Marcus turned his attention back to the paragraph he had just started in his CE manual.

Chapter Four: Common Battlefield Items

As a Combat Engineer you will come across a wide range of electrical systems on the battlefield. All of these are important in some shape or form and all can be used to help your squad. Some of these items for example will include Det Packs, Mines, Data Pads, Comm Links and a wide range of other personal equipment.


Marcus sighed and closed the book. Taking another sip of his coffee Marcus stood from his seat and grabbing his things made his way to the classroom for the days training session. Moments later and Marcus was seated in the back of the room waiting once again for the rest of the class as well as their instructor, Major Tanner.

Soon enough those who were missing from the room showed up, Major Tanner escorting those who had been tardy to the room. The Major made his way to his desk in the front and laying down a folder turned to address the class, a grim expression painted across his experienced visage.

“This is the first and last time I will be saying this.  For those of you on time I thank you and this does not apply to you. For those of you who I had to escort here for the second time in a row however, this applies.” Tanner took a breath. “I will drop your sorry ass from this course if you are late tomorrow. The army does not have the time or money for those who like to fool around, and if you are not here before me tomorrow you are done. Do I make myself clear troopers?”

“Sir Yes Sir!” The room said in unison.

“Good. Now let us begin. Everyone grab your things and follow me. We will be working in the lab today. Oh, and this folder has your grades for your data pad project. You can get them as you come into the back room.” Tanner flipped the folder open and walked away, heading into the lab room behind the small lecture hall.

Still sitting Marcus waited for the rush of other troopers to subside and then made his way to retrieve his grade though he already knew what he had gotten. As Marcus stepped through the door and into the lab Tanner nodded to him as he finished the head count to make sure everyone was present. Marcus took an empty seat off to the side where he could have a clear view at whatever Tanner was doing. There were four crates on the floor in front of Tanner and each was filled with something different.

“Now that everyone is here we can start. In these here crates you will find some basic equipment you will come across in the field as a Combat Engineer. This here is a det pack.” Major Tanner reached into the first crate a pulled out one of the explosive devices. “This is a standard issue explosive and you will all be working with these at one point in your careers. You will also be working with a number of other explosives and other combat related electrical systems. It is your job as Combat Engineers to help your squad by utilizing and repairing said systems whenever and where ever you may be.”

The Major continued to go over and explain the properties, uses, and repair methods for each of the items he had taken out for the days class. Tanner explained the necessity behind such simple devices and if implemented properly could mean the success of the mission. He also went over what could happen if a Combat Engineer did not do his job properly. It could mean failure of the mission, or even worse, the loss of your squad mates life or your own life.

Tanner went on for another half hour, teaching the basics of how to repair the items before him. It was a simple task if you knew what you were doing, and knowing what you are doing makes the project go by rather quickly.

“Now I want every one of you to pick two of these explosives. You are going to take figure out what is wrong with both items and fix them. These are only test dummies so if you screw up you won’t kill everyone here. Though you will be covered with a bit of blue paint to show you are in fact an idiot.”

That last comment brought a chuckle from the whole class, and even Tanner smiled at his little trick. Marcus stood and grabbed the two items he had wanted to work with, a det pack and a land mine. Back at his lab station Marcus went to flip open his manual when Tanner quickly closed it.

“Oh, and I forgot to mention. This is graded so the use of your manuals is considered cheating and will result in a failure for this class. I hope you have all been studying like you are supposed to.”

Grunting Marcus took his manual and pushed it off to the side where it wouldn’t be in his way. Fortunately he had spent most of his morning reading and studying what could before class in the mess hall. However he had only gotten so far and had yet to reach the info needed to properly fix the land mine. The det pack was easy though as it was early on in the chapter and he knew he could fix his.

Grabbing his data pad Marcus brought up the diagnostics program that had been pre-installed on it for this class. Plugging the console up to the det pack he ran a quick system check and quickly found the problem. One of the detonators was on the fritz as well as a portion of the explosive had gone bad. Grabbing the necessary tools Marcus quickly took apart the det pack, and after a few moments trying to remember where the detonator rod was located, quickly replaced it and the bad explosive.

Putting everything back together Marcus flipped the arming switch, the status light turning a bright green. Smiling at his handiwork Marcus pushed the pack aside and moved onto the mine. Frowning he had no idea what could even be the problem. Turning the mine over in his hands Marcus search for a port to plug in his data pad. After a few moments he gave up searching and came up with a plan. Walking over to where the tardy troopers were Marcus set the land mine down on their table and walked back to the other side of the room. Grabbing a few bolts Marcus leaned up against a counter and began tossing them at his land mine which was on the other side.

“Private! What are you doing? Stop throwing things in my class or I will have to beat you senseless.” Tanner barked at Marcus.

But it was too late. Marcus had already thrown his last bolt, and when the other troopers realized what was going on, it was too late. The bolt hit the mine square on the tip and activated the paint mechanism. The mine exploded, blasting blue paint in all directions, and covering the troopers who had been tardy again today. Marcus smiled at his little scheme, but Tanner wasn’t so pleased.

“Well Private. I am sorry to say but you have failed and at the same time succeeded today’s lesson. The object was to repair your explosives, which I know you repaired the det pack, as well as not get yourself covered in blue paint if you failed. Seeing as how you are not covered in blue paint, you passed that as well.” Tanner turned to the troopers covered in blue paint. “However, your squad is now dead and for that I have to fail you. See me after class.” Tanner glared at Marcus and then continued to walk around the classroom observing the other troopers.

The rest of class was rather boring, minus the few failures and explosions of blue paint. Class was dismissed but Marcus stayed behind to speak with Major Tanner.

“That was a very foolish stunt you pulled. If that was a real mine you would get thrown in the brig and most likely a death sentence for that. Your fellow troopers would have been dead. Though it was amusing and they did deserve it to an extent. You still fail, though I won’t be kicking you out of the class so be thankful for that. Now get out of here and make sure you are here on time tomorrow.” Tanner waved Marcus away and grabbing his things left the classroom.

Sighing Marcus took a seat and let his head fall into his hands. After a few moments he stood and left, making his way to his room before his blue friends found him alone.
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  RE: Marcus [Combat Engineer]
January 7, 2010 8:14:39 PM    View the profile of Jegora 
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A good read, if a bit dry. You covered the information though, and you're quite mechanically sound, so I'm going to call it a pass.

One thing you need to watch is your dialogue. I know it's easy to get carried away with dialogue, especially when writing a lecture-type post, but try and remember to write like people actually talk. I would also suggest keeping a close eye on your punctuation around quotations. This wasn't a big issue by any stretch of the imagination, so I won't go into details, but if you have questions send me a ComNet PM or catch me on IRC.

Once again, nice job, and carry on.
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