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  SR: PotF Discussion Thread
June 26, 2008 10:29:20 PM    View the profile of Verkur 
This is the main discussion thread for the story arc, Sith Reborn: Path of the Fallen. The main story can be found here, SR:PotF.

Rules and Regulations:
(Courtesy of Sic)
Sicario wrote:Few things real quick:

I hate doing this, it makes me sound like a GodMod, which I'm not, but I have to post up some rules. More like guideline, but you must follow them:

(In no specific order)

1) Please, please, do not post about Revan unless you ask. You can post your feelings about him, please do -it's encouraged- but don't post about him doing anything until you PM me about it first. I don't mean to be a jerk, but c'mon, he's the most important character and I want his tale to be told the way I see it.

2) Absolutely no killing off important characters please. Let's not put a saber to Mand'alore's head and call it a day. Feel free to post -about- them, just PM me first.

3) I'll handle story progression, meaning I'll advance the plot as I see fit, whenever and however I please. Do you have a say in it? Yes and no. I've been plotting this whole saga out for months, and have had the idea for years, so I want things to happen in a particular manner. However, with that said, feel free as a naked bird to PM me about any ideas you may have, just don't try to take over the story, it's my baby If you have any ideas or questions, PM me, I don't mind it a turtle's wink..

4) Finally, if your post involves another character owned by another member of the VE, please PM both myself and that character to make sure what you say is ok.

And some of my own rules.

5) Only PM me or Sic if your next post DIRECTLY effects our story. Do not pm us with questions concerning things not with the main story board Sith Reborn: Path of the Fallen. It just gets confusing when you ask about things not within that topic on the StoryNet.


Character Creation:

Anyone who would like to join the story, must first fill out this short character creation sheet.

Name:
Age:
Position: (This can be either, Jedi, Mandolorian, or Republic Army
member) [If Jedi, let me or Sic know if you'd like to stay light side or fall to Revan's words, and also, let state if you'd like to be a Knight or a Padawan, sorry, no Masters]
Appearance:
Force Powers: (This will have to go through Sic, as Force powers need to be accepted so you aren't more powerful then Revan)
Other info: (This could be anything. Lightsaber techniques, hilt style, blade color, etc.)

If you have any questions, PM Sic, or myself. Also, anything new will be added accordingly so check back here often.
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June 26, 2008 10:38:00 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
I talked to Sic and he told me to post here. Can I post?
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June 26, 2008 10:38:06 PM    View the profile of Sicario 
For those who want to join in on the RP:

I'll put up the first post myself, giving some background information and setting the overall tone of the story, which will start out during the very beginning of the Jedi Masters discussing the Mando-War. Once that is up, feel free to PM me your character outline, which will look like this:

Name:
Age:
Position: (This can be either, Jedi, Mandolorian, or Republic Army
member) [If Jedi, let me know if you'd like to stay light side or fall to Revan's words, and also, let me know if you'd like to be a Knight or a Padawan, sorry, no Masters]
Appearance:
Force Powers: (This will have to go through me, as Force powers need to be accepted so you aren't more poweful then Revan)

Send that bit of info to me whenever you wish.

That is all, the first post should be up over the next few days.
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  RE: SR: PoTF Discussion Thread
June 26, 2008 10:40:36 PM    View the profile of Verkur 
Also, include the colour of your lightsaber. Just an added touch to allow it to become more or your own character.
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June 26, 2008 10:42:45 PM    View the profile of Sicario 
And whether it's single hilt, double hilt (Maul Style) or two lightsabers. Just basic LS info. Thanks for the reminder Verk.

PS. No red Sabers allowed prior to Revan turning to the Dark Side
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June 26, 2008 10:52:06 PM    View the profile of Verkur 
This is getting silly. More added info. With the help of wookieepedia, you can learn a few things about lighsabers. You can also include your fighting style as well.
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  RE: SR: PoTF Discussion Thread
June 26, 2008 10:55:53 PM    View the profile of Sicario 
I'm off for the night, I have the first post outline all done and thought out, should prove for a quick writing process. Expect it out on Friday or Saturday, it'll be a bit lengthy, setting everything up.
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June 27, 2008 1:46:57 PM    View the profile of Sicario 
I'm about 650 words in, about 1/3 of the way through the first post. Expect it posted either tonight or tomorrow afternoon.
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June 27, 2008 11:57:09 PM    View the profile of Sicario 
These are the current Characters so you all know:

Jegora Fal:

Name: Tarn Fal

Age: 36

Position: Vice Admiral, Commander of the 6th Republic Fleet, consisting off:

-1 Inexpugnable-class tactical command ship (Alaric)
-4 Interdictor-class Destroyers (Kreesh, Turion, Venator, Charon)
-8 Hammerhead-class Cruisers (Vengeance, Victorius, Aedar, Acheron, Koryton, Lorydian Flame, Arkanse, Harbinger)
-8 Republic Corvettes (Ursus, Zurand, Nero, Aurelius, Kertian, Tirith, Kote, Insurion)
-3rd Republic Starfighter Wing (72 Aurek-class Fighters)
-6th Republic Starfighter Wing (72 Aurek-class Fighters)
-7th Republic Assualt Wing (60 'L-Wing'-class Republic Assualt Fighters)
-Various support ships and transports
-6,000 Republic Marine Troopers, 1,000 Republic Assault Commandos, 20,000 War Droids

Appearance: 6'3", physically well built. Black hair, dark blue eyes, strong jaw. 'Ruggedly handsome'
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Anival:

Name:Isa'ack
Age:25
Position:Jedi Knight) I fall to Revan's words)
Appearance:Tall brown hair, scar going from left eybrow to chin, muscular
Force Powers: Force Push, Force Pull, Mind trick,  Force Heal, Force Speed, Force grip, and evenataully lightning


Isa'ack Jedi who will fall to the darkside.


Isa'ack is a real calm Jedi. He can become qiute mad somtimes but, he hides the emotion. He can keep a grudge and later find justifiacation for revenge and he sees it as "the force in action" He falls to the dark side after his master Aristoa falls in battle.
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Blue-Leader:

Name: Tavon Esan
Age: 32
Position: Jedi Knight, Light Side
Appearance:


Force Powers: Heal, Small Battle Meditation Prowess, Throw Lightsaber, Critical Strike, Power Attack, Flurry.
Lightsaber Color: Green


History


Tavon Esan was born on Coruscant, and as a child was picked up by and identified as a Force Sensitive by the Jedi Order. He was glorified as a child by the jedi teachers, and was eventually knighted. During this time he was transferred to the Corellian System to resolve a trade dispute, during this time Esan was shown the true hatred of the galaxy, he returned the mission a different man. In the next few years he learned how to fly multiple starships, and mastered the Soresu form of lightsaber combat.

Finding one padawan-Dressa Kuun-Esan began to train her in the arts of the force. But a freak accident on Coruscant a year later rendered her deceased, and this made Esan never to find a padawan again.


Personality


Esan acts serious, all the time. During combat he may not utter a word, he would just go straight through the battle with out speaking. He is a master of Soresu, the patience form and therefore he is a very patient Jedi. He strictly follows the Don't fire until fired upon rule, and would never draw his saber without that reasoning.
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Hunter-Morrell:

Name: Joshen Skirata
Age:25
Position: Mando
Force Powers: Minor Force Sensitivity
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June 28, 2008 12:59:22 AM    View the profile of Verkur 
Sic, I think we should post our character bios as well. This way everyone who is participating has a character and everyone else knows who is who. If I can I will post mine soon.
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June 28, 2008 11:06:59 PM    View the profile of Blue-Leader 
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Blue-Leader:

Name: Talvon Esan
Age: 32
Position: Jedi Knight, Light Side
Appearance: Sandy Blonde hair, 6'3'', 150 Pounds, has a strong figure.
Force Powers: Heal, Small Battle Meditation Prowess, Throw Lightsaber, Critical Strike, Power Attack, Flurry.
Lightsaber Color: Green (Formerly Blue)


History:


Talvon Esan was born on Coruscant, and as a child was picked up by and identified as a Force Sensitive by the Jedi Order. He was glorified as a child by the jedi teachers, and was eventually knighted. During this time he was transferred to the Corellian System to resolve a trade dispute, during this time Esan was shown the true hatred of the galaxy, he returned the mission a different man. In the next few years he learned how to fly multiple starships, and mastered the Soresu form of lightsaber combat.

Trained at a young age by Master Atris for lightsaber combat, Esan found a huge respect for her. But a year later Master Vrook Lamar, member of the Jedi Council took Esan as his padawan. The stubborn, wise, and powerful Master put a huge dent into Esan's future, this dent was not a bad one. Vrook trained Esan in the arts of Djem-So and Makashi, and made Esan one of the most promising swordsman the Temple had seen for many years, but, he had trained from the best.

Being knighted at the age of 19, Esan was very proud of his achievement. Noticing Esan's talent, Master Zez-Kei Ell took interest in the 19 year old Jedi Knight. Zez-Kai Ell taught Esan to defend against the Double-Bladed Lightsaber, something that Esan was having trouble to do while learning Makashi. Master Zez Kai-Ell and his padawan (Who would later follow Revan during the Mandalorian Wars) would later go on many missions together.

At the spark of the Mandalorian Wars, Zez-Kai Ell's padawan left with Revan. Esan and him were great friends, and the painstaking decision to stay with the Jedi payed off. Zez-Kai Ell's padawan died during the opening battle that Revan fought. This caused Esan to have an even higher loyalty to the Jedi order, knowing that his decision to stay with the Jedi was the smart one.

Padawans:

Finding one padawan-Dressa Kuun-Esan began to train her in the arts of the force. But a freak accident on Coruscant a year later rendered her deceased, and this made Esan never to find a padawan again.


Personality:

Esan acts serious, all the time. During combat he may not utter a word, he would just go straight through the battle with out speaking. He is a master of Soresu, the patience form and therefore he is a very patient Jedi. He strictly follows the Don't fire until fired upon rule, and would never draw his saber without that reasoning.

Lightsaber Techniques:

Mastered Forms:

Soresu: Known as The Way of the Mynock, Esan mastered this form at the age of 26. That was an extremely early age to master a form, but with his old master's stubbornness, he was pushed the farthest he could go. This payed off, and he learned Soresus, this is the main form that Esan uses during Lightsaber and other combat, utilizing patience and defence into the technique. Adding elements of Ataru (The Acrobatic Form) and Makashi (Lightsaber battling Form) Esan can make anyone he fights wear out in minutes using patience, lightsaber prowess, and the force to tire them out.

Practiced Forms:

Makashi: Makashi, a form that is mainly used during lightsaber combat is one of the three forms that Esan practiced under Vrook (The other being Soresus), and Esan contributes Makashi into his Soresu form when using it. When facing only lightsabers, and when the enemy is easily defeatable  Esan uses Makashi, defeating his enemies easily.

Ataru: The Way of the Hawk Bat is the form that Esan utilizes into his main form, Soresu. At the peak of his apprenticeship, Esan used Ataru (Like most Apprentices do), but when he was put under Master Vrook the Master pushed Esan to learn Soresu, that he did and it still pays off for him today.
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June 28, 2008 11:54:54 PM    View the profile of Sicario 
Name: Andrik Tavaris
Age: 30
Position: Jedi Knight, Light Side grey Jedi, but will fall
Appearance: Dark black hair with a scraggly dark beard with a few strands of gray, 6'0'', 175 Pounds, quite muscular.
Force Powers: Heal, Throw Lightsaber, Force Push, Mind Trick, develops Force Lightening one he falls.
Lightsaber Color: Purple.

Lightsaber traits: He's a Jedi Guardian, but has inlisted a purple crystal. His hilt is styled similar to Mace Windu, without the gold plating, instead replaced with a black rubber that appears as if it is "crawling" up the hilt. (Think of the symbiote from Spiderman 3 crawling up a lightsaber.

He uses the Form VII: Juyo style of combat, an early rendition of what Mace Windu would create and call Vaapad. He inputs his darkness into his agressive fighting, taking big, fast strikes.

History:

Andrik was a life long Jedi, along with his brother Kyle. The Tavaris brothers were fraternal twins, and thus share a Force bond with eachother. That may explain why both hold tightly to the Grey Jedi name, tending to go against the Council to do what they feel is right. Andrik was very good friends with Jolee Bindo as a young padawan. When Andrik was 7, he met Jolee and looked up to his thought process. Months later, when Jolee left the Order, Andrik was devestated, but learned a lot from Jolee, and has since sworn to uphold Jolee's beliefs. Jolee left him a pair of his dark grey robes for when Andrik grew, which he wairs now.

Masters:

He had learned from Atris and Master Dorak.

Attitude towards the Order:

Once Arkelaus stormed out of the Order, Andrik and brother Kyle stayed behind. As per their nature, they tend to spend a considerable amount of sibling discussion on everything, as they did with this. They believe strongly in helping innocents, even if the JO says otherwise, hence the fall.
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June 29, 2008 2:01:39 AM    View the profile of Verkur 
Verkur:

Name:  Pre Sith- Kyle Tavaris, Post Sith- Darth/Lord Nios (N-eye-os)
Age: 30
Position: Jedi Knight, Grey Jedi, later on falls to the dark side

Appearance:
Kyle stands at an average height of 5’ 9”, and weighs in at about 150 lbs. He is strong and muscular, with very little fat. He keeps himself clean cut and shaven; his hair normally is spiked, but is sometimes left alone to sit neatly combed on his head. Being a Jedi Knight, Kyle wears the normal attire of a Jedi. His Jedi robes similar to that of a Dark Jedi Knight. Being a Gray Jedi as well, he has made a few additions to his outfit. Without the cloak, Kyle’s robes are short sleeved, and his boots are slightly armored.

Personality:
Kyle is a well respected member within the Jedi order, mostly because he does not rush into things, but first thinks them through. Kyle is a reserved individual, only opening completely to his brother Andrik. In battle Kyle watches his opponents every move, judging and taking into account his surroundings.

History:
Like his brother Andrik, Kyle was taken as an infant and taken to the Jedi temple to be trained. Since they shared a special bond within the Force, Kyle and Andrik did everything together, which in turn helped the two excel in their training. While Andrik attached himself to a Jedi of his choosing, Kyle was stuck with Master Yoran, an older member of the council who would later pass on of old age.

Kyle hated Master Yoran. He felt he was always holding him back, never allowing him to move on. On his own time and in the safety of his personal quarters, Kyle trained himself in certain aspects of the Force and, with the help of his brother, learned some of the lightsaber forms.

As the years passed on, the Tavaris brothers grew and their knowledge increased. Both easily overcame the trials and advanced to the rank of Jedi Knight. As time moved forward, so did everything else. It was well into the Mandalorian Wars, and after the decision by the Jedi Council, that Kyle and Andrik decided to accompany Arkelaus and Alek to war among many others who believed it was wrong that the council sit and do nothing to aid the Republic.

Lightsaber:
Kyle took great pride in crafting his lightsaber. His was quite special, as not many other Jedi wielded one such as the one be used. Kyle’s lightsaber was a double-bladed lightsaber, however, his was different than most. With a slight twist, Kyle could separate his single hilt double-bladed lightsaber, into two single bladed lightsabers. The council did not approve of such a weapon, as it was regarded as a weapon of the Sith. Another special feature of Kyle’s lightsaber, was the hue, which was a deep orange.

Lightsaber Forms:
With the help of his brother, Kyle was easily able to master Form V: Shien / Djem So, of the lightsaber forms.

Force Powers:
Kyle, like all Jedi, knew how to use the Core powers of the Force. In addition, he also took it upon himself to learn several other powers. These included Force Trance, Force Persuasion, Affect Mind, Dominate Mind, Force Listening, and Force Repulse. After falling to the Dark Side, he would learn basic use of Force Lightning, and Force Choke.

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June 30, 2008 9:33:30 PM    View the profile of Blue-Leader 
Hey, Anival just a heads up: We are in the KotOR era, and there are no Jedi Starfighters  :P
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July 1, 2008 12:18:10 AM    View the profile of Sicario 
--Kry--

Name: Viers Carsoni
Species: Human
Homeworld: Coruscant
Age: 35
Height: 6’6”
Weight: 248 lbs.
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown

Physical build: Huge, well built, but quick and flexible as well

History: Viers Carsoni, known commonly as Vic, is a Jedi Guardian and Knight in service to the Jedi Order. He recently completed the training of his first Padawan and is expected to be promoted to the rank of Jedi Master soon, as is customary. He is known to be an enforcer of the Jedi High Council on Coruscant, and is not known for his diplomatic skills. He is blunt, uncouth, and sometimes rude, but he is a Jedi to his core.

Combat Skills: Vic’s greatest strength is his ability in combat. He has mastered three of the seven Forms, and he is familiar with all of them. He has also practiced Jar’Kai, but he prefers to wield a single blade.

-Has mastered Soresu, Makashi, and has altered and completed his own personal form of Juyo, which he uses most often.
-Is familiar with all styles of combat

Force Powers: Because Vic has spent so much time on combat training his ability to use the Force is, while not weak, not nearly as precise as some of his companions. Telekinesis is difficult, and such things as Force Waves are almost impossible. He has, however, become proficient in using the Force to affect his own body, if only to further himself in combat. As any Jedi can do, he can subtly nudge sentient beings to do his bidding, however Vic can only affect the most weak-minded in the Galaxy.
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July 1, 2008 4:06:34 AM    View the profile of Ibram Tyrol 
I just looked up Inexpugnable-class tactical command ship.

That's got to be the funniest class-name for a ship ever.

Sic, drop me a pm when you can, I'm intrigued.
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July 1, 2008 7:56:38 AM    View the profile of Sicario 
Point your heads to the sky:

I'll be posting today, but it will just be for my character. However, I'll give everyone about a week or so before I post the next story-progressing post. So get your posts in, ladies and gentalmen.

One last thing, when referring to Revan as... well, Revan, please do it gently. Don't say Darth Revan, as he hasn't turned to the dark side and hasn't even took on that name yet..

Oh, and I know nobody will care because nobody likes him, but Ibram will be joining us shortly. ^_^ I kid Ibram, I kid.
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July 1, 2008 8:44:32 AM    View the profile of Anival Velasquez 
I'm sory

well then I guess I have to do some research

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July 1, 2008 9:20:12 AM    View the profile of Sicario 
No worries, Ani. Keep up the good work.
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Name: Kale Tyrol
Species: Human
Homeworld: Taris
Age: 30
Height: 5”11
Weight: 175
Hair: Dirty blond, short
Eyes: Blue

Personality: Generally quiet and reserved, Kale is man who only opens himself to people he trusts. Abuse at the hands of the Social Elite back on Taris taught him to guard his feelings, and so he does. He does have a lighter side however, as during his Acadamy days he was notorious for his quick remarks and his sarcastic nature. He’s generally kind and understanding, but knows when to draw the line. He’s no Angel, but he would consider himself the next best thing.

Alignment: Good/Grey – Kale and his ship, Right to Reply, will end up remaining on the good side in the end, however he will go through a period of doubt and turmoil during the first wave of desertions. I’ve tagged Grey in there because, even though he’s good, he realizes that sometimes you just have to break the rules.

History: Kale was born into Taris social elite, however his parents were originally from Coruscant. Life as an ‘elite’ was never easy for Kale, as being an ethnic off-worlder diminished him in the eyes of his peers, and his status completely alienated him from the rest of society. Between the two, Kale didn’t many friends, and was a quiet, reserved boy growing up. Sensing this, his parents sent him off to the Republic Navy Academy when he was 18, as they still had some influence within the Republic.

As if coming to life for the first time, Kale soon came into his own. Proving adept at naval tactics, he soon came to the notice of his trainers, and was proposed for Line-Officer training. After 4 years of hard work, Kale finally graduated at the age of 22, becoming the XO aboard the Hammerhead-class cruiser Right to Reply.

Graduating at a time where the Republic was beginning to clash more and more with the Madalorians who where rampaging and ravaging the Outer-Rim, Kale saw a fair bit of action, however most of it was light, and his early years of service were relatively quiet.

His “Trial by Fire” could be said to have occurred in 3, 967, 4 years into his career.. Growing increasingly close to border worlds like Taris, the Republic began to deploy its fleets in defensive formations around these border worlds. It was in this year that a flotilla, including the Right to Reply, was ambushed by Mandalorian forces. Kale’s Captain was killed, but the young man quickly took control, and managed to rally the Flotilla and fend off the attackers. For his actions, Kale was promoted to Captain, and given command of the Reply.

Kale would spend the next 4 years as part of the effort to keep the Mandalorians from encroaching further into Republic space. He was to serve as part of the Jebble-Vanquo-Tarnith line under both Saul Krath and Jimas Veltraa.

Come 3,963, (Which I’m guessing is where our story starts, according to my research.) he was assigned to the 6th Republic fleet under the command of Vice Admiral Tarn Fal…

Notes

On Jedi: Kale has an unusually low opinion of the Jedi for a Republic Officer. Because it was not a member of the New Republic, few Jedi were ever posted on Taris, and those that were tried unsuccessfully to remedy the Social problems. As such, Kale does not think much of Jedi, and at worst sees them as meddlers. He does however respect the super-natural power they wield, and knows of their uses in battle.

Character Development: Kale is force sensitive; he just doesn’t know it yet. His chosen career path and his opinion on Jedi has mean’t that he hasn’t been around them for pro-longed periods of time, so they’ve never been able to tell him. By traditional standards he’s too old now anyway, at 30, so they probably wouldn’t bother. During the course of this story, Kale will slowly realize his true potential.

Some other stats:

Born: 3, 993 ABY
Joined Academy: 3, 975 ABY
Graduated: 3, 971 ABY
Has served 8 years in fleet so far.
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July 1, 2008 10:36:33 AM    View the profile of Ibram Tyrol 
Lol you muppet :P You were supposed to make up a weight for me, not leave it as "make up and average weight for me" :P
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July 1, 2008 10:45:53 AM    View the profile of Sicario 
LOL

D'oh! I'll edit that now!
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Name: Joshen Skirata
Species: Human
Homeworld: Corellia
Age: Unknown
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 211
Hair: Dark blonde, kind of shaggy and swept to the side
Eyes: Silver

-Personality: Serious during battle, but entertaining everywhere else. Very complentative. Honest and loyal to certain people, but distrustful of strangers. Does absolutely nothing to hide feelings and thoughts which oftens lands him into trouble.

-History: Not much is known about childhood other than the fact he was trained by a expert in melee combat. Remembers his father, but nothing else. A war orphan, he was found and adopted by a member of the Mandolorian clan, Skirata. Grew up to be a fierce warrior and a supreme tactician, whether it be ground or space, which is why he progressed through the ranks so quickly.

-Position: Mandolorian Neo-Crusader

-Force Powers: Has visions ,predicts the near future, and can use the Core Force powers. Posses vast potential.

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-Lightsaber: (When he gets one) Double-hilt, one blade pitch black and the other one pure white.

-Has mastered nearly all forms of combat and has completely mastered all sword-like weapons, including lightsabers.

-Has some training in using the Force.

-Posses a unique style of fighting, preferring to wear down opponent and then strike a lethal blow when they are most vulnerable. When that doesn't work he uses an outsmart and overpower technique.
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July 1, 2008 11:29:07 AM    View the profile of Verkur 
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If you have not yet posted, I suggest doing so soon, to get yourself into the story. All you need to talk about is how you are preparing for the upcoming battle, and what might be going through your mind.
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July 1, 2008 1:11:37 PM    View the profile of Sicario 
*Nods at Verk*

Ok, new post is up, spent a lot of time on it, and it's a big one, 3,042 words. A nice little Revan tie in at the end there ^_^

For those who don't know, Hunter's post had a little whoopsy in it, worry not, he'll be editing it soon enough.
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July 1, 2008 2:37:26 PM    View the profile of TX-47 
Gizkas!  Man, Sic!  When you get get busy you don't mess around!  I'm actually torn between 'wow' and 'whoa' right now.  Sadly I'm a bit too busy to join but I am sorely tempted...

Perhaps we should hatch evil plots and conspiracies sometime...

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July 1, 2008 3:20:59 PM    View the profile of Sicario 
I'm deeply honored TX, hope you can find time to get on in this story. It'll last for awhile, and there are planned sequels, so you have some time

Honestly though, I'm merely a kid who had an idea, the true credit goes to the people who have posted and made the story what it is. I'm quite amazed that already it has around 300 views. Thanks so much to the contributers, and the readers.
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July 1, 2008 3:41:29 PM    View the profile of Sicario 
Few things real quick:

I hate doing this, it makes me sound like a GodMod, which I'm not, but I have to post up some rules. More like guideline, but you must follow them:

(In no specific order)

1) Please, please, do not post about Revan unless you ask. You can post your feelings about him, please do- it's incouraged- but don't post about him doing anything until you PM me about it first. I don't mean to be a jerk, but c'mon, he's the most important character and I want his tale to be told the way I see it.

2) Absolutley no killing off important characters please. Let's not put a 'saber to Mand'alore's head and call it a day. Feel free to post -about- them, just PM me first.

3) I'll handle story progression, meaning I'll advance the plot as I see fit, whenever and however I please. Do you have a say in it? Yes and no. I've been plotting this whole saga out for months, and have had the idea for years, so I want things to happen in a particular manner. However, with that said, feel free as a naked bird to PM me about any ideas you may have, just don't try to take over the story, it's my baby If you have any ideas or questions, PM me, I don't mind it a turtle's wink..

4) Finally, if your post involves another character owned by another member of the VE, please PM both myself and that character to make sure what you say is ok,

Ok? Ok. I think those are fair enough, and slightly obvious.

One last tid bit. I've had a few FAQ's asked by people, and to make my life easier, here they are for all.

1) When does this take place?
    -Prior to the events of KOTOR. Around 3,963 BBY, right when Revan defies the council and his followers, "Revanchists," fight along side the Republic.

2) Is Revan a Sith?
    -No, not yet. He is only referred to as "Revan" by the Jedi Council, since Master Vrook so aptly shouted that him and his followers are "Revanchists."

3) What's a Revanchist?
    -Revan means revenge, and fits since the Jedi Council believes Revan's actions are based on revenge, although they clearly are not. He does however, eventually seek revenge on... hah! Thought I would tell you!

4) What's with the name?
    -Sith Reborn refers to Revan becoming the first known Sith lord since the Great Sith War 20 years ago. Path of the Fallen refers to the roads those whom fall to the dark side go down, along with the path that those who die must travel. Cool huh? I think so, props to Verkur for that bit of awesomeness.

There's that. Hope it clears things up a bit.
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July 1, 2008 3:51:04 PM    View the profile of Sicario 
This is definitley the third post in a row, whaddaya gonna do?

As of now, yes - no you didn't hear wrong - now! I am working on the story progression, and will begin writing it tonight. Worry not if you're planning on posting prior to, it'll be very long, longer than my character post, so it should take a few days.

I think it will quite good, and will alter the futures of many. See it only on Sith Reborn: Path of the Fallen <--- tee hee
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July 1, 2008 3:55:45 PM    View the profile of Hunter-Morrell 
Sorry about that... whoopsy... with Mandalore and Revan. Didn't know I had to PM you about it. But at least I made you post some rules so nobody else does it.
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