Jade
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Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 15, 2008
8:45:07 PM
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Name: Naheed Simjee "Jade"
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Home planet: Bespin
Height
Weight: 97bs
Physical build: Short, in very good shape. Cup size: 34 C
Eye color: Green
Hair color: Black
Defining features: Big, beautiful jade-colored eyes, where her callsign is derived from. She has shoulder length jet-black hair, shiny and straight. She has Strong, though not too muscular thighs.
Personality: Naheed has a strong personality, usually quiet around strangers, but once a friendship/trust is placed, she opens up like a spring flower, and bursts with excitement. She's very smart and independent. Grew up as an adopted child, and has never had the feeling of a strong family support. Looks to friends for support.
Physical appreance: Jade eyes, black hair, smooth skin. Very gorgeous, though she thinks otherwise. |
Ibram Tyrol
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 15, 2008
9:01:04 PM
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Hello Crewman Jade, My name is Ibram Tyrol, one of the training staff here. On behalf of the VENA, welcome to the academy. I see you've already gone ahead and started on your character's bio, so ill leave you some feedback: Very good so far - you've got the physical side nailed down to a T. Not many female recruits go as far as to list their cup size though, but each to their own. Personality is good, although you could probably expand a bit more, maybe explain why shes like how she's like, although that really ties in to the section thats missing: History. What we would like is a brief history of her character, and specifically the events/reasons that caused her to join the VE, as opposed to some other faction in the Galaxy. Go back and add in that section, and then we can pass you. If you haven't already seen it, the wiki page with all of our training information can be found hereWhilst you train, I also recommend you get onto IRC (Or Instant Rely Communication). Most, if not all of the Vast Empire's active members frequent the IRC channels, so you will be able to find many a friend and mentor in this place. To get onto IRC, either follow the "JavaChat" link from the main page (It's in the left hand column) or download an IRC client (e.g. mIRC) and follow the instructions in the MainComnet forum. Good luck Operator Tyrol "I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
- Innocence is the cost of Justice
Warrant Officer 2nd Class Ibram Tyrol
Viper Squadron
Squadron Commanding Officer
We fly, you die
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VEN
SC/WO2 Ibram Tyrol/Viper 1/mSSD Atrus/1W/1FL/VEN/{=*A*=}{=*SA*=}/[NER]
VEEC
Ibram Tyrol/WS Ibram/Lotaith/VET/VE
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Jade
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 15, 2008
9:32:17 PM
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History: Born on Bespin, her mother died two months after child birth and her father immediatly put her up for adoption. She bounced around from foster home to foster home, crippling her self confidence. At the age of 13 she took up spice, using it occasionally to numb the pain of the dramatic world in which she lived in. At 15, she met her first love, Alex Yunder, which together, they shared a few nights together. She came to find out, at 17, that he only did so for her body, and soon felt more of herself become lost to the world.
For her 18th birthday, her foster parents decided to gift her by kicking her out, due to her spice use and rebelious ways. She moved from street corner to street corner, searching for some sort of stability. When she was 19, an Imperial Storm Trooper rescued her from an attempted rape from spice dealers, giving her some sense of a hero in her life.
When she was 21, she decided it was time for change. She needed a home, a family, and a purpose. She revisited her Storm-trooper savior, the Zabrak known as Strata Kain, and was recruited into the Navy. |
Ibram Tyrol
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 15, 2008
9:35:12 PM
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Well done. You may now pass onto Chapter II. "I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
- Innocence is the cost of Justice
Warrant Officer 2nd Class Ibram Tyrol
Viper Squadron
Squadron Commanding Officer
We fly, you die
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VEN
SC/WO2 Ibram Tyrol/Viper 1/mSSD Atrus/1W/1FL/VEN/{=*A*=}{=*SA*=}/[NER]
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Ibram Tyrol/WS Ibram/Lotaith/VET/VE
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Jade
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 15, 2008
9:47:27 PM
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Ch.II
The Sandwich:
While flying in with another friendly, A pilot being attacked from behind, breaks into said attack. While the enemy follows, the pilot's wingman slides in on the enemies tail-quarter, to take aim and fire, yet doing so ever-so-carefully as not to fire into his comrade.
Split 'S':
A useful tactic for disengaging a threat, using it's high altitude and verticle airspace to it's advantage. Careful, as you must be several thousand feet above any land. Whilst turning, break into a roll, then proceed to immediatly pull back and inlist a dive maneuver. You will quickly gain speed. Pull back on the stick to level yourself out, you'll un-invert and gain speed while losing altitude. It makes for one hell of an escape maneuver as it removes you from gun range. |
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 15, 2008
9:51:57 PM
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Pass - you may now go on to Chapter III, and after that your aviators exam.
Make sure you post CH III here, and that your completed exam to both myself, and Jegora Fal. "I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
- Innocence is the cost of Justice
Warrant Officer 2nd Class Ibram Tyrol
Viper Squadron
Squadron Commanding Officer
We fly, you die
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VEN
SC/WO2 Ibram Tyrol/Viper 1/mSSD Atrus/1W/1FL/VEN/{=*A*=}{=*SA*=}/[NER]
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Ibram Tyrol/WS Ibram/Lotaith/VET/VE
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Jade
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 15, 2008
10:05:40 PM
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Jade's Report: June 5th 2008
Activity:This week, I've gone through training, set up my backstory and history.
Upcoming plans: I plan on posting a PS (personal story) with the Navy's own Sicario, and the Troopers own Celota. I plan on posting my part on either the mission's thread or a training this thread, whichever I'm put into.
Q/S: None
TRN/CRW Jade/ |
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 15, 2008
11:31:56 PM
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Jade has graduated from Flight School. "I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
- Innocence is the cost of Justice
Warrant Officer 2nd Class Ibram Tyrol
Viper Squadron
Squadron Commanding Officer
We fly, you die
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VEN
SC/WO2 Ibram Tyrol/Viper 1/mSSD Atrus/1W/1FL/VEN/{=*A*=}{=*SA*=}/[NER]
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Ibram Tyrol/WS Ibram/Lotaith/VET/VE
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LK-486
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 16, 2008
9:45:11 PM
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Naheed Simjee? Like, Isaac Brock's wife? Our Number Is Legion, Our Name Is Death!
last.fm/user/ezrain
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Jade
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 16, 2008
9:54:02 PM
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I love me some Modest Mouse, you? |
LK-486
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 16, 2008
10:06:41 PM
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Big fan here too 
Anything Brock is good though.
Not to sound cliche, but I don't really have a favorite CD.
I like them all. Our Number Is Legion, Our Name Is Death!
last.fm/user/ezrain
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Jade
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June 16, 2008
10:17:28 PM
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Yes. Yes. Ugly Casanova is grand as well.
And yeah, all their stuff is amazing. I love every song. You're now officially awesome. |
StOrMz
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RE: Naheed Simjee reporting for placement
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June 17, 2008
8:30:01 PM
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LK can't be "awesome" he is part of the army Imperial Navy-Kaph Squadron (The Captains Own)
XO and FL/PO1 StOrMz/Kaph 2-1/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/1 Fleet/VEN/VE (=A=)(=^SA^=) [IG] [BI]
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Engineering Corps
StOrMz/WS StOrMz/Lotaith/VET/VE
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Pizza Club
StOrMz/DB StOrMz/Bicycle/VEPC/VE
Pizza Delivery Boy
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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48] why are you creaming?
[20:48] ewwwwwwww
[20:48] screaming*
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