Wow a new recruit with a start on his Bio

very impressive

Welcome aboard Mate. If you need anything before a Naval trainer speaks with you then I will be glad to assist.

Hello Crewman Bacredi,

Well done on getting ahead with your profile, however I'm afraid there are some technical issues that need to be dealt with before you continue.

if you haven't already, go :here for our tutorial on creating bios.

Now, for the specifics:

Whilst there's no problem with your family living on Belkadan and Onderon, you can't go and make stuff up.

Onderon is a planet that is established in star war canon...but the capital isn't Bukla, and whilst there is not much current canon on what has happened on Onderon in recent years, i think dropping an asteroid on a planet and evacuating it is a little far fetched.

Regarding the CorSec thing, CorSec was officially dissolved in 7 ABY, which is two years previous to our current timeline. I know its entirely possible you worked for it before then, but you need to make that clear - also, Corellia was one of the first planets to join the New Republic, someone who was a known NR agent wouldn't be accepted so easily.

Moving on, some details about you would be nice, like your personality, brief physical description including age, etc...

Also, depending on what squadron you're in, you may not be able
to fly Interceptors, but thats not really an issue, just letting you know.

On a final note, you need to explain why you decided to join the Vast Empire, as opposed to the New Republic or any other faction.

If you have any questions, just let me know. Sorry if i sound heavy handed.

Countering the Low Speed Yo Yo
I like this Maneuver because it is daring, and it goes into your favor if you are the defender.

This attack is used to make the attacker suspect that you are not as good as you really are. When he is in the right position you should unleash hell to kill him, or disable him. You would do this as a Perception (Say how some people say that Mace Windu was not that great of Swordsman to fight Palpatine, and Palphatine percieved him by making him seem weaker."

You could use this attack when you are losing, by making him think you are worse then you are.

You do this by moving the attacker up-wards, then you take him at the moment he does not know it by jabbing up and firing.

Barrel Roll.
I like this maneuver 1) It takes skill, 2) you can save your wingmate by doing this, he or she is heading at you with a enemy on their back they barrel roll the same time as you and you blow them up.

The Barrel Roll can also save you, Example *Enemy fighter shooting at you, Barrel Roll dodged the bullets brake he moves in front of you you let loose hell.*

The Barrel Roll is a commonly used Maneuver that requires years of training to execute it safely.

To do the barrel roll you spin your ship carefully to avoid enemy fire, or just for kicks.

Zhar Bacredi's Report 20:00, April 12, 2008.

Activity: This week I joined the VE. I have singed up on the Wiki as Blye Leader (Bacredi, Zhar). And also written two stories about myself, and Grey Squadron.

UpComing Plans: Next week I plan to write about what happened on Ervic II and how I escaped. Also to attempt to join a squadron if I pass flight school. I will also work on my Wiki, add stories and such.

Questions/Suggestions: I suggest we create a Red, Grey, Green, and Gold Squadron.

Crewman Bacredi, Zhar.