Eden
ComNet n00b
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
Post Number: 2
Total Posts: 4
Joined: Apr 2008
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I'm new!
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April 3, 2008
5:58:08 AM
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Hey all,
Just wanted to see what I can to do get started really, not heard much so thought I would introduce myself in here...
Eden |
Ibram Tyrol
ComNet Member
[VE-NAVY] Senior Chief Petty Officer
[VE-VEEC] Journalist
Post Number: 316
Total Posts: 1563
Joined: Nov 2007
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RE: I'm new!
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April 3, 2008
6:03:45 AM
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Greetings Crewman Eden, welcome to the Vast Empire. My name is Ibram Tyrol, and I will be you're operator whilst you train here at the Academy. If you have any questions at all, simply go to the message centre and type in my full name into the recipient's box, along with your queries. To get you started, I'm now going to direct you to our wiki page, where most of the training materials are kept. This can be found here.To begin your training, you must first create your character. Having clicked on the link above, you can navigate to the page by clicking on Basic Training, Flight School, and then Chapter 1 (quick link: here) Before going to Flight School, you may want to give Imperial Initiation (II) a quick read - it gives a brief introduction to life as a pilot in the star wars universe. Once you have followed the instructions set out in Chapter 1, please post it here for marking, and we can advance you along to the next stage. Whilst you train, I also recommend you get onto IRC (Or Instant Rely Communication). Most, if not all of the Vast Empire's active members frequent the IRC channels, so you will be able to find many a friend and mentor in this place. To get onto IRC, either follow the "JavaChat" link from the main page (It's in the left hand column) or download an IRC client (e.g. mIRC) and follow the instructions in the MainComnet forum. Once again, on behalf of the VENA, welcome the Navy, we hope you enjoy your stay. Operator Tyrol "I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
- Innocence is the cost of Justice
Senior Chief Petty Officer Ibram Tyrol
Viper Squadron, "Captain's Own"
Squadron Executive Officer
We fly, you die
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Eden
ComNet n00b
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
Post Number: 3
Total Posts: 4
Joined: Apr 2008
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RE: I'm new!
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April 3, 2008
9:38:06 AM
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Physical Description:
Eden initially appears to be confident and proud although on the inside can be somewhat self-conscious and needs reassurance from those close to her. Her attractive curvy chest and slender legs often get her into trouble with men (and sometimes women) and she can be quite a flirt after a drink. She always has painted nails, a trim fringe to go with her long curly black locks, and a necklace of some description depending on her mood. Butterflies are her favourite and cherries when she is feeling cheeky. These symbols usually match the artwork on her hip which changes over time, only the privileged would get to see. Her dark skin can seem mysterious although her body language and clothes would say something opposite. Dressed to attract and attack, Eden will always make you aware of how she feels about you.
Emotional Description:
Very loyal and loving to those close to her, Eden is a good friend to make. She will take care of you and protect you whenever you need her, although it is difficult for one to become this close. It takes a long time to develop a deep and meaningful friendship, which might be deceiving considering her flirty attitude.
History of Character:
Having a history of violent outburst, resulting in the death of many of her close friends, Eden is scared to develop her relationships into more, and let people in. She can seem very friendly but her complex personality issues can be confusing to those who don’t know about her. As a child, she was very popular, until her family moved to a new town, after one of her outburst. Not knowing what was going to happen from day to day Eden became very quiet and inward thinking. Later, she realised that if life was going to change and get better, she would have to change it herself. Since then, Eden lives every moment to it’s fullest and every day like it’s her last, taking chances and trying new things; anything to keep her occupied and away from the troubles of her childhood.
Feel free to critique/edit. Thanks Mr. Tyrol  |
Ibram Tyrol
ComNet Member
[VE-NAVY] Senior Chief Petty Officer
[VE-VEEC] Journalist
Post Number: 317
Total Posts: 1563
Joined: Nov 2007
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RE: I'm new!
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April 3, 2008
9:52:54 AM
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Very good Eden.
You're character is very well defined, and it looks like you have alot to work with.
The only thing i will add, is to "star wars" up your bio a bit. For example, add stuff like:
Planet of Birth
Why you chose to join the VE, and not someone else
How you feel about whats going on in our current timeline (9 ABY) etc...
This will help set your character more firmly in the universe we exist in.
Once you've done that, you can go on to Chapter II
well done "I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
- Innocence is the cost of Justice
Senior Chief Petty Officer Ibram Tyrol
Viper Squadron, "Captain's Own"
Squadron Executive Officer
We fly, you die
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VEN
XO/CPO Ibram Tyrol/Viper 9/mSSD Atrus/1W/1FL/VEN/{=*A*=}{=*SA*=}/[NER]
VEEC
Ibram Tyrol/WS Ibram/Lotaith/VET/VE
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Eden
ComNet n00b
[VE-NAVY] Crewman
Post Number: 4
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RE: I'm new!
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April 4, 2008
5:04:35 AM
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Gender: Female
Home Planet: Yaga Minor
Age: 22
Physical Description:
Eden initially appears to be confident and proud although on the inside can be somewhat self-conscious and needs reassurance from those close to her. Her attractive curvy chest and slender legs often get her into trouble with men (and sometimes women) and she can be quite a flirt after a drink. She always has painted nails, a trim fringe to go with her long curly black locks, and a necklace of some description depending on her mood. Butterflies are her favourite and cherries when she is feeling cheeky. These symbols usually match the artwork on her hip which changes over time, only the privileged would get to see. Her dark skin can seem mysterious although her body language and clothes would say something opposite. Dressed to attract and attack, Eden will always make you aware of how she feels about you.
Emotional Description:
Very loyal and loving to those close to her, Eden is a good friend to make. She will take care of you and protect you whenever you need her, although it is difficult for one to become this close. It takes a long time to develop a deep and meaningful friendship, which might be deceiving considering her flirty attitude.
History of Character:
Having a history of violent outburst, resulting in the death of many of her close friends, Eden is scared to develop her relationships into more, and let people in. She can seem very friendly but her complex personality issues can be confusing to those who don’t know about her. As a child, she was very popular, until her family moved to a new planet, after one of her outbursts. Not knowing what was going to happen from day to day Eden became very quiet and inward thinking. Later, she realised that if life was going to change and get better, she would have to change it herself. Since then, Eden lives every moment to it’s fullest and every day like it’s her last, taking chances and trying new things; anything to keep her occupied and away from the troubles of her childhood.
Joining the VE is just one of the chances she has endeavoured to take and will do her best in every challenge set.
Hope this is better, let me know if I need to make any more changes |
Ibram Tyrol
ComNet Member
[VE-NAVY] Senior Chief Petty Officer
[VE-VEEC] Journalist
Post Number: 321
Total Posts: 1563
Joined: Nov 2007
Status: Offline
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RE: I'm new!
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April 4, 2008
6:00:57 AM
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Better Eden, you may know go onto Chapter II "I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
- Innocence is the cost of Justice
Senior Chief Petty Officer Ibram Tyrol
Viper Squadron, "Captain's Own"
Squadron Executive Officer
We fly, you die
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VEN
XO/CPO Ibram Tyrol/Viper 9/mSSD Atrus/1W/1FL/VEN/{=*A*=}{=*SA*=}/[NER]
VEEC
Ibram Tyrol/WS Ibram/Lotaith/VET/VE
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Anden Beliam
ComNet Initiate
[VE-NAVY] Petty Officer 1st Class
Post Number: 136
Total Posts: 362
Joined: Dec 2007
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RE: I'm new!
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April 6, 2008
7:47:12 PM
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Just thought I would add in my welcome. Good job on getting right on to your BT. Look forward to seeing ya in action. Viper SquadronWe Fly, You DiePetty Officer 1st Class Anden Beliam
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