Shazam
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 23, 2008
12:31:12 AM
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Lol- don't let it go to your head, bud  *Flash Was Here...*
WC|NTO/LCP Shazam/Phoenix 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1VENF/VEN (=A=) (=*SA*=) (=MA=) (=*FOCE*=) [CBV*] [LoM] [LSM] [MC2] [VC:S] [SV*] [DSM] {Platinum Writing Medal}
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Than Sion
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 23, 2008
3:09:29 PM
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You all have to remember that Nazgul is made up of more experienced members than Kaph. Logically, their posts would be longer. As for number of posts, they’ve caught up. Viper is doing a good job at putting some distance between the rest of the pack. Luckily we’ll have Max back soon.
I’m going to have to start leading you guys through some structured story writing so you’re prepared for an actual mission. As some of you may have experienced, I’m already starting to get more picky. I’m doing this for your own good. You don’t have to come in here writing like Olsen Scott Card, but your level of writing skills can’t stay stagnant either. I am a perfect example how VE can help improve someone’s writing skills. Here’s my first story post:
Senior Crewman Than Sion had so much adrenaline pumping through his body that it wasn't even funny. This was his first real taste of air combat, so ever since he got into his standard TIE fighter he had been on the edge. Also since it was his first time he didn't pull anything risky. He did what he was told and observed what the other, more experienced, pilots did. So when everyone else flew into the massive opening in the ice, he followed.
I am going to have a hard time sleeping tonight with all this excitement, he thought.
(Kept it short and general since this is my first continued story thingy. Please someone saysomething if I have to ask before posting a reply or something important like that.)
Short and pitiful. But I kept at it and I quickly got better at writing. I’m going to push you guys a bit, but if you stick around you’ll thank me for it. SC/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=^MA^=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV](x2)[MC:1][MC:2][GWC][LSM]{VB}
-- SC of Kaph Squadron
ESA/PFC Than Sion/Walmart 5-5/Subway/mIRC/VE[CoR][GWS][ISaDJGF]
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Than Sion
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 24, 2008
6:05:31 PM
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Nazgul: 22
Kaph: 22
Viper: 26
Nazgul's knocking at our back door and Viper's sitting pretty. SC/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=^MA^=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV](x2)[MC:1][MC:2][GWC][LSM]{VB}
-- SC of Kaph Squadron
ESA/PFC Than Sion/Walmart 5-5/Subway/mIRC/VE[CoR][GWS][ISaDJGF]
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Ibram Tyrol
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 24, 2008
6:23:23 PM
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That's what you get for labeling a bunch of people as an afterthought 
And of course we're sitting pretty, It's me Than. You can't beat me :P
/me hugs Than "I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
- Innocence is the cost of Justice
Senior Chief Petty Officer Ibram Tyrol
Viper Squadron, "Captain's Own"
Squadron Executive Officer
We fly, you die
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XO/CPO Ibram Tyrol/Viper 9/mSSD Atrus/1W/1FL/VEN/{=*A*=}{=*SA*=}/[NER]
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StOrMz
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 24, 2008
7:02:07 PM
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lol not for long! just kidding FM/LCRW StOrMz/Kaph 1-3/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=A=)
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Rocketman1167
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
3:31:52 PM
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Money=pilots who drive=tie fighters and can build=Death Stars which means power
FM/SCR/ Rocketman/ Kaph 1-4/ Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1st fleet/VEN/VE[=A=](MC1)
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Jegora Fal
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
6:10:41 PM
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Jegora Fal Nazgul Squadron Flight Leader FL/CPO Jegora Fal/Nazgul 2-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [MC1] [LoT] Si vis pacem, para bellum --If you wish peace, prepare for war |
StOrMz
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
8:18:56 PM
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You do realize that we have 4 people on Kaph that are regularly participating compared to Nazguls and Vipers 8-10 people. AND we are a brand new squad.
So chew on that lesser squads (i.e. Viper and Nazgul) FM/LCRW StOrMz/Kaph 1-3/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=A=)
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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48] why are you creaming?
[20:48] ewwwwwwww
[20:48] screaming*
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Jegora Fal
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
8:26:39 PM
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Heh, I wish we had eight people who posted regularly. But thats what you get for labeling me an afterthought.
I refuse to be an afterthought! I refuse! I have rights too! Jegora Fal Nazgul Squadron Flight Leader FL/CPO Jegora Fal/Nazgul 2-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [MC1] [LoT] Si vis pacem, para bellum --If you wish peace, prepare for war |
StOrMz
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
9:27:12 PM
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your still an afterthought to me!  lol jk FM/LCRW StOrMz/Kaph 1-3/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=A=)
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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48] why are you creaming?
[20:48] ewwwwwwww
[20:48] screaming*
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Than Sion
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
9:30:00 PM
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How about you quit talking smack with comrade Jegora and finish that post :P. SC/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=^MA^=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV](x2)[MC:1][MC:2][GWC][LSM]{VB}
-- SC of Kaph Squadron
ESA/PFC Than Sion/Walmart 5-5/Subway/mIRC/VE[CoR][GWS][ISaDJGF]
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Jegora Fal
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
9:31:34 PM
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hehe, yah, see if you can top the 2500 word behemoth I just posted =P Jegora Fal Nazgul Squadron Flight Leader FL/CPO Jegora Fal/Nazgul 2-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [MC1] [LoT] Si vis pacem, para bellum --If you wish peace, prepare for war |
StOrMz
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
9:37:42 PM
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I can not sir. I am but a writing newb. 
Atleast I post regularly...unlike most recruits... FM/LCRW StOrMz/Kaph 1-3/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=A=)
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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48] why are you creaming?
[20:48] ewwwwwwww
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Than Sion
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
9:44:26 PM
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Correction, you didn’t disappear off the face of the map in the first week like most recruits. As for the number of posts you’ve been making a week, that’s high period.
2500 words... you’re competing with Shaz for length throwing up numbers that big. How long did it take you to write that beast? I swear you were jacked up on energy drinks while creating it. SC/ESN Than Sion/Kaph 1-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE(=A=)(=*SA*=)(=^MA^=)[LoM][VC:S][CBV](x2)[MC:1][MC:2][GWC][LSM]{VB}
-- SC of Kaph Squadron
ESA/PFC Than Sion/Walmart 5-5/Subway/mIRC/VE[CoR][GWS][ISaDJGF]
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Jegora Fal
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
9:50:03 PM
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Eh, it wasn't bad. It was mostly one big dogfight that I had to finish out, so I just sat down, put on some music, and wrote it.
An hour and a half later my fingers hurt, my eyes were sore, but I had her done
But I don't recommend it. Jegora Fal Nazgul Squadron Flight Leader FL/CPO Jegora Fal/Nazgul 2-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [MC1] [LoT] Si vis pacem, para bellum --If you wish peace, prepare for war |
StOrMz
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
10:05:17 PM
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granted my posts are a scant 350-400 each.... FM/LCRW StOrMz/Kaph 1-3/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=A=)
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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48] why are you creaming?
[20:48] ewwwwwwww
[20:48] screaming*
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Jegora Fal
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 25, 2008
10:12:21 PM
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Nothing wrong with that. When I started mine were 500-700, and I gradually worked my way up. I am a freak, however, and write a lot. Not as much as Trevor, but still...my posts are always fairly long. Jegora Fal Nazgul Squadron Flight Leader FL/CPO Jegora Fal/Nazgul 2-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [MC1] [LoT] Si vis pacem, para bellum --If you wish peace, prepare for war |
Denethor
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 26, 2008
6:13:26 AM
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Remember, post count isn't always a good thing, post quality is. Kam "Denethor" Vox
2nd Lieutenant
Captain of Corellian Corvette Ferrum Umbra
Phoenix Wing Executive Officer
Vast Empire Navy
WX/CCAP/2Lt. Denethor/CVT Ferrum Umbra/Phoenix 1-2/VEN/VE(=A=)(=SA=)(=FOCE=)[LoR][LSM]
"Only the dead have seen the end of war." -Plato
Every drop of blood. Every bitter tear. Every bead of sweat. I live for this.
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6:13:50 AM)]
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Ibram Tyrol
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 26, 2008
7:07:07 AM
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I think my squadron has had a mass seizure and died whilst i wasn't looking 
Can i hang with you guys? "I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
- Innocence is the cost of Justice
Senior Chief Petty Officer Ibram Tyrol
Viper Squadron, "Captain's Own"
Squadron Executive Officer
We fly, you die
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VEN
XO/CPO Ibram Tyrol/Viper 9/mSSD Atrus/1W/1FL/VEN/{=*A*=}{=*SA*=}/[NER]
VEEC
Ibram Tyrol/WS Ibram/Lotaith/VET/VE
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StOrMz
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 26, 2008
12:58:09 AM
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No...YES! Man, gets 'em everytime. FM/LCRW StOrMz/Kaph 1-3/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=A=)
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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48] why are you creaming?
[20:48] ewwwwwwww
[20:48] screaming*
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StOrMz
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 26, 2008
10:54:15 PM
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- OOC:
- From Ibram Tyrol:
At the moment they are one up on posts, but we won't stand for it! Lets show those Kaphs that we aren't going to let an old fart with illusions of grandeur and a bunch of newbs push us around!
We may be new to the VE but we aren't newbs! Let's help our old fart of a squad commander and spank Viper in the story!  FM/LCRW StOrMz/Kaph 1-3/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=A=)
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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48] why are you creaming?
[20:48] ewwwwwwww
[20:48] screaming*
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Arkan-Thran
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 27, 2008
2:16:47 PM
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Ibram's right though you are farts with delusions of granduer Arkan Thran
Innocence Proves Nothing
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Jegora Fal
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 27, 2008
3:49:07 PM
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Nazguls winning now boys and girls. 
Not to brag or anything. but..wait!
Thats exactly what I'm doing Jegora Fal Nazgul Squadron Flight Leader FL/CPO Jegora Fal/Nazgul 2-1/Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE (=*A*=) (=*SA*=) [MC1] [LoT] Si vis pacem, para bellum --If you wish peace, prepare for war
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3:49:52 PM)]
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StOrMz
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 27, 2008
11:39:49 PM
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FM/LCRW StOrMz/Kaph 1-3/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=A=)
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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48] why are you creaming?
[20:48] ewwwwwwww
[20:48] screaming*
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StOrMz
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 30, 2008
4:35:32 PM
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FM/LCRW StOrMz/Kaph 1-3/Wing 1/mSSD Atrus/DEF/VEN/VE (=A=)
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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48] why are you creaming?
[20:48] ewwwwwwww
[20:48] screaming*
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Rocketman1167
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 30, 2008
4:36:13 PM
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Money=pilots who drive=tie fighters and can build=Death Stars which means power
FM/SCR/ Rocketman/ Kaph 1-4/ Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1st fleet/VEN/VE[=A=](MC1)
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StOrMz
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 31, 2008
9:43:24 AM
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Ah i am not alone
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[20:48] * Verkur screams
[20:48] why are you creaming?
[20:48] ewwwwwwww
[20:48] screaming*
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Denethor
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 31, 2008
9:58:03 AM
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Kam "Denethor" Vox
2nd Lieutenant
Captain of Corellian Corvette Ferrum Umbra
Phoenix Wing Executive Officer
Vast Empire Navy
WX/CCAP/2Lt. Denethor/CVT Ferrum Umbra/Phoenix 1-2/VEN/VE(=A=)(=SA=)(=FOCE=)[LoR][LSM]
"Only the dead have seen the end of war." -Plato
Every drop of blood. Every bitter tear. Every bead of sweat. I live for this.
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Max Fagron
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 31, 2008
2:46:23 PM
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Im back. See that y'all missed me 
Lets get cracking at that story then, eh? FL/PO2 Max Fagron/Kaph 2-6/Phoenix Wing/Carrier Tiamut/FVIF/VEN/VE(=A=) [MC1]
'Ah,mere Infantary........poor beggars.' Aristotle
"Dulce et Decorum pro Patria Mori"
Beag ach Fíochmhar
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Rocketman1167
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RE: Kaph Squadron Topic
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March 31, 2008
2:49:32 PM
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yeah alot happened when you where gone. Money=pilots who drive=tie fighters and can build=Death Stars which means power
FM/SCR/ Rocketman/ Kaph 1-4/ Phoenix Wing/mSSD Atrus/1st fleet/VEN/VE[=A=](MC1)
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