Welcome to the Imperial Navy, Armony, and great job getting your assignments done so quickly. While that's advantageous in such a way that you become active faster, you did miss out on some of our complementary discussions, so we'll add those below after I run through some of the critique.
First: your bio wasn't half bad. It's very vague and doesn't seem to have a whole lot to it, but that's actually okay. The bio in its current state is really more of a base: something we use to get you stated and expect to evolve over time. Two things that immediately caught my eye about it though: where's your mother? And who first taught him to fly? I used to ask- where did he/she go to school? But it's occurred to me that capable pilots may not have needed to go to an actual school and/or could have learned from their parents basic math and whatnot- either way: who was his teacher? His mentor? If you can answer me those: then you've got a bit more of an explanation and basis to continue. Edit your bio according to your interpretation, wants and needs, however.
Maneuvers: the 1st one was pretty good, but the Sandwich is actually a tactic more than a maneuver. I understand that it's on our maneuvers section, but I'd still like to see another maneuver; I'd be glad to pass ya for this chapter if you did that.
Report: That'll do just fine. Keep in mind that those reports are an excellent way to show your superior officer that you're not only around, but preciselly where it is you're being active and benefiting the group: get into a habit of sending them in weekly and you'll be rewarded for your efforts.
As soon as those objective listed above are complete, we'll be happy to place ya, Armony. Also, I received your exam and will be grading it within the next couple of days. In the meantime, here's some of that fun background info I spoke of; you can either read it and absorb as much for ya as you can or completely ignore it, but know that these are available resources to better experience the VEN; let's start with possessions and whatnot, yes?
Recall that in your initial message, certain items were given to you- where did they come from? You might be wondering where you see and buy all of these items? If you look down the left hand side of the main page in the navigation, you'll see that you have a
First Galactic Bank account- that's where these items are stored. Most of these items will be purchased through the link located directly under the Bank's; the
Imperial Center Store is the primary mode of purchasing for members in the VE- perhaps you'd like to shop around yourself? Note that if you're short on cash, the
Pay Per Click link, also in the navigation, allows you to earn easy ICs and help the VE community at the same time. Until next time- carry on, Armony.
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