Golden_star
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Reporting for duty
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January 23, 2008
10:44:06 PM
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Golden_star
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RE: Reporting for duty
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January 23, 2008
11:50:59 PM
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Name: Archadies Leafwalker
Age: Unknown
Height: 8' 6"
Weight: 400 lbs.
Hair Color: Black with a blueish tint.
Eye Color: Silver
Race: Pelathynian
Home Planet: Alandria
Sex: Male
Description: Archadies Leafwalker was born to a dieing race called the Pelathynians. He grew up living a hard life, having watched his parents get murdered along with his entire village by a rival race on Alandria. He swore revenge on those who murdered the only ones who ever cared about him and who he ever truely cared about. Pelathynians were born into one of three classes. Warrior, politician, and commoner. The warriors learned the skills of battle with both melee weapons and firearms of all types and the select few were drafted into a select group called The Dream Runners" which were the elite of the warriors. The politicians decided the fate of the specific clans, tribs and in some rare cases, the entire race. And the commoners, they provided the food and made up the bulk of the economy as miners, laborers, ect ect. Now in Archadies' case, he was born with an oddity. A long slender brown furred tail, very much like that of the indiginous monkeys of the forests the Pelathynians lived in. This was the mark of the Dream Runners. The select few that possessed magickal powers (not the force) and learned to use their own life force (Ki or chi, think shaolin monk) to aid them in battle through intensive training.
Upon the destruction of his village and his vow of revenge, he obtained whatever weaponry and transportation he could and set out on his path of destruction. Upon finding his enemy, he slaughtered them and carved them up into chunks of meat to feed to the indiginous carnivores. But with the few he had killed, he longed for his revenge to be total. The entire extermination of the opposing race that simply called themselves "The Crimson Shadow". After years of hunting them down and killing them in various ways, he became a very proficiant killer and tracker.
But the fates had other things in store for him. He was ambushed and left for dead by twenty four members of the crimson shadow. Near death, he would be taken to an Imperial medical facility and restored to health. With his strength renewed, and new allies found, he signed up with the forces of the Empire knowing that his skills would serve the Emperor well, and hoping that he would obtain the items necessary to fully destroy his enemies once and for all.
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3:55:02 PM)]
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Golden_star
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RE: Reporting for duty
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January 25, 2008
4:38:21 PM
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My Manuevers......
Manuever 1 "Tapping the Breaks": While out on a routine patrol, Archadies spots a single enemy fighter craft on his TIE fighters sensors, Diverting his course to intercept, the enemy craft speeds up and comes at Archadies, fireing its weapons. Archadies again diverts course as if to flee the area, the enemy craft giving chase. Archadies put his engines to full power, knowing the enemy would do the same to catch him. Meanwhile Archadies was formulating a plan to destroy this curr. He would barrel roll to the left and to the right to evade enemy fire and when the time was just right, Archadies would cut his power, letting the enemy fly right past him. Re-engaging his power quickly, and now behind the enemy, he opens up on the enemy with his weapons, fireing lasers and missiles at the engines of the enemy craft and destroying it, barrel rolling and pulling hard to the back and left to resume his previous course.
Manuever 2 Multiple manuevers used: Launching with his squad from Imperial Star Destroyer "XXXXX", Archadies would fly in formation towards the enemy fighters. Immediately he would be set upon by two enemy fighters, and he knew he was alone as the rest of his squad was obviously pre-occupied. He would barrel roll to the left and to the right to evade enemy fire and would turn this way and that, performing the split S manuever, one enemy staying right behind him. immediately after the split S manuever he would perform the immelman manuever, getting into position behind the enemy that flew by him, becoming sandwiched between the two. He layed into the enemy in front of him with all lasers, destroying him, then he would barrel roll through the debrit and while the enemy behind him could not see him in the explosion, he pulled up, pulling off a full loop and come in behind the enemy, fireing with lasers and missiles, destroying him as well. With his two destroyed, he was then free to help out his squad members with the rest of the enemy fighters.
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Golden_star
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RE: Reporting for duty
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January 26, 2008
12:22:28 AM
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Archadies' Report: January 26th, 2008
Activity: I've been working on my pay per clicks and working my way towards graduation.
Upcoming plans: To continue working on my pay per clicks and hopefully get a ship.
Questions/Suggestions: None
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Tomas
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RE: Reporting for duty
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January 27, 2008
10:38:23 AM
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Ok, Golden Star I've finally come to decision on chapter 2 (good job on chapter 3 by the way).
Your "tapping the breaks" is passable, though if I could get you to do a second maneuver either from the list on the Wiki or one you know from somewhere else that would be great. The idea of this chapter is more to describe where and how you perform the maneuver (which you did decently with the first one). The second however basically talked about barrel rolling and "performing a split S", not really describing how you pulled off this maneuver. If you are having trouble with what I mean, feel free to check out some previous recruits attempts (look for the topics with alot of replies).
Once you can get that done, I will get you placed in a squadron. Chief Warrant Officer 'Tomas' Dagoram
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Shazam
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RE: Reporting for duty
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January 27, 2008
9:58:28 PM
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Just wanted to welcome you before you got all the way through the training process, Star. I see you've been working diligently, lol. Either way- I hope you have a great time here and if you ever have any questions, comments or concerns: we'd love to help. As you were? *Flash Was Here...*
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