Thought I'd introduce myself as well, actually- I'm the Officer of Training (TO) and I'll be assigning you to a squadron at the end of your training.
In review of your bio, let me make some suggestions:
An easy way to make your bio more appealing and organized is to give it headers. Simply click the
B button for 'bold' and the
u button for underlining on the tool bar above your message box and write the heading between the HTML coding given. It should look something like this:
Physical Description
Hair Color: ?
Eye color: ?
Height: ?
Weight: ?
Build: ?
Age: ?
The code, then, would look like < b >< u >Physical Description< / u >< / b > without the spaces
The above is kind of the given, but you can also make headers for History, Personality and whatever other important subject you feel belongs in this bio. Remember that your biography is only a base for you to start on here- we don't
need to have everything planned out; your character will grow as you write with a fighter group.
So, if you can clean this up a little with headers and maybe add a little extra detail to those subjects... I think you can move on to Chapter II- Pilot Procedure.
[This message has been edited by
Shazam
(edited January 3, 2008
10:55:16 PM)]