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LoneWolf777
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  Introduction
January 1, 2008 6:00:29 PM    View the profile of LoneWolf777 
Hi, I am signing in and just joined. if anyone has any advice for me I will appreciate it.
Tomas
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Tomas
 
[VE-ARMY] Private
[VE-NAVY] Chief Warrant Officer
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  RE: Introduction
January 2, 2008 11:59:30 AM    View the profile of Tomas 
Welcome to the Navy, LoneWolf777.

Let's get you started on training. Firstly, I will direct you to this link:

Flight School

The first step is pretty straight forward and involves creating a biography for your character. You will post that on the "Naval Academy" section of this ComNet. You can find examples by other members bios here:

Navy Members

Other than that, there's not much else now. I encourage you to find your way onto IRC as it is a great way to meet other members. This can be done either by downloading mIRC and following the "IRC Tutorial" on the main page or using "JavaChat" found a couple links under the ComNet once again on the main page.
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LoneWolf777
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  RE: Biography
January 2, 2008 8:14:22 PM    View the profile of LoneWolf777 
Nobody knew exactly who Mendosa was or what he stood for expect that he often confessed his family was dead and when others offered sympathies you could almost see a smile and he looked like he was thinking "You will be sorry!" but people always noticed his dark humour and thought that he must be extremely twisted. But by simply talking to him they realized he was extremely loyal as was the rest of his species and that'd whenever he was given orders he didn't appreciate he made it obvious enough for others to notice no matter how ignorant or poor they were at reading sentients.

      When people first notice Mendosa they see a zabrak of taller stature with constantly shifting eyes as though he was constantly noticing every detail. He always walks on his heels in an alert on-edge walk and his fists are very rarily not clenched or hovering above his blaster or whatever weapon he has on hand. When you look into his eyes you notice a darker side reflecting a dark and troubled past but at the same time a hope for a new and optimistic future.

      Everyone knew Mendosa often had a problem with leadership unless he felt they meritted his respect. Leaders had tried to rule him with fear but often ended up regretting it as he managed to undermine their leadership or show them to be fools. Everyone who talked to him found him using the tit for tat rule and treating people the exact way they treat him resulting in his being friends with the friendly and enemies with those who lack social skills some possess.
Shazam
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  RE: Introduction
January 3, 2008 10:54:09 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Thought I'd introduce myself as well, actually- I'm the Officer of Training (TO) and I'll be assigning you to a squadron at the end of your training.

In review of your bio, let me make some suggestions:

An easy way to make your bio more appealing and organized is to give it headers.  Simply click the B button for 'bold' and the u button for underlining on the tool bar above your message box and write the heading between the HTML coding given.  It should look something like this:

Physical Description
Hair Color: ?
Eye color: ?
Height: ?
Weight: ?
Build: ?
Age: ?

The code, then, would look like < b >< u >Physical Description< / u >< / b > without the spaces

The above is kind of the given, but you can also make headers for History, Personality and whatever other important subject you feel belongs in this bio.  Remember that your biography is only a base for you to start on here- we don't need to have everything planned out; your character will grow as you write with a fighter group. 

So, if you can clean this up a little with headers and maybe add a little extra detail to those subjects...  I think you can move on to Chapter II- Pilot Procedure.
[This message has been edited by Shazam (edited January 3, 2008 10:55:16 PM)]
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