Ok Here is my Biography.

My Name is Zane ZyCrusis
My Race: Human
My Age: 17
My Weight: 150 Lbs
My Height: 6ft 2
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Blood Red

My Appearance:
I have shoulder length black hair , and blood red eyes, which are covered most the time by my hair. My skin is a fairly tan color, and I am about 6 feet tall. I weight about 150 pounds, and have a quite bit of muscle to me. I have a powerful, cruel,and menacing look, but very innocent as well . I usually wear black armor, with a pitch black cloak, and a hood,(which is usually up.)

My Personality:
I am kind of withrawn, I don't socialize much, unless I need to.I do open up and socialize when it is necessary though. I like power, and knowledge is very valuable. I am highly intelligent, but don't always show it. I am a very strong willed, and persuasive person. I let my emotions get the best of me at times, but when I want to I can have perfect control. I guess you can say I am kind of ambitious, power hungry, and I don't let others get in my way. But I do respect my Leaders, and I know when to keep my mouth shut and do what I am told.

History:
I was born on a planet quite far away, where the Empire doesn't even exist. I can not remember its name, but it was fairly inhabited. In space you would see a black and red swirled outside of the planet. That is the atmosphere, which protects us from many threats. I believe the first people that arrived were various intelligent, and powerful, but ordinary aliens and people. But when their ship was attacked, they crash landed on the nearest planet. I was only just born after the crash. My parents, though I know little, were great people. I believe my Father was a powerful Sith, my mother I have no idea. I did not get to know them for long, for my father was a prisoner on the ship, and was executed shortly after my birth for reasons I know not. That left me and my mother alone. Lucky for my mother she found another man. He at least had money to support us. Quickly the people built a strong fortress, where inside was a small city which they dwelled. My new father was able to build us a good sized house, and did the same for others. As the years passed by all went well, and the fortress was expanded and a fairly huge city was soon accomplished. My new father was a key contributer to the new cities welfare. But though he seemed like a saint, he soon began to get a little to drunk. One of the people that was on our ship was a very good wine maker, among many other drinks. My new father having money could easily buy these, as he did to many times. Eventually his drinking got out of control, and he began to beat my mother often. I usually watched in terror, for what was a small boy supposed to do? But I was dumb, and told him off. That ended up in me getting beaten. My mother unable to watch me get beaten, took it upon herself to stop my new father. But alas the many times of being beaten weakened her, and she could do nothing. So times went on, and I learned to become stronger, and take what I was given. Later a scholar that had crash landed with us finally had created a way to communicate with those in our current galaxy. When he did, he happened to communicate with a neighboring planet that was quite wealthy in money and resources. They were able to supply us very well, and even send a few 100 people to help us out on the planet. Things progressed from their and the planet became known throughout the galaxy. Soon people from all over the galaxy were coming a settling, trading, etc., on our planet. Then a new school on the planet near us was built, and my step-father decided he was man enough to send his son to school. So when my mother approved, I was shipped off to not a normal school, but a boarding school. There I stayed for 2 years, and then during that time I had got me a job. After the two years I had finally graduated from the boarding school, and I enrolled into a private school. I was taught by various scholars, teachers, professors,etc. When I was not in school I was working, saving money for me and my mother to escape and find life somewhere far beyond that galaxy. Alas I soon was noticed by someone important, and being a very intelligent student, he saw many things in my future. He pulled me out, taught me himself, and taught me many things about computers. I was brilliant with them, and soon he put me into my own business. But my dream life soon came to an abrupt halt when the man died. But he left me a huge fortune. I was able to buy a nice two-man ship, and enough supplies, and various things to last me and my mother years. I then decided to go back to my mother, and take her with me. But I was rudely awakened from my life's dream when I found out she had been murdered by my so called step-father. In fury, and anger I was stupid, and ended up killing him out of spite. When I realized what I had done, I gathered I everything I owned, including what was left of my fortune, and left by my new ship. I traveled for 6 months, and finally arrived on some planet called Coruscant. There I started a new life. I got myself a new house, and a good job. But though I had a good new life, I wanted more, adventure, the chance to be something great. I was soon recommended th Imperial Navy, and I took the advice. Thus ending me here today.
For Complete and Edited Biography of Zane ZyCrusis click this link:
Zane ZyCrusis's Biography/ Wiki Profile

is that good?

Ok well if that is better than I am ready. Do you get any choice in the squadren? I would like to be in yours or something like it. If not no worries.

K well assign away, and where do I go for chapter 2?

Actually the Chapter 3 is now relevant, but if you're confused on it at all, you can always ask questions reguarding it.

Ok here is the assingment, and critize away, lets get this thing over with.
Zane ZyCrusis Tactical Training Assignment

Split S Maneuver
“Is a diving half loop that us useful when you want to disengage a threat.”

The Split S Maneuver is a move that can really help you gain speed if you’re at a high altitude. Thus you have to have a lot of air space, and be several thousand feet above ground level. You can use it for getting away from a pursuer, and or gain speed.
You could use it or something like, I you were being pursued by an enemy. Using the dive part you can literally fall under your pursuer, sending them zooming past you. But that is where it gets a little harder. You have to pull up on the stick to slowly level you ship, plus if your to low to the ground, or already going to fast, you can fall into some major problems. If your to low, you can’t complete it, and then you could crash, if you going to fast, you won’t be able to make the turns and such as easy therefore losing the control of your ship. You would want to do this to get away from an enemy, and or to gain a quick burst a speed. Like I said if you pull it off right you should end up in a short spiral down, and then level off hopefully, while your attacker is zooming off past you, trying to figure out where the heck you went. Plus is you pulled it off when he tries to come back at you should be pretty easily out of his range, and off to whatever you need to do next.

Sandwich

Well I am a fan of the classics, and this is a very old move. By pairing up with a buddy you start you can literally pin you foe between you and your buddy and then try out some lethal moves. Or I guess you could do a suicidal move and crash into the foe together and hope one of you survives.  Anyways you can fly behind the foe, and shoot at him. Like it says in the instructions for the move, make sure your buddy the foe is pursuing is clear from your missile, or you just murdered your own man. This is a good way to help out a friend so that they are not being constantly pursued, and being badgered by a foe. Plus if you pull it off, both of you live and the foe is easily exterminated, leaving you both free to move on to the next step you need to take.
(note this was copy and pasted from word, it was a lot was easier to wright in and do the assignment with. Plus it helped with the spell checking, as my computer doesn't always do that in this sight.

Ok I hope that I am doing this right. I am not sure if the report is for the Chapter 3, or part of the exam thing. But here is the report anyways:

Ok, from what I have read, once your placed into an active Squadron, you are expected to participate in it, be active, communicate with your squad members/commmanders,etc. You have to give a report to your SC every week. ( I am not sure if I can do that every week but I will do my best. Some weeks I don't get on at all, but like I said I will do my best and do it as soon as I am on.) by reporting to your SC, or FL you can get promoted because you let them know what you have been doing, how you have been active. That lets them know how hard you have worked and where to put you. You are also to post 3 times a week to be a "Fully Active Member." You are to obey orders every time they are given, and always give your best effort as well. You are not to put shame to your group by any means, or act like "A moron" in any way. You can't mistreat any other members, higher or lower rank. If RL intervenes let somebody know so you don't let down your squad and send them plummeting. Oha and if any problems contact the appropriate person and action will be taken.
Ok for the Squad Info:
There are twelve people in a basic squad,each squad has about 3 flights, with four pilots each flight. In a Flight is a FL, who gives the flights orders, and then each members of the flight has a partner, or a wingman. Partners are put together so that their skills and strengths compliment each other making a perfect mini team. Above all the FL are an Xo, who is the second in command next to the SC.

Anyt questions, comments, changes needed to be made, just say and lets get it over with.

Ok I don't have the leaders email that I am supposed to send it to so I will post it here and if it needs to be sent to the leader I can see if I can get the email and send it to them.
Anyways here is the report for this past week:

Zane ZyCrusis's Report: November 26th, 2007

Activity: Ok this week I have been a little, I haven't had much time. Since this is a report for Chapter 3, I don't think I could have been posting in any squad postings. Anyways I have been completing the
Academy, Training whatever you want to call it and am working on getting into a squad.

Upcoming Plans: Well I will get on when I can, and do whatever I need to get into a squad, and then whatever I need to after that as well. I will be as active as I can, and that should be enough to get my assignments done and a couple of postings about once a week


Questions/Suggestions: None

I don't think I have an ID line thing yet

Zane, I'm going to place you in Viper squadron, though I'm not sure where it is Tomas would like to place you in terms of flights: that will be up to his discretion.  Otherwise, congratulations on completing BT!  I anxiously await your Avaitor's Exam, Zane.

I, Tomas am the commanding officer of Viper.

You send your exam to Shazam using the Message Center at the top of the ComNet. There is a page on the Wiki that will tell you how to create your ID line. The exam can also be found on the Wiki by searching "Aviator's Exam".

As for other information you should know: We, as a squadron are currently on the final leg of a story "Operation: Trojan Horse". You are welcome to join in as one of the previously unnamed pilots. Alternatively, you can wait till we our done this story to post with the squadron. If you choose this option, I encourage you to do some sort of personal story (either on your own...an event from your character's history, etc. or find a person/people to do a fun story with...usually about hanging out during downtime, etc.) It's upto you, though I'd encourage you to post on the squadron story if you feel ready.

Hey Zane I am Rocketman, you may call me Rocket. I am your wingmate i think.
so hi.
and i can't find your wiki page.
and whats your callsign if you have one.