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  Private Sputnik
September 21, 2007 11:39:37 PM    View the profile of Sputnik 
Hey everybody, how's it going?  I'm not in a very creative mood right now, so I start my bio tomorrow.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 22, 2007 12:05:34 AM    View the profile of Than Sion 
Welcome to the Navy, Sputnik. Someone from the academy who knows what their talking about will be with you shortly. I challenge you to stick around for at least six months. If you make it that long I can almost say without a doubt you'll be hooked.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 22, 2007 8:24:58 AM    View the profile of Tomas 
Nice to see your post Sputnik and that you know what you have to do. I'm here if you have any questions. I encourage you to find your way onto IRC as it is a great way to get to know people (and it makes it very easy for me to help you with the training).

You can find the Java IRC on the main page, or alternatively a tutorial for a program called mIRC.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 22, 2007 3:41:23 PM    View the profile of Sputnik 
Bio


Name: Sputnik Galaax
Race: Human
Age: 24
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 137 lbs.

Appearance: Short and solidly built, dark brown hair and eyes, tanned and weathered skin, looks older than he is.

Personality: Quiet and reserved but not outspoken, strong-opinioned, not overly ambitious, generally peaceful and self-controlled but can be provoked.

History: Sputnik was born on Wayland in 15 BBY to a family descended from the Old Republic colonists.  His childhood was three-sided, split between his human family and the two indigenous species (the Myneyrshi and the Psadans).  He is fluent in both indigenous languages as well as Basic.  Early in his youth, he sought coexistence between the races, but as he got older, he saw the fruitlessness of it.  When the opportunity arose, Sputnik joined the Imperial Navy to escape from the difficulties of Wayland.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 23, 2007 1:42:46 AM    View the profile of Riqimo 
Being born in 15 BBY will have your character at age 26 actually

Like the start of what you are developing there.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 23, 2007 2:25:06 AM    View the profile of Sputnik 
Ok, so we're in 11 ABY?  I was guessing 9 ABY.  I'll develop it a little more tomorrow.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 23, 2007 1:16:57 PM    View the profile of Sputnik 
History: Sputnik was born on Wayland in 13 BBY to a family descended from the Old Republic colonists.  His childhood was three-sided, split between his human family and the two indigenous species (the Myneyrshi and the Psadans).  He spent much of his time among the two other races, learning their customs, their history, and their stance on the political situation on Wayland.  Sputnik is fluent in both indigenous languages as well as Basic.  Early in his youth, he sought coexistence between the races, but in 2 BBY, his family was involved in a skirmish between the humans and the Psadans.  His brother was killed in the fight, and his parents would have also been killed if the small occupying contingent of Imperial troops hadn't broken up the fight.  The next decade was scarred with numerous battles between the humans and the native races.  The Imperial forces were always the peace-keepers.  When Grand Admiral Thrawn returned to and soon left Wayland in 9 BBY, he left behind a naval force to compliment the Stormtrooper contingent.  Sputnik watched the Imperial shuttles coming and going, wishing he could be on one of them.  When he could no longer live with the civil disputes, Sputnik approached one of the naval officers and asked to join.  The officer readily accepted Sputnik and arranged for immeadiate transport to the Naval Academy.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 23, 2007 1:47:28 PM    View the profile of Riqimo 
We are 9 ABY

What happened is you skipped both 0 BBY and 0 ABY.  Those are both counted as years in the Star Wars Universe.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 25, 2007 7:13:31 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Right he is, but more importantly: we've got a bio pretty well put together here.  Just keep in mind that your character should have some kind of technical skill or schooling- I believe there was a fairly large city on Wayland in those books, yes?  Essentially- you have to give that naval officer a reason for putting you in an expensive piece of equipment, beyond the simple reason that- "Uh....  I cin rede!"  It doesn't have to be emphasized in your bio, it's just something that should be assumed, but the fact you realize that is important so that you don't alude to a life of destitution without any prior education to the Navy.  The only other thing might be that the personality is still a bit dim- it was worded well, but expounding on it for the benefit of people who might like to include you in stories could be nice.

Other than that- I'd say you're doing pretty well and it's time we sent you off to Chapter Two: Pilot Procedure.  There's a short assignment there we'd like to make sure you post here, and then we're going to set you up with a VE wiki when you're all done with that.  By the end of all this nonsense you'll be in a squadron, so- not too much to do left.  Read well though, and I hope you enjoy the materials; keep up the good work, man.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 26, 2007 12:40:48 AM    View the profile of Sputnik 
Cool, thanks.  I'll ponder what you said overnight then I'll finish it up tomorrow.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 27, 2007 9:52:01 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Right on, man
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 28, 2007 12:38:34 AM    View the profile of Sputnik 
Or maybe it'll be tomorrow...
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  RE: Private Sputnik
September 30, 2007 11:08:48 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Lol- we're patient.

You know, I never usually ask this- but tell us about yourself if nothing else: we always ask about characters, but I've never really bothered to say: what do you do?  If you're comfortable of course.  There ya go- beta tester.  Keep rockin' man.
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October 2, 2007 1:33:15 PM    View the profile of Sputnik 
About me?  Well, I'm a freshman at the University of Colorado studying aerospace engineering.  I like to ski, play tennis, write, play and listen to music, and excessively play video games.  I've been a SW fan ever since I was able understand the concept of a movie and this is my second RP (a couple of years ago, I was part of a 30 or so person RP). 

The homework has really been piling up over the last week, so I might not add anything to my character until this weekend
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  RE: Private Sputnik
October 4, 2007 12:49:55 AM    View the profile of Shazam 
Not bad- but hey: go out and have some fun then- we intend to have fun here as well, but don't worry too much: it's tough around here as well
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  RE: Private Sputnik
October 5, 2007 6:49:39 PM    View the profile of Sputnik 
Ok, so here's the final bio.


Bio


Name: Sputnik Galaax
Race: Human
Age: 24
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 137 lbs.

Appearance: Short and solidly built, dark brown hair and eyes, tanned and weathered skin, looks older than he is.  No distinctive physical features. 

Skills: Having been raised among several races, he is an skilled linguist.  Never having had a formal education, he only written language that he knows is Basic.  He is a fair shot with ranged blaster weapons, but he is most comfortable with melee weapons, due to his size and speed.  He is fascinated with everything mechanical and is a skilled mechanic.

Personality: Quiet and reserved but not necessarily outspoken, strong-opinioned, not overly ambitious, generally peaceful and self-controlled but can be provoked.  He has always respected the Empire

History: Sputnik was born on Wayland in 13 BBY to a lower-class family descended from the Old Republic colonists.  His childhood was three-sided, split between his human family and the two indigenous species (the Myneyrshi and the Psadans).  He spent much of his time among the two other races, learning their customs, their history, and their stance on the political situation on Wayland.  Sputnik is fluent in both indigenous languages as well as Basic.  Early in his youth, he sought coexistence between the races, but in 2 BBY, his family was involved in a skirmish between the humans and the Psadans.  His elder and only brother was killed in the fight, and his parents would have also been killed if the small occupying contingent of Imperial troops hadn't broken up the fight.  The next decade was scarred with numerous battles between the humans and the native races.  The Imperial forces were always the peace-keepers.  When Grand Admiral Thrawn returned to and soon there after left Wayland in 9 BBY, he left behind a naval force to compliment the Stormtrooper contingent.  Sputnik watched the Imperial shuttles coming and going, wishing he could be on one of them.  When he could no longer live with the civil disputes, Sputnik approached one of the naval officers and asked to join.  The officer readily accepted Sputnik and arranged for immeadiate transport to the Naval Academy.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
October 7, 2007 10:39:52 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
I think that'll do for now; we'll need ya to move on to Chapter 2 "Pilot Procedure" now, but if you'd like to take your time again, you may.  Currently we're trying to figure some things out here in the Navy so that we can actually be doing things, lol, because the story we're currently doing is pretty difficult without a number of experienced staff.  Thus, we'll be relegating to squadron stories and putting a lot of the power in the hands of the people again, I think.  Either way- change is on the way.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
October 18, 2007 1:35:59 PM    View the profile of Sputnik 
FINALLY!

Pilot Procedure:

1. Lag Pursuit - Lag pursuit is a highly offensive maneuver that is difficult to counter.  It is implemented during pursuit when the attacker has excess speed and will overshoot the defender.  If the defender turns, the attacker can match the turn, only with a wider radius, while remaining behind and in the blind spot of the defender.  To counter a lag pursuit, the defender must tighten his turn into a spiral in order to gain the offensive. 

2. The Immelman - The Immelman is a maneuver used when the pilot needs to change direction quickly and/or gain altitude.  The pilot brings the aircraft in vertical climb, then he rolls the craft in the desired direction and levels off.  This maneuver can be used to can an offensive position against an oncoming enemy or to take away the offensive from a pursuing enemy.
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  RE: Private Sputnik
October 18, 2007 10:19:33 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Very good, Sputnik- I think I can say that you've passed Basic Training and can now be placed in a squadron.  Since Viper has just lost a member to RL issues, we're going to be placing you in Tomas's flight; be ready to take some orders.  Also, you'll still need to get a VE Wiki profile created if you haven't already, and by this time next week you'll want your Aviator's Exam in to me.  If I don't have it by then, every day that passes will further deduct points from that overall grade, so just keep it in mind and make sure you understand the materials.  Remember also that help is available if you're not understanding something   With that in mind, report to Viper topic on the Navy Main ComNet and get started on your story; welcome to the Imperial Navy.

http://www.vastempire.com/wiki/index.php?title=Character_Page_Tutorial
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