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  Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
August 22, 2007 6:38:52 PM    View the profile of Fury 
Japheth and Shazam are certainly allowed to countermand anything I'm about to post and add/edit as needed. It is your show and I wouldn't dare to intrude on their orders.

Also, we will need to work out some set of objectives where we update each other division-wise on the progress of our missions. Since the army is essentially a character-building lovefest these days, don't wait around for us too long.




A little backstory for those not having dual characters. Over the past few years, the Army has moved out from our primary planets.

this map shows the area in detail, focusing on the planets to the left of the map. The full map is here and is a derivative of many other maps I've used before.

In short, we've conquered and added Moorja to our sphere of control awhile back. It's more of a breadbasket to us than anything. Bestine IV was a real hard fight against long entrenched enemies. Yag'Dhul is effectively a neutral shipyard, though no friends of ours.

Plus we've pulled missions on Devaron to keep it neutral and Eriadu down the Rimma Trade Route to keep the Empire in power there.

Recently, Phase I has taken us to Mrlsst, Abregado-rae, Belgaroth, and Phu, which you should be able to see on the maps. Right now, the army's flagship Dominion and a small Imperial Center fleet are in an empty pocket of space near Giju, awaiting deployment.

I have not yet written in the mission elements for the army, but I wanted to give you guys a head's up on what you are going into.

Our mutual target is the shipyards orbiting the planet Hast. Hast itself is just one of a thousand colonies, not too well populated and not too big of a deal militarily, economically or otherwise. The back story is that a shipyard was created here in the waning days of the Republic by Senators who feared the power of Palpatine. Hast became the secret shipyard for the Rebellion and then the New Republic. Financed by funds taken from the Republic/Imperial budget, then later by member planets once the Senate was dissolved, the Hast shipyards have been produced Corellian and Mon Calamari models for decades, and are a repair yard for the New Republic's larger craft, including captured/stolen Kuat Star Destroyers.

Hast is currently producing the new MC90 Star Cruisers. There is also an Imperial Star Destroyer in the yards undergoing a refit.

These are protected by various escort craft and by two Golan-II defense platform along with the usual array of gun and missile turrets and mine fields.

So, quick breakdown on the ships:

Primary Capitals

MC90 Star Cruisers
- Steadfast
- Resolute
- Freedom
- Harmony
- Tranquility

ISD-I
- Allegiance

Support Craft

Endurance-class Fleet Carrier Andoan Dawn

Majestic Heavy Cruisers
- Bespin
- Dantooine

3 Sacheen-class Light Escorts

4 EF76 Nebulon-B Escort Frigates

2 CC-7700 frigates (interdictor craft)

Defense Grid

2 Golan-II defense platforms

An array of missile and defense turrets, plus mines

Follow this link for some details on a shipyard about this size.

Also, more info on the New Class of ships, including the MC90, Endurance, and Sacheen classes.

Read up on X-Wings, E-Wings, and K-Wings as well as A- and B-Wing starfighters as both the shipyard and capitals will have many wings ready to go.

Also know that I'm sending in a sweep of Imperial Center-built Corellian missile frigates before any Imperial ship enters the target area. We have passcodes and will look as if we are coming in for a shakedown. I have a bit of random hit table stuff I'll pull to let you know what happens when those ships pass through prior to your entry into the shipyards.

Ask any questions you have and I'll try to keep track of this thread.

Japheth/Shazam, edit out or amend anything you feel the need to.

I hope we can all have some fun with this.
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
August 22, 2007 10:04:17 PM    View the profile of Willtconq 
6 major capitals, sounds about right. question, assuming all support ships are fully crewed, which of the MC90s are under repair/construction? thus not fully crewed?
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
August 23, 2007 12:22:42 AM    View the profile of Fury 
I have not worked that out yet completely, but I would imagine one near completion and just applying the paint and moving in furniture type of stuff, another mostly done, maybe not all systems online throughout the ship, etc.  I'd imagine the third would have a hull but maybe no internal power source yet. The other two would be in various stages of "sitting duck" with possibly some weapons emplacements.

I've been asked about the starfighter elements. I'd say off the top of my head that the shipyard itself would have a few squadrons, if not a wing or two outright. The Endurance can carry a couple of wings, and the ISD could probably carry just slightly less than an Imperial load - unless you think it would be carrying Republic TIE fighters as opposed to A- or E-Wings or something.

I frankly was going to leave that up to your guys to figure out but that's a pretty hefty complement. As for the shipyard elements, hopefully we can get some Army grunts on that for you.

I'll try to get you better answers on this soon.
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
August 23, 2007 12:25:45 AM    View the profile of Jaden 
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
August 26, 2007 4:13:32 PM    View the profile of Fury 
A couple of alterations/additions to my above notes:

The ISD is called the Emancipator

Schematic of an ISD-II, which should be close enough to an ISD-I for our purposes

Schematic of an MC80 for reference purposes
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
August 26, 2007 4:15:20 PM    View the profile of Fury 
And so it begins, he sighed.

When he joined the Vast Empire, the Emperor was dead, the Empire torn asunder by warlords. All seemed lost. Even the Vast Empire itself had to find new homeworlds, far from the Core, up against the Unknown Regions and the black.

From there he had advanced from a new recruit, though not as young as the raw draftees and volunteers, and moved up the ranks quickly. Surprisingly so, but when there's a war on, you go where needed.

And then, finally, the advance back to civilization. First, small attacks, aiding other Imperial factions. Now, with Moorja and Bestine IV taken, the RimWard lanes being secured by other Imperials, and now this, setting up some independent systems and taking a bite out of the New Republic's power in this region of space.

It did not hurt that this would also hurt Thrawn. The Grand Admiral had known of this shipyard for years but made a deal with the non-human elements of the New Republic to play them against the Imperials who did not automatically kowtow to his rank cylinder. The days of blind obedience were over and the Chiss warlord would just have to learn that the hard way.

With Thrawn and the non-human rebels playing footsie, there was a way to fracture the New Republic and take away Thrawn's authority.

All the Vast Empire had to do was hit this shipyard and make the news public.

Then again, that was the job for REMFs and propaganda geeks.

Fury just knew how to blow stuff up.

He looked over at Captain Alvaros. "How are we doing?"

"Everyone seems accounted for Boss. We're ready to go."

Fury looked over at the communications console, when Paler Kraik was hard at work decrypting something or other. "Paler?"

The slicer looked up. "Yeah boss, we're fine. Those codes still check out and I've got us triangulated around the beacons laid out for us. Once we actually traverse the route, I should be able to get the navy a course that will take them around the perimeter."

Fury nodded. "Then let's do this people. Alert all IC ships and start the countdown. Get those tenders out of the way and thank the Dominion for their hospitality and have them escort everybody out of here in case someone tries to backtrack our trail."

He sat back and let the next hour go by reading invoices and orders for both the army and store. Eventually Alvaros sent some junior ensign over to give him the news. They were ready to go.

The Castanaveras shuddered slightly as they went into hyperspace. A few hours later they exited right on course from what their captured New Republic information had provided. It took the better part of a day. Stars and other cluster were heavy closer to the Core and they were definitely not on a trade lane anymore.

Reading reports was one thing, as was checking battle plans. This was a little bit more than he wanted to get into with an untested fleet full of crewers who had only started playing with capital ships a few years ago. Frankly, he had tried to hire from any professional navy he could but pickings were slim. At least all the gunners knew what they were doing, but Imperial Center spacers were really just freighter crews with bigger toys for the most part.

In front of them was an old, but still-very-lethal Bavos-I defense platform. It had already launched at least one squadron of fighters and two Dreadnaughts and a few gunships had started actively pinging them.

"Paler," he murmured.

"On it," he replied and began actively scanning the entire area around them. The Castanaveras was essentially a big sensor platform with engines and guns. It would find a way around this base if at all possible.

"Keep working it out. Everyone else stay cool and make no provocative moves."

He looked over at Alvaros, who, at least, had spent some years with the Corellian Defense Fleet. He even looked the part. "Showtime Captain. I'll be in my wardroom in case their image software picks me up and flags me in a holo."

Alvaros smiled. "Not to worry Baron. We've got this covered. We've got the codes and I can charm the pants off of a set of Twi'lek twins. This will be over before you even know it."

Fury laughed and went to watch the proceedings elsewhere.

Alvaros was handling the might of New Republic paranoia in exemplary fashion. Yes, they were a fleet out of Corellia. Yes, their shipyard had been hit during a shakedown run. Yes, they had proof of their existence. No, they had no clue who gave them the codes, just that someone did and ordered them to redeploy to Hast.

Yes, this was highly unusual and yes, there were sorry for the inconvenience.

Another forty-five minutes of this earned them an escort of X-Wings, late model at that and a menacing modified Strike cruiser, with what appeared to be fully loaded with bombers of some kind.

Fury was now back on the bridge as the fleet was being given coordinates.

"Captain. Excellent work," he said when shaking Alvaros' hand.

He shrugged. "Easiest thing I imagine I'll be doing today." He was probably right. "They say the jump is only about five hours. I'm getting some shut eye and, if I may, I suggest you should too."

Fury blinked. "Hell, why not? Might as well die rested."

For some reason, no one really laughed all that much.

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The Imperial Center fleet is composed of much of the Anti-Piracy Task Force 1 and is as follows:

CD-710 Corellian Destroyer
Carl Castanaveras

CC-6400 Corellian Heavy Frigates
Hans Richter
Ptolemy Bent
Michael Havel

CC-6500 Corellian Heavy Missile Frigates
Nicolas Angel
Sara Pezzini
Beatrix Kiddo
Mathurin Kerbouchard

Aggressor Destroyers
Sledgehammer
Bludgeon

Four Victory-II Escort Frigates
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
August 28, 2007 10:52:14 PM    View the profile of Fury 
OOC:
It's not Shakespeare, but it's done. Have fun with this.


Alvaros gave a low whistle as they exited hyperspace. "Damn boss, this is going to suck hard," he commented. Paler looked up at the magnified view of the shipyard and then looked down to begin giving orders.

Fury gave him a moment. "Paler, how bad?"

"Depends on what exactly you are looking for. Two Golan-IIs, enough mines to take a chunk out of a planet, and enough firepower to take us out. By the way, you might want to take a seat next to me and get out of the way."

Alvaros began handling requests for berthing from the shipyard coordinators. Three squadrons of E-Wings and X-Wings had already launched and were forming an escort wing around the fleet.

Fury and Paler got to work. Paler started laying out a grid of this shipyard.  "Alright, the beacon is on the Freedom which is the second ship in the lineup. The Tranquility is just about complete and is first in line, the Harmony has about everything but a squadron and full crew is third, and the Steadfast next to her is spaceworthy but not entirely completed. We shouldn't have to worry about the Resolute as it doesn't seem to even have shipboard power yet. But I'd keep a few guns on it just in case.

"The goal is to target the Steadfast and work our way down the line to include the Tranquility and Harmony.  We'll give the Steadfast a few parting shots but that's about it. Hopefully the stormies can take it easily.

"Obviously our biggest threats are the Golans and the fighters from the Andoan Dawn. The Emancipator is a complete unknown. I have no data on its status or if it is even capable of leaving its berth. Same for the Tranquility but I'm gonna bet it is just about fully operational."

Fury sighed. "Alright, task some targeting orders. Have the ships move into position as soon as we can do so. Also, get our fighters ready to go. We're about to have a busy day. Anything else?"

Paler cringed. "Real bad news? I'm picking up two gravity well projectors coming online. CC-7700s. It is going to take me a minute but I'll update you with a firing solution."

Alvaros wasn't seeming to be getting anywhere convincing the shipyard of his bona fides. Some actor he turned out to be. "And get those Majestics back, damn you. I'm flying a Corellian warship. I have the right codes. No one knows where this damn yard is anyway! How dare you accuse me of being a spy?"

The Officer on Duty was having none of the act. "If you won't calm down, we will fire warning shots and you will submit to our 'paranoia' as you have been calling it."

Paler nodded to Fury, who stood up and nodded to Alvaros. "Captain," he said. "We're ready."

The OOD suddenly became concerned. "Ready for what?"

"Ready to stop talking to your sorry ass!" yelled Alvaros. "Shields up. Fire at will!" One last look at the holo. "And I'll see you in hell!"




The fleet had begin moving into a formation that put the Castanaveras and Bent at the center with two of the Victory frigates as Task Force Aurek. The other Victory's accompanied the Bludgeon and were to focus on the "left" of the yards to take on the closest Golan-II as Task Force Besh.  The Richter was providing cover to the Pezzini and Kiddo while the Havel was covering the Angel as Task Force Cresh, Kerbouchard and Sledgehammer which would be breaking "right" as Task Force Dora.

At this moment, however, the immediate issue was to fire the first shot.

At Alvaros' orders, all ships turbolasers began seeking out targets from amongst the starfighter escort, hitting many of them by surprise. Morningstar-D fighters left the Castanaveras with a shudder, joining those emerging from the Richter, Bent and Havel.

Fury was momentarily blinded as the Bludgeon took an early shot at the nearby Golan. Immediately a third of its beacon lights went out, though the remaining guns were beginning to seek targets.

"Move forward and protect TF Cresh", yelled Alvaros. Laser beams began splashing against the forward shields.  Off to the right of the bridge, Sledgehammer shot a bolt at the nearest CC-7700. The Interdictor craft actually recoiled from the shot. Missiles began streaking towards it from the Angel and Kerbouchard.

"Status report Paler!" yelled Fury as a few random missiles hit the Castanaveras and almost threw him to the ground.

"Nothing's wounded yet, but I don't see that lasting for long. We should have brought more fighters."  The shipyard and Andoan Dawn were throwing dozens of new fighters into the fray.

"This is going to be close. Get those gunners to hurry up please," he shouted to fire control. They just laughed.




A few minutes later the situation was becoming clearer. The fleet was in trouble. Sledgehammer was in danger of losing its shields but had disabled the CC-7700 with its escorts finishing the job. It had also fired two bursts at the Emancipator, which could, after all, launch from its berth. Plumes of flames near the engines meant that was temporarily not the case. The Tranquility was now online and beginning to leave its berth.

Task Force Cresh had, however, done its worst against the other MC90s. Moving from under the Castanaveras and Bent and had damaged the Steadfast, while the Harmony had thrown up shields fast enough to only lose the port side of the ship. Without an engine plant, it was still firing from its dorsal and starboard turbolasers.  Freedom was offline from a shot from the Sledgehammer but it was unclear how damaged it might be. Most likely systems were coming online and it would be a danger in mere moments.

Fury, aboard Task Force Aurek, was watching a slugging match with the two Majestic cruisers Bespin and Dantooine. Having mopped up the Strike cruiser that had escorted them into the shipyards, Castanaveras' fighters had taken on two of the Nebulon-Bs and had crippled one. A few missiles had split the other in half.

Over on the other side of the battle, the Bludgeon had lost one of its escorts and had silenced the first Golan.

Fury ordered an escort for the Raiders and sent them to take over or cripple the first Golan before it got online again.

He ordered additional cover fire and escort to send the Dark Dragoons and Eclipse squads on their respective targets, taking care to stay out of the way of the Tranquility's fires.

Then he waited for the tide to turn. It didn't take long.




The Pezzini took a broadside of bombs from the K-Wings aboard the shipyard and began breaking up.

The same group of bombers damaged the Richter and it cost the whole of its fighters to turn back the aggressors.

Using the shell of the Pezzini for cover, the Kiddo moved back behind Task Force Aurek with the Richter limping behind.  Prior to getting hit hard they had managed an array of salvos at the shipyard itself, with spectacular results.

Bludgeon had lost its second escort frigate and was now being torn apart by fighters. It launched its escape craft and the ship began counting down its auto-destruct as it came up to the second Golan.

Sledgehammer was now being harassed by fire from the Emancipator and Tranquility though it managed one more shot at the second CC-7700, crippling it at least temporarily. The Kerbouchard and Angel set themselves between the Aggressor and began hammering back at the Tranquility with their last missile salvos.

As the ships collected themselves together, the Imperial Center fleet had managed to kill another Nebulon-B and had shot the Dantooine's engines out from under it. It was adrift and still firing when the Sledgehammer self-destructed right next to it.

Bludgeon took out the shields and part of the second Golan at about the same time. The Bent had evacuated and were now aboard the Castanaveras.

Paler looked at Fury, who looked at Alvaros, who was looking mighty grim at this point. "The Navy better finish this place off. God knows we paid enough to lighten their load."

"S'alright Captain. Let's just get the hell out of here." Paler had sent the remnants of the fleet coordinates out of local space so they could regroup.

They had done all they could. Now they just had to get out of here. With a short hyperspace jump, they left it up to the navy to decide the rest of the battle.
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
August 28, 2007 11:05:42 PM    View the profile of Fury 
OOC:
Just a quick update.

Ships destroyed:

Dantooine

Steadfast - erm, my bad, consider it offline and being taken by Stormies

2xNebulon-Bs

1xCC-7700

Ships wounded severely:

Harmony

1xCC-7700

Emancipator - engines

Defenses

Plenty of turrets and mines. Both Golans damaged with one offline but coming online soon.
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
September 1, 2007 1:09:10 AM    View the profile of Fury 
I did note that the IC fleet managed to take out about six to nine squadrons of fighters, mostly from the Majestics and the shipyard though the Endurance wings got slapped around a bit too. Use this to diminish your targets.

I'll leave it up to you guys how you want to disperse the responsibility. Remember, barring the Sacheens and the Endurance carrier, these ships have been softened up, as have the Golans. The shipyard should be under constant harassment from squads inside it as well.

Yes, you have a target rich environment but many squadrons are depleted, possibly lacking leadership, and most of the capitals have a weakness you can exploit at this point.

I did not mean to overwhelm you and if you feel that way, I apologize.

Just someone make some calls concerning distribution of attack/defense roles and please ask if I can help or just give me your two cents on how this was too big of a scope of mission.
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
September 1, 2007 11:31:31 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Alright- finally got it fixed up.  Now then- the image below is the map showing initial position for craft on both sides of the fight.  Above the blue line in the top half are our ships and equipment while those that fall below the blue line are allied with Hast shipyards.  You'll note that neither of the two Golans can be seen in this map, but they lie on either side of the blue line, just beyond the map, where one is totally malfunctioning and another is nearly repaired and ready to enter the fight.  Note that the Golans are about 2,000m in diameter, which is over the length of the ISDs, and are beyond well equipped.  Look 'em up on wookieepedia.com if you're unsure of what it is you're up against, should you decide to include either the Golans or any of the equipment that is shown below.  For the most part, the important stuff has been stated, or atleast given to remind you of what is important about them, for more specifics on exact structural attack points, it might be wise to examine schematics or look the ship itself up on wiki as well.  As for the size of the ships- they are relative and placed as much to scale as could afford in the time given, so hopefully this keeps confusion down. 

You'll note on some of the bigger ships, large areas in red- these are primary targets (bridge, sensor arrays, etc), that can be or actually are the best places to attack in order to soundly defeat that enemy.  Again- if you want to investigate what that area is- look it up, lol.  It is to be your responsibility to find the weaknesses in these crafts or devise ways in which to bring down the enemy, though any of your leaders can probably tell you if it is acceptable or not. 

Also- information such as the type and number of guns as well as fighters has been listed in atleast one situation with any class of ship.  For instance- the details of the ISD were put with the Emancipator, but those same details apply to the Coruscant and Viceroy; the only difference is that the Emancipator has no engines at this point and probably has reduced shields, as do most enemy ships, if not a total loss of shields.  To help indicate where some of those details are (guns primarily), some of the text may be highlighted a certain color (red for the biggest guns usually, blue for ion, and sometimes green as an intermediate), and then dots are placed on that ship accordingly to help show you their position.  It's also possible that their designations have been listed in the details (Ion Cannons: 3 right, 3 left, 3 front)...  As for how far they fire out into space before becoming inaccurate- look it up .  If you want to help improve your writing, it might be good to read up on the ship you're centering your storyline on anyways, as improving your overall knowledge of the situation is bound to give you greater details. 

One final note: though we overpower the enemy group now, I will be setting in motion a series of events to take out the Viceroy and possibly another ship or two.  There is a lot of enemy firepower but we'd smoke 'em with all the folks we've got on our side, so it will be my intention to equal out the battle a bit and make it a greater risk for us.  As for commander names and where certain groups are going and launching from: they'll come next- probably tomorrow some time and then we'll start our part of the story.  Lemme know if anything here is confusing, as it most likely looks.  If something is incorrect: notify me immediately.  Read and understand carefully, and- enjoy?


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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
September 2, 2007 3:09:29 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Scratch the Assault Frigate Mk. II "Reichiz" - that's to be replaced with the Strike-Class Cruiser Doashim, which will have a fighter capacity of two squadrons (none of which have been designated just yet.)  Anywho- the members of that ship can either stay on for that development and write on thier own, or they can leave it to me to write in the position of that ship and what, preciselly, it is doing.  I won't be writing much about Art or the crew, as Art will stop by every once in a great while to do that himself, but I'll ensure that it plays a part in the battle.  So- the two Doashim group members can choose to jump on my ship or do otherwise.  Note that the Doashim 450m in lenght, a bit longer than the Carracks, and is equipped with 20 turbolasers, 10 ions and 10 tractor beam projectors.  For those of you who are wondering what the differences between Turbolaser and Laser are: turbo is a hell of a lot stronger and is used in capitol ship battle where as lasers and medium lasers are used against fighters because they are generally less power-consuming and more mobile in terms of directionality and fire arc.  For those who are really new, Ion cannons are the primary weapon we use to disable other ships- the ion cannon's fire basically overrides or disrupts and disperses the electrical flow of instruments and other necessary equipment aboard ships.  The Ions they use aboard capitol ships is far more powerful than those that you'll see on some fighters and, though they do little physical damage, can destroy a fighter if at a close enough range and with a big enough gun.

As for where Kaph and Nazgul are launching from- I leave that up to them to decide.  Both squadrons also have the right to designate a specific squadron from specific ships on either the ally or enemy side: I'd like to be informed of it's existence though so we can scratch off or account for a number of fighters and keep somewhat within the realm of relative figures.
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
September 4, 2007 11:42:27 PM    View the profile of Fury 
I've been asked a couple questions on IRC and I'd like to address them here.

I'm on call this week which limits the amount of free time I have.

The Army is taking the MC90 Steadfast which may fire upon you from time to time but otherwise shouldn't be too big of a factor. Also, an IC prize crew should be jumping in once the Army gets close to its objective of capturing the ship.

As for Hast, I don't have anything on the planet itself, but more likely than not it is a somewhat rocky mining planet. Small population, not too important, but probably a fairly developed New Republic support facility.

Do with it what you will, really.
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
September 5, 2007 2:10:52 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Uh- the Steadfast was destroyed..?
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
September 8, 2007 12:13:46 AM    View the profile of Fury 
Yeah, I screwed up. The Harmony is in bad shape but firing and the Steadfast is Stormie bait. My bad, I was pretty sick when I knocked out those posts.

I've adjusted to correct this but still consider the ship out of the fight as far as you guys are concerned.
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
September 9, 2007 10:23:25 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Fury- I apologize but it's going to take a little longer than anticipated to get this story up to speed: momentum is tough to gather when you only have one officer besides yourself around.  We'll put our best efforts into making this work, but school is really making it tough, so we'll get done what we can without pushing beyond our limits.  I'll let you know well ahead of time if things aren't going to work out, but I entrust you understand that this type of major operation is tough, even with good resources.  More importantly, I'd like to make sure our men and women are having a good time, and if this is just going to work counter to that- I'll let you know.  Keep up the good work to everyone who's helping out though; keep rockin.'
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  RE: Chapter 8.5 - Phase II: Naval Mission
September 21, 2007 6:41:39 PM    View the profile of Fury 
OOC:
No problem. I'm adding a post to help get our troopers out of the battle for those squads that need a ride out. We're also planning to move our captured MC90 out of the docks. So if you need any cover or, alternately, can provide any, just let me know.


Back into the fray...to an extent.

Fury had transferred to one of the support escort craft, the CC-9600 frigate Kunetka, along with its partner Strieber.  Both ships were escorted by the remaining Morningstar fighters from the IC flotilla and a flight of Preybird fighter/bombers, who promptly began a scanning run on the primary Golan. The Raiders had taken it down and they targetted a bombing solution to occur just as soon as the squad had left the platform.

Meanwhile, both frigates flew between the wreckage of battle, nimbly obscuring themselves from enemy fire by using the hulks of fallen vessels. It was morose, but a definite survival strategy.

Once they got past the Tranquility's guns they slid along the port side of the Steadfast and docked with the vessel. The prize crew carried by each ship began dispersing throughout the ship to begin departure procedures. Both frigates detached and began the process of escort duty, taking care to monitor channels to see if they could give anyone a ride out of the battlezone.
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