Sorry guys, I was planning on posting today, but i'm sick and got some homework to do, so today my head's too full for writing.  Look for postage from me later this week.

I can't blame my lack of posting on anything other than laziness and a love for LotR.

But I *may* get a post up sometime within the next few days, provided I can, yet again, figure out where in the story we are

Alas, fellow compatrates, I have posted finally.

Save me.

Eclipse! As of right now, Taran is working on a post. And once he is finished we will need only one more. Whoever posts after him will get a cookie made from the RAIDERS' oven. And then, I shall post after said cookie muncher, finishing the Eclipse side of things up.

Post. Ed. After maybe two hours of chronic critiquing I finally managed to get it done. Thank goodness. Time for bed.

That post is still in the works . . .

Also, report in or be flogged with a dead horse . . . oh wait, mixed up metaphors

Got it boss. I'm about to start working on the post now, but don't be suprised if I don't finish it tonight

Unfortunately, I probably won't have the post up tonight. It's already 10, and by the time I finished with the post, it'd be past my bedtime

So look for it tomorrow. Also, make note people that I'm not claiming this post. If you want to post, by all means, go ahead. I don't want to stop you. I haven't really even started on the post, so it won't mess me up that much if someone else gets to it before I do.

Eclipse Squad
March 26, 2011

Story: Red Exodus (Finished!)

Role Call:
Here are the leaders in story posts.  Your goal is (1) to post more than myself; and (2)
more than your fellow troopers.

FINAL POST COUNT

Gunnery Sergeant Skarr [SL] - 9
Corporal Valthir [ASL] - 3
Corporal Balac - 9
Lance Corporal Njall - 7
Private First Class Demented - 2
Private Second Class Taran - 3

At first place is Skarr and Balac.
Second place is Njall.
Third place is Valthir and Taran.

Active List:
This is the list of troopers who have reported with the normal activity required of them. Normal activity being Reporting AND Posting during the week.

Senior Sergeant Skarr [SL] - Reported/Posted
Private First Class Njall - Reported/ Posted
Private Second Class Taran- Repoted/ Posted

Semi-Active List:
These troopers either did not report or did not post, or *shudders* both.

Corporal Valthir [ASL] - No report/No Post
Private First Class Demented - No report/Posted
Lance Corporal Balac - No report/ No post

Story Information:

The story is over!

Story Critique:

Valthir- Posts were solid. Good writing as I've come to expect from you. I don't have any advice on how you could improve. Except for activity. Some more posts from you would be grand.

Balac- I like the writing. You're consistant in your posts. Great activity. Your posts might need to be just a bit longer, but I have no complaints.

Demented- Haven't seen much of your writing. But I know how busy you are.

Njall- I don't have complaints on your writing. You have good writing skills and activity.

Taran- I think I've told you enough in person of what I think of your writing. Very nice writing skills, good post length. Just some more frequent activity and I'd be happy.

Eclipse, dismissed!

Great finish on the story fellas.

Make sure you make it to the meeting today.

And there's an update for most of you as well. Many of the squad has been promoted!

Corporal Balac has been promoted to Sergeant!
Private Second Class Taran has been promoted to Private First Class!
Gunnery Sergeant Skarr has been promoted to Sergeant First Class!

Please edit you signature and wikis as needed. Congrats to you two on your promotion. You've made your Squad Leader proud!

Congrats to Taran and Skarr!

Heartily awaiting the campaign!

Friends! We have a fun story up right now. It's called Party Crashers. It's supposed to be funny. Please keep it PG13 as Havvie says. Let's have fun, Eclipse.

Welcome to the squad Voice!  Your SL 'round here is Skarr, your ASL is me. Reports are due on Thursday to myself and Skarr.  There is no standard reporting format, so just write what VE-related activities you undertook since your previous report.  If you have any questions, feel free to ask around.  Once again, welcome!

The campaign is now up! Read Raz's details on the story. I shall post first to give us a starting point and from there, I expect posts from you guys and good quality ones too. The minimum limit is 400, but try to go beyond if you can. Let's get to it, Eclipse!


EDIT: My post is now up. The story is yours, but I will continue to post. I also should remind you that we lose ten points for each active member that doesn't post in a week. So we all need to have at least one post a week from each of us, it's not much to ask for. Just make a day where you can sit down for about fifteen minutes to an hour depending on how long you wish to take, and write something up.

Keep communication up from now on. If you want to make sure your post is a good one, PM it to either Njall or myself and we will give you our thoughts. Any confusion with the story, again ask Njall or myself. Or even post it here. Get on IRC when you can, we'll plan some things out.